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Manveer ss.
Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-29

In nxt mrng
Manyata sbse phle ready hoke beithi h,
Wo breafast kr ri h,
Br'itni jaldi breakfast aur wo bi manyata tu,kya bat h?
Manyata'maa,papag ko bi breakfast do mere uper kyn njr lga rhe ho.
Komal'of oh ye subha hoti ni ki indono ki baatein suru ho jati h.

Jay vijay bi aate h..
Br'oye manyata puter aaj clge me gundagurdi dikhane ki jrurt ni h,kal phle hi din chot lg gai.
Manyata'kya h papag,aapna aisi cheeze mna mt kiya kro jo posible na ho.
Br'isme imposible kya h bhai?
Jay'aap ko to ldna aata ni,hmko ldna aata h to ldne ni dete.

Br vijay ko dekhte h.
Vijay'kya h?menu ki dekh rh si.
Br'q meri aankhe h main to dekhuga.
Vijay'aise mt dekha kro,aise dekhte ho to lgta h,shadi krane ki soch rhe ho.
Manyata jay hsti h.

Br hapy'ha shadi krne ki soch rha c main..
Manyata-jay'hawww..maa aapki shautan aane wali h..
Komal'hbye rabba,mere bache mere hi dushman h.menhus baatein mt kiya kro.
Vijay'hmeine kya kiya?apke pujniye pati kh rhe h ki shadi krne ki soch rhe h..
Br'oye khote main teri shadi ki soch rha hu.
Komal'mt socho,wrna apke sochne ki chakker me hmara tlak ho jayega.
Br'arey..
Sb hsne lgte h.
Manyata aww.meri maa,ab inhe milegi kaun,aap jeisi khubsurat to milne se ri...

Vijay'ha maa ye bat to h.
Jay'aapko jrur ko mil skta,bt papa k lye 9 chance...
3 no bolte h ha ni to. Bye sham ko milte h..

Wo chale jate h.,

uday home

Uday jagat dhire-2 bolte h
Uday'aise hi chal,dekh abi bolega.
Jagat'ha wo to mujhe bi malum h...
Uday'uday kb tk aaoge...

Jagat'phr bolenge clge me koi jhagda ho to ldne ki jrurt ni h.
Uday'phr bolege bahar ka kuch mt khana.
Jagat'phr bolege ki uday

Phr gr
'clge se kb tk aaoge?

Dono phr bhoot tej hste h.
Maya'isme hsne ki kya bat h..?
Uday'ni ni kuch ni,wo hm sham tkaa jayenge?
Gr'clge me khin jhagda ho to
Ds'of oh ek hi dialouge puchta rhta h yad ho jate h sb ko..
Chup krke nashta kr..
Uday'ha ni to.
Jagat'mja aata h jb ds shout hoti h papa pe to.
Uday'ha ni to
Gr'maa inke samne mt daata kro mujhe.
Uday khada hota h
'ha ds daatna to dekh liya,ab dekhna h aap marti keise ho?
Jagat'o ha ds,apne bete ko maar na.
Ds'pr keise?
Uday'main sham ko nya danda kharid lauga.
Gr'oye khote,niklo jao yha se,khbrdar jo danda leke aaya.
Ds'ha ni to.
Sb hste h.
Or uday-jagat unanti clage chale jate h..

Akash phuchta h delhi,usi clge me...

Or tara bi clge adres leke whi phuchti h..

Tara'pta ni manyata h kha,ruk cal krti hu.
Wo cal krne lgti h.
Tbi uday jgat unanti aate h...

Jagat'oye bhai ye tara h na.
Unanti'arey ha,main aati hu milke.
Uday'hm bi milege.

Wo jeise hi jane lgte h tbi akash
'ary uday,yar main
Wo 3no ruk jate h
Uday'arey akash fatichar tu yha kya krne aya h?
Akash phr btata h.
Jagat'tu yhi pdhega?
Akash'ha
Uday'oye hoye apni fuljhadi ka picha krte-2 aya h.
Akash blushg
Jagat-uday dono'rhne de blushng krte huye bi bhayanak lgta h..
Sb hste h.
Unanti'iske chaker me tara,kha gai?

