MANVEER SS ' KOI THUMSA NAHI ' CHP 26 pg 91( kushi - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sirjee

waooo cant wait to read...


I'll update tomorrow , on Saturday . Thank u
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CHAPTER 7.1

MANYATHA - she rushes to office

UDAY - good morning princess

MANYTH - hi uday , sorry am late

UDAY - hope u forgot da deal , we are friends now .so no sorries n thanks

MANAYTH - k uday

UDAY AND MANAYTH - both are involved in THIER work . Uday gets up to get a file from his cubboard , by mistake he turns around .he finds manyatha's bare waist , her top went up a bit from we're he can c her waist . " wat a skin tone , that curve is killing man "

MNAYATH - uday shall we approve this

UDAY - he comes out of his thoughts ,ya manyatha we shall .

PA - he comes inside wit files

UDAY - now he doesn't want that pa to look at manyatha's waist , so he whispers in manyatha ear " princess ur top went up "

MNAAYTH - she immediately looks at it and properly drag her shirt down and gets embarrassed. Uday is enjoying her embarrassment .

UDAY - that's k take it lite , let us complete this file

MNAAYTH - she gets a call and excuses uday

UDAY - he looks at her wen she is talking on phone . He looks at her pinkish juicy lips moving while talking

MANAYTH - what !!!! Oh my god anu ur telling it now ,ur gonna get engaged . Am so excited tell me in detail . No u come here to office and join me for lunch

UDAY - any good news , u seem to b so excited

MANAYTH - she jumps and tells that anu is gonna get engaged and out of excitement hugs him and kisses on his cheek . She didn't even realise it and starts blabbering

UDAY - wow what a beautifull kiss , kaash this anu gets engaged very often

ANU - she comes there and jumps on MANAYTH and hugs n both start yelling And jumping

UDAY - he closes his ears " wat r these crazy girls doing "

UNNATHI AND NIDHI - they come and hug mannu and anu

MNAYATH - nidhi , darling wen did u come she goes and jumps on her and both fall on sofa . Lying on each other they speak . So nidhi u and anu decided to give me surprise ...

NIDHI - I came suddenly and thought of giving surprise to all but this anu gave me return surprise

UDAY - are these girls lesbians , god still on each other on sofa . God knows now this unnathi and anu are hugging And yelling . They all forgot that this is office and am present here

MANAYTH - she gets up . Now all realise that uday is there And suddenly change behavior .

NIDHI AND MANAYTH - sorry uday , it's office . U known v dint mean it

UDAY - k k I can understand

UNNATHI - she comes and hugs uday and jumps

UDAY - choti wat happened

UNNATHI - dada u know anu is getting married to vijay bhai

UDAY - god choti , he gets surprised and hugs her back

ANU AND VIJAY ARE FAMILY FRIENDS . THEIR FATHERS DECIDE TO GET THEM MARRIED . BOTH VIJAY AND ANANYA ARE OK WIT IT AS THEY KNOW EACH OTHER FROM 5 years . SO AFTER 15 days they are gonna GET ENGAGED AND 15 days later THIER marriage is fixed as THERE IS NO OTHER MUHURATH AFTER THAT FOR n year almost.

DAYS PASSED AND ONLY 3 DAYS ARE LEFT FOR ANU's ENGAGEMENT .MEANWHILE UDAY AND MNAAYTH ALSO GOT CLOSE AS TNEY ARE MEETING IN OFFICE DAILY AND SPENDING TIME WIT EACH OTHER

UDAY - he is in office wit MANAYTH , he gets a call from Samar

SAMAR - uday our designer called , we have an appointment today for dress trial . So can u come off wit Manu to da boutique . I'll pick up unnathi ,don worry . Meera is also wit unnathi

UDAY - k Samar I'll be there in 20 min

MNAAYTH - so dress trial k v shall go . While going she slips and falls and uday holds her . They share N intense eye lock . They separate from each other n go to mall .

