FF:fantasies of the world tocome!! chap11.2 pg 87

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prologue


The story is after the corronation ceremony with same events j tried to kill manyata but then uday saved her and guided to the throne

After the greeting ceremony finally ended she went too bed all tired up thanx to her sister whom she never thaught would stoop so low just for a throne even after she had a proper chance and she lost that was true that udayveer was on my side helping me saving me from all her dirty tricks but though how could she try to kill me I know she was bitch but even a bitch cant do that to her own sister we share same blood

Ohh what am I talking about she never accepted me as her sister and if we share same blood I think I should kill myself on first place in her thaughts she fall asleep her expression all night was one to watch for, though she is now the yuvrani of devgrah she is no better than a 5 year kid dreaming and then frowning or sometimes smile with joy what was going in her mind she stood up abruptly from her sleep as she remembered the past events in all that j fuss she just forgot about udayveer though she remembered him in all the mess but then she missed on his talks she kept on frowning as she remembered that hard voice with such at ease that could melt anybody's heart was he crying or what ahhh (she tried to remmeber)

flashback

Princess please wake up plz u can't leave me

U can't leave your halkat veda

U can't I wont let anything happen to you

flashback ended

She was trying to gather up her memory but no use she can't remember them all she was still bashing her mind hard thinking what he said to her and how good was he a friend was he only a friend in her life she is mostly dependent on him he is her only ray of bright light in the darkness can he do all this for just a friend like her who always asked him for his help but he never gave anything in return

Yaa he truly loves me with a smile on her face

What???

Ya he loves me that what he just said

Flash back

"Princess wake up u cant leave me coz I love u god damit !!!

I love u I will not let anything happen to you

plz wake up princess plz i cant live without you u couldn't leave me alone"

Flashback ended

He just loves me how ?

Why?



Do tell me do u wanna read more?

Should I continue or not?

Choice is yours


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p.s :hyperlinks will be added kindly click on the links


prologue

chap1

chap2

chap3

chap4

note

chap 5

chap6 promo

chap6

chap7 part1 -------- part 2

chap8 part1 -------- part2

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fireroad99 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I WANT MOREEE
I JUST LOVE IT
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awsum prolouge😃 ...plz do cont soon and add me in ur pm list
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MORE! This looks Like a really good idea!
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Hey Haz🤗
prologue is awesome really loved it so answer to ur should I continue or not is YES PLZ... Oh I really didnt liked the way the cvs presented the nxt part to the coronation cermony in the show... It should had been jst as u've written jst the way it should had been welldone👍🏼... gr8 that u started from that point... I really want manyata to punish J for what she did instead of being stupid n being after uday... flashback was good i was really like plz plz remember all especially that I luv u part n i thought may b u'll bring partial memory back n leave i luv u part for later bt u did it all🤗 she remembered all so cool... she realizes he has always been there for her & he loves her cant wait to read more... really wanna read other ff of urs as well will read it up soon.. pm me when u update this one lookin forward😃...
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awesome..plz continue soon..and pm plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey u started another ff omgg i loved the prologue
i want some ff to begin from here coz that was truly the point where we started to lost dek cvs went all wrong huh
plz cont soon and add me to ur pm list plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was an awesome prologue 👍🏼
plz cont soon and add me to your pm list ...
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Sure plzz continue! It looks good.
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Its great. Pls do continue. We all wanted the show to go this way but cvs ruined it. Would love to read your FF. pls cont soon

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