MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) - Page 71

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: puggyy

👏 👏


I would love to see her new role
Am so excited for ur next update and manveer 😊

Forgot to say something ...
... for the next update -
you better make sure the fan / air-conditioning is working Blushing!!!
( hope u are still excited about the next part and hope I didn't scare u too much ) 😆😉.
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Forgot to say something ...
... for the next update -
you better make sure the fan / air-conditioning is working ☺️!!!
( hope u are still excited about the next part and hope I didn't scare u too much ) 😆😉.


I don't get u navi ??? Any suspense ...don't harm anyone ...I'll need ac only wen it is full of suspense ...hint plsss
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: puggyy


I don't get u navi ??? Any suspense ...don't harm anyone ...I'll need ac only wen it is full of suspense ...hint plsss

U will need the air-con because ... update is going to be NAUGHTY AND HOT!!!! BlushingBlushingBlushing
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

navi i forgot which page i had reserved

so can i comment here
or can u please tell me which page it was

Saira ... u can comment where-ever u want.
U can do it here,
... or on page 86 ( where u reserved ).
I don't mind😊😉.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

Hey navi 😊 sorry for the super late comment but here hurricane sandy has really tossed our lives just got my power back , and just now read ur update . And need I say how much of a good writer u r ! As usual I loved the update 👏

Now navi I feel from the shoot out episode u have taken this ff in a whole new level. We all by know know that manveer were destined to be 2gether and they love each other more than anything in this world. UV is a prefect character , now with this new climax I see u giving a whole new definition to Manyata . I can see the hidden tigress coming out . Now navi I want u to take this asshole Aryan to a whole new level of evilry. I mean he dared to hurt our prince I mean I want u to define Aryan and his disgusting nature so that we as viewers can hate him even more plus with every passing second even Manyata can know how wrong she was in falling for this paskash 😡 I mean I know in the previous chapter u hav made M regret her coldness and hatred towards UV, but now I want her to be even more great full for having UV in her life, I want M to fall for UV even more now .

Thanks for the PM navi and update soon 😃

Hi Chitra⭐️ ... U really don't have to apologise Dear, obviously - I understand what a chaos Hurricane Sandy has caused in America . I'm glad u are well and fortunately ( for me) u got your power back in time😉. Thank u for the compliment 🤗 .
Absolutely right Clap ... I have changed the course of my SS and I am strengthening Manyata's character now ; in preparation for the future. U know Chitra, at the start of this SS - I had planned for Aryan to do numerous dispicable deeds ... but most of my readers have begged me to end off his part immediately. I am quite confused at this stage😕 as to how I should proceed. But I do have 1 question for U : IS IT POSSIBLE FOR U TO HATE ARYAN ANY MORE THAN U ALREADY DO???
Manyata WILL fall MORE in love with Uday ... but that will be IN MY 2ND BOOK!!!
.... for such an awesome comment !!!
& 4 being such an interested reader !!!
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Navina..kab update karogi baby?..plz do soon..m getting impatient😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

finally updated on page 86

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

sorry sorry navi for the late comment

i forgot the page in reserved in
k now coming back to the update it was wonderful
i loved the fact that u did not show alot of hospital scene
i loved uday as usual and his flirtings even though he is sick
i loved JHANSI KI RANI OUR DEAREST MANYATA i always wanted to see her strong like this
i loved manyata and her dailogues
please please update soon
thanks so much for the pm
and when will manyata give uday sponge bath😉
please please update soon

Saira ... comment was not late - IT WAS VERY LATE😆.
Even I got bored writing about the hospital scenes , that's why I DISCHARGED HIM QUICKLY!!!😉. Uday will never stop flirting😳 ... that's what defines him .
Manyata is gonna be on par with Uday from now onwards , in terms of wit and strength.
Unfortunately ... next update will take a while 😔 ... it's giving me a lot of trouble 😡.
Welcome for the PM😊 . Manyata TRYING to give Uday a sponge-bath ... WILL BE IN THE NEXT CHAPTER .
🤗 🤗 .
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Posted: 12 years ago
whn r u going to update next chapter dear...????
plz update soon...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Navina..kab update karogi baby?..plz do soon..m getting impatient😭

Originally posted by: coolsaloni.nira

whn r u going to update next chapter dear...????

plz update soon...😃

Very sorry about the delay. I'm having a bit of diffficulty writing a certain scene in the next chapter ... but as soon as it's done - I WILL POST IT!
Next update will probably be on :
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
navina update soon.. cant wait to read more😊

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