AT MALL

GIRLS CROWD - prince udayveer we love u . Another girl shouts telling " hey man u kill wit ur looks " . Another girl shouts " pls date me udayveer "

All girls go crazy and surround him . They push manyatha aside .

GIRLS CROWD - hey uday pls give me a kiss , they all fall on him . Guards come and tries to manage .

UDAY - he catches MAnyaths hand and goes aside

GIRLS 1,2,3 - hey look there , prince Samar is coming . Now few girls run towards him . Oh my god are this guys gonna kill us .

GIRL 1 - Samar man ur sexy

GIRL 2 - pls coffe wit me

GIRL 3 - udayveer remove ur shirt

GIRLS CROWD - udayveer we wanna see ur hot body , remove ur shirt

ANOTHER GIRLS CROWD - samar pls remove ur shirt , u look hot man

GIRLS -Samar and uday pls marry me

GUARDS - they try to control da crowd

SAMAR - he catches unnathi and reaches uday and MANAYTAH

MNAAYTH - dada what is all this , are da girls gonna rape u both now

SAMAR - mannu keep quiet , let me call for extra security

UDAY - yes Samar v have to soon , c da crowd is increasing

LISTENING DA NAMES OF PRINCE UDAY AND SAMAR , OTHER GIRLS IN DA MALL RUSH TO THAT FLOOR . NOW THE GUARDS COULDN'T CONTROL DA CROWD AND ALL DA GIRLS FELL ON UDAY . SAMAR was on da other side making a call in da corner .

UNNATHI AND MANAYTH - they are shocked . Helpless , they are pushed out

GIRL 1,2,3 - they fall on uday , they open buttons . One girl start kissing . They drag and almost strip his shirt and da girls started fighting among themselves for chance to kiss uday

SAMAR - he comes to help uday and gets stuck

GIRL 3,4,5 - they jump on Samar and start kissing . They pull of his belt . Samar shouts for help . Uday tries to help but in vain

UNNATHI - guards do something

MNAAYTH - get some extra security , call building security

UNNATHI AND MANAYTH - they go to help them .

MNAYTAH - she tries to help Samar , a girl pushes her

GUARDS - They almost controlled da crowd but not totally wit da help of extra security

UDAY - he catches MANAYTH from falling .he looses balance and both fall down

GUARDS - now they succeeded in controlling da crowd . Extra guards also came now

UDAY AND MNAYATH - MANAYTH is on uday now on da floor . She is on his bare chest , as his shirt is almost stripped .

AS IT BECAME A PUBLIC ISSUE NOW EVEN MEDIA CAME THERE . ALL. THE. FLASHES STARTED .

MNAAYTH - due to flashes , she is still on uday. Hiding her face n shouting " help , dada dada "

SAMAR - oh god mannu , guard go and help them , u idiots . He goes and helps mannu to get up

MNAYATH - she gets up , uday also gets up . Again flashes start . Now MANYATH holds uday and hides her face in his chest

SAMAR - uday let us move soon , get ,mannu . Saying that he holds unnathi protectively and comes out .

UDAY - he comes out wit MANAYTH

ARJUN - he come there with security . Actually he came to India a day before for his sister ANU's engagement . He wanted to surprise MANYATH so he didn't tell his arrival to India . He saw all this mess in da news . He was near to da mall . So he came wit his security

SAMAR - thank god Arjun , u came on right time wit security

ARJUN - he sees mannu wit uday . As da crowd increased now they all started moving towards their cars to leave

CROWD - hey hot royals , don't leave so soon . Prince Arjun u have jus come now , pls stay back ..v wanna kiss u

MNAYTH - she turns around and looks at Arjun now , she leaves uday's hand suddenly n runs towards Arjun

UDAY - he is taken back by her action , he finds her running towards Arjun and hugging him .

MNAYTH - she gets Arjun wit her and stand beside uday .

