MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1)

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vishaka

@Mariam12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

awsum update navina 😃

feeling bad 4 manayta...bt happy about rebonding of manayta and unnati and lve the last line of chappy

plz update asap and thankx 4 pm

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757315

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: navinahun

Okay... here's what I'm gonna do...

I'll make it HOT but I'll keep it clean.

Then in my 24september update...I'll make it X-rated just for you!!! TEEK HAI?

hot but clean that is a tough thing to do😆 on 24 september is my birthday so i will take the update a birthday gift😆

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afreshbegin

@afreshbegin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Wonderful update dear...😊

Tumhare last dialogue ne hamari raaton ki neend churaliya...😉

Uday - I want to sleep with you!

Is dialogue ko sunne keliye kaan tharas gaye the..

ab tho next weekend thak hamara haal aisa hoga..

Edited by afreshbegin - 13 years ago

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anushruthi

@anushruthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

beautifully written Navina

loved it

poor Manyata i feel so sorry for her

Unnati is back in picture

yaay i always thought tat dey vud hav a lovely Bhabhi -Nanad relationship

i hope Manyata finds de perfect gift for our perfect UV

Divorce... NO ye anarth nahi hona chahiye ... kabhi nahi

and OMG de last line almost killed me

.Uday - I want to sleep with you!

eager to read abt UV s reaction

patha nahi bedroom me kya hoga

mayb M wil wish him as de clock strikes 12

thanks for de PM and will b waiting for de next update

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

wow such an fantastic update yar...plz update next soon...

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: afreshbegin
Wonderful update dear...😊

Tumhare last dialogue ne hamari raaton ki neend churaliya...😉

Uday - I want to sleep with you!

Is dialogue ko sunne keliye kaan tharas gaye the..

ab tho next weekend thak hamara haal aisa hoga..

Thank you!

Dear- not only u ; UDAY also has lost his sleep after that line!!!

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Rohitha

@...Rohitha...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

loved it 😊😊 and can u plz add me 2 ur pm list...

Edited by piya77 - 13 years ago

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 13 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: piya77
loved it 😊😊 and can u plz add me 2 ur pm list...

If u loved it...then, I'm happy! THANK U.

for PM's; u have to Buddy request me...I'll happily join u in!

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ilvuday

@ilvuday

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Posted: 13 years ago

#129

woww it was amazing..i just loved it...a beautiful upd8 pls cont soon👏

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Singularity

@Singularity

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Posted: 13 years ago

#130

First of all, you are happily forgiven 4 giving us such an AWESOME chapter!!👏 And thanks 4 the pm!!😃

Aww, poor Manyata...she tried so many times to confess her feelings, but became the victim of misunderstandings!!😔

NOW- WHO'S LEAVING?

Dunno why, but that line cracked me up as I was trying to imagine all this really happening!!😆

She clicked her fingers in front of his face and then pointed her index finger at him: YOU GOT IT!

Okay, I just have one question...did you ever watch Choti Bahu?? My mom was an ardent fan, and I used to sit beside her and do my homework...it was better for her, as she could watch all her favourite serials while keeping a watch on me at the same time.😆 The lead actress there played a double role and one of them used to do the same action...your words reminded me of her. Anyway, enough of my useless banter...

Coming back to the update, Manyata's plan of confessing to Uday was soo cute!!😳 Thank god she didn't text or e-mail him...that would sort of kill the feelings.🤢

I was really glad Unnati told Manyata off in the two flashbacks...she had really deserved the rudeness and indifference at that point of time.😡

Wow, the reconciliation of Unnati and M was too good!!

M: UNNATI- I'M IN LOVE WITH YOUR BROTHER & I NEED YOUR HELP!!!

This particular line is my personal favourite in this update...it is soo typical of Manyata!!😃

It was the same 2 things she had given Akash and she didn't want to do a repeat performance for Uday. Uday was much, much more special than Akash ever was.

True. I really didn't like the way Uday had at times been portrayed as a second resort 4 Manyata in the actual serial. Uday is WAY more special than Akash..and I'm not talking in terms of looks, it is the unending faith that his love will prevail that sets him apart from Akash, who used to become insecure at the mere sight of Uday😕...

WHOA..divorce papers!! That was an intial shock, but it soon subsided..because like Manyata, I too am confident that there'll be no divorce after the confession..😃

Ooh, Manyata's rushing off to Uday as she is scared of the imminent storm, ha??😉