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Posted: 12 years ago
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hope ur son gets well soon!!!!!!!! wshing him a speedy recovery!!!!!!!! andd u r a suprb wrterr,havent frgtn ur plot cna nvr frgt!!!!!!!!! 😊 will be waitng😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi dekians...here's chap2. Part 1[

Updated part 2,3,4

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So princess I r tired...ok lets lazy around a bit...uday holds her hands in his and pulls her with him...goes and sits on the grass...sit princess...enjoy the air...feel the music...dream ...sync in with rhythm...jab tak words ko music ko feel nahi karoge...dream nahi karoge...tab tak kabhi acha dance nahi kar paoge...she sits besides him...her hands are still entwined in his hands...she closes her eyes...the song in background is

Mar jawaa mar jawaa
Tere ishq Pe marjawa
BheegI bheegi sapnon ka jaise khatt hai,
Geeli geeli chahat ki jaise lat hai

Marjawa marjawa
Tere ishq Pe marjawa
Marjawa tere ishq Pe marjawa

Manyata is... seeing herself dancing fluently...she is very
happy but she is shocked to see that.that she was looking like her fairy...she was twirling soche dil ke aisa kaash ho
Tujhe ek nazar meri talaash ho,
Jaise khwaab hai ankhon mein base meri
Vaise neendon mein silwate pade Teri,
Bheege bheege armaano ki aahat hai,
Geeli geeli khwahishen bhi behad hai,,
Mar
happily with a guy.nashe was enjoying her d
ream with the music...words in the bg werejust enthralling her...she was loving this dream she was dancing very passionately thinking of the guy being akash but but as she saw the face of the guy...she was stumped ...it couldn't ne she couldn't be dancing wildly with udayyy...nooo...thus can't be...
Mar jawaa tere ishq Pe marjawa
Tere ishq Pe Majawa...
Manyata opened her eyes and was too hot and embarrasses...how could she think of uday...she looks besides her...she says uday has closed his eyes and has lain on the grass...and sees their hands r still entwined in each other's...she separates her hands and says...- wah bhai wah!! Yeh kya ek rajkumar ghaas par binary slippers ke leta hai...I don't believe this! Uday tum bhool Gaye ki tum ek ameer matlabi,bigde,aur ghamandi rajwade ho ..yeh tumhe suit nahi karta...uday utho utho na..." uday doesn't answer for a while. He is still and silent..,doesn't open his eyes...manyata becomes worried...she doesn't like his stillness,his silence," uday uday halkat Hilo na kuch" ...still no answer,nomovement..now m is worried...kahin kisI keede ne ya koi saanp ne toh nahi kata...vaise toh yeh Luis Tina degree l a hai ki saanp khud hi mar jaye...she is frightened now...she goes near him and touches her finger ti his nose...feels no breath...she bends this time to feel his breath..still nothing...all color is drained from her face...she lays her head on his chest and tries to hear his heart beating...she hears a thumping sou sound..but is confused..she wonders it's her heart beat...jumping with fright and panic...or his heart...why doesn't he answer...ooh uday...what happened...she is frantic now...tears start steaming down her eyes...oh god usko yeh achanak kya ho gaya?? Fir se woh uv ke dil ki dhadkan sunne jhukti hai...uday uday uthona she shakes him crying hard...
Edited by dreamyjennice - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Updated chapter 2 part 1 and part 2 on pg 9 ...plz do read and comments are welcome and awaited thanx and yupp love u guys ...
Edited by dreamyjennice - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2