Manyata nter in clge.
Tara bhoot tej chilati h'manyata..

Saara clge use dekhne lgta h.
Uday sbko na dekh k manyata ko dekhta h..

Manyata smile kr ri h.
Tara jake sb se milti h..
Hug krti h..

Manyata'tara chal clas me beithte h.
Tara'main studnt thodi hu.
Manyata'arey chalna aaj k liye bn ja..
Tara'agr pkdi gai to.
Jay'to di ko janti ho na.
Tara'to phr chal..

Uday'oye jagat chal lal mirchi se phle clas me chalna h..
Akash'manyata bi h main bi miluga.
Unanti'ja mil le weise hi bhadki h tere ko dekh k or bhadk jayegi..
Akash'ni main bad me mil lunga.
Uday'saala darpok.
Jagat'chal bhai.bad me milte h.
Wo dono chale jate h.

In rum sb msti kr rhey h
Uday jagat aate h clas me
All haye
Hmara hero aagya.
Jagat'thanku yar.
Tanvi'jagat tu ni uday ko kh rhe h.
Uday'agar mujhe khoge to wo jagat k liye hoga.
Simriti'ok to kal se hm jagat ko khege.
Jagat'yes,thanku bhai.

Uday door ki trf dekh rha h kb wo ayegi.
Jagat'ldkiya bdi dhire chalti h..
Uday'mehndi lga rkhi ho jeise.
Jagat'bhai aaj sry bol hi denge.
Uday'chl na,avi hi,glti kya ki h,aaj tk bola h jo ab boluga.
Jagat'ha ye bat bi h.

Jay'di aaj sry bolke khel khtm krte h.
Manyata'oye phle bi hmare bich jhagde huye baatein ho jati thi na phr ho jayegi.

Vijay'tara al d bst.main jata hu apni clas me.

Phle tara ko clas me nter krate h to ek ldka aap kal to ni ni thi.
Tara'pr aaj to hu.

Uday'tara idhr aaja.
Tara'haaye tum dono bi ho,wow.

Manyata'chlna jaldi madam aa gai.
Saare apni sits pe jaldi-2 beithne lgte h.
Jeise hi jay beithti h weise hi jagat use side krke uske 7th beith jata h..
Jay ko gusa aata h.
Tara khin or beith gai h.
Or manyata jb tk apni sit dhundhti h tb tk mam
Aa jati h.
Sb beithe
manyata khadi h.
Mam:wht happend manyata beith kyn ni ri ho?
Manyata'mam sit ni h.
Mam'uday k pas beith jao sit khali h.

Manyata uday ko dekhti h or uday manyata ko.
Tara'beith jana,utne me to aa jayegi.
Phr sb hste h.
Manyata chup kr.
Uday hsta hua side ho jata h,manyata smile krti hui beith jati h..
Jagat thout' kitne dino bad hsa h mera bhai..
Jay thout'hy bhagwan dosti kra dena phr re.plz
Tara thout'bhagwan g bchalena..

Mam'hy u yelow suit tum nai ho.
Tara sun ni ri h.
Uday'mam grey col.h ye.
Mam'o sry grey suit tum nai ho.
Tara again nt listen.
Manyata'mam tara nam h iska.
Tara jaldi se'ye yes mam.
Mam'r u new?
Uday' mam kal aapne dekha tha isko?
mam ' ni to
Uday'ha to jrur new h mam...

Mam'ya ryt..
Tara'mam beith jau?
Mam'nam kya h tumhara?
Uday'star
All studnt laughng
Manyata'mam tara.
Uday'uh,no she s layer mam
Nt mam tara nly name h tara...
Again al laughng...
Manyata tightly bolti h'jyada bol rha h..
gadha.

Jagat jay ko janbujh k bol rha h'udhr hona girayegi kya mujhe..
Jay'chup chap jeise beitha h beitha rh.

