So close:Last pt Engaged,Wed,Hot honeymoon - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey jasmin awesome chapter...J is so evil...U stop at intresting mode yaar..hope everything will be alright
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow lovd all da partx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
mind blowing update jasmine plz do cont soon and add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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uday's mom is so evil
she wants her son to marry someone who cheated on him,like seriously
poor uday
he loves manyata so much
and she wants to leave him
hope uday survives
awesome update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update!! Plzzz continue soon n thanks for the pm:D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey jasmine it was amazing...👍🏼
but uday ???????
i hope he is ok...
thnxxx fr pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 4😭😭😭 hope UV will be safen sound...J is such a🤬
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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rocking update jasmine
it was very well written
sorry for the late comment
i actually read it from my tablet so cudnt comment

i knw Uday wil b alr8( he better be )
this will build and strenghthn de trust btw Uday and Manyata

ughhh hate J and Menaka
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So close Part 5
Thanks to each one of u 4 reading my SS
The doctor came.
Manyata:Uday has closed his yes.He is not responding.
Th doctor checked.
Dr:He has fallen unconscious.
Manyata shed tears.
After 24 hours...
Dr:Uday is much better now.He is out of danger.
Everyone became very happy.
M:Thank God.
Dr:But...there is a problem.
Mrinalini:Problem?
Meneka:What problem?
Dr:Because of the accident Uday can't be like before.
Brijraj:What do you mean?
DR:Uday cannot produce kids.
They were shocked.
Dr:Infact he can't even lead a normal married life.
Jainandini:Means?
Dr:He cannot give what his wife expects from him.You know what i mean?Physical love.
They were shocked again.
Dr:You all can come inside and see Uday.
They all tried to get inside while Jai stood back.Mrinalini noticed it.
Mri:Jai...are you not interested to see Uday?
The others turned back and looked at Jai hearing this.
J:No...actually i want to go back.
Meneka:Why are you going back Jai?That also when Uday is in this stage.Like his wife you have to take care of him now.Right?
J:Why should i take care of Uday like a wife?He is not my husband.Right?Infact he will never be my husband.How can i marry a man who is too weak to lead a proper married life?
They were shocked while Mrinalini smiled.
Mene:Jai!
J:I can't waste my life for a loser.
Mene:Loser?Within a few moments he became a loser for you?So what Uday said was true.You never loved him sincerely.He was just one of your boy friends.Ok leave...that's better.
Jai left.
Meneka stared at Manyata:When are you going to leave?
M:I will never leave Uday.Uday needs my care now.I will take care of him.
Mene:After knowing the truth also?
M:Yes.Because i just need love from Uday.That i will always get from him.
Meneka could'nt believe it.
Mene:You said you will leave if Uday does'nt prove his innocence in a week.It's more than a week now.
M:Uday poved his innocence when he was critical.
Mene:What?What did he do to prove his innocence?
M:His truthful words...innocence in his teary eyes...that was more than enough for me to believe him.
Meneka,Brijraj and Mrinalini smiled.
Mri:Meneka..this is true love.
Brij:Yes,we were wrong in choosing Uday's partner.Uday was right.Manyata is the real Princess of Uday.
Men:Yes.
She hugged Manyata:You will be my daughter in law.I have accepted you.Sorry.
Manyata shed tears happily.
Mrinalini smiled:To expose Jai and show Manyata is the best for Uday i made the doctor lie that Uday is not physically fit to lead a married life.
They could'nt believe it.
They went inside.Everybody hugged Uday.He looked at Manyata.Manyata held her hand.They smiled at each other.

After a week Uday was taken back home.
Manyata took care of Uday in every way sacrificing her sleep.
M:Uday...get well soon.I miss my smart active Uday.


After few weeks Uday started walking with Manyata's help.
Uday smiled at Manyata keeping his arms on her shoulders:Thanks a lot for taking the trouble to look after me.

She held his hand:Looking after you is never a trouble Uday.You have always supported me.You were always there with me when i need you.I will always be there with you Uday.

He cupped her face in his arms:You are my luck Manyata.My princess...i love you.I can't tell you how much i love you.You taught me what love was when i did'nt know what love was.

She smiled:You taught me how to love Uday.

Both of them went closer to each other sharing a passionate eye lock.

Their hearts could feel romantic music in the back ground.
Ek namkeen si baat hai, har nayi si baat mein
Teri khusboo chal rahi hai jo mere saath mein
Halka halka rang beete kal ka
Gehra gehra kal ho jayega
Aadha ishq adha hai aadha ho jayega
Kadmon se meelon ka wada ho jayega


They forgot themselves and danced expressing their love for each other.
He held her passionately from behind leaving her blush.Her eyes got stuck up to his lovely eyes which were filled up with passionate love for her.


Beshumar raatein, behisab baatein pass aate aate ghum ho jati hai
Bekhudi mein dhalke, bekali mein jalke
sau hazar yaadein nam ho jati hai
pheeka pheeka pal beete kal ka
mehka mehka kal ho jayega
Aadha ishq adha hai adha ho jayega
Kadmon se milo ka wada ho jayegaa

He kept looking at her while dancing.She was shy to look at him,but she wrapped her arms around his neck.His fingers went through her silky hair.
They drowned in each other.

ishq..
Intezar sa hai, imtihan sa hai, itminan sa hai, kya hai na jaane
Itna* nahi hai, iqteda hui hai, intiha hui hai, na jane
Chhalka chhalka pal beete kal ka, thehra thehra pal ho jayega,
Aadha ishq aadha hai aadha ho jayega
Kadmon se milo ka wada ho jayega..(Band Baaja Baaraat)




Edited by jasminerahul - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg jai is such a🤬
she abandoned uday at this stage
haha dadi is too intelligent
she made the doctors lie
finally uday's parents had seen manyata's love for him
they are adorale

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