A Strawberry Fantasy - ManVeer OS - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

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Will be back in an hour!

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She kept on staring at him wide eyed with her mouth slightly open. This did not go unnoticed by both Vijay and Uday who just stood there smirking at her.

Finally a NORMAL reaction from Manyata upon seeing UV! 😆 Fia is this what you would do if you saw him? Actually nah I'm sure that if it was you, your jaw wouldnt be slightly open, it would be on the floor 😆

He couldn't help but smile at her innocence. Even after having confessed her love for him a week ago, she still behaved like she just met him or something.

A - W - W - W - ..AWWW!!! Thats so frikken cutee! Gosh 😍 Im totally daydreaming now!

"Stop what? Abhi tak to hamne kuch kiya he nahin Princess" , whispered Uday in her ear

HAWW!! 😲 *Literally slapped my hand on my mouth* 😆 No really I did! Gosh Uday, you can make anyone blush! 😳

Every time she met Uday, she experienced a new side to him. He was her best friend, her ultimate support system, her guide, her Knight in shining armor. She found all these things in one guy and she still couldn't believe her luck.

Fia please don't write such sweet beautiful things! You're gonna make me start crying! 😔

"Will you stop daydreaming about me when I'm standing right here infront of you?" , chuckled Uday.

🤣 🤣 🤣 BEST!

Having Manyata in his arms was something he had been dreaming of since a really long time. And now finally when the moment was here, his happiness had no bounds at all.

AWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! seriously cant find any better way to describe my reaction!

"Have you ever kissed someone before?" , asked Uday in a husky voice, still tracing her lips.

"N-n-no" . stammered Manyata.

"Good" , replied Uday, and without further ado, he leaned in and connected his lips with hers.

My favourite part! 👍🏼


The next two paragraphs you already know how much I loved!! Seriously the whole strawberry thing! 😆 TOOO FUNNY!


"Strawberries" . Oh shit. What did I just say? On realizing his mistake and the look of utter confusion on Komal's face, Uday quickly changed his statement.

🤣 Frikken hilarious!

If my sweet little sister knew what goes on in her brother's mind on the mere mention of strawberries, she'd disown me.

HAHHAH! Yea Uday..probably she would! 😆

See FI..I told you that if I was to highlight my favourite parts I would end up highlighting the whole thing! Well I just did!
Seriously you are such a talented writer!!! And please I think its time you started a FF! PRETTY PLEASE!
I mean if you write these cute romantic scenes so well I cant wait to read some intense tragic stuff too. 😉 No really you better be thinking about ideas for your new FF! 😈 God you must be hating me 😆 Just wrote an OS and I still dont leave you! 😛 Well deal with it! And get started!!!!!!!! 😛




Hahahahahaha Ranju you are just making me blush like the Manyata in my OS ☺️ . Lol. I am so glad to see that you highlighted all those points that I was hoping that people would like the most. Seriously Ranju, love you so much for that 🤗 . Lmao no doubts about that, my jaw would definitely be glued to the floor, and I wouldn't even attempt to hide it 😆 . Uday is Uday, we have all become besharam thinking about him 🤣 . Your favorite part is my favorite part too 😊 . Hahahaha who knew strawberries could turn out to be so hot 😉 . Lmao. No worries Ranjana, I am actually so happy to see that my OS was good enough that you covered almost all of it while highlighting your favorite parts 😃 . I am a lazy butt and FFs require regular updating which I might not be able to do so I think I am okay with writing OSs for now. Hahaha 😛 . Please don't kill me *runs away screaming*
Yaaayy I am so happy to see that you think I write romantic scenes well because honestly I felt like I suck in that department 😳 . But your comment makes me feel so much better. Hahahaha I better run for my life. The threats keep coming 🤣
Once again Ranjana, thank you so much for this awesome comment. You always motivate me. Mwah. Love you loads 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Fia you wrote another one shot you should really consider writing a fanfic

your writing is really descriptive ur a great writer you should definately write...
now coming to your fanfic Amazing OS really cute and romantic



Awww thank you so much mommy 😳
Really it feels so nice to hear people appreciating you like this.
Thank you so much 🤗 . I am so glad you liked it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: famin

omg... fia ths was so lovely.😛could n't help but smile like a idiot while reading.thanks 4 giving us a awesome os👏👏.



