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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pia.raha

its very sweet to see manyata and her family interaction!!!!! then ofcrse ourr udayy,whose teasingg and flrting lines always brings a smile on our face!!!! eco ke peeche sab padhe hai😉 i bet uday wanted to stdy smethng diff mayb,dats why he gt angry!!!! then wen duay came back and removed her hairband and tld her dat she looks pretty goodd in open hairr,dat wass soo rmntic!!!!!!!! and nt o frgt our manayata also gave uday a short complimnt!!!!!! pm me agn!!!!!!!



thanks u so much pia 🤗🤗
ya u r right even uday wanted to do some other course😊
will definitely pm you 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: navinahun

Lovely update,

Continue soon , Thanx 4 the PM.



thanks navina 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pmpm1

Great update! Waiting for the next one... I am suspecting UV will turn out to be M's best friend, right?

Thanks for the pm.



thanks 🤗 wat can i call u? (pm wud sound hilarious :P )
i was actually thinking of unnati.. not sure as of now.. might be uday or someother guy..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunshinegirll



thank u rana 🤗
ya i really dint want a insane manyata😆
wanted to write a story on how wud someone actually behave if this happened to them..😊
sure da😊

Whats your name dear?

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Posted: 13 years ago
FINALLY I get to read this. Pheww. You know I was getting really frustrated now for not having read it for so long. Lol. But that God I finally found time. And I am really sorry once again for being so damn late 😒

Hmm so this seems like an interesting story already. But before that please give me a moment to literally laugh my freaking ass off at AKASH BHAIYYA! 🤣 . Hahaha good job Sopu! 👍🏼
Coming to the rest of the SS, it's really nice. And I really like the Manyata in this SS. It was such a relief to see that she didn't take ages to accept her real identity and didn't go around attacking people with swords out of frustration 😆
And what to say about Uday, he is amazing as always . Loved all the scenes he had with Manyata. Especially the way he just pushes her inside the cars and drives off. Lol. Uday sharing stuff with Manyata, like why he studies what he studies was really sweet. Looks like they will become friends soon, unlike in the show where it took them eternity to make Uday and Manyata friends. Sigh.
Anyway once again great work Sopu, continue soon and welcome to the world of writing 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fia21

FINALLY I get to read this. Pheww. You know I was getting really frustrated now for not having read it for so long. Lol. But that God I finally found time. And I am really sorry once again for being so damn late 😒

Hmm so this seems like an interesting story already. But before that please give me a moment to literally laugh my freaking ass off at AKASH BHAIYYA! 🤣 . Hahaha good job Sopu! 👍🏼
Coming to the rest of the SS, it's really nice. And I really like the Manyata in this SS. It was such a relief to see that she didn't take ages to accept her real identity and didn't go around attacking people with swords out of frustration 😆
And what to say about Uday, he is amazing as always . Loved all the scenes he had with Manyata. Especially the way he just pushes her inside the cars and drives off. Lol. Uday sharing stuff with Manyata, like why he studies what he studies was really sweet. Looks like they will become friends soon, unlike in the show where it took them eternity to make Uday and Manyata friends. Sigh.
Anyway once again great work Sopu, continue soon and welcome to the world of writing 🤗



hey fia u neednt say sorry.. u were busy.. its quiet understandable😊
haha i wanted to vent out my frustration abt the char in the show.. this was d best way😆
ya i wanted to make it more realistic.. somehow i found it weird in the show where they were dragging it so much even after she hears from murari abt her kidnappng.. they show her as someone who loves her father but after knowing about her real family she doesnt accept them😕
hmm ya in my ff they will become friends soon😊
thanks fia🤗
will continue soon.. n u too :P

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Posted: 12 years ago
seems like I am watching DEK once again ...😊

..but then this mansi is better then moniya

do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago


u can call me sow😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Note: Uday isn't staying in his hotel like in the serial. They also have a palace in Mumbai.

Chapter 4 : Manyata's new found friendship

Dining hall

All the family members are seated in the table. Manyata arrives

Manyata: Good morning everyone

Everyone greet her back. She scans the table and to her annoyance the only vacant seat was next to uday's. Uday looked at her expressions and understood her problem. He got up from his seat and pulled the chair for manyata enjoying her irritated expressions.

Manyata sits in the chair and wispers so that only uday can hear: Itne bade mahal mein kursiyon ki kyon kami hai?

Uday: Kyon princess hamare paas mein betne so kuch kuch hota hai kya?

Manyata: Haan bahut kuch hota hai.. pareshani!