M is crying she is so lost and crying that she doesn't feel an arm snaking around her and holding her making her fall on him completely...she shouts..." uday..uday u r alive...u r ok thank god..hai rabba meri toh jaana hi nikal gayi...she starts smiling and feels so happy...but then she remembers..what is she doing and where and how she is ..she is lying over him completely...a chill running down her spine...she tries to untangle herself and tries to stand and loses her balance and both start rolling on the ground on the grass...uday is laughing hysterically still holding her whole while rolling on the grass with her..." oh manyata...hahaha...oh gosh manyata...hahaha" m is so so angry...she starts punching him on his chest...she is still under him andvtrying to hit him hard...uday defends himself and tries to control her. She's turned frantic with anger..." Kameeney,aisa koi karta hai kya,u cheat tumne mere hosh uda diye,mai tumhe chodungi nahi...I will not leave u.." she thumps him and struggles...they r fighting with each other lost in their own world...she is crying and he is teasing her..." oh m kya kaha mai saanp se bhi zehreela hoon...aur akdu,ghamandi,aur pata nahi ...tum mujhe kitne cage se janti ho na.hahaha..."...finally both r tired and stop...fighting and teasing...m is still under him and uv is holding her both hands with one of his above her head and from the other is trying to still the movement from the waist...aww u guys feel free ti picture their position...nits too hot I tell u...hmmm..now baack to story...uday"" now princess,stop crying...but u were scared...admit it...u were hurt and...u were worried about me...admit it affect u princess"" he's still laughing...manyata can feel his breath on her, his voice near her ears us ravishing her senses,she is relieved that uv is fine...but at the same time angry and hating him for playing such a deadly trick on her...she closes her eyes and breathes in his sweet scent...sweet...now where dud it cone from...she is surprised at her thts...they r still lying in the same position...no one makes a move to change it...she spats. " ISS.tarah koi mazaak karta hai kya...kutte tu khud ko samjhta kya hai...me and worried for u never..stop gloating idiot...yeh mat sochna mai darr gayi...agar tujhe kuch ho jata toh mai laddoopede baatati sab login ko...haan nai toh!! Ande tu ruk mai aaj tera omelet banati hoon!!" uv sees her searching for something from her tied hands...her body is still entwined with his...it feels so right...she's so beautiful,not at all like other girls...no wonder he's fallen for her dangerously can't she see what all this physical touching is doing to him...God if I could kiss her, if I could shut that beautiful mouth if hers...I can feel the response of her body but does she know it...she's damn crazy...uff...yeh volcano hai aur ise ahsaas tak nahi...shesdamn sexy..suddenly he sees she's gotten hold of sum mud...NIH wildness, jeez...he pushes her aside and stands immediately and runs shouting...catch me if u can sweetheart...u r clever but not more than prince udayveer...hahaha"...; m gets up angrily and runs after him with mud in her hands..." just wait and watch,mai chodungi nahi tumhe...jahaan jaoge Humein paoge...tu prince hai toh mai bhi princess hoon...manyata se panga theek nahi...tu bhaag papeetey...kitna bhagege...thakur gabbar ko pakad hi lega"... Both r running like kids,shouting and fighting,aftermath other...its as if he is again 6 and she 4yr old...lost in their own universe...
Edited by dreamyjennice - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanx to all who liked and commented...and special thanx to miss iluvvmmaanveer...I dunno her name...but she wanted to be a reporter yo catch all maanveer play...wellme too wanted the same so I dedicate this part to her [
PART 3
Part-4 pg 10



Uv is hooting...common princess...itna khati ho...woh kya kehti ho kutto waalI bhookh lagti hai na...so run like them...pakdo mujhe...he jumps over a twig and turns round yo look for her...he stops...is surprised...he doesn't find her ..he shouts..calls her name but can't spot her...he is still thinking surely this junglee billi is up to now...when someone pokes him on his shoulders...he turns round to see her smiling face..." see got u prince uday,and now god save u from your princess...u r gonna look damn sexy with mud on ur face..." andshe smirks...she lifts her mud filled palms yo throw at him...he just smiles..." my princess,umm sounds too good ,
. but sorry can't fulfill ur wish princess...and he winks at her...manyata is surprised at his reaction and taken aback by his winking...she's liking this flirting and playing a lot...she rem to throw mud and does that but is late and uday dodges her and starts laughing and runs towards the pool area...she runs behind him shouting " I will kill you u cheat...I missed my shot coz u were flirting wait till I make u lose ur senses...grrr"...she catches him and again loses her balance..he holds her from waist...she smiles at him and pushes him in the pool...showing a victorious smirk...buy what she didn't expect was that while falling in the pool uday also pulls her along with him...she shouts no no no...uday says" eeth ka jawaab patthar hota hai my darling princess..., u know I always win ha hahaha"... Both fall with a thud in the pool...m is frightened...she tries to hold on to him...she shouts uday help...I dunno swimming I will drown,uday surfaces near her and holds her.." humare rehtey aapko kuch nahi hogs
Edited by dreamyjennice - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 4... Again dedicated to iluvmaanveer and all my readers...

