A Strawberry Fantasy - ManVeer OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: -Niha-

loved this os fia. alwayz love all ur os's.
wow u described the kiss so well. u shud write an FF, am sure everyone wud luv it
thx 4 da pm

Thank you so much Niha 🤗
A lot of people have been asking me to start an FF. It's just that I am so lazy and FFs require regular updating which I don't think I'd be able to do 😆

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

HEy Fia🤗, this was just remarkable👏, and trust me even I can never look at strawberries again😳, the same way as I always do☺️.I read it twice already.

Can u just imagine, I mean seriouly😉, now straberries are gonna remind me of Manveer. Now fia that was beyond remarkably, loved it to pieces.👏

Please keep writing 😛

Thank you so so so much Chitra 🤗
Wow you read it twice already? 😲 . Aww that makes me feel so good 😳
Hahahahaha I don't think I would be able to look at strawberries the same way either 😆 . Look what ManVeer has done to us. Lol. Thank you so much for the lovely words once again Chitra 😊

Originally posted by: AKlover101

Another AMAZING OS!! Loved every bit of it!! This has gotta be one of my fave OS'!! Gr8 work n keep it up:D

Thank you so much Fizza. Your comment makes me feel so good 😊

Originally posted by: ilvuday

lol n mayb even i wont b able 2 eat strwberries nymoh fia.ven i stard @ur title i was lyk umm did she eat sumthin rong😉...n den ven i read it i was lyk OHH MA GOSH...lol m a bit prone to overreaction😆.⭐️buh it was so nyc n cute👏.lovd it cont soon😃

Lol, me neither 😆
I deliberately gave my OS this title because I wanted to keep people wondering what the story is about 😉
Thank you so much 😊

Originally posted by: Shals9

hmmm Fia! Kya yummy strawberry kiss tha! Loved the OS dear.

You should write FF yaar. Please continue this strawberries OS and make it more tasty, yummy and juicy.

What a first kiss! Loved it!

Lol thank you so much Shals 😳 . So glad you enjoyed the strawberries 😆

Fia madam ban gayi writer wah wah!
I have read your both OS in one go and they were STUPENDOUS.
I always knew that their is a hidden writer inside you and glad that manveer bring it on surface.
Your first OS was too awesome. One could wish that had actually happened in show but DEK writers doesn't have excellent braincells like us, that's why the show is ending.
sorry for reminding you that as i am also depressed by this news but back to the posint, you have done fabulous job in that OS.

Now this one, i don't exactly love stawberries but now i am loving.. Along with UV, i also wouldn't able to see stawberry in same way! Kiss was so intense and HOT. manyata is blushing a way to much, unlike our juglee billi as UV himself said that he liked manyata in angry avtaar rather then blushing bride mode. Manveer is manveer, love them.
I really want you to use your new found skills oftenly as after dek ends ,these OS and ff are my jeene ka sahara. i would love to enjoy manveer in my fantasy.I suggest you to start a ff but don't do that if you have a lazy butt like alissa!😡

once again sis I am in love with your writing.
By the way please also post your comments on today's episode in shama's post as i am blown by it. can't wait to read your comments.

Fia you wrote another one shot you should really consider writing a fanfic

Originally posted by: wendy25

Fia madam ban gayi writer wah wah!
I have read your both OS in one go and they were STUPENDOUS.
I always knew that their is a hidden writer inside you and glad that manveer bring it on surface.
Your first OS was too awesome. One could wish that had actually happened in show but DEK writers doesn't have excellent braincells like us, that's why the show is ending.
sorry for reminding you that as i am also depressed by this news but back to the posint, you have done fabulous job in that OS.

Now this one, i don't exactly love stawberries but now i am loving.. Along with UV, i also wouldn't able to see stawberry in same way! Kiss was so intense and HOT. manyata is blushing a way to much, unlike our juglee billi as UV himself said that he liked manyata in angry avtaar rather then blushing bride mode. Manveer is manveer, love them.
I really want you to use your new found skills oftenly as after dek ends ,these OS and ff are my jeene ka sahara. i would love to enjoy manveer in my fantasy.I suggest you to start a ff but don't do that if you have a lazy butt like alissa!😡

once again sis I am in love with your writing.
By the way please also post your comments on today's episode in shama's post as i am blown by it. can't wait to read your comments.

Hahahaha. ManVeer ka kamaal hai 😉
Awww thank you so much Wendy. I am so glad that you liked both my OSs. Lol yes well that hidden writer was threatened to come out so I had no other option 😆 . Lol.
Haye Wendy this news still depresses me . But I guess all good things have to come to an end right? My only regret would be that the story is being rushed with. They could have shown so much romance between ManVeer before, just like in today's episode, even if it was a dream, and the show would have survived. Sigh. Let's just hope the confession in the show is good.
Hahahahaha yaaay I made everyone fall in love with strawberries 😛 . I feel so proud of myself. Lol. Eeep thank God you liked the kiss. I wasn't sure if it was good enough. Yea I kind of do have a lazy butt like Alissa 😳 . Hahaha. But I would keep on writing OSs.
Thank you so much for the lovely words Wendy 🤗 . Yes I will post my comment on Shama's thread, but tomorrow, since it's Ramadan and I am busy in that half the time and then these stupid power cuts 😡 . But I shall post my comment on her thread and will PM you then. Really want to discuss today's awesome episode 😊

edited my comment on first page. Thanx.😊

omg... fia ths was so lovely.😛could n't help but smile like an idiot while reading.thanks 4 giving us an awesome os👏👏.