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Posted: 12 years ago

chapter 7

Fire was lit up in the hawan khund, all the nine pandits sat around it. Holy water from seven rivers were bought. the royal puja has been started.

Uday took his place to start it.

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in jungle,

"kitni bhi puja karwa lo, mein iss shaap ko kabhi tutne nahi dungi. aur ab iss peedi(generation) ko khatam karne k baad jaigarh ka suraj humesha humesha k liye asth(fall) ho jaayega, humesha k liye"

the shadow repeats some mantra and a golden pendent arrives in its hand

"meri bacchi, teri issi nishani ke sahare meri aatma jeevit hai... par ab wo din dur nahi jab hum jaigard pariwaar ka sarvanaash kar denge"

"maa..." a voice surrounds her mind.it is a painful voice

"kaya.. meri bacchi"

same voice "maa... mein uske bina nahi jee sakti, meri rooh usse judi hui hai"

the shadow breaks down "kaya.."

"mujhe maaf kar do maa.. mein aapko chod kar jaa rahi hu, par meri rooh usse jud chuki hai"

"kaya.. meri bacchi unn darindo ne tujhse tera pyaar cheena mein unki saanse cheen lungi, iss baar mera keher unn par jaroor barsega...ye shapp firse janm lega"

and the evil laugh roars around the whole jungle

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at mandir in jaigarh, after the puja the all sets to take blessings from the idol of radha krishna.

as all were approaching, J blocks manyata's way

j:tum kaha jaa rahi ho

m: bhagwanji ki murti ke paas, aashirwaad lene

j:shayad tumhe pata nahi hai, but pehle rajwade aashirwaad lete hain. commoners baad mein aate hain.

uday was about to interrupt when purohit ji says

purohit: yuvraj aap abhi piche nahi mud sakte.

unnati:j plzz yaha ab tamasha mat karo.

j:hum kya tamasha kar rahe hai, hum toh sach hi keh rahe hain.

m:its ok, hum baad mein chale jaayenge

manyata turns back and finds vijay in front

vijay: hum devgarh k yuvraj hai, aur hum manyata ko apni behen mante hai toh iss hisaab se manyata bhi royal hui. (turns to J) ab toh koi problem nahi hai na j..

chalo m bhai

ds: humme lagta hai samasya hal hui.

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At jaigard , in royal grounds raj purohit announches to the crowd

rp: kal yuvraj ke janm din ke shubh avsar par unka rajyabhishek kiya jaayega

evry one was present there accept the uday n manyata

same evil eyes starring wickedly

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manyata was behind the mandir

uday:ahem ahem..

she looks behind

m: (sadly)uday..

uday:awww itne sweet se face par itni sadness.

m:aisa kuch nahi hai

uday:humse jhoot?

m:sach mein uday..

u: i m sorry princess, j ne aaj jo kuch bhi kiya

m: wo sahi thi uday

uday:princess...

m:ok cut the topic

uday:wat, princess humne itni acchi lines sochi the tumhe manane ki, aur tum toh pehle hi maan gayi, not so fair princess

they both share a laugh

unknown to both of them same evil pair of eyes were starring at them, but uday's back was towards it and covering manyata too.

"yuvraj udayveer singh, jee le jitna jeena hai,kal tera bhi wahi haal hoga jo yuvraj umang ka hua tha, aur afsos shayad tere saath ye bechari masoon bhi maari jaye."

and then she got disappear.

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in jaigarh mahal, everyone returns .

all sat at dining when uday enters

j:uday aao na humare paas beitho

uday looks at j and manyata who was sitting opposite.

everyone look at him. he moves towards j and crosses her and head towards manyata's chair and sit beside her.

vijay and unnati gives a hi-fi.

j:uday tum..

"ghamma ghani dadisahab" jagat enters.

ds:ghani ghamma jagat beta aayiye. bethiye

after seeking everyone's blessing he sitd beside J.

all had a nice conversation.

