FF:fantasies of the world tocome!! chap11.2 pg 87 - Page 16

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

wonderful work haz i loved it beautifully written the precap looks hot please update soon and thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: fireroad99

hey why don't u write the guard of manveer anymore

plz also get time to write that

Haz it was totally awesome.. comment is chappy wise commented as i kept on reading chaps.. really loved chappy1 manyata thinking of uday n self talking with her.. best thing u made her forget the part of what J said & remembered only what uday said oh i jst loved that as in show itself it was other way round would hve loved so mch if it would had been this way seriously haz u should had taken over writing that in the show too... ok me going out of the context of update back to update.. really liked manyata comparing akash n uday n realizing uday has been always with her n done so mch for her (kahin tho manyata ko aqal aai😉😆) loved the fb... when uday came in i was like now manveer part may b she'll say to him bt OMG it was Komal lolz good one haz👍🏼😆.. n manyata said main tmare baarey main hee soch ri thi n carresing her cheeks lol🤣🤣.. komal tried to make her understand so nicely really liked what she said to her especially this at the end of her talk "sacha pyaar who hota hae jo tmhe azadi tmhare peche khara rhe hr musibat me tum kamzoor paro to tmhe himat de".. when she saw the bouqet on the table i thought that she'll think its from uday n when she'll go there there would b akaash bt it went the other way around n she thought its from akaash.. i think she is thinkin its akash bt when she'll go there it would be uday.. it was really fab nicely written love how its going...
Chappy2 manyata in a delima i really liked when she said "that halkat veda its like my whole head is stockpile of his thaughts".. really like that manyata is thinking of teaching J a lesson thatz superb👍🏼... lolz manyata jealous😆 her dialogues n thoughts were too good Manyata thinking: Ohhh poor me like this halkat has caught guard of my brain😉😆 i loved manyatas cursing programme hilarious.. vijay teasing her " ae nadan parinday ghar aja" or if u don't yuvrani manyata will fry u up and have u as her lunch🤣.. oh hes too good.. Ooo its Uday Yay i knew it would b him gr8.. oh u stopped at sch a point now cant wait for nxt chappy.. thnx for awesome updates & pms🤗.. I m really loving it its really fab cant wait to read the nxt manveerlicious update.. sorry for sch a late comment it has become so long too😲 hope i didnt bore u😆
Take care
PS: jst saw chappy3 yay off to read it