MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) - Page 14

It was awesome.I think after wedding Manyatas name would be Yuvrani Manyata Devi like in the serial DS name was Mrinalini Devi & Manyatas moms name was Komal Devi.After marriage the surname of the females changes from Kumari to Devi & they have mentioned it in the serial too.nice update.:-)

nice update...awesome...when will u update next part? can u pls update soon...waiting eagerly...

Originally posted by: SACHIKO123

It was awesome.I think after wedding Manyatas name would be Yuvrani Manyata Devi like in the serial DS name was Mrinalini Devi & Manyatas moms name was Komal Devi.After marriage the surname of the females changes from Kumari to Devi & they have mentioned it in the serial too.nice update.:-)

Originally posted by: lilybabes

beautifully written Navina

loved it

poor Manyata i feel so sorry for her

Unnati is back in picture

yaay i always thought tat dey vud hav a lovely Bhabhi -Nanad relationship

i hope Manyata finds de perfect gift for our perfect UV

Divorce... NO ye anarth nahi hona chahiye ... kabhi nahi

and OMG de last line almost killed me

.Uday - I want to sleep with you!

eager to read abt UV s reaction

patha nahi bedroom me kya hoga

mayb M wil wish him as de clock strikes 12

thanks for de PM and will b waiting for de next update

i just read your all chapters and i just love them they are awesome, fantabulous and vry romantic...
actually i m a silent reader but after reading ur ff i couldn't control myself by expressing my view...
i m a die hard fan of maanveer... just luv ur ff...
pls pls pls cont soon...
waiting eagerly 4 ur next chapter...

wow that was an awesome update...the way manyatha asked uday if she can sleep wit him was cute n funny...donno how uday reacts... waiting for ur update...when will u update ? pls ckear off there misunderstandings...from now no more misunderstandings ir tensions about thie relationship ...pls ...waitinggg for ur updateee

Originally posted by: navinahun

THANK U SO ,SO MUCH FIA...I really do appreciate it. U know, apart from Manveer...my favourite character was Unnati...SO; I had to dedicate a full chapter to her. Please don't feel bad for Uday or Manyata...once they reconcile- they'll be making up for lost time😉😉😉.

The next part is the Consummation chappy ...it requires a lot of thought, so it will only be available next weekend. So; "pretty please" EVEN WITH A CHERRY ON THE TOP...is not gonna work!!!

Mine too. Unnati's character was like a breath of fresh air. I always loved her scenes, especially her bonding with Uday. It was so pure and genuine!
Oh man but I am going to be busy on the weekend, I won't even be able to update my own SS
Sigh I guess I'll just have to wait then 😳

Originally posted by: fia21

Mine too. Unnati's character was like a breath of fresh air. I always loved her scenes, especially her bonding with Uday. It was so pure and genuine!
Oh man but I am going to be busy on the weekend, I won't even be able to update my own SS
Sigh I guess I'll just have to wait then 😳

Originally posted by: princessvishaka

awsum update navina 😃

feeling bad 4 manayta...bt happy about rebonding of manayta and unnati and lve the last line of chappy

plz update asap and thankx 4 pm

Originally posted by: navinahun

Oh no Fia...U won't be updating😭😭😭...I'm So SAD!

I do understand u Will be busy...BUT, please take time out to read my update.

I will be looking forward to your review of it !

Hopefully it will be UP TO THE MARK!!!

Yea I won't be
I will definitely take time out to read your update as I'll be keeping my cell phone with me during the function 😉 . I just won't be able to post my comment right away though. And I am sure it will be fantastic. Eeep I am so curious to read it 😳