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after the dinner evryone heads towards the room whenjagat and vijay blocks uday's way.

uday:kya hua vijay banna?

vijay:wo toh humme aapse puchna chahiye uday banna, ke aapke dil ko kya hua hai

jagat:hua hai nahi, kabka ho chuka hai

uday: (confused)kya ho chuka hai?

both:pyaar

uday (blushingly) kya bakwaas hai ye...

vijay:oye hoye, chehre ka rang toh dekho kaise lal-gulami ho raha hai

jagat:sahi kaha vijay banna apne

uday:apni bakwaas band karo aur humme jaane do.

jagat:arrey aise kaise, pehle tu kabool kar.

uday:manyata meri sirf acchi dost hai

vijay:humne toh kisi ka naam hi nahi liya

uday: wo.. wo...

jagat:ab bata bhi de yaar

uday:actually...

vijay:yes or no

uday: but

jagat:yes or no

udya:aise kaise

vijay:come on yaar, accept the fact,u r falling for her

jagat:vijay banna the fact is he has already fallen for her at first dight.haina uday?

uday:silent...

jagat:ok so mein jason se keh deta hu, ke uday manyata ko pasand nahi karta, so he hav a chance

uday: no jagat, i lke her.

both of the men burst out.

both:phas gaya...

uday:i will not leave u both.

uday chase them both around the mahal

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next day(guys i m skipping this part)

the same shadow "aaj apni khushiyon ko gum mein badalte dekhne k liye tyaar raho"

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at the kingdom, all were awaiting for the arrival of their yuvraj

rajmata was having a tears of happiness

flashback

a small boy of 5 yrs running

"dadisahab"

ds:sambhaaal ke yuvraj

brijraj catches him "umang beta sambhal ke"

then next he was sitted on the royal rajgaddi

flashback end

rajmata have tears in her eyes

k:maa saheb(with tearly eyes)

ds:hum thik hain komal

here the crown was placed on uday's head and he was taking the oath.

uday's raj tilak was done, whole jaigarh was celebrating in joy.

a huge fair was arranged.

uday too joined the crowd with the youngsters except manyata

evil shadow "alvida yuvraj"

uday was facing his back at her, when a pointed archery came speedingly komal saw that

k:UDAY...

he turn around

the eyes of the evil spirit were widened.

uday jumped out of the way.

spirit:(whispering) "saarthak..."

to be cont...

so friends how was this, i know it was not so good
but i tried my best, yaar mom is sitting beside me all the time so cant help it
i will try to give the next update soon
till that
do hit like and comment
LadySosostris thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow nice update Jazzy.cont soon.Loved it from the bottom of my heart:D
writerjenny thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Choco.Swiss

wow nice update Jazzy.cont soon.Loved it from the bottom of my heart:D

thanks dear😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWSOMEEE...UPDATE LOVE IT
HUUHHH...KAMINI j
VIJAY BHAIA,JAGAT AND UDAY SCENE WAS SUPERB
OMG OMG OMG...LAST SCENE WAS SCARYPLZZZUPDATE SOON THANX FOR PM
HunsraJ thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG ... that was scary , but very interesting 👏.
Jai , as always ... showing her superiority to others. Thank goodness for Vijay Bhai who came to Manyata's aide. Jaggat & Vijay teasing Uday was very nice.
Enjoyed it!
Do continue soon &
... thanks for the PM😊.
writerjenny thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: swetsurati

AWSOMEEE...UPDATE LOVE IT
HUUHHH...KAMINI j
VIJAY BHAIA,JAGAT AND UDAY SCENE WAS SUPERB
OMG OMG OMG...LAST SCENE WAS SCARYPLZZZUPDATE SOON THANX FOR PM

thanxx dear😃😃😃😃
i tried my best
writerjenny thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

OMG ... that was scary , but very interesting 👏.

Jai , as always ... showing her superiority to others. Thank goodness for Vijay Bhai who came to Manyata's aide. Jaggat & Vijay teasing Uday was very nice.
Enjoyed it!
Do continue soon &
... thanks for the PM😊.

thanks dear😃😃😃😃
tried my best
wil cont soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow it was great
Cant wait till the next update
angleroops thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
i just want to know that at the end it will be happy ending or not because reading ur prologue i dont feel sooo
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww i loved the conversation between uday vijay and jagat.awesome update cont soon

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