Uday manyata ki chuni dekhta h,phr manyata bi dekhti h ki ye kya dekh rha h.
Manyata'kya h kya dekh rha h?
Uday naugty'bs kuch dekh rha hu.
Phr manyata apna suit sb check krti h.
Uday cntinuos dekh rha h,'oye hoye kya lg rha h?

Manyata'kya?
Uday'tera suit fhata h...
Manyata achanak shouted khadi hoti h'kya?
Ni,kha se?
Mam'manyata kya hua?
Uday jagat hste h..
Jagat'ab to bs ho chuka h.
Manyata made a childish face'mam main bahar jau?
Uday'ni mam mt jane dena bhaag jayegi..
Uday'dhire se 'beith ja wrna dhire-2 jyada fhat rha h..
Manyata ne side se suit pkad rkha h.
,tara tu idhr aa,mujhe udhr jana h.
Uday dar jata h
'ab aage bhaag jayegi ye.
'ni ni tu beith ja wrna fta to ni h fhat jayega ab...

Manyata'gadha jhuthe.
Mam'manyata whi beith jao.
Uday'ha ni to.

Wo beith jati h...

Manyata thout'keise bat kru isse?wo apne zulfe ki lhet k 7th soch ri h.

Uday notice hr or muskurata h...
Uday thout'haayee addaye jitna dur hou utna pas krti h...
Teri addaye.
Zulfe chod,kuch bol to shi...

Manyata thout'gadha,bnder kuch bolega ni..bol na..

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Pari
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gr8 update pari :)
akash ko manyata se too pyar nahi hua na???
plz cont soon :)
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flawless update pari manveer nok jhok was bst😊
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MY FAVOURITE SS.👍🏼 FANTASTIC UPDATE PARI.👍🏼SUPERB YAAR.👏
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Manveer ss.
Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-30

Mam'chalo btao chemistry h kya?
Uday jagat laughng..

Mam'why u r laugh?

Manyata to soch me dubi h ki wo keise uday se bat kre...

Mam'manyata tum kyn muskura ri ho?

Manyata break cncentration..
'mam koi naraj h to usse keise bat krni chahiye?
Mam'ye chemistry ki clas h ruthne mnane ki ni.
Manyata'of oh.
To mt btao na mam,aap apna swal pucho.
Jagat'mam ask'wht s chemistry?
Manyata also laughng.
Mam angry'wht d hell?wht happend?

Jagat'mam main to isliye hsa aap chemistry ki mam ho or aapko pta ni..

Ye dono kyn hse pta ni.
Uday'mam main to isliye hsa,qki u chemistry teacher nd u don't 9 wht s chemistry?
Shame..
Manyata'main bi isliye hsi mam.

Uday'mam glt bat h maine jagat ne alg alg reason btaye h ye cheting kr ri h.

Tara'ya manyata uday s ryt.

Manyata'chup ho,mam chemistry means c h e m i s t r y.
Ye hota h mam.
Main isliye hsi...

All studnt laughng.

Mam soch me dubi h..
Uday'mam pdhao na,chemistry.
Mam'oh yes.

Mam pdhana start krti h..

Uday took manyata
Manyata took mam

Tara piche mudke
'uday dadi kha h?
Uday'tere ghr pe
Tara lightly shout'kya?

Uday'kyn?kya kam h?
Tara'arey unse mile kafi tym ho gya milna h.
Uday'thik h miladunga.
Abi aage muh kr wrna,phr puchegi wht s chemistry?

Uday again took manyata
Manyata took front.
Uday thout'luk at me manyata..
Manyata use ni dekhti.
Wo ek pagalpan ki trh dekh rha h use..
Again thout'mujhe dekh agar bat krna chahti h to jrur dekhgi dekh..

Manyata suddn use dekhti h.
She thout'dekhne k liye Kh rhe the kya?ab kuch bol de.
Both r eyecntct..

Kuch deir bad.
Tanya'kal se main uday k 7th bethugi.
Simriti'kyn?mujhe apni kis complete krni h,main bathugi..

Uday manyata break eyecntct..