Now all sit in car , Samar and unnathi sit in da front seat . Uday MANAYTH and Arjun in back seat .manyatha sits between uday and Arjun

SAMAR - mannu r u ok

MANYATH - what happened to me , am fine

SAMAR - involuntarily he keeps his hand on unnathi's cheek and ask " hey are u okay "

UNNATHI - she looks into his eyes and doesn't reply

MANAYTHA - she hits unnathi from back , uday blushes at this scene

UNNATHI - am am ... Fine

UDAY - thank god Yuvraj Arjun u have come on right time , or else I can't even imagine what would have happened

UNNATHI - seriously dada , thanks Arjun . Y were da girls so crazy . Oh my god all bitches , don They have any shame

MANAYTHA. - common unnathi , wen they find 2 top hot celebrities of India , obviously they will react like that

SAMAR - mannu do u think so .

UDAY - seriously princess , They were mad at us and ur telling it so lightly

MNAAYTH - dada , uday and unnathi it's common , they are public n common people , they will rect like that only

UNNATHI - even that's true , since we are wit them from childhood we find it casual , but for public it's not

MNAAYTHA - yes unnathi you are right , we are wit Arjun ,dada and uday from childhood . Also they are our friends Nd brothers so we don feel them as celebrities .but public it's different for them .

ARJUN - excuse me girls wat r u talking about

UNNATHI - Arjun did u listen that girls crowd wat they were shouting soon after they saw u

MANAYTHA - seriously unnathi , they got chance to kiss dada and uday but not Arjun

UNNATHI - that's y they were shouting " don leave so soon prince Arjun we need to kiss u "

UNNATHI AND MANAYTH - They catch their stomachs and laugh out hardly 😆

UDAY - what so dam funny , u silly girls

SAMAR - seriously , r u girls mad ur laughing at our position

MNAAYTH - don take us wrong both of u , hahahahahaha oh my god 😆

UNNATHI - let me explain ahaaa , she bursts out again laughing 😆

MNAAYTH - unnathi should have left Arjun there , Iska kissaa bhi katham hojathA tha 😉

UNNATHI - ya they would even stip him n kiss him ...haa ...😆

ARJUN - this is da limit mannu , I hate those girls and now u both

MNAAYTH - really Arjun , she tickles him and hugs him from side wit her hands

UADY - I donno Samar what these girls logic is

MANAYTH - simple I'll explain u guys now . Jus listen . See Yuvraj Samar pratap sing " most desirable guy of India" . Yuvraj udayveer sing " most eligible batchelor of india "

UNNATHI - and Yuvraj Arjun sing " prince charm of India "

MANATH - u guys are 3 hot guys from Indian famous hot top ten .

UNNATHI - also royals

UNNATHI AND MANAYTH - it's obvious that girls go mad wen they see u all together .

UDAY SAMAR ARJUN - we reached home , ladies pls get down 😡

UNNATHI AND MNAAYTH - sorry guys if we hurt u , but u know we couldn't hahahahhaha😆

All da three guys leave angrily from there into palace

BRIJRAJ - beta I have been watching it on tv , r u guys ok ?

UDAY AND SAMAR - we are k uncle

MEERA - she doesn't know about all this . She comes out of her room .she looks At Uday and Samar . Both shirts are unbuttoned , all lipstick marks were over their bare chested bodies . Some lipstick marks on their cheeks .
Dada wat happened ?

UNNATHI - girls raped ur dada

SAMAR - he looks at unnathi seriously

UDAY - choti that's not funny

UNNATHI - sorry Samar , she tries to control but laughs as MANAYTH started laughing

SAMAR - he tells " unnathi wait Am coming for u "

UNNATHI - she runs now . Samar runs behind her

MANAYTH - uday don u think these both are getting close these days

UDAY - I can see it

ARJUN - hey mannu am leaving , urgent work I'll meet u tomorrow . He tells this and comes near MANAYTH to hug

MANYTHA - stay away u idiot , first thing u dint even tell me that ur coming to India and now leaving so soon , u bandar .

