It Started With .. Sex On The Beach updtd pg 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tiger_lily



hehe .. Thanxx... 😉
yup ! Will ddo 😭 *happy tears*


your welcome...
please update SoooNN!!
hey don't cry..happy tears bhi nahin!!😃
khush raho jani...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
would love read about this runaway bride Manyata
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very Nice Kiara👍🏼...you know while I was reading the scene it reminded me of Julia Robert's movie called Runaway Bride instantly...I started laughing😆 Super interesting😉

would like to read more and thanx for the pm dear🤗

Edited by adorable_rana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey kiara... Luved ur concept its really interseting like the way manyata said no n ran away lolz plz update n pm me if u can...<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb, lovely, fabuluous, fantabuluous...aik dum faroo...
continue soon dear n do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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itss going gr888,doo cninuee will be waitng!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏 👏 Amazing great start 👏 👏
Plzzz continue soon 😊
And thx for the pm 🥱
Edited by Manveerangel - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Uday is what you call a "player" or womanizer.

Only son of Ragini Singh - A well known public figure. Uday grew up with the idea that happy endings were not-so-happy afterall.

Lost in his own world where he is married to his work and every second woman in his life is his mistress and devoid of emotions Uday popularly known as UV is all that a girl stays away from yet falls for.

Full of himself charming Uday believes that he is immune to the charms of the opposite sex.

But unknown to him he is out for the rollercoaster ride of his life.







Manyata is a hyperactive, bubbly girl who had once drowned herself in her dreams While other girls grew up falling in love with "the idea of love" this little girl grew up with the idea that love was meant for 'Jackasses' who had nothing better to do that tie themselves to unwanted relationships. She's the bubbly girl who finds the positive side to every situation, who tries to bring a smile to everyones face. She's naive, crazzy and totally out of the box. She never believed in relationships until now and all she wants is to find love - if there is one for her.

And then she meets this stranger, who pops out of nowhere at the most unwanted situations.

Some stranger who makes her heart beat faster, yet manages to cannot her. Some stranger who loves to make her blush.

What's his name? She doesn't know but she feels safe when she's around him.

Still questioning her beliefs on love and relationships Manyata is left on her own all alone debating about the very thing she vowed to never change ever!



Atleast 40 likes for the next update! Please?
PS No pics 'cause God knows whats wrong wiw IF today! All the pics are not gettin posted unless u copy them from anyother post and post them!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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" Computers crash, People die and relationships break off.
The only thing we can do is breathe and reboot. "



Once Upon A ... Mistake?


MANYATA POV

Everyone says that love teaches us to live, they say hope is all we got and is the key to hold on to relationships. And everyone knows that, that is bullshit. Just like everyone thought that it was their business to ensure my happiness.

While my mother thought it was her business to ensure my "happiness" and my father supported her decision by saying that it was his business to find me a groom and get me to finally tie the knot. Seriously?
And did I agree? NO!
Did they care? NOPE!

And here I was today, sitting in this damn club trying my best to enjoy what is supposed to be my "Bachelorette Party". I felt like a porcelain doll all decked up and kept ready to be sold in a few days. Ironic huh?

"One sex on the beach, Please?" I yelled trying to get the bartender's attention.

The bartender turned towards me and then rolloed his eyes and turned away which caused me to snap my fingers at his not-so-pretty-face and yell "Dude, my drink?"

And then I felt someone shout behind me trying to get himself heard despite of the loud music.

"He won't listen to you," he said "He's trying to impress that young lady there."
He said, his index finger pointing put to 'that young lady'.

I groaned, so much for a drink.

I felt someone tug my wrist and pull it, following the lead I just followed the lead. Letting this stranger lead me to god knows where.

And then I felt him slip a drink in my hand.

A "sex on the beach" the ultimate drink I was craving for this whole evening and without a second thought I brought the glass to my lips, slowly losing myself to the drink not once remembering the basic rule we were told to follow - Never to befriend or trust strangers especially in places like clubs where anyone could easily spike your drinks.

Trusting strangers led to mistakes and mistakes lead to doom and that lead to ... Well, who knew. All I knew was that I was set for mistakes. Maybe they could be the only way out of this doomed arrangement I was going to be forced into.

"You know I could have spiked that drink, for all you know!" the voice said bringing me out of my reverie.

"Yeah! To have your dirty way with me?," I snorted and turned away.

"Well, Do you want me to? "

I moved closer stepping infront of the figure.I placed my hands on his body and traced his rock hard chest.

Eight pack, huh?

I pulled him towards me and moved towards his face and further towards his ears. I could feel his breath on my neck and then taking the cue I whispered "Next time, try harder!" and moved away but not before he caught hold of my wrist and pulled me towards him.

And the lights flashed giving me a glimpse of this stranger.

He had it all! A perfectly carved out face, looks that could kill, a smirk that could melt any heart, a voice that was music to your sould,an attitude to die for, a personality that made him stand out and a body anyone would die for.

A part of my mind screamed "Greek God!" while the other screamed "Red Alert! HOT!" but the sensible part of my mind of my mind that I had known to have ceased to exist screamed "Stay away, he's trouble!".

And I stood there staring at him until I heard him say "Click a picture! It'll last longer" which caused me to snap and roll my eyes. Cocky Much?