Jagat'mere 7th koi ni bethga kya?
Jay'mt bethna iske 7th wrna kb kya kr de kuch pta ni hota gadha..
Uday'oye ye mera nam h,ullu h wo.
Jagat'corect.
Jay'manyata main bahar ja ri hu.

Jagat'bhai unanti nd akash watng chl jaldi wrna akash pta ni kha jayega.
Saare studnt jane lgte h..
Manyata covring buk,suddn tara'manyata jaldi chal na chod ye sb mujhe bi akash se milna h unanti se bi chlna.
Manyata'arey meri buks.
Tara use pkad k le jati h,uski buks whi rh jati h..

Tara'unanti keisi h tu?akash hi.
Unanti'i m fyn.
Akash'ya me 2.
Jagat'ha pta h,tara tum bta skti ho manyata jay delhi me keise?

Manyata phone pe kisi se bat kr ri thi,side me jake.

Tara'of oh!jagat tera dimag bi pta ni kha h?
Manyata,jay vijay uncle nd aunty sb aye h delhi khali manyata jay ni aye h.
Uday fun mood'kya bat kr ri h?sachi..
Waah hmein lga ye dono aai h,pr aai kyn h or kb?

Tara'uncle g heartatck aya tha,dr.ne delhi hi ilaz h iska to sb aa gye.
Uday jagat unanti all feel embrased.
Unanti'lekin.
Vijay cum'main btata hu.
Phr wo saari bat btata h...

Uday look manyata
'glti ho gai yar,ek ki wjaye 2 pdhne de thappad,ek mujhe dusra jagat ko'

Jagat'iske papa ko heartatck aya tha,or uper se hmari laughage..

Unanti'ds ne kha tha koi bat to jrur hogi..

Akash'uday say sry hr yar.
Uday'akash idhr aa,sry ni boluga,becoz hmare bich jhagda hota rhta H bt sry thanku ni bolte.smjha.
Akash'lekin keise?

Uday'mile h dubaara kuch to socha hoga uper wale ne..
Ha ni to..

Manyata cut cal
'chale ghr,papa ne jaldi bulaya h...

Vijay'ha chal bye.

Uday'oye chlo sb,kal plan krege bat krne k liye...

Uday jagat unanti nd akash wo to chale jate h..

Uday bar-2 phiche mud k dekhta h manyata ko..
Akash'uday jaldi chlna,barish type mausum ho rha h..

Uday'ha aata hu,ye bi lalmirchi jaldi ni ayegi..
To wo chale jate h..

Jay,tara vijay
'ye manyata kb tk ayegi?
Tara'meri wjh se uski buk rh gai clas me.
Jay'sham ka tym ho rha h,clge bi khali ho rha h...
Vijay'main dekh k..
Suddn barish start hoti h bhoot tej...

Manyata apne rum me buk colect kr ri h,tbi rum bnd krne wala aata h,wo gaane sun rha h,or darwaaza bnd krdiya usne,manyata again apni buks chod ke chilane lgi'oye drwaaza khol,uncle darwaaza kholo...

Vijay'tum log gaadi me beitho main dekh k aata hu.
Principal'ye abi tk clge me kya kr rhe ho,chalo ghr,gate bnd krna h...
Vijay'mam wo hmari
Principal'9 xcuse chalo,mujhe pta khin jake tumlog sharab msti kroge.
Chalo.
Jay'9
P:chlge aap log ya apke parents ko kal bulake shikayat kraye...
Tara'vijay phle ghr chal uncle ko bulake layenge.
Vijay'ye princpal ko to jan se mardunga.. Jaldi chalo,papag ko btate h..

Manyata door ko hit kr ri h,window pe chad chad k dekh ri h..
'arey mar gye kya sb darwaaza kholo,mera phone kha h?
Mera phone'oh sit wo vijay k pas.
Hy bhagwan musibat,yar koi to kholo,ander main hu manyata...

Uday,jagat,unanti nd akash ghr phuchte h.
Gr'Arey akash tum aagye beta..?
Sb chup,koi ni bol rha h.
Akash'g uncle..
Gr'chalo,mumy papa thik h.
A:g sb thik h.

