MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) - Page 12

Originally posted by: fia21

FANTASTIC chapter Navina 👏
I cannot even begin to tell you how much I loved it. This was honestly so refreshing and cute. Unnati-Manyata bonding over Uday's surprise party and Manyata's confession was adorable. I just love Unnati. You reminded me a lot about how she used to be in the show. And the misunderstanding between Uday and Manyata was very well handled. A part of me felt bad for Uday, and the other part of me felt bad for Manyata. The last part was really interesting. Especially when Manyata says Uday - I want to sleep with you! She might want to rephrase that 😆
Loved the update to bits. Update the next part soon. Pretty please! 😳

Originally posted by: mahi0809

Loved it, loved it, loved it, loved it, loved it... and loved it some more. Plzz make the next update soon... this was just fantastic!

Originally posted by: pia.raha

i am feeling so hurt seeing m hrtbrken like dis!!!!!!!!! luved dat siblingwala dilaog!!!!!!!! nnati helping m out,soo sweeett!!!!!!!! udayy finally backk!!!!!!!! the last wa sbang on!!!!!! will be waitngg for the weekend!!!!!!!!!! 😊

Originally posted by: swetsurati

Very niceee...awsomeee...brilliant...unnati and manyata scene was sooo...good...awww...poor manyata...reallly feel sooo...bad for her bichari kya soch rahi thi aur kya ho gayauday ko surprice party dnen wali thi lekin ushe hi divorse mil raha hai...last scene was intresting. Upadate soon thanx for PM.

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

sorry sorry for the late reply i was not home

K now coming back to the chapter it was lovely i loved unnati she rocked as usual and manyata heart broken was so bad but she is smart and i know she would work her way i loved the line Uday - I want to sleep with you! that was cool and i loved the precap name please update soon and a super hot chapter just the way i would like u know my style right😉😉 please update soon and thanks for the pm the writing rocked👍🏼

Originally posted by: navinahun

No SAIRA ...Dont apologise...you are not late.

Glad u enjoyed the chapter...

The last line was just for u...Happy that u liked it!

I will try to make next part HOT...only 1 problem:

I GOT SOME VERY YOUNG READERS...

I DONT WANT TO CORRUPT THEM!!!

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

they will get corrupt sooner or later😆 and in this forum everyone is above 14 so u should write as hot as u can and i guarantee everyone will love it😉 and please update soon

Originally posted by: navinahun

Okay I'll try...but, what if I get kicked out of the forum???

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

come on u would not be kicked have u read my FF if i am not kicked then u would not be also and r u planning to write a hot scenes more advanced then mine😉 (i wish the answer is yes😆)