Fan epi 30, Maharaaj and Maharani's Rajyabhishekh - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Awsomeee...epi...
Hum toh apne samne khadi devi ki pooja kar rahe hai...love that scene
J is a nigest fool ever...woh unhi chizo ke pi6e bhagti hai...jo ushe kabhi nahi milane wali pehle udau aur ab abhay...
Poor jagat...ab ushe pata chalega to kitna hurt hoga...
Thanx for PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Manveerfan123

Amazing update!!!! Tumari writing tho din par din Kamaal ki hoti jaa rahi hain yaar'nn 👏 Continue soon!!! 😃



Thanks for the compliment dear...Had written in a hurry..otherwise zada acha hota...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: swetsurati

Awsomeee...epi...
Hum toh apne samne khadi devi ki pooja kar rahe hai...love that scene
J is a nigest fool ever...woh unhi chizo ke pi6e bhagti hai...jo ushe kabhi nahi milane wali pehle udau aur ab abhay...
Poor jagat...ab ushe pata chalega to kitna hurt hoga...
Thanx for PM.



You loved the line?😆...Thanks I had no idea ki woh line sabko acha lagega..I just wrote it...Ya J is always a fool..Kabhi nahi sudhregi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey gargi awesome episode😊

"Manyata was taken aback by this attitude of his and was about to say something when he starts kissing her passionately ...First her forehead, then cheeks, bents down to her neck, then to her chest, slowly to both her hands and she just could not utter a word...She had no idea what was going on in his mind..She had never seen him so passionate..He was almost reacting like a hungy animal starving from food for a year!!..."Uday bas karo...Kya ho gaya hai tumhe...Hume der ho rahi hai aur koi a jayega..Please choro mujhe..." Manyaata was really tensed now thinking that what was wrong with her husband..."Thik hai princess itna gussa kyu kar rahi ho...Hum to bas apne samne khari devi ki pooja kar rahe the..."..."Tujhe jitni pooja karni hai raat ko kar lena..abhi jaldi chal..." and she drags him out of the room..."
loved this part😳😳😳

feeling bad for jay.. she deserves to be punished..
but somehow not disgraced in front of the whole world..
hmmm she s paying for her deeds..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it n plz do continue to pm me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16

lovely episode. Feel terrible for jay but udays reaction on seeing his queen was beautiful. Keep up the awesome writing.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb Gargi...episode was too good...Loved it👍🏼

It was like we are really watching coronation ceremony on the tv...awesome⭐️

and that pooja line between UV and M...I was like☺️😆

great job...🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
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no gargi it was really vry awesum no doubts.it was surely vry awesum.luvd manveer scenes. d only thing i cud wish after reading dis vry epi dat except j wala bura part,kash ye sab on air hota. esp. coronation of uday n manyata as maharaj n maharani
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

no gargi it was really vry awesum no doubts.it was surely vry awesum.luvd manveer scenes. d only thing i cud wish after reading dis vry epi dat except j wala bura part,kash ye sab on air hota. esp. coronation of uday n manyata as maharaj n maharani



Ya even I missed DEK while writing the coronation..kya kare SR and SA just ruined everything
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sunshinegirll

hey gargi awesome episode😊

"Manyata was taken aback by this attitude of his and was about to say something when he starts kissing her passionately ...First her forehead, then cheeks, bents down to her neck, then to her chest, slowly to both her hands and she just could not utter a word...She had no idea what was going on in his mind..She had never seen him so passionate..He was almost reacting like a hungy animal starving from food for a year!!..."Uday bas karo...Kya ho gaya hai tumhe...Hume der ho rahi hai aur koi a jayega..Please choro mujhe..." Manyaata was really tensed now thinking that what was wrong with her husband..."Thik hai princess itna gussa kyu kar rahi ho...Hum to bas apne samne khari devi ki pooja kar rahe the..."..."Tujhe jitni pooja karni hai raat ko kar lena..abhi jaldi chal..." and she drags him out of the room..."
loved this part😳😳😳

feeling bad for jay.. she deserves to be punished..
but somehow not disgraced in front of the whole world..
hmmm she s paying for her deeds..



haahaha..ya the M-UV scenes, while writing them even I was blushing...Kya karu..never could get a proper romantic scene between them in the show..So try it in my epis...n ya J is a big time fool but woh karti bhi kya..she was drugged after all

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