Gr'o aaj kya ho gya bde chup chup ho.
Jagat'akash pyara aa gya apka to hmari himat jo hm bole.
Maya'ja jaldi fresh hoke aa..
Uday'kya maa?
Menu bukh ni h.
Gr'khale wrna taqat khtm ho jani h.
Uday'jis din lgega aapko taqat khtm ho gai h usdin ld lena.
Ds'tu kyn apne bacho se panga leta h.
Gr'dekhta hu ki mere hi h ya
Uday'mumy,dady aape shak kr rhe h.
Gr'oye khote pkad k pit dunga.
Maya'chuna mt mere bacho shi kh rhe h,.
Uday'ha
Jagat'ni
Unanti'to...

Uday apne rum me chala jata h,remove s shrt nd blck vest pe h,or apni window k pas khada ho jata h...
Ds'kya hua uday?
Uday'ds tu aa gai,wo phr sb btata h manyata k 7th kya hua tha...
Ds'maine to phle kha tha,ki wo aise hi ni gai..
Uday sad nd dadi hug'ds main ab kya kru?
Mujhe usse bat krni h.
Jagat'ha ho jayega..
Weise uski aankho me dekh k kya lgta h..?
Uday'uski aankho me dekh k phle albhabet a pe hota hu z pe phuchne wala hota hu to dubara a pe phucha deti h.
Jagat'pta h pinky ki aankho me to main a pe hi atka rhta hu.
Ds'puch liyo,a 2 z aata h ya ni...

Vijay'tara phono kro papa ko..
Jaldi
Tara'ha,kr ri hu..
Tara phone me uncle search krti h,to u k albahabet h to wo jaldi jaldi me uday ko cal krdeti h..

Uday'bat to shi h ds tu man..
Tbi uday ki cel bjti h
'hello.
Tara'ha uncle g,
Uday'kaun bol rha h,papa to bna ni abi,uncle kha se bn gya.
Tara apna phone dekhti clng uday.
'o teri uday main hu tara..
Sry wo
Vijay'abe cut mt kr ise hi bula Bula le..
Tara cryng'uday wo manyata clge me khi bnd ho gai h.
Wo principal ne jane ni diya..
Uday shocked'kya?kha pe keise?
Tum log kha naach rhe the,or manyata ko bi o shit..
Vijay phone leta h'uday bad me bol liyo,plz manyata ko dhundh lo..
Uday preshan'main aa rha hu,cal cut.
Akash'kya hua?
Uday'jagat tu aa piche se,main jata hu.
Unanti'hua kya?rain bhoot heavy ho ri h.
Uday phr btata h.

Uday apna bol k weise hi vest me chala jata h..

Jagat'main bi
Unanti'main chalugi,manyata k pas
Jagat'tu kya
Akash'main bi plz
Jagat'lekin
Ds'kam to tera bi ni h,leja inko bi.
Jagat'chlo..
Jaldi.

Vijay jay nd tara clge k watchman se ld rhe h..
Ander jane k liye..

Manyata ander hairan preshan ro ri hoti h
'mujhe bnd krdiya ganda
Niklne de tb btati hu..'ha ni to.

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Fantastic update Pari, Too good.👍🏼
Thank God UV-M & Jagat- J are friends now.😛
Thanks for the lovely update,😊 Now I'm waiting for the next update.😉
Great update dear.👏 👏 👏
Love your work.🤗 🤗
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gr8 update pari just loved it dear ohh what a situation created can't wait for the next update :)
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lovely update PaRi
so good
my fav part was whn
UV ha
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UN to
it was lyk watching de episode


Poor M
UV 2 de rescue !!
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Manveer ss.
Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-31

Vijay watchman se'arey uncle meri bhn clas me rh gai h.
Watchman'jhuth mt bolo,bhen ya koi or,pichle 10saalo se kam kr rha hu,ldke jate h bhan bolke,svre milte h gandi halt me.
Jay'ye kya bttmeezi h,aapko smjh ni aata kya?ek bar.
W:chup rhiye,ab darwaaza ni khulega to ni khulega..

