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panchaali thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: andy.a

hi payal๐Ÿ˜ƒ

finally an update of my favorite ff ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
really loved the part very much. i read the part first thing in the morning๐Ÿ˜ณ
i really love the mythological aspect of this ff๐Ÿ˜ณ
a lot of mystery still remains in the update...
who is the person who the viraha kanya was communicating with?
and manyta's uncle knows quite a lot about the history than any other
manyta's reaction on hearing uday's name is๐Ÿ˜• confusing
maybe it could be because i havent read the story well, or missed some important clue
any way great update
and dont you dare stop this ss, its so interesting
thanks for the pm๐Ÿ˜ณ
continue soon๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Thank you Andy for constantly inspiring me to write this FF ๐Ÿ˜Š

Glad that you liked this ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

All mystery will be unfolded at the end ๐Ÿ˜‰

Manyata's uncle is a great academician he knows many things..can't disclose how many ๐Ÿ˜‰

Manyata is in love with Udayan (whom her family considers an enemy) and feelings are growing complex towards the last Yuvraj of Jaigarh (whom her kingdom calls an enemy for generations)..She doesn't know both are same person and that's why her reactions are getting complex.

No you didn't miss any point..that is first time Manyata reacted like this hearing about Udayveer..but why she did so it'll be more clear in later chapters ๐Ÿ˜Š

The person who communicating with the Vairabhi Kanya is the main Villain..and he'll be under the veil for now ๐Ÿ˜‰
Edited by panchaali - 12 years ago
andy.a thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
@payal.
I always love to read this story.
Something makes me feel manyata's uncle is nt as good as he seems.
U r really adding a lot of suspence and am scratching my head thinking about it.
Looking forward to meet the real villian. Is the villian a "he" or a "she"? Cant wait to knw mre!
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Posted: 12 years ago
mystery...reveal d person soon.dnt discont d story.always complete it.its like wounding d heart of dreaders who follow ur ffs
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Posted: 12 years ago
a very good update
it was very informative and provided a lot
of insight about the vairabhi tribe ...
The calm before the storm !!
Poor Dev ...

cont soon
thnks for PM๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
i love this update ... akash n uday bonding awesome๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒbut their is no manveer screan ...!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
het!
awesome update dear
u have described vairabhis beautifully
i just love to read ur ff
please do continue soon
& i'm requesting u please don't stop updating it
i love to read ur ff
& thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey my dear payel... it was sooo great and intresting...๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

my eyes was glued to screen while reading...hahahaha u always maintain a heaviness in your updates... well love the bonding between udayan and akash...akash is such a great friend...๐Ÿ˜Š i wish udayan will be fine sooon. I really wanna see dev face when he came to know that udayan is fine. ๐Ÿ˜†

i really wanna meet villian...๐Ÿคข is he enemy of devgarh or jaigarh or he enemy of both plz disclose it so0o0on. when the professor was searching the book of udayveer singh, at that time manyata didnt pay any attension towards it why...๐Ÿ˜ญ well your story did contain lil bits confusions for me...hehehehehehe ๐Ÿ˜† but the chapter was hell awsum...and you wrote it perfectly...keep it up. i enjoyed reading it, coz u updated after a long time. ๐Ÿ˜Š

and yeah plz dont think to discontinue it,...i really am addicted to it plz plz plz...i am your loyal reader yar. i love this story to the core of my heart... plz plz dont stop writing...plz ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ.

do continue soon when u got time and thanks for the p.m...love you...hugs ๐Ÿค—


Edited by mimi.maik - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice peyal very nice update you define vairabhis and dont discontiue it thanks for p.m tons of love keep it up ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update loving it thanks for the pm loved how manyatha is getting affected by the story and how she is not understanding what why
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Posted: 12 years ago
hellooo diii
howz you
sorry i know me so late
but noo after marriedd
but read ur all updates always
amazing story amazong chapter
loved it muwah awsum
update sooon and pm me
wenever i get time i read alll stories

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