ARJUN - mannu Ill explain it later not now

MNAAYTH - she holds his collar , I need an explanation now u jerk

UDAY a - he stares At devilish behavior of MANAYTH " she is treating her friend like this , donno what she does wit me in future "

SAMAR - mannu leave Arjun , he needs to go . I'll explain u

MANAYTHA - k am leaving u , go . arjun leaves .

SAMAR - uday pls come inside and change ur dress . I'll also go to change . Mannu give him my clothes

MNAAYTHA - k dada

SAMAR - ill be in my room , get my night dress . He tells to maid and leave . Uday also leaves.

MNAYTH - unnathi pls go n give these clothes to Samar dada . Meera and MANYATH wink at each other

UDAY - he is in washroom . Takes bath and come out wit towel wrapped round his waist

MANAYTH - she comes inside to give his clothes . Wrong timing , sorry uday I'll come later

UDAY - drags Mnaytha inside , and locks door






TO BE CONTINUED IN 7.2 tomorrow



Edited by puggyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update Anisha👍🏼 Ab ye Arjun ko kabab mein haddi mat banne dena!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Great update Anisha👍🏼 Ab ye Arjun ko kabab mein haddi mat banne dena!!!


THANK U . YA ARJUN WON'T BE A KABAB .

HEY I FEEL THIS UPDATE IS A BIT BORING . I DINT LIKE IT MUCH

WHAT DO U SAY ? Be frank ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome
I loved it
It was super nice
Loved the detailing
And the girls falling on uday samar was awesome
Arjun and manyata's friendship is so nice
And the end was the best manveer in one room
Please please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update hope arjun dznt come between uday n manyata but dtill reallly funny update I cnt even imagine how it wud be with all those girlz on top of uday n samar ahahaha
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update..poor uday nd samar..manyata nd unnati was gr8 in this update..waitin for nxt update..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sirjee

waoo superb...do continue soon...




Thank u Sirjee .

Thanks vampy . Princess Sumi and fantasyangel ...Arjun won't come in between manveer , I can assure it . Some masala should be na ,if hero n heroine without any troubles get each other , can't happen na . So Arjun in between . He is a good guy don worry
Edited by puggyy - 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 7.2

MNAYATHA - uday , wat r u doing ?

UDAY - jus checking out if I have any effect on u baby

MNAAYTH - really uday . Then I must say u don't have any such . Not always

UDAY - I don't think so princess , I can see in ur eyes . U hav my strong effect

MNAAYTH - pls uday don be so self centred . Do u think am a girl from that crowd T mall to jump and kisss u

UDAY - di I tell so princess , never baby . Ur not like them . Ur unique , KOI THUMSA NAHI PRINCESS

MNAAYTH - whatever am leaving

UDAY - dar gayi mujse

MNAYTH - not at all , I can face u

UDAY - k then let us see if u can resist my charms

MNAYTH - she hesitates but uday provokes her . K uday am ready .


UDAY - MANAYTH is wearing a sleeveless frock till knee length. Like a umbrella style frock . It's lemon yellow with white floral print . Uday is scanning her from top to bottom . " princess u look like a barbie doll " . Saying this he advances and moves towards MNAYTAH leaving no gap between them .

MNAYATH - she was about to talk , but undergoes some wired feelings in her stomach as some butterflies are flying . She is unable to utter a word . She moves back and falls on bed .

UDAY - he bends and slowly settles on top of MNAYATH wit a smirk " princess ur getting carried away "

MNAAYTH - she comes to senses , no ways . She tries to push him .but he holds her hand and runs down his other Hand across her face

UDAY - he blows air in her face , slowly releases her hand and gets grip on her waist . He presses it slightly

MNAAYTH - she starts shivering , and closes her eyes

UDAY - he is lost in her beautifull innocent face . He kisses on her closed eyes

MNAAYTH - sparks run down her spine , she gets goosebums all over her body . She is not in her senses , getting carried away wit his every touch . She feels like having it more unwillingly without her senses

UDAY - he kisses her left cheek , then her right cheek . He looks at her juicy lips passionately and carcasses it wit his fingers . MANAYATH closes her eyes tightly now .