Uday aata h bhaaga-2
Uncl key do,manyata ander bnd h khi.
Watch'ye dekho ek or aaya..
Aisi kaun si bnd h kamre me jiske liye do do ldke.
Uday'oye,main hu thik h dusra kaun h.
W:dusra ye,ye to machal rha h.
Vijay ko gusa aata h wo watchman ka gla pkad leta h'jan se mar dunga kamine kha na wo meri bhan h.
Uday'ha pkde rkh ruk uski pocket me se key nikalu,wo key ka bundle nikal leta h.
Itni saari key dekh k uday cnfused'arey pure sahr ki key h kya ye,saale ruk phle tujhe bnd krta hu,wo watchman ko usi k rum me bnd krdete h..

Vijay'uday manyata pta ni kha h?
Uday'naach ri hogi kisi rum me,main dekhta hu,wo jagat unanti akash bi aa rhe honge,tb tk main lalmirchi ko dhudta hu...
Tara'uday teri shrt khtm ho gai h.
Uday'tujhe keise pta?jrur tuhi churake legai h.
Tara'ni maine ni
Jay'arey jao na,maine churai h.bs jao.
Uday'to pure kapde silwaya krna,pagl.
Wo chala jata h...

Manyata ki ab halat khraab ho ri h,dar lg rha h use...
'wo kamina watchman usko chodugi ni..
Wo phr door bjati h
'koi to kholo.,

Uday bhoot se clas bja k puchta h'manyata ander ho kya?bol na.,

Manyata cryng'papa bchalo mujhe..
Wrna kal mari paungi..

Manyata phr buks ko aise hi plat ri thi..
To ekdum se lyt chali jati h...
Manyata or darne lgti h'mumy,arey sb mar gye ho kya bhagwan g kisi ko to bhejo..


Uday'ye clge hi kbaada h,lyt chali gai.
Phr wo whi cls door bjata h,'koi h ander ya ni.
Manyata bi bhoot tej bolti h'ha main hu,main hu.
Uday happy'manyata ..
Manyata'uday
Uday'tum ander ho.?
Manyata'gadhe puch rha h ya bta rga h,andr hi hu. mujhe bahr nikal...
Uday'bol rha hu kamra bi akela h,tubi akeli,main bi akela,andhera.
Manyata'oye dra mt,weise hi dri hu..
Uday hsta h'weise bs darwaaza khulne ka wait h phr dekh..
Manyata'oye rhne de phr ander hi,tera bharosa ni h..
Uday'pta h niyat or kyn bigad gai qki tujhe meri shrt ni kholni pdegi..
Manyata ajeeb sa muh bnati h mtlb..
Uday phr tej hsta h'mtlb ye ki main vest me hu na,pura bheega hua barish me...
Manyata'rain ho ri h,mujhe bi bheegna h..
bnder,mujhe chua na tune to tujhe chodugi ni.ha ni to.
Uday again lagughg'main whi to chahta hu.
M'jyada mt bol,darwaaya khol wrna..
Uday'ha ha pta h yad h tod degi ek min main darwaaza kholta hu.
Manyata'kholega kya mtlb,tod de darwaaza..
Uday'tu chup rh chabhi leke aya hu..
Manyata'itna sharif kb se bn gya.
Uday'sharif to phle se tha,tujhe sb apne jeise utptang dikhte h.
Manyata'main so jati hu,tb darwaaze ki chabhi mil jaye tb uthadiyo'
Uday'shi kh ri h,ruk tod deta hu..
Manyata'kisi ne dekh liya na to meri bdnaami hogi..

Uday ek pather uthata h,or door k taale me marta h or taala tuit jata h..

To ekdum se manyata bahr aari hoti h jaldi jaldi

Tbi ek awaaza aati h
'kaun h wha.?
Is adhere me kaun chor h?

To Uday uske muh pe hath rkh k dubaara clas me lejata h wal se touch krta h..
Or uday bahar dekh rha hota h,or manyata use dekh ri h...
Uday'ruko koi aa rha h,kisi ne dekh liya to meri izazat khaak me mil jayegi..
Uday bhahr dekh rha h nd manyata use dekh ri h cntinuosly...

