*~*Forcefully Yours FF*~* PRECAP OF CHAP 9 PG 127

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@-The_Tomboy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Sarah di that was awesome can u pm me?

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@CharmingAngel7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Res😉😆
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Sara it was awesome loved it
cant wait to know whose behind all this... off to read chappy1 hehe ;)

PS: sorry for being so late :( gonna read all in one go in sha Allah ;)

Edited by CharmingAngel7 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

lovely the whole thing rocks the second kidnapper is uday right please update soon and thanks for the pm

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@-SilverAngel-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Nice prologue!... but many gandi gaalis... just tone down over there, everything else seems good!

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@-StarlitFire-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

sweety...prologue is just awesome...but i guess you should lessen the use of swear words...just a little tone down... otherwise i loved the concept will be waiting fo next chapter eagerly...

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@..oishu..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

continue soon sambha bhai!!! loved the prologue!! mereko pm karna naich bhulneka :D

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Niha

@-Niha-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

reserved! gonna write a lamba comment for my mummy ji 🤗 **Edited**

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c o n g r a t u l a t i o n sSarah :)

Finally you write your first ff 😆Loved the character sketch, nice conceptPrologue was awesome too.Lolz, I've got loads of questionsWhat? Where? When? etc etcBut I guess you'll awesome them in the coming chaptersInteresting prologue thoughI think the person who stops the kiss is Udayveerand the person who's trying to kiss her is Akash?But thats just my guessesGuess we'll find out soon.Update soon and please PM me :)

Edited by -Niha- - 12 years ago