Uday smirks and continues having his toast

Manyata: By the way yest I was asking you whether you have a home of ur own. You told me I dint know anything about you but still dint address that question. I was wondering why. Looks like you don't have. You seem to be here all the time starting from breakfast.

Uday: Princess I thought u were a intelligent girl. I told you that I am the yuvraj of jaigarh. So I thought you must have got that even I will have a palace. He added "looks like you are really dumb." angering Manyata.

Manyata: halkat veda, tuje itney himmat kit u muje dumb bol raha hai. Huh

Uday: Princess apna bakwas band karo aur kana kao. Ek to late aayi aur upar se itna bak bak.

Before manyata could say anything she was distracted by jagat who just arrived

Jagat: Good morning everyone.

He took Ds's blessings

Ds: Kush rahiye beta. Nice to see you after a long time. So how was ur trip?

Jagat: Haan Ds, everything went on well. We got the contract signed. The project will be starting from December.

Ds: Congratulations beta. Hame yeh sunkar bahut kushi huyi.

Jagat: Thanks Ds.

Ds: Manyata beta, inse miliye puskar ki yuvraj Jagat Singh Ratore.

Jagat goes near manyata : Toh aap hai rajkumari Manyata. Jai ki badi behan. Am very happy to meet you.

Manyata: Thank Jagat singh. Nice to meet you. (they shake hands)

Jagat: You can call me jagat.

Manyata smiles

Jagat: Ds actually I want to take jay out with me today. So came to take your permission.

Ds teases him: So you wanted to meet jay and I was thinking all this while you came to meet me.

Jagat: aise nahi who actually Ds'

Ds: koi baat nahi beta. Hum toh aise hee bol rahe the. You can definitely take her.

Jagat: Thanks a lot Ds.

He goes to Jay: So princess get ready soon for our date.

Jay smiles: Ds toh ham Jagat ke saat jaa rahe hain

Ds: Haan beta enjoy your day

Jay: Thanks Ds. Maa, dada, jiji bye everyone.

Jay and Jagat are about to leave,

Manyata to Uday: Yeh sab kya hai. Jagat Ds jay ko date ke liye pooch raha hai. Aur ds ne uhne jaane de diya.

Uday: Princess, un dono ki roka ho gayi hai.

Manyata forgets everything due to her shock and shouts: Kya?? Jay hasn't even finished her schooling and she has got engaged already? At such a young age?

Everyone stares at her

Jay starts laughing: Jiji aap hamare baat kar rahe hain. You are saying I got engaged at a young age during school, then your case is worse jiji!!

Manyata: Hoye Jay tum meri choti behan hai iska matlab ye nahi ki kuch bhi bakwas karogi aur mein chup rahongi. I know very well. I was not engaged to anyone during my school days.

Jay: Baat toh teek hai you dint get engaged after going to school.

Manyata looks at her confused. Uday starts laughing and Manyata stares at him.

Ds: Bas keeji sab. This is a dining hall. Have some discipline while having food. Give respect to the food. Jay and jagat weren't you two leaving.

Jay and Jagat: Haan Ds. Bye.

Everyone has food silently after that.

Ds: Manyata beta, aaj aape teachers aapse milne ke liye aayenge. Kal se classes shuru hogi.

Manyata: Jee daadi saa.

Ds: Uday, aap jara study mein ayiye. Hame baat karni hai apse.

Uday follows Ds to the study

Ds: Aapko Manyata kaise lagi?

Uday: Ds ye kaise sawal hai.

Ds: Beta hamne aapka roka paanch saal ki umar mein kee thi. So I want to know if you are sure about this relationship. As you know manyata is completely unaware and if I talk to her about this now she will definitely not accept it. The last few days has really been harsh on her. Yes we are all happy that she has returned but she is trying to adjust in the new environment. So tell me uday aapko manyata kaise lagi

Uday: Ds I really don't know. I mean I like her, like the way she talks, behaves and even fights with me for every silly thing. She is too innocent. I don't know how she will react if she comes to know that we are engaged. Not just that if she knows that our engagement is mainly for the sake of the kingdoms and we don't have a choice but to get married for the sake of our kingdoms power in the mahasabha, she will be shattered.

Ds: Hame apni jawab mil gayi. Itne kam samay mein aap unke bare mein itna samaj gaye aur aap unki chintha bhi karne lage. Now am sure that she wont get a better husband than you. So uday, now it is your duty to make her love you and accept your relationship. Be with her and support her.

Uday: Ds, main apni taraf se poori koshish karoonga. I will definitely be with her always.

