So close:Last pt Engaged,Wed,Hot honeymoon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Friends..since u all requested me to make my OS longer i decided 2 write a sequel to my previous SS The nest of dreams.The above link is nest of dreams.It was inspired by d mal movie Swapnakoodu.But d sequel won't be related to Swapnakoodu.This SS is only 4 Manveer romance.
Pt1:Pg1
Pt2:Pg2
Pt3:pg4
Pt4:Pg7
Pt5:Pg9
Pt6:Pg11
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So close Part 1

pls giv long comments

3 years passed away...
Deepu and Kamala's wedding.
Kamala and Manyata hugged each other crying.
M:Di...i will miss you.
K:Will miss you too.
Kamala kept Manyata's hand on Uday Veer's hand.
K:Uday...as i promised i am handing over my little sister to you.Look after well.Never let her eyes wet.
U:I will love Manyata so much like now in future also.I promise.She will never have to cry as i will shower her with love.
Kamala was relieved.
Kamala bid 'bye' and got inside the decorated car with Deepu.
Uday wiped Manyata's tears and smiled.He pulled her cheeks to make her smile.She smiled.He held her hand and walked out.
K:Uday...will your family members accept me?I am only an ordinary girl while you belong to a royal family.
U:Manyata,you are not an ordinary girl anymore.The moment you entered my heart you became a Princess.
She smiled.
Suddenly it started raining.
M:Oh!It's raining.My grand expensive white anarkali will get spoiled.
U:It' ok Manyata.I will get you more grand...the most expensive clothes.Now don't run away from rain.Spending time with you in the rain will be a romantic experience.
M:What?
Her eyes sparkled.
She was wet and hot.
He cupped her face in his arms.
U:I love you Manyata..Now please say that you also love me.
The romantic cool breeze touched them.She moved away from him smiling.
She swayed her body.
U:Kaate Nahi Katate Ye Din Ye Raat
Kehni Thi Tumse Jo Dil Ki Baat
Lo Aaj Main Kehta Hu I Love You
She looked deeply at his eyes:Koi Nahi Bas Tum Ho Saath
Kehni Thi Tumse Jo Dil Ki Baat
Lo Aaj Main Kehti Hu I Love You
He was over excited and pulled her towards him.

Again cool breeze touched them giving them a romantic feeling.
U:Kaisi Hava Hai
M:Dhuli Dhuli
U:Aaj Fiza Hain (He poured rain water on her neck)

She felt cold and nice.
M:Khili Khili
U:Saara Nazaara
M:Naya Naya
U:Dil Ne Pukaara
She cupped his face in her arms:Piya Piya
She moved her body like a snake and climbed his body:Piya piya...(6)
Uday carried her in his arms and twirled around:Tumne Jo Li Angdaai Hai Phir Baat Vahi Yaad Aayi Hai
Lo Aaj Main Kehta Hu I Love You

Manyata rested her head on his chest:I love you...
U:I love you...

M:Mahaka Mahaka
U:Tera Badan
M:Bahaka Bahaka
U:Mera Ye Man
M:Chhalaka Chhalaka
Uday caressed her face and hands:Roop Tera
M:Halka Halka
Uday pulled her towards him:Nasha Mera
M:Jab A Hi Gai Main Paas Tere Kah Doon Jo Dil Mein Hai Mere
Lo Aaj Main Kehti Hu I Love U
I love you...i love you...i love you...

U:This night is the most special sensuous night of my life.You confessed your love in a beautiful way.I hope more nights will come like this.
She blushed.

He took her to his Mansion where all stared at them as they were completely wet and were very close to each other.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was really nice i loved this part please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful update. It was really nice. Please continue it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
Simply beautiful ...do continue soon n thxs for the pm 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful update...I like the way they confess their love...its a unique way ha...
Thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice!! Plzzz continue soon!!:D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really happy to see that some one have care for our wish kash cvs ko bhi hamri wish ki kadar hoti
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Short & Sweet. I like it.😊
Please update next chapter ASAP.😳
Great work.👏 👏 👏 Nice update.👍🏼
🤗 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey loved it...plz PM me when u update if u can..will love to read the next parts!!

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