uday holds her..." humarey rehtey aapko kuch nahi hoga dearest friend manyata...seeing her crying...oh no not again princess!! ...rajkumariyan roti nahi rulati hain...he grins...don't worry princess ISS pool mein dubogi nahi ...yeh sirf 4 ft gehra hai...par haan tum...tum kitni 4 ft ki ho na...tab toh Humein tumhe yun hi kash ke pakadna padega" manyata starts giggling at his funny antics...she hugs him and pulls his ears fondly...faking anger...she says " tune mujhe data diya tha...aisa pair kabhi mat karna...agar tumhe sachmuch kuch ho jata toh hum sehen nahi kar paatey...promise me uday" .." why princess...AAP humarey liye kyon pareshaan hoti manyata...hum aapke hai kaun?"... Both r gazing st each other intensely now...completely lost in each others eyes...waist deep in water...both are completely wet...their clothes r stuck like next skin to their bodies , both r dripping wet from head to toes still in water...manyata doesn't understand what's happening to her...she is losing all her thts and logics...her heart and body r work working in their own sync...she is becoming deaff to her mind...she feels uday finger tips gazing her face oh so softly he removes a wet tendril which was let lose in their tussle and silently gazes her...he leaves her hold on her waist , holds his ears and very huskily s says " sorry!! Ab kabhi aisa nahi hoga...plzz don't be angry..." well manyata slips un water and starts floating...,uday hholds her close...she starts splashing water on him like a kid and asks " yeh acting kyon ki? I hate to admit prince udayveeris that I really do care for you...though I hate u to core,but...I actually can't understand why I feel so protecttive of you...I am confused my self and u better stop gloating now...but y did you do it uday? " uday- " actually , tumhe yaad nahi,par yeh sab tumharey hi karan hua hai...humara ek purana hisaab tha ... Ek baar bachpan mein tumne bhi Humein wise hi rulaya tha aur daraya tha...toh humne promise kiya tha li hum badla lekar jayenge...so aaj woh pura hua...
M- " lekin humne kyon kiya tha aisa?"
Uday-"actually hum dono ki dance class thi...teacher hum dono ko sikha rahi thi...par tum theek se nahi kar rahi thi. Jab meri tareef hone lagi to tumhe gussa qq gaya aur tumne mujhe tang karne ke liye aisa natak kiya " .. They were still in the pool,all dripping wet...uday hands on her waist holding her tight and glued to him and manyata hands were on his his shoulders round his neck...both were laughing...m couldn't believe she could enjoy so much with uday...she was at do much ease with him and uday couldn't believe ki thodi der ke liye woh sirf uday tha aur manyata uski sirf dost...best childhood buddies...but they forgot that they were grown up now and their body reactions started to remind them...m whistles and looks uday flirtingly..." kya baat hai yuvraaj...AAj toh aapko dekh ke koibhi girl crazy ho jayegi. Aur j toh pagal hi ho jati" uday blushes " stop it manyata...AAP bheeg gayi hain yeh plan humari outing mein nahi tha..."
M-" arre rum yaar j ko phone karne de...she is full on teasing him...uv is angry..," ok toh akash ko bhi call kar lete hain...he must be missing u like crazy...hai na..." m stops laughing..." Humein thank lag rahi hai..kamiine tumhe mujhse kya dushmani hai...ab mai change kisme karungi...kapde thodi na laying hoon mai saath mein...??"

Precap: maanveer first kiss...coming soon..
Edited by dreamyjennice - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well guys this will be a new chapter...coz this is turnaround of the story. ...so it's gonna be on a new page.. .
Edited by dreamyjennice - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68

Thanx 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
itss amazingg!!!!!! loved the way manyata was soo much worried abt uday!!!!!!! and alaso the dream!!!!!!! the wayy they were fightinggg!!!!!! waitng for the othr parts!!!!!!!!!!😊 jaldi update kar dena😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
Woo dear Awesome update
i loved it
very nyc
and manna Padega UV ke acting ko 😉
poor Manyata 😆

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