Meanwhile Manyata meets her teachers and they all give her a list of books to buy and be ready by tomorrow.

Uday: Kya hua princess. Why are you sitting here as if someone has drowned?

Manyata: Aa gaya fir se muje pareshan karne ke liye. Please uday leave today. Am already worried about how am going to manage to get all these books by today. Each moron has casually written about 5 or 6 books. And I don't even know where to get all these. You know na I am new here.

Uday starts laughing: Manyata they are your teachers. You haven't even had one class with them and they are already morons. Wonder what they will become when you have classes in full swing.

Manyata: Ya I know you just love making fun of me and laughing at me. Why did I bother telling you all these!

Uday: Oh god princess pata nahi hum tumhe kya kya sikaye. You are a princess. You can get everything arranged from the same place within an hour at the max. Wait I'll call the caretaker. Just give him the list he will make sure everything is available as soon as possible.

Manyata: Haan main toh bhool hi gayi ki main mahal main rehtee hoon.

Uday smiles and calls Kishore ji (caretaker) and instructs him to get the stuff manyata needs

Uday: Waise princess, so you are free today. You are always doubtful about whether I have a house na? Why not visit my palace?

Before Manyata could refuse Ds enters and says: Haan beta aapko uday ke mahal avashya jaana hai.

Manyata: Jee Ds.

Uday gives a winning smirk to manyata after Ds leaves.

Manyata: tum hamesha mujse wohi karvathe ho jo tum chahta hai

Uday: Princess, kya kare hamre kismet itna acha jo hai. Koi bhi muje inkar nahi karta hia

Manyata: Main to kar deti.

Uday: Pata hai princess isliye bagwan ji ne sahi wakth pe Ds ko bhej dia. So shall we go now?

Manyata: Do I have a choice? So ya lets go and get done with this soon

Uday (thinks) you are coming to my home, your future will be there. You think I'll let you escape so easily. Anyway I should inform choti about Manyata's visit

Uday calls Unnati and tells her.

They reach Jaigarh palace. Unnati comes rushing towards the entrance with the arti taali. Manyata is surprised.

Manyata: Uday, yeh sab kisliye.

Uday smiles at her while unnati replies: Rajkumari Manyata hamre mahal mein pehle baar aa rahi hai na isliye. Andhar aayiye.

Manyata enters and says: Thanks. Aap'

Uday: Manyata, yeh meri choti behan unnati hai.

Before manyata could say anything, unnati hands over the taali to a servant and hugs Manyata. Manyata is taken aback but slowly hugs her back.

Manyata: Tum sach mein uday ki behan ho?

Unnati stares at her.

Manyata: I mean I'm sorry you are so sweet but look at your brother.

Both Uday and Unnati laugh.

Unnati: Manyata, tum duniya ki pehli ladki ho jo dada ko chodkar hame pasandh karti ho. Nahi to dada ke saare girlfriends (she stops after noticing uday's stare)

Manyata: Saare girlfriends?? Pata nahi ladkiyan ise kaise chelte hai.

Unnati: Excuse me ? chelte toh dada hain un saare ladkiyon ko, woh sab marte hain hamare dada par! (she says proudly). Manyata forget this you have come to our palace so tell me what do you want to have first? Lunch will be ready in some time.

Manyata: Thanks unnati. I'll have some water

Unnati: Water? Manyata seriously? You have come from your place to have water here?

Uday laughs and Manyata glares at him

Unnati: Teke chodo I'll get you some juice.

She asks one of the servants to get juice and makes manyata sit with her.

Unnati: So manyata, kaise lagi aapko apni ghar? I know it's a bit weird asking about your own home. You have just settled na, that's why am asking. I actually wanted to come there to meet you but I had an exam yesterday. Thought of coming today but dada has brought you here.

And they go on chatting leaving a bored uday who decides to get done with some work. Even though he was bored he felt happy to see Manyata get along very well with unnati unlike his usual snobbish bimbo type girlfriends.

Soon its lunch time and Unnati takes Manyata to the table and calls Uday too.

Manyata: Aapke gar mein aur koi nahi hai?

Unnati: Manyata first of all aap nahi tum. And ya no one else is at home now. Dad has gone on a business trip to London. So its only me and Dada here.

Manyata: What about your mom?

Unnati: My mom is no more. She left us when I was a year old. Dad is always busy in the business so for me dada is everything. I know even he misses mom. But he never shows it to anyone.

Manyata: I'm sorry I dint know. I shouldn't have asked

Unnati: Don't say sorry Manyata. You can ask me anything after all you are my friend now aren't you?

