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Nice update di
vairabhi is a nature power
uday n akash prt ws cute
manyata uday ke bare mai sunna nahi chahti magar sochna janti hai
manyata ne isbar devgad mai janm liya
so interasting story di
poor dev when akash unmask him and also im dying to read his reaction upon hearing that udayan survived his attack
love u
thanks 4 pm n update soon

Originally posted by: anushruthi

a very good update

it was very informative and provided a lot

of insight about the vairabhi tribe ...

The calm before the storm !!

Poor Dev ...

cont soon

thnks for PM😊

Originally posted by: -Kritika-

i love this update ... akash n uday bonding awesome😃😃😃but their is no manveer screan ...!!!!

I hav 2 say that manyata's monologue is loveky

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

I hav 2 say that manyata's monologue is loveky

Originally posted by: ...navina...

RES😊.

Edited:

Wow - what an update!

AMAZING!!!!

Firstly - the part I enjoyed the most was the natter between Akash and Udayan. Loved your play of words with DDLJ and DirtyPicture ... AWESOME!

Thank you for mentioning that part..that is my most fav part from this update..but only you are among those few have mentioned it 😃

The history of the Vairabhi's ( please excuse the spelling, if it's wrong) was most interesting. So they were behind the killing of the rogue-photographer😲!

Yaap

I'm really eager to read Akash's article now , when he unmasks Devendra Singh. And I'm dying to read his reaction upon hearing that Udayan survived his attack😉!

It's coming soon at the very next part 😉

Please do continue soon,

thanks 4 the PM😊.

PS - I don't think that there's anyone out there that wants u to end this SS ... we love it very much😳.

Originally posted by: mimi.maik

hey my dear payel... it was sooo great and intresting...👏 👏 👏

my eyes was glued to screen while reading...hahahaha u always maintain a heaviness in your updates... well love the bonding between udayan and akash...akash is such a great friend...😊 i wish udayan will be fine sooon. I really wanna see dev face when he came to know that udayan is fine. 😆

i really wanna meet villian...🤢 is he enemy of devgarh or jaigarh or he enemy of both plz disclose it so0o0on. when the professor was searching the book of udayveer singh, at that time manyata didnt pay any attension towards it why...😭 well your story did contain lil bits confusions for me...hehehehehehe 😆 but the chapter was hell awsum...and you wrote it perfectly...keep it up. i enjoyed reading it, coz u updated after a long time. 😊

and yeah plz dont think to discontinue it,...i really am addicted to it plz plz plz...i am your loyal reader yar. i love this story to the core of my heart... plz plz dont stop writing...plz 😭 😭 😭.

do continue soon when u got time and thanks for the p.m...love you...hugs 🤗

Originally posted by: pari_pooja

het!
awesome update dear
u have described vairabhis beautifully
i just love to read ur ff
please do continue soon
& i'm requesting u please don't stop updating it
i love to read ur ff
& thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: panchaali

Thank z Mimi for this looong lovely comment 😃

And I never wanna discontinue it..but sometimes less number of likes and comments for my hard work makes me think so 😭

By the way I have edited the part why Manyata was angry with the ancient Yuvraj Udayveer...If you get time you can read it dear.. I think it'll help to clear your confusion 😊

Sorry, I forgot to mention that part in my update before, but I always had that part in my mind..I didn't know it is missing from my update..😕

But when most of the readers told me that they are confused about Manyata's reactions towards Udayveer then only I rechecked and noticed that I missed writing that part 😔

Thank you all for correcting me..that is the main reason I write stories here, you people always try to improve my writing skill 😊