hotmaanveer ss-UPDATEs pg 44, 45, 46 aug 9 - Page 21

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hope you get well soon dear.
Your health and kids are more important.
Take care... muuaahh
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its ok...dear ur kids are more important...take ur time and get well soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its OK dear
Get well soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
its prfctly alr8 dear,ofcrse ur kids need u, and thank u for dis note😊 just take care of urslff,and gt well soon!!!!!! 😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very sad to hear that 😔. But i hope you get well REALLY SOON!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
NOTE...I AM BACK

Hey guys me back again fit and fine...thanx for ur lovely well wishes...so pull up ur socks for a rollercoaster ride today...will be updating today.plzz. Do keep checking for updates...well I have a few surprises for few members here...they and you all would love it...till then chow...ABD dont just like. Give dhasu coments too...LOZZ...
Sorry guys couldn't complete my update today...the net is stopped working...till then enjoy this short update...
Edited by dreamyjennice - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOZZ.Something hit manyata on head...she lost her balance...she fell on uday...and both in the pool bham...uday yelled... " oops manyata...wth..." both r inside water ...LOZZ...both rolled in water ..it was so sudden...m uv was trying to hold them and st and.and m she was,shouting...hitting uv...mujhe vachao uv...ghadede...mujhe utha...u-...oh idiot...mai balance kar raha hoon aur tum baar baarmujhe hi maar rahi ho...chup rahogi...both r still in water.uv pushes m hardly and immediatly holds her and makes her stand properly...both r outta water. ..u- r u crazy...4 ft ke pool mein koi nahi doobta .. Tum toh aise chilly rahi thi...jaise kisi samudra mein dooba rahi ho...idiot...bhagwaqn bachaye ...mai sabko warn kar doonga...safe rehna hai toh...m ko paani mein bachane may jaana...warna...m starts hitting uv...tum mera mazak uday rahe ho...theek hai har kutte ka din hota hai...aisa chance mile toh mai roz tumhara pet ban jaaonga...he smirks...both have an eyelock...both start rem their kiss...M-blushes and tries to change the topic
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Posted: 12 years ago
Tu toh padi security rakhta hai na...phirr...mujhe sar Pe kaise lagi... U- achha tumhare sar mein kuch hai bhi kya...Jo tumhe itni zor se lagi...M- pouts angrily...I am serious something hit on my head and I lost balance when we were we were we were. ...a.a.a.a...it's hurting...there's no one here...then how...pakka tune mera murder karne ki ashish Kari hogi...
MY VIEW-...MY GOD...BELEIVE ME I HAVEN'T SEEN ANY OTHER COUPLE WHO FIGHT EVEN WGEN THEY R DROWING...WHEN THEY R KISSING...WHEN THEY R CALLING FOR A TRUCE AND YET FIGHTING...JUST CANT STOP LAUGHING ...AM SURE U READERS OUTTA THERE MUST BE SMILING TOO...MOST CUTE ANGRY..FIGHTING YET R A COUPLE...HAHAHA 🤣 ANY WAYS BACK TOMY STORY. .
Uv-..we were what m...he smiles naughtily...laughs out loud...ok ok..stop being angry..let me see what hit u.. And for god sake...I didn't try to murder you...my latest gf would have not liked ne going to jail instead and spend night with me there then in her bedroom...he winks at her and goes inside the pool...m is fuming and feeling strange...hearing about his gf...she uncomfortable with the tht...she shoves it aside...she feels something sneaking behind ABD is a bout ti scream in fear...when she sees uv..with a tennis ball in hand...so this was the weapon which hit you...hmmm...very lucky...he could hit the great princess warrior...M-... She's surprised seeing the ball...she smirks...yeah...but however can you tel its a he ABD not she...how do you see the gender...uv- he laughs out loudly...omg manyata now u want me to explain how I see the gender...seriously...come to mybed...believe me I will show all the difference...he's laughing at her embarrassed face...shes turned beetroot red...hahaha...my god my princess is so naive and innocent...
M- she realizes what she said and is embarrassed...her face gas turned crimson...khasmanukhana...mai yedi hi jaati hoon jab yeh paas hota hai...m tu sochta kyon nahi hai bolne se pehle..bas tujhe toh jab dekho ISS halkat ladna hota hai...isse toh bas mauka chahiye...mujhe chehdne ka...ab kya karoon...yeh ab meri bahut taang khichega...she stops blabbering...
Uv-... Still laughing...I am more than ready ti teach you...hahaha..
M- ullu ki dum mera woh Mariah nahi tha...why do u twist whatever I say...ab chale pool see bahar...ki abhi kuch baaki hai... Uv sees her shivering and remembers they r in pool from a lo bbb time and m will catch cold...he moves toward an wooden box at nearing end of the pool ..opens it and pics a receive and orders for big bathtiwels...
The maids bring two fluffy towels...m goes out wipes herself...and takes her to guest room to dry up...uv is still in the pool...remembering the events of the day...he was feeling so happy after a long time...but the dayvwas getting over...they were late already...and would have to leave now...he became sad...picked his towel...looked towards his torn shirt...threw it an went ti his room to dry up...
Manyata went to have aa bath...she soaked herself in the bath tub...closed her eyes...thinking about the day...she felt so complete...so purely happy today...she became hot allover thinking about the kiss...she tht she shld feel guilty...she shld be angry...but strangely she felt very right...she wasn't guilty...she wanted it to go on...she rememberstering his shirt...smiles at his shocked look when she kissed him...she was something else when with uv...no excuse could stop her doing anything with while him...but with akash...she always found excuses...to run faraway...to wait till marriedmarriage...but now she was concerned with nothing...she was breathing heavily...her heart had stopped beating when he told how he would love to show..her And how...o god...she was getting hot...she really wanted to go take up his offer...to feel how he would show her...she had decided...finally...she smiles and stood up from the tub and started drying herself...
Edited by dreamyjennice - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
RESWA!!!
unreswa
shitwa!!
ye kya tha archu???
o shit this was a mindblowing epi...
i was rolling and the last manyata's pov just blew me off my chair i was like, "WAT!!!! are u damn sure my princess about wat u r thinking???"
u noe,
with this pov as ending, you will hav to hav to hav to give me the jungle queen dose as soon as possible...
wat is she upto!!!
it was not even a proper proposal, it was sarcasm, which manyata took as proposal, she is outta her senses!!!

Edited by iluvmanveer - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was awesome part!!👏
loved it!😳
omg! the ending was super yummy😆 please don't make us wait more, manyata k andar ki rooh jaag uthi hai,😃 please update soon!
i just cant wait more. lets see what she does next😳

Edited by -Zina- - 12 years ago

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