Lol. Awww thanks a lot. Glad you liked it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonam2801

Fi, You came back second time with your OS with a bang.🥳

How many times I told you, You're a great-great writer.⭐️ ⭐️
You described only a kiss so beautifully.👏 👏 👏
I love strawberries too but real one, not like UV.😆
After reading the OS I understand your OS title. 😉
But you did a strawberry-licious work.☺️ ☺️
I have a request Please also write a fanfic yaar.😛
A Great piece of writing.👍🏼
You elaborate the emotions of UV-M at the time of Kiss & after the kiss so beautifully.☺️ ☺️
Please give me some piece of your writing skills, I really need it.😆
Thanks for giving us a Yummy OS with Strawberry Flavour.😳 ☺️
Love you.😊
Tight hugs.🤗 🤗




Sonam you have no idea how happy I am after reading your comment. I am so glad to see that you guys liked it so much. I was having second thoughts about the whole thing, but I feel so much better now 😊 . Really thanks for the lovely and beautiful words 🤗 . Hahaha I deliberately kept that title since I wanted to keep the story a suspense 😉 . Thanks once again. Aww I don't think you need my skills since you yourself write so well. I mean you have literally got me addicted to your FF 😉 . Lol. You're welcome 😛 . And thanks for the lovely comment.
Love you more! *hugs back*
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: fia21



Hahahahahaha Ranju you are just making me blush like the Manyata in my OS ☺️ . Lol. I am so glad to see that you highlighted all those points that I was hoping that people would like the most. Seriously Ranju, love you so much for that 🤗 . Lmao no doubts about that, my jaw would definitely be glued to the floor, and I wouldn't even attempt to hide it 😆 . Uday is Uday, we have all become besharam thinking about him 🤣 . Your favorite part is my favorite part too 😊 . Hahahaha who knew strawberries could turn out to be so hot 😉 . Lmao. No worries Ranjana, I am actually so happy to see that my OS was good enough that you covered almost all of it while highlighting your favorite parts 😃 . I am a lazy butt and FFs require regular updating which I might not be able to do so I think I am okay with writing OSs for now. Hahaha 😛 . Please don't kill me *runs away screaming*
Yaaayy I am so happy to see that you think I write romantic scenes well because honestly I felt like I suck in that department 😳 . But your comment makes me feel so much better. Hahahaha I better run for my life. The threats keep coming 🤣
Once again Ranjana, thank you so much for this awesome comment. You always motivate me. Mwah. Love you loads 🤗


Nahh Fi...you deserve all this and more!
Okay fine who can understand better than me how much pain a FF/SS can be 😆..but I would still suggest it if you come up with some killer idea simply because writing a SS is a whole other level of satisfaction on its own.. Well okay fine go ahead and write more OSs, and Im sure someday you wont be able to resist writing a FF 😛 Meanwhile bring on another OS! And this time I challenge you to write something different from these two..like maybe an angry/jealousy type or something 😉
HAHA i knwo what you're thinking..Finally finished thsi one and now another demand! Does this girl think I have no life like her? 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
FIA AWESOME YAAR.KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.LOVED IT 2 THE CORE...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: fia21



Sonam you have no idea how happy I am after reading your comment. I am so glad to see that you guys liked it so much. I was having second thoughts about the whole thing, but I feel so much better now 😊 . Really thanks for the lovely and beautiful words 🤗 . Hahaha I deliberately kept that title since I wanted to keep the story a suspense 😉 . Thanks once again. Aww I don't think you need my skills since you yourself write so well. I mean you have literally got me addicted to your FF 😉 . Lol. You're welcome 😛 . And thanks for the lovely comment.
Love you more! *hugs back*

Thanking you for the reply.😉
☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ Oh Gosh, my cheeks also turned into like red-red tomatoes. 😳No no no not tomatoes. I don't like tomatoes😆 yes like STRAWBERRIES☺️, after reading your STRAWBERRY FLAVOUR REPLY. But Please fulfill my wish, I want to read your fanfic. Don't say No yaar I have no time.😈Please accept this request from your OS fan.☺️ ☺️ that's me.😳 FI, DON'T FORGET I HAVE A PISTOL IN MY HANDS SO SWEETY SAY YES, THAT'S MY HUMBLE REQUEST STYLE.🤣 🤣 🤣 😎 OYE I'M SERIOUS YAAR.😎 🤗

Edited by sonam2801 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
this was the cutest OS ever <33 specially those strawberry thought that were coming to him while kissing <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Swini01

FIA AWESOME YAAR.KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.LOVED IT 2 THE CORE...



Thank you so much Swini.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: -Kareena-

this was the cutest OS ever <33 specially those strawberry thought that were coming to him while kissing <3



Thank you so much Kareena 😊
Really glad you liked the strawberry related parts.

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