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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
Part 3:-

Very nice and cute😊

I love it ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
👏 Its such a beautiful story u have written. so dreamy and sweet with 2 adorable people. you have such an amazing talent, keep up the good work.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Awww..such a cute update!!😃 plz continue soon! And thanx 4 da pm.❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
So close Part 4 Thanks a lot 4 all who send me nice comments
Uday's lip shivered:JaiNandini!
Manyata:Who is she Uday?
J:I will tell you Manyata.I am Uday's ex-girl friend.
Manyata was shocked.
M:Uday...is it true?
U:Yes Manyata.But i had broken up all my relation with her.You know my pst.Right?I was a flirt till i met you.But when i learnt to love from you i changed completely.You were the only girl in my life since last 31/2 years.You will be the only girl in my life till the end of my life.
Manyata was relieved.
J:Uday had said the same words to me also.But he was lying.He was just flirting with me.
Manyata looked at Uday.Uday was upset.
J:He will do the same thing with you also.
U:Nooo!I truly love Manyata,i will never cheat on her.By the way Jai..i broke up with you seeing you with your boy friend.
Jai was embarrassed.
J:No,Uday is lying.I was always faithful to him.He only cheated me going around spnding nights with many girls.
Manyata was shocked.
U:I had lots of girl friends.But i have not spend night with them.
J:Lie...lie...Manyata...don't believe him.He will ditch you one day.
M:I have complete faith in Uday.
Uday smiled.Jai was irritated.She took out some photographs from her bag and showed them to Manyata.She as shocked.Those were Uday's dirty pictures with girls.
Manyata started crying.
U:Manyata...don't believe this.These are morphed photographs.
M:You cheated me.I am a fool who left everything for you.I am going.
She threw the photographs at his face and left the hall.
Jai smiled.Uday was irritated by her evil smile.
U:Don't smile too much Jai.Your lies can never break our relationship.
Meneka:Uday...
U:Mom...i know that you only called Jai back as you always wanted Jai to be your daughter in law.But i am telling you this girl is not worth marrying.
Jai felt insulted.

Mene:Uday,you are misunderstanding her.
U:No mom.I had caught her red handed with her boy friend.
Suddenly Uday saw Manyata coming with her bag.
She was crying:I am going.
U:Manyata,please don't go.
M:I don't want to be one of your girl friends.
U:Please believe me.
M:No.
U:Then stay here for one more week.I will prove my innocence.
Mrinalini:Manyata,please stay here for one more week.
M:If Uday fails to prove his innocence in a week?
U:I will never fail.
He looked at Jai.
J:You will fail Uday.
M:Ok...i will wait for one more week.If you don't succeed in proving your innocence i will leave the palace.
U:Ok.
J:If Manyata leaves you should marry me Uday.Because still i love you.My love is true.Because even after knowing your truth i want to be your wife unlike Manyata who thought of leaving you.Loving the person with his defects is true love.Right?
Manyata was insecure.
Mene:Yes.Your love is true Jai.
Jai smiled.
U:Whose love is true?Time will prove it Jai.And you know i don't have the habit of failing.
Jai became dull.
He walked away.

Uday was depressed about Manyata hating him and he starts drinking.He saw raining outside through the windows.
He cried singing:Wo Lamhe, wo baatein,
Koi na jaane,
Thi kaisi raatein,
Hooo, barsaatein, (He thought of his rain dance with Manyata)
Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein,
Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein...

Na main jaanoun,
Na tu jaane,
(aaah)
Kaisa hai ye mausam,
Koi na jaane,
Kahi se hai fizaa aayi,
Ghamon ki dhoop sang laayi,
Khafaa hogaye hum,
Judaa hogaye hum,

Wo Lamhe, wo baatein,
Koi na jaane,
Thi kaisi raatein,
Hooo, barsaatein,
Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein,
Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein...(He imagined dancing with Manyata in rain)

(hooo...) (Zeher)

He drove the car thinking of his moments with Manyata..their first meeting...their fights...their confession...their romance...their break up...

His heart cried out of pain:
Dard mein bhi yeh lab muskura jaate hai
Beete lamhein humein jab bhi yaad aate hai]2
Beete lamheinnn

[Chand lamhaat ke vaaste hi sahi
Mushkura kar mili thi mujhe zindagi]2

Teri aagosh din the mere kate
Teri baaahon mein thi mere raatien kati
OoO OO

Aaj bhi jab woh pal mujhko yaad aate hain
Dil se saare gumo ko bhoola jate hai
[Dard mein bhi yeh lab muskura jaate hai
Beete lamhein humein jab bhi yaad aate hai]2

Beete lamheinnn...(The train).
He lost his concentration on driving and due tocareless driving his car was hit by a truck.
Manyata and others were shattered knowing Uday's accident.
After many hours...
The doctor:Uday's condition i still critical.
Everyone cried.
Dr:But he has opened his eyes.He requsted me to talk to Manyata.He said it's urgent.
Manyata became emotional and ran inside.
Meneka thought:In this critical cndition alo he wants to talk to Manyata only.
Manyata sat near Uday shedding tears:Uday!
Her tear drop fell on his forehead.
U:Manyata...i don't know whether i will survive or not.Maybe i will die in a few moments.
Manyta could'nt bear it.She cried:Don't say like that Uday.Nothing will happen to you.
U:Before i pass away i want to tell you that i have not cheated on you.I love you a lot.A person who is going to die will not lie.
Manyata cried:I trust you Uday and sorry for hurting you.But you are not going to die.I want you.
Uday's eyes got closed.Manyata got scared:Uday!Open your eyes Uday.
She screamed:Doctorrr
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
awesome update jasmine.cont soon n tthanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
Can 't wait for the next chapter.Continue soon plz!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
omgthat was superb
me soooper eager 4 next part

thanks u atleast thru ff we get proper manveer unlike those cruel cv's hate them
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
it suoer awesome loved it i mean so emotional😭 please update soon and please dont let uday die please please and thanks for the pm please update soon😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Great Update! Hope Nothing Will Happen To Uday! Ty 4 d pm :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Nice part 😊
Continue 👍🏼

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