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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
Beautiful update. Can just picture the love and warnth around them. It would be nice to have the the same intensity and depth that udays character has in the series, that wild smirky side. You have done such a brilliant job, plz stop and update further. Would love 2 read what happens next.😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
i loved both the parts !!!!


first part was cute . M and K emotional scenes
manveer romance in the rain was very wel writen and
beautifully expressed .

i lyked 2 nd part very much
UV introducing M 2 his family as his princess
and de girl he gave his heart was very nyc


Menaka and Brij actions vernt surprising
they r lyk tat

loved de way ds supported Uday's decision
wil thr b Unnati and vj in ur ss?
it vud b gud 2 hav thm
and as 4 J vo ho ya na ho i dont care

thanx 4 telin me abt ur ss
i cleared my PM inbox
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
very sweet and beautiful...continue soon...I liked the new concept of M being a commoner and UV loving her so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Hey Jasmine 🤗, lovely update update, aww uday is so cute 😳, he got a gift for her 😛, but dont like this MEnka at all, sudharegi nahi 😡, thanks for the PM doll and continue soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
dat was awesome... loved how ds and uday stood up for manyata the beach house was really awesome please update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
So close Part 3 I thank each one of u 4 ur comment
Manyata who was drowned in Uday's love in the beach house never knew what was stored for her in the palace by Brijraj and Meneka was bitter.
Meneka shouted at her:You thought in a moment you can be rich by getting into a relationship with Uday?
B:Never knew that you were so smart.Got a beach house so soon.
Manyata:Please believe me.I never asked Uday for such an expensive gift.
Uday came:Mom...dad...i told you both not to hurt Manyata.If so i might...
Men:You might...?
Mrinalini:No arguments... Brijraj...when you were dating Meneka you have given her so many expensive gifts.Then why can't Uday gift whsomthing expensive to his beloved Manyata?
B:There is a lot of diference between Meneka and Manyata.Meneka was a Princess.
U:Manyata is alo a Princess for me.
Manyata went to her room and cried.
Uday went near her and wiped her tears:Don't cry Princess.When i am with you why are you crying?
Her face was still sad.
U:Ok.I will shower so much o love upon you so that you will forget all your worries.Manyata...today is the day of love.Valntine's day.So let us love each other and be happy.
She smiled.
U:Let us go for Valentine's party.
M:Really?
U:Yes.

Manyata wore a beautiful red dress and matching accessories while Uday Veer wore a white shirt with red over coat.Manyata was bowled over by Uday's dressing style.
M:Wow Uday.You look dashing now.If Bollywood sees you you will be chosen for the new film.
With a smile he pulled her pink chubby cheeks:But you have to be my heroine.
With love he hit her forehead softly with his forehead.
She smiled.
They entered the party hall.It as decorated with red roses and heart shaped balloons.All glittering lights were red.
M:Wow!It's a wonder land Uday.
U:Yes...this is the land of love.Love is always a wonder.
He pulled a red rose from the wall and gave it to her.
M:Thank you Uday.
He took another red rose and started tearing it's petals.
M:Why are you doing this Uday?
He smiled and pampered her face softly with the red petals.
The song 'Lamha Lamha Doori Yun Pighalti Hai
Jaane Kis Aag Mein Yeh Shabnam Jalti Hai
Ho Lamha Lamha Doori Yun Pighalti Hai
Jaane Kis Aag Mein Yeh Shabnam Jalti Hai
Khwaahishon Ki Shaam Dhalti Hain... (2)

Jaane Kis Aag Mein Yeh Shabnam Jalti Hai

La La La...(Gangster) was going on.
Romantic feelings were aroused in Manyata.
Her eyes glittered.
M:For a moment i thought it was a dream.
U:Your dream was a reality Manyata.
She smiled.
U:Your eyes sparkle like the stars who taught us to dream.
They smiled.
Teri Aankhen Dikhati Hai
Hamein Sapanen Sitaaron Ke
Ho...
Tere Hothon Pe Likha Hai
Jo Tum Bole Ishaaron Mein
Ho...
Khwaabon Ke Karwaan Mein Raat Chalti Hai
Jaane Kis Aag Mein Yeh Shabnam Jalti Hain
La La La...

He held her hands and took her to the dance floor.They danced romantically.

