*~*Forcefully Yours FF*~* PRECAP OF CHAP 9 PG 127

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Shivani

@Asmimelody

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Nice Character sketch Sara di:)pls update soon..PM me if you can:)

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: shana0127
DEK FF Writers ki duniya me aapka Swagat hai Dr. Sarah

thankuuu shana dekha ek khwaab ne mujhe doctor se writer bana dia:p

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Asmimelody

Nice Character sketch Sara di:)pls update soon..PM me if you can:)

thanks shivi sweetheart wil surly pm u:)

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Swinipriya

@Hawa.Hawai

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Mindblowing caracter skeatch yaar.mera demon hayeee.Awesome pliz cont soon n pm me if u can:)

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puggyy

@puggyy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

u told u would give a prologue by 7 pm...its not yet posted...

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Uday Lovie

@Udaylovie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

plzz plzz plzz pm me wen u update chapter one ... waitin fr ur pm /... :_

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

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Manyata: leave me you jerk i said leave me (shouting loudly and continuosly) just leave me...
Kidnapper1: stop shouting girl save your energy.(smirks) You dont know whats next going to happen with you[:">]
Manyata: Oye iam not scared of you nor your useless threats. HAAN NAHI TO😡
Kidnapper2: dont mess with him girl he will certainly carry out his threat to harm you...
Manyata: Iam not scared of him or any one of you got it.(extremly angry) so just let me go. Do you have any idea who i am do you fuking know whom you have kidnapped😡 You all loosers have invited ur death my bhai will kill all of you😡
Kidnapper 3: Just shut up you b**** stop shouting you are getting on my nerves now. You have already screwed my mind so now just the f*** up if u said another word i will surly do something reckless...😡
Kidnapper 2 to kidnapper 3: Hey dude just chill you go we both will take care of this jungli bili(smiling at manyata)😃
Manyata: Jungli bili hogi teri biwi. Teri maa ki saaley tujhe na mai nahi chorungi ek baar bus ek baar haath to khol kar dekh. Haath baandh kar apne aap ko mard samajhta hai kaminey kuttey ki puunch😡
Kidnapper 2: Wohao meri biwi? Well i would have loved to fulfill this wish of yours. I wud love to marry such a hot and beautiful young girl but i cant because you are already booked and yea i didnt knew a girl like you from such a reputative family can use such language iam impressed[:">]
Manyata: WHAT??? what the hell are you saying are you in ur senses?(asked shockingly)[:O)]
Kidnapper 1: Hahahaha soon you will know what he is talking about.
Kidnapper 2: Awww dont be so shocked jungli bili you look beautiful in your jungli bili style.😉
Manyata: listen lets make a deal you leave me i will give you thrice your boss has payed you to kidnap me just let me go from here i swear i will fulfil my promise and even will not file a complain against you all so lets make a deal.
Kidnapper1:(thinking) do you even know who has paid us to kidnap you and what he really wants from you?
Manyata: Ya freak if i knew who is he/she i would not have been sitting here and listening to your crap but i will surly kill him when il know who is he tell me who is it?
Kidnapper2: Woho you are indeed a jungli bili but i must say you are really beautifull and smart. Beauty with brains😉 he started caressing her face.
Manyata: shouts in anger dont touch me you moron let go of me you creep.😡
Kidnapper 2: coming closer and when he was close enough his eyes started roaming on her eyes , nose her fragile and milky skin and then on her lips.
Manyata was scared now she has never felt so helpless and scared. Her body started sweating her lips were shiverring with fear kidnapper smirked on seeing her condition he felt proud of himself for taming this jungli bili . He leaned more closer and started caressing manyata's cheeks which were red because of anger and fear then he carressed her luscious lip😳 with his index finger and then he came more closer manyata could feel his hot breath on her face he leaned more and was now just inches away from her lips. Manyata closed her eyes tightly with fear and waited to bear the pain. A single tear rolled down from her eyes and she was breathing heavily. He was about to kiss her red lips when A Loud voice came from behind.

DONT YOU DARE. . . . . . .😳😳😳

0k guys m d0ne n0w! I myself dont know what i have written lol😳 guys this was my very first attempt of writing please do ignore spelling/gramatical mistakes and do like and comment if it was worth reading thanks

love you all
SARAH😊

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Sonam

@-RK_Ki_Biwi-

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Manyata: Jungli bili hogi teri biwi. Teri maa ki saaley tujhe na mai nahi chorungi ek baar bus ek baar haath to khol kar dekh. Haath baandh kar apne aap ko mard samajhta hai kaminey kuttey ki puunch😡 🤣 🤣

YE THA MONIYA STYLE.🤣 🤣

SAMBHA BHAI PAKKA YE SECOND KIDNAPPER APNA UV HAI.😆 JUNGLI BILLI, WOHO ,BEAUTY WITH BRAINS, TUMHEIN APNI BIWI BANANA HAI.😆 YE SAB BOLNE KI DARING APUN KE YUVRAAJ UV☺️ MEIN HI HAI.😉

I hope I'm right. Dekho bina PM ke hi comment bhi kar diya.😊 Ab humari tareef bhi kar do.😆

Now after reading this prologue I'm dying to read the first chapter.😛

Do continue ASAP.😊

Great Job.👍🏼Billu bhai khush hua.😆

HUGS.🤗 🤗

Edited by sonam2801 - 13 years ago

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roze Chaudhry

@Roze12

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

oye sara puttar FF likh rha ha

great character sketch great concept👍🏼

wasay uday zada bada nhn ho gya ha 28 or manyata sab say choti

20😲chalo koi nai fit ha 😆

superb update sara puttar 👏i loved it 😉hmmm iss bar manyata nay kidnappers ko galiyan

di wasay har FF may uday ko hi parti han 😆 cont soon 😉thnxxx for the PM 🤗

wasay manyata ko save krnay uday aya ha kia 😕ya fir uday nay kidnaap krwaya ha or

manyata ka bhai bachnay aya ha 😕chalo next update may pata chal jaye ga 😆plzz ab jaldi

hi next update kr dena 🤗

Edited by killerashish - 13 years ago

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Mehwish

@CharmingAngel7

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

thankx wishy hahah yup bus dkh le pehle ff me hi damn ko le ayi vamp diaries se nikal ke:p thankx for such a motivating comment yup wil surly pm ya:)

My pleasure Sara... han han wo tho main dekh ri hoon😉... aakhir hm bhai logon ka underworld ka paisa kaam aa hee gya🤣 aata kaise ni wo usay apun bhai logon k haathon se pitna tha kya!! 😉😆 ur welcome lookin forward :)
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