"And waste a shot on this," I retorted, my finger drawing an imaginary circle around his face.

Which just caused him to smirk and ask "Up for a drink?"

He dragged me towards the bar without even waiting for my response. What's with guys and all the pulling and dragging?


**** **** **** **** **** **** **** ****

UDAY POV

"Manyata Chauhan," she slurred "You can call me Manya, ur ma hawtipie ! And hot people are fun.. Noo hot people are crazzy or are they mean. They are cool.. No they are not .. But u are aren't u? Crazzy I mean."

I smiled as she scrunched her face in confusion. She looked cute, who am I kidding she was cute.

I smiled at the girl in his arms. Udayveer Singh smiling, that was rare.

Strangely she felt good there, like she belonged there.

Now, from where did that thought come? I thought as I shrugged it off.

**** ****

I leaned on the door as I looked at the sleeping figure in his bed as she woke up and as her face first registered shock and then confusion and then she started muttering making faces as she started cursing herself. I shook my head at her antics and then not able to hold my laughter I let it out which only caused her to look up, snap out of her antics and scream
"You!"

Ah! This is gonna be interesting I thought as I walked over and sat on the bed and replied.

"Yeah! Remember me your 'hawtiepie'." which did nothing but made her blush.



**** **** **** **** **** **** **** ****


MANYATA POV


I woke up to unfamiliar surroundings.

This was NOT my room and the next thing I realised was that I had a killer headache.

Clutching my forehead, I wrecked my brains trying to remember what happened last night.

The last thing I remembered was being totally intoxicated and bawling my eyes out while that stranger peacefully listened to me.

Stranger + Emotionally Weak + Unfamiliar surroundings + ... NO!

Oh No I didn't ! Was all I thought as I squeezed my eyes shut and felt the "thing" I was wearing.

No No No No No ... Was all that my mind chanted.

I didn't or did I ?

"Really Manyata out of all the things you do you had to jump in bed with some random stranger. Who cares if he was hot!" I cursed myself, totally disappointed at myself.
Crying wouldn't help, it never did. Damn those who thought it did.

I heard someone laugh which caused me to look up and glare at the figure. And then I saw him laugh. His dimples showing and eyes twinkling with joy.

"You!" I screamed which caused him stop laughing and walk over and sit on the same damn bed I was currently lying on and say "Yeah! Remember me, you're 'hawtiepie' "

I felt my cheeks heat up for no reason, I knew that a traitorous blush was creeping up my cheeks.

"So did we ... ?" I hinted not bothering to complete the sentence.

"Have hot undeniable forbidden sex?," he completed "Fortunately No!"

I could feel myself breathe a sigh of relief and at the same time glare at him.

"Not that I don't want to, believe me you're quite desirable" he continued.

"So you're gay? I knew it this is so bloody wrong. Why does every desirable guy have to be taken or gay..." I interrupted, clearly ranting. The next thing I knew was that his hand was over my mouth.

"No, if we ever do it I just want you to remember us doing "it" being completely sober and not as a drunken mistake" he added.

I mentally "aawed" at his statement and then glared at him and signalled towards the outfit I was wearing at the moment, which was an oversized shirt.

"Oh! You barfed last night. You will get a new outfit given to you in say ten minutes" he shrugged and handed me a glass of water and some tablet claiming that 'it would help with the hangover' leaving me there to wonder if he peeked or not, if he saw anything or not and at that moment for the first time in my life I felt like a ten year old all over again whose crush had just smiled at her.

Smiling I thoughts I started to get off the bed not before I heard him say
"You find me hot huh? Your Hawtiepie!" which only caused two things.

One, me to blush all over again. Two, to have the first thing that I caught hold of to be flung at him.



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*Kiara fans herself* That was pretty hot in there! Wasn't it?

Golly!
Seriously? This is tiring ... Typing I mean :*)

Hey you *stares*
Yeah u! Ssup?

Now, as per usual I will be needing comments and likes. I'll be waiting here like a distressed, emotionally imbalanced person glancing at. My screen every few minutes so don't torture me okay?
Drop a few comments. IDC if they are related to the update or not.
P.S. I'm sorry I don't reply to every comment. I really appreciate each and everyone of them but then being the ex spammer I was I dont really mind readers spamming this thread as far as it makes sense ... And I lack time to I don't really reply to comments saying "Nice" and "Great update" I'll either like or mass reply to those. (:

GOOD NEWS : I'll be walking the ramp with my BF soon for one of my moms friends. Really excited here. Though it's not exactly a professional thing but still! *dances around*
BAD NEWS: The attention you recieve sucks and it's tiring and well, that also means I wont find the time to updare that frequently. (P.S. I'll update really soon if I get my desired response (:)


Atleast 40 likes or loads of comments for me to update the next chapter :-D

Sorry guys, but I am an attention freak here and I need to know that there is someone out there whose actually reading this ;)


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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG THAT WAS SO HOT
AMAZING WORK kiara
wow i loved it so much that
was way too much hot and
i liked it and the description of uday
even made me blush 😳😳
and now i know what you mean
by IT STARTED WITH "SEX ON TH BEACH"
lol my mind was swimming in gutter when i saw
you title of this super rocking FF
Love ya kiara baby 😉

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