Announcement:There is a surprise prize.We observed all the dancing couples and chose the hottest pair.The hottest pair prize goes to Mr.UdayVeer and his sweet heart Manyata.
They were surprised.
M:I just can't believe this.
U:We are best pair Manyata.
They received the prize and amiled at each other.The press media was after them.The photograpers took their photographs.
Ashish Kapoor, Priyal Gor at Indian Telly Awards

The next day...their photograph was seen in the newpapers and magazines.Uday,Manyata and Mrinalini were excited while Meneka and Brijraj were irritated.
Me:I can't stand this pair.I will break them.

After few days...
Manyata woke up from the bed rubbing her eyes.Suddenly she saw Uday and Mrinalini singing 'Happy birthday to you...'
M:My God!Today is my birthday?
U:Happy birthday sweet heart.
Mri:Happy birthday Manyata.
M:Thank you so much dadima.
She hugged Mrinalini.
Mri:This is your first birthday here.So we have to celebrate it in a grand manner.
M:No need dadima.Your love is enough.
Mri:No Manyata.We have to celebrate it.I have already made the arrangements for your birthday party in the evening.
Manyata was surprised.
Mrinalini gave her the dress and ornaments she has to wear for the party.
Mri:This is Uday's selection.I am just giving this to you.
Manyata and Uday smiled at each other.

Kamala rang up Manyata:Happy birthday my little sister.
M:Thank you so much di.How are you di?
K:I am fine.How are you?
Manyata felt sad remembering how much Meneka and Brijraj hate her.
M:I am happy here.Everybody loves me here.They are conducting a birthday party for me.
K:I feel so happy for you.
M:I miss you di.
K:I miss you too.
They both became emotional.

Manyata wore the grand salwar kameez and heavy jewellery for the party.
Uday could'nt take his eyes off her.

U:I don't have words to say how beautiful you are.Gorgeous.
She blushed:I knew that you will not be able to away from me even for a second today.

They smiled.
Manyata blew out the candles and cut the cake feeding Uday.Uday fed her back.Manyata fed Mrinalini a small piece.She turned towards Meneka.Meneka who was irritated moved away.She was followed by Brijraj.Manyata became upset.Understanding that Uday took that cake piece and put in her mouth.She smiled relieving Uday.
He led her to the dance floor and started dancing.They enjoyed the sweetness of dance
happily.

Ek din ..Ek din teri raahon
Baahoon mein panaahon mein
Aungaa kho jaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga (2)
Yeh dil to na keh saka yeh baatein
dil to na keh saka (2)


They swayed their bodies together feeling that they were one.
Tu jaane na tu
Chaahat meri kitni betaab hai (2)
Ho jo barso meri palkon mein tha
Tu wohi khwaab hai
Har ghadi har ghadi teri yaadoon mein
vaadon mein iradon mein
Aungaa kho jaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga
Yeh dil to na keh yeh baatein
Dil to na keh saka (2)

While dancing Manyata's leg slipped as she was not using to wearing high heel shoes.
But Uday held her towards him preventing her fall which brought a smile in Manyata's face.He enjoyed the innocence of her sweet smile.
Yeh Jhukti nazar
Jaane jigar hosh le jati hai (2)
Mein kaise kahon
Ek ajnabi dard dejati hai
Chupke se Chupke se teri neeedon mein
Khwaabon mein khayalon mein
They were enjoying every moment of their dance which was the expression of their love.
Chaaunga Khojunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga
She caressed his face.He felt nice feeling her sweet touch.
Ek din ..Ek din teri raahon
Baahoon mein panaahon mein
Aungaa khojaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga
She bent down as he leaned towards her face.He was drowned in her tempting fragrance.
They were lost in each other.

Yeh dil to na keh yeh baatein
dil to na keh saka (2)(Naqaab).

Suddenly they heard a girl's voice:Uday!
They stopped dancing and looked at her.Uday was shocked to see her.
Edited by jasminerahul - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
Amezing update.Very nice. Your song choise is very good. Pictures are asweme. Loved it. Please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
REALLY NICE GOOD CHOISE AND THANKS FOR SHARING

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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Thanks for d pm jasmin...chapter was beautiful...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
this chapter was mindblowing manveer were so beautiful as usual and dreamy and you left us in a suspense who was that girl is it uday's exgirlfreind or something?? please update soon and this chapter was awesome and thanks for the pm

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