MNAAYTH - she is unable to resist him . Even she feels like touching him

UDAY - he slowly comes near and start kissing her lips , first it was slow but MANAYTH keeps her hands around uday's neck and she gets involved in da kiss . It turns out to a passionate kiss. He moves down to her neck and start leaving wet kisses

MNAYATH - uday is wet as he had wash jus now . MANYTAH can feels da warm from his body .

UDAY - due to his wet body , MNAYTAhs top become wet and a bit transperant , he looks at her wit more passion . He slowly slides down her strap and start kissing her bare shoulders .

MNAYATH - she couldn't control anymore and hugs uday

UDAY - due to this act , heat from her body seeps to uday . His blood becomes warm . His adrenalin levels are at peak now. Both MNAYATH and uday are lost to each other .

MNAYATH - she is shivering wen uday was all kissing her bare shoulders and at her cleavage part .

UDAY - as he is in towel and moving here and there over MNAYATH , it looses down . Uday is not aware of anything now . Totally lost to manyatha

MNAYATH - even she is completely lost to uday .

UDAY - he is kissing her on her lips and without his senses , he moves her frock up and caresses her thighs . He presses her thighs

MNAYATH - she is moaning in pleasure

UDAY - he is more turned on now , out of his control totally . He slowly reaches manyatahs panty . Uday is almost ready to enter her . So he reaches her panty

MNAYATH - a pin on da bed pricks her hard .now she comes into senses and realises were uday hand is and what gonna happen next . She gives him sudden jerk and gets up . She breathes heavily wit tensed face and propers her dress and leaves room .

UDAY - he is lying on bed . " god wat was I about to do , almost I was about to enter my princess . Uday not so soon . I should do something in my life in order . I'll store this for after marriage . Don worry princess I'll do it on our wedding night .,till then I have tough time ahead .i must say princess u have control over ur self , u were very quick to resist my charm at that peak moment which would be highly impossible for any other person "

MNAAYTH - " what did I do , I completely gave myself to him . Never I allowed any guy to even dance wit me , touching is so far . But now , I was almost ready to give my virginity to uday . Had that pin not pricked me at correct time , I can't even imagine . We would end up having sex . Dammit , uday wat ur doing to me . Wenever I look into ur eyes I become weal . Ur touch makes me vulnerable ."

KOMAL - hey unnathi bet give me da dress , I'll hand it over to Samar . Thanks for getting it . Ur guest beta , I'll look after it

UNNATHI - k aunty

ALL HAVE DINNER . MANAYTHA IS AVOIDING UDAY AND NOT LOOKING AT HIM .

UDAY - princess now look at me , we have to work together so obviously we have to face each other . No need to get embarrassed . It's k

MNAAYTH - what k uday , can u jus imagine what was ... She stops

UDAY - I know , I know

MANAYTH - k uday I'll be back , she finds nidhi in hall . Hey nidhi ,come we will go up

UDAY and UNNATHI - k Samar we will leave

SAMAR - k both of u .

UDAY - can u give this file to MANAYTHA Samar

SAMAR - she is in that room , both ur architects are there pls u can go and give it uday

UDAY - he goes to da room , stops at da entrance listening to MANYATHa and nidhi's conversation

MANAYTH - nidhi u know today I was almost about to loose my virginity

NIDHI - what !!!!!? R u mad , gone nuts . What are u speaking about mannu

MNAAYTHA - I should tell u many things now . What all happened in ur absence . Jus listen

NIDHI - shut up mannu , how can u , u bloody

MANYATHA - nidhi , trust me nothing happened . Am still a virgin , I didn't loose yaar . I was about to I told

