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Originally posted by: CharmingAngel7
Haz it was totally awesome.. comment is chappy wise commented as i kept on reading chaps.. really loved chappy1 manyata thinking of uday n self talking with her.. best thing u made her forget the part of what J said & remembered only what uday said oh i jst loved that as in show itself it was other way round would hve loved so mch if it would had been this way seriously haz u should had taken over writing that in the show too... ok me going out of the context of update back to update.. really liked manyata comparing akash n uday n realizing uday has been always with her n done so mch for her (kahin tho manyata ko aqal aaišš)
loved the fb... when uday came in i was like now manveer part may b she'll say to him bt OMG it was Komal lolz good one hazšš¼š.. n manyata said main tmare baarey main hee soch ri thi n carresing her cheeks lolš¤£š¤£.. komal tried to make her understand so nicely really liked what she said to her especially this at the end of her talk "sacha pyaar who hota hae jo tmhe azadi tmhare peche khara rhe hr musibat me tum kamzoor paro to tmhe himat de".. when she saw the bouqet on the table i thought that she'll think its from uday n when she'll go there there would b akaash bt it went the other way around n she thought its from akaash.. i think she is thinkin its akash bt when she'll go there it would be uday.. it was really fab nicely written love how its going...
Chappy2 manyata in a delima i really liked when she said "that halkat veda its like my whole head is stockpile of his thaughts".. really like that manyata is thinking of teaching J a lesson thatz superbšš¼... lolz manyata jealousš her dialogues n thoughts were too good Manyata thinking: Ohhh poor me like this halkat has caught guard of my brainšš i loved manyatas cursing programme hilarious.. vijay teasing her " ae nadan parinday ghar aja" or if u don't yuvrani manyata will fry u up and have u as her lunchš¤£.. oh hes too good.. Ooo its Uday Yay i knew it would b him gr8.. oh u stopped at sch a point now cant wait for nxt chappy.. thnx for awesome updates & pmsš¤.. I m really loving it its really fab cant wait to read the nxt manveerlicious update.. sorry for sch a late comment it has become so long tooš² hope i didnt bore uš
Take care
PS: jst saw chappy3 yay off to read it
thanx wish glad u liked it :-)
and ya that komal part even i was laughing thinking waht am i writingš
and yaa have to make the mother daughter talk a serious one :)
first of all i am not intrested in akash at all š¤¢ he will arrive but later not soo early š
thanx for ur loved dovey comment really loved it š
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