Manyata: Friends nahi, best friend. Haan nahi toh.

Both hi5 each other while uday enters.

Uday: So Manyata you seem to be enjoying at my place. So coming here wasn't a bad idea right.

Manyata: Woh toh hai. You have a very sweet sister. Thank goodness she is not like you at all. Varna pata nahi mera kya hota.

Uday grins : teeke abhi apna bak bak bandh karo aur kaana kaalo. Looks like unnati has arranged for a feast. I just asked her to make it simple.

Manyata: I know. See even now you are proving my point. Unnati is the best.

After having lunch manyata and unnati again start chatting and uday gets kind of irritated by now. Unnati notices this and decides to take leave and allow uday to spend time with Manyata.

Unnati: Manyata hume kal exam ke liye padna hai, tho hum kamre me chalte hain.

Manyata: Oh ter tumhe exam hai aur main tumare time barbad karne ke liye yahan aa gayi. Sorry unnati. I think I have to leave now

Unnati: Aise nahi hai Manyata tum yahan reh sakthi ho, dada tho hai na tumse baat karne ke liye.

Uday: Haan choti tum jaake pado. I'll show our palace to Manyata. Chale princess?

Manyata: Haan udayveer.

He takes her first to his room.

Uday: Yeh hamara kamra hai. Kaise lagi tumhe?

Manyata: Itna bada hai. I mean this isn't like a room. It is and entire house. Dheko tho, there are 3 or 4 rooms within ur room. My room is too tiny compared to yours.

Saying this she makes a face like a sad kid.

Uday: Aww princess aise mukh kyon bana rahi hai. Shadhi ke baad yeh karma aapka bhi ban jayega.

Manyata: Halkat veda, line marne ka chance kabhi nahi chodta

Uday: Muje line marne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai princess. Woh bhi jispe hamara hak hai.

Manyata: Kasmanu kana, tarak ka peepa pata nahi jab dekho tho kuch na kuch bakwaas karta rehta hai. Vaise tho manna padega tumara karma bahut acha hai

Uday grins and says: Kamra bhi aur hum bhi, princess. And princess where do you manage to find these unique set of swear words? Do you make them up specially for me?

Manyata: Tu na kabhi nahi sudhar saktha.

Uday: sudharna kaun chahta hai princess. Saying this he takes her to other rooms and finally to the garden

Manyata after looking at the large garden and the swings gets too exited and runs and sits on the swing and starts swinging back and forth.

Uday starts admiring her (and thinks) bilkul bachi jaisee behave karti hai. Pata nahi in sab politics ke beech mein kaise rahegi..

Soon it becomes evening and uday takes her back to the mahal

In Uday's car

Manyata: Thanks uday. Hame bahut acha laga tumare mahal mein aur unnati se milna

Uday: Princess, samaj lijiye ki woh bhi aap hee ka ghar hai. You can come there whenever you want to.

Manyata smiles in response

Uday: and even unnati will be delighted I suppose. Must say haan you two get along very well.

Manyata: You are saying this as if you are jealous

Uday: Really manyata, trust me I needn't be jealous of anyone.

(saying this he thinks) Manyata I'm ur fiance. So you are mine. I am actually happy that you get along with unnati well after all its your family too.

Manyata giggles saying: I can smell something burning.

Uday smirks at her and gets out and opens the door for her as they have reached the mahal.

Uday: So princess bye. I have some work, so I'll be going back.

Manyata gets kind of upset but tries to hide it

Uday: Kya hua princess? bura lag raha hai ki hum nahi rukh rahe hai?

Manyata: Pagal ho gaya kya. Nahi bahut kush hoon. Aaj ka shyam mere dimag khane waala koi nahi hai.

Uday grins at her, waves bye and leaves.

~~~~~~ End of Chapter 4 ~~~~~

Chapter 5 : Back to the college -- Coming soon 😊

Please leave your comments and suggestions.

Edited by Sunshinegirll - 12 years ago
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RESERVED. Me first. yuhoo...🤣
Edited.
👏 👏 👏 Fantastic update Sow, beautiful n very well written.😉
Full on MANVEER, I liked it.😛
I liked specially dining table n Car Scene of Manyata- UV.☺️My fav. scenes of the update.😊 ☺️
Jus loved Manyata's dialogues n swears.😆
So full update was amazing n damn superb.👍🏼
Now I'm waiting for the next Part, Please update it ASAP.😆
Great Job.👍🏼
Thanks for the awesome chapter.😊
HUGS.🤗 🤗
Edited by Vasishtha - 12 years ago

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