Or clge k bahar,jagat,akash unanti aate h.
Jagat'lal oye pinky tubi h..
Tara'main bi to hu,vijay bi to h.
Jay'aankhe h ya button.
Jagat'oye pinky ek bat bta..
Jay dhaka deti h'hat pre ,meri di.
Jagat jake mud me girta h..
Jagat'chi,aacha khasa sukha tha,tune bheegne pe mjbur krdiya...
Akash use hath deta h'jagat hath de.
Jagat hath deta h lekin use bi gira deta h..
Jagat'pinky tujhe hath dena tha,tujhe to uthne ni deta.
Jay'kamina chup ho ja.
Jagat'oye kyn shor mcha ri h,bhai h na to sb thik h..
Or lal mirchi itni jaldi ni tpkegi.ha ni to.
To jagat vijay k kapde gande ho gye h,to wo rain me aake khade ho gye h,or apni shrt remove krte h..
Jagat'le jay le ja ye shrt tune gandi ki h saaf krke le aaiyo.
Jay'chal hat.
Vijay'us hisab se to tu meri shrt dho k la..
Jagat'de main dan me dedunga..

Udhr'wo aadmi,rum me aata h,ye rum keise khula h?
Uday carefuly manyata ki buksleta h'pta ni keisa khula rh gya h,hm yhi soch rhe h...
Wo aadmi lyt dikha k kaun kaun?
Uday weise hi manyata k muh pe hath rkhe,use jaldi se leke bahr niklta h,nd us admi ko rum me bnd krdeta..
Nd relief ki saans leta h nd manyata also..
Dono hsne lgte h
Poisition ye ki uday manyata ko waist se pkda h,nd manyata ne uday ki chest pe hath rkha h.
Both laughng...

Bt phr Lyt aati h.
Both stop laughng...
Nd eyecntct..
Manyata thout'glti ki thi maine na bolke,or kuch jyada hi ho gya tha.
Uday thout'mujhe bi ni pta tha,or bina soche smjhe kuch bi boldiya'

Manyata'chale ghr.
Uday'ha ha..

Wo dono jate h..
Bahar aate h,
Sb dekhte h.
Jagat'phr rona start kr aa gai manyata..
Baarish bhoot heavy speed me ho ri h.
Wo dono bheeg rhe h,nd uday ki njr ek bar phr manyata pe atak gai h...

Akash'yar kuch ajeeb h.
Vijay'tu khud ajeeb h.
Jagat'hahaha,vijay k muh me jwan aa gai h.
Akash'ek minute jagat mujhe bi mud me dhaka de.
Jay'q?
Akash'3 ldke vest me h,main shrt me alg lg rha hu.
Unanti'to mud me girne ki kya jrurt ni.
To akash wo shrt kholta h or faik deta h..
Akash'ab same h..

Jagat'bhai manyata ko hi dekhta rhega..
Jaldi aa..

Uday rukta h,manyata bi...
Manyata'kya hua?
Uday'ek bar phr mere 7th rainy rainy khelegi.?
2nd word me bolu to
Can u dance wid me?
Manyata smile'main yhi bolne wali thi..
Uday hsta h'bs meri body pe ek vest h,cntrl mt khona..
Manyata smile'jaldi jaldi rainy-2 khel wrna rain khtm phr windy windy khelna pdega'
Dono bheege rhe h,baarish tej ho ri h...
Uday passionately use waist se tightly pkdta h..

Jagat'bhai ye kya kr rha h?
Uday manyata ko dekhta h'tune pucha tha na rainy-2 keise khelte h,aise khelte h?
Jagat'oye hoye,main kisko pkdu,pinky mere 7th bi khel na.

Jay'dur hat giradega to..
Mujhe jane de.

Jagat'jb bhai manyata ko tightly kheench skta h to main bi usi ka bhai hu,nd wo jay ko pkdata h nd use bi wo waist se pkd leta h..
Tara'haaye,
Rain me mja ayega.
Wo vijay k pas jati h.
Vijay'ay aise bhaynak se kyn dekh ri h?
Tara'darpok,wo vijay ka hath pkdti h or apne waist pe rkhti h.
Chl kbi to romentic hua kr..