NIDHI - whatever mannu , is that u only my mannu . U never allow a guy to come near u . Rejected many hot guys and celebrities . Now I jus can't imagine what sa shit ur speaking

MNAYATH - she started crying , listen to me . I didn't do anything wrong nidhi

NIDHI - hey mannu that's k . Nothing happened na . K jus tell me

MNAAYTH - I should tell u from first now what all happened wen u were not there

NIDHI - first tell me da guys name

MNAYATH - uday

NIDHI - what ?!!!!!! Oh my god mannu , k tell me I won interrupt now

SAMAR - hey uday y ur standing hee come v shall go in . Mannu n nidhi ur boss wanna speak to u

UDAY - pls don call me that . We are friends , no boss nothing

NIDHI AND MANAYTHA - they take file from udayy , n tell they would meet and finish it off after anus engagement

UDAY - he finds it difficult to face nidhi as he overheard da girls conversation . He tells bye And leave

MANAYTH - she narrates the whole story to MNAYATHA . Now nidhi also tells mannu about her feelings for Arjun

MEERA - she happens to hear it . God nidhi u love Arjun dada . My goodness many love stories here ...u n Arjun , Samar dada and unnathi ...I think now mannu di and uday dada

MANAYATH - shut up meera don't include me pls . K nidhi me n meera will help u out

MEERA - yes my work is to do that only , I'll change my name from meera saxena to meera Cupid

NIDI AND MANNU - they laugh at meera's statement .

MNAAYTHA - am not less to u , almost am also doing that meera .

SAMAR - all girls are having fun

MANAYTH - dada I want to concentrate on my new project completely , so dada I told unnathi to assist u regarding that devgads new project . Even meera is busy now wit ANU's wedding plans and all that . Dada I think u don have any problem wit it

SAMAR - ya no problem , ask her to come to office tomorrow

MEERA - here is her number , call and speak for ur self

NIDHI - yes dada after all ur gonna work together

SAMAR - k girls now chill , I'll do it .

UDAY - he is at his home " seriously these girls can't keep any secrets from their best friends , at least da bedroom topics . I think by now MANYTAH must have given all da description to nidhi . These girls , I never understand . "

UNNATHI - dada need to talk to u

UDAY - tell me choti

UNNATHI - mannu asked to assist Samar in devgads project as she is busy wit ur new project . So shall I dada ? I got a call from Samar . He asked to come to office in da morning

UDAY - k choti u can , no need to ask me . After all we all are family friends .

UNNATHI - thanks dada .

UDAY - nice plan princess

MNAYATHA - she calls uday , hey uday do one thing . tomorrow come to my place wit unnathi in da morning

UDAY - y ?

MNAYATH - jus come man , I'll tell u after u come

UDAY - k princess as u say . " she is so commanding , wit uv . Am obeying like a slave . My wicket is out " . It's in ur language princess

SAMAR - hey good morning uday and unnathi

MNAYATH - thanks for coming uday . So shall we go . Nidhi will join us . Dada pls u take unnathi wit u , we have some work . We are going together

SAMAR - ya surely , we both are also going to office . Come unnathi . Both unnathi and Samar walk together and both go in car

UDAY - so this was ur plan . Well it's wonderfully . So shall we go now

MNAYATH - u leave . I'll come wit nidhi

UDAY - not fair princess , after All we r going to same place . I obeyed u , so now it's ur turn

MANAYTH - kk . Both leave to office


PRECAP -

Anu and VIJAY'S engagement

MANVEER DANCE TOGETHER ,SET STAGE ON FIRE

Samar gets to know that unnathi loves him . All manyatha's plan .

SAMAR AND UNNATHI'S ROMANCE

MANVEER ROMANCE










Edited by puggyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome work puggy
Manveer almost ended up having sex
Loved the description
The mood of the whole update
Loved all the dialogues
Thanks for the pm
Loved this chapter
Precap rocks as usual
Please update soon
This is one of the best ss
Love your writing
Edited by vampire12345678 - 12 years ago

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