~Dangerous IshQ~ ManVeer FF Chapter 1

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys back with a bang whoo hooo !!!!! a new FF well this one is really touchy Was really hard to write this one as if i am not able to make you said than shame on me so finger crossed hope you love it

COLDEST HEARTBREAK


MoniyA's pov


wow my like is so f**ked can i know why the hell i am living also yup just for my brother if you have a mom like this than who needs enemies if took me so long to pick all the pieces that belonged to my heart my eyes still get teared up when i see all these bruises on my body

how could my mother do this to she said she had cancer and i swear to god their wasn't one single night i didn't prayed to god to shower some love to my mom and now what i get to know she faked it she lied to me and my bother and my dad too so that my dad don't divorce her she only wanted money all three of us worked our asses off to earn money for her operation and what she did she used them to get cigarettes, alcohol and drugs how could she choose that over our hungry stomachs i hate my mom for doing this to me all day i need to go through all this shit WHAT A LIFE !!! we beats me up whenever i protest my body is filled with bruises all around i tell you for money she crossed all the limits called me a s**t when she was the one who forced me on guys when i was young i have had enough and when my brother aakash tried to help me she beated him up to i have had enough of this physical and verbal abuse but no i wouldn't tell it to my dad otherwise god knows she may kill me too

End OF POv

Tears rolled down her angelic face with was not full with bruises and stitches this girl had bared alot she was physically abused ny her mother and is still being abused by her mother plus her boyfriend the boy she really loved the boy she thought she would always have with her also abused her both physically and verbally s**t, wh**e , hoe was normal for this girl you can't even imagine how much hurt she got from her beloved ones

"Get your ass off from the couch s**t " her mothers says

"Mom i am not DOING IT I'VE HAD ENOUGH OF YOU" moniya souted

Her mother got really angry and picked her up by pulling moniya's here she was shouting in pain by this heartless mother didn't even gave a f**k bout that tears rolling down her cheeks again her mum pushed her hard and she hurt her head really bad when she met the hard wall it was bleeding but still failed to melt her mother's heart

"look hoe now get ready aryan is goin to pick you up " her mother demanded

"oo-kkk m-ooo-thherrr" she struggled to say this she knew crying, cutting youself, attempt of suicide won't melts her so called mother's heart she wish her dad was here but sadly he had a 1 moth trip to L.A poor girl

Her mother left saying this leaving her daughter in the cold hoe could she how could she treat her own daughter so cold anyways after having a shower she got out with towel wrapped around her body she wore the dress her mother said her to it was so exposing but moniya have stopped thinking she was now getting used to it she was just a puppet which was controlled by her mother she applied alot of make-up to hide all the marks and bruises on her face

After half an hour she came down

"he is waiting outside bitch now leave " her mum said

she left without even looking at her and their he was Mr Aryan Singh the person i thought who loved me after my bother aakash but he was just like my mother

"wow moniya you look hot common lets go to the club" he said with a smile

"thanks but where are we going... ohh to the club" moniya said

Moniya's pov

THats why i love him more than my mum he only hurts me when i anger him doesn't matter whether its directly or indirectly i just hope she don't abuse me today man i've had nuff for today
and now finally we reached the club just remember moniya don't even look at any guy or even be close to him otherwise you will be beaten up really hard

The club was uday niwas they both went inside the club

Aryan : so moniya which drink you want vodka, champagne, or normal beer
moniya : anything you order
Aaryan : ok i'll go and get us some drinks

finally he went urghhh what a relief why god why only me her thoughts were interrupted as she saw all the horny guys starring at her exposing body she wore a balck dress which was really short and was cut wrom the waist on both sides the neck was deep and it was a backless it was really tight will showed off her curvaceous body all eyes on her she felt uncomfortable so she decided to walk to corner were she is all alone now she was in some kind of room which was full with marylin monore pics she felt weird but save she was admiring the pics on the wall it was a hot dashing guy with a fine worked out body man he was really buff and had killer looks she fined observing the guy in the picture and turned when she bumped into the guy who was on the pictures which she was just admiring at his hands were on her waist and her on his bare chest with water droplets on it

"hey what the hell are you doing here" Uday said

"III Just cameee here causee i felt dizzy outsidee" she stammered

"woahh girl chill don't be sacred was just kidding well its my room " uday said

"WHATT YOURR ROOM " moniya said

"yes but whats so shocking bout it " uday said

"well now can you hand me the towel kept behind you " uday said

"yeahh sure "

he turned to get the towel but it fell down so she bended to pick it up and uday was just enjoying checking her ass out "damn what a girl man if he doen't leave i'll do her now" uday gutter thoughts were thinking this she picked it up and turned to give it to him

"here it is " moniya handed the towel to him

"hello the towel take it dude" moniy continued

"umm yeah tanks now leave" uday said coming to his senses and leaving all the gutter thoughts behind

"look can i stay here please i don't want to go out plzz" she said with puppy dog eyes

"you're from delhi aint you i mean those puppy dog eyes " uday said

"yeah i am now please let me stay here " moniya said

"need to think and will you please stop shaking it kinda turin me on " uday said

"nothing new to me " moniya said

uday was deep in thinking if he let her stay than she's definaltey getting laid tonight but if he don't want to let her go

WHAT TO DO

END OF CHAPTER 1

DO COMMENT

I WORKED HARD GUYS

NEXT WILL BE UP ON WEEKENDS :)





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Posted: 13 years ago
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please continue soon i loved it please please continue i loved the theme and please the next update should be hot hot please
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was awsome just gr8
fabulously written cont soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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mindblowing..
i was sooo involved that i was imaging all those scenes..
brilliantly expressed and explained..
waiting for next chap..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome

it was very vel explained

poor M i feel really sorry for her

plz update fast !!
PM me if possible

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing start!! I'll really be looking forward to reading the next update so do continue soon n plzzz pm.me when u update:D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank so much guys I will update on this sunday plus shall I change the name of ff to tragically beautiful or dangerous ishq or hate that I love you do tell I want to change the name ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveCupid

Thank so much guys I will update on this sunday plus shall I change the name of ff to tragically beautiful or dangerous ishq or hate that I love you do tell I want to change the name ...

make it dangerous ishq 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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if u are planning to change the name then u can change it to dangerous ishq
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So guys dangerous ishq finally locked now if anyone don't like it than not my fault btw I like the new name it sounds so good and truly matches with the story

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