Akash'yar main hmesha piche or alg ho jata hu.
Unanti smile'abi to main bi free hu,chl aaj hm bi rainy ka mja lele.
Jo apne pichle clge me ni liye the...
Akash bi phr use waist se pic up krta h...
Then all 4 couples
Start dancing..

{bck ground}
{male ver.}
'abi abi to mile ho,
Abi na kro chutne ki bat..
(Akash unanti both eyecntct,unanti pic hs shouldr nd he pic hr waist little-2 dance step)
'Abi abi to pasnd aye ho,
Abi abi ruthne ki bat...'
{tara vijay cute smile h dono k face pe,nd both close 2 each other,both eye cntct s glorious face}
'Abi abi to roshni aai h,
Abi na kro u chupane ki bat..'
{jay nt response bt jagat pick hr chin nd passion k 7th use dekhta h,she lost jagat,phr wo jagat k or close aa jati h}
'Abi abi to zindgi shuru h,
Abi abi na kro tham jane ki baat..'
{uday-manyata both vry close each other,romentic eyecntct little blushng face with shine,smile charm face.}}
'hum to haare,maahiya re...
Munde naina,nind tihaare.'
{(he(all 4 boy) twirled her(grls) around,he pulled
her towards him as the distance
between them decreased,wo
dance bhoot fastly krte h.)..


{female ver.}
'teri baajuo me,meri chahte smaaye,
Teri dhadkno ko,meri dhadkne sunaye,
Teri khwahisho se meri khwahishey se riha h.
Teri karwato se meri daastan bni h...
(Manyata puri losly khadi h,nd uday ne usko ek hath pkad rkha h,uday rubbng hr bck Nd she s feel nd swtly smile,manyata smilng k 7th use dekhti h nd uske chick ko rubbd krti h)
'kya sukoon,kya junoon
Hm nva..
'abi abi dil ki suni h,
Abi na kro zmane ki bat..
{akash-unanti totaly lost each other nd unanti feel gud nd kised hs 4head,to akash bi muskurata h nd wo bi use 4head kis krta h}
'abi abi baatein ruki h,
Abi abi dohaharine ki bat.'
(Jay ne jagat ko hug kr rkha h nd jagat ne ek hath se waist pic kiya h,ne ek hath se uske chick ko shla rha h measns ligtly rub kr rha h,or jay ne use cutely hand pe kis kiya)
'abi abi aawaargi aai h,
Abi na kro sambhale ki bat.'
(Tara hste huye usne vijay ko chick pe kis krli,nd apne chick ko aage krdiya ki mujhe bi kis kr,or vijay ne hste huye use kis krta h)
'abi abi zindgi shuru h,
Abi na kro tham jane ki bat.'
{manyata k bheege hair uske face pe aa rhe h,nd uday remove hair hr nd lost hr manyata also smile,both lost in face each other. first kis 4 head,nd then chicks kiss..)
'hm to haare,maahiya re,
Munde naina,nind tohare..'
(She graceful step in uday's arm step,rounding wala jo step hota h wo sb steps krte h,
Nd shes 's one
hand was holded by him while her
other hand was on his shoulder)
'hm to haare,maahiya re,
Munde naina,nind tohare..'
(he(boys) lifts her(grls)
and rotate hr so passionately.
All forgot evry thng..)
All boys catch hr on arms..
Eyecntcts me h sb...
Sbke face pe smile h..

Precap-dono k ghro me phr problem...

Pari

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Posted: 13 years ago
FUNNY & Romantic update Pari, I loved it.😳 😳
All 4 couples dance scene was superb👏 & this is my fav. song yaar.😉
Awesome update. 👍🏼I like Akash in this SS.😆
Precap was little scary, I hope everything'll be alright between UV & M.😛
Thanks for the regular update.😊
Great job.👍🏼
🤗 🤗

Edited by sonam2801 - 13 years ago

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