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Posted: 13 years ago
Manveer ss.
Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-26
Uday'jagat main ye buks return
krke aata hu...mera yhi wait kr..
Jagat'g bhai...
Uday chala jata h..
Jay aati h or jagat ko dekhti
h'jagat jagat.
Jagat'oye hoye itne pyar se kaun
bula rha h..'wo bi idhr udhr dekhta
h. Jay'jagat.
Jagat'kaun .tu pinky kya kr ri h
yha?
Jay'why r avoid me?na di kuch
bta ri h na tu...delhi keise..aaye.
Jagat'oye punjab bhul ja,delhi
aana pda kuch bhulane k liye,or
yha main nya hu mujhe bat ni krni
kuch..
Jay'arey ek min.punjab me to bda
cheda krta tha,yha kya?
Jagat uske ekdum close jata h,i
don't 9 nd lyk u nd u r sis.dur rho.
Or ha apni bhan ko bol de,mere
bhai se dur rh.
Vijay cum'chad ja us pe,dur hat
isse,or ek bat bta tujhe apne bhai
or manyata k bich hmesha se
kuch alg tuning ni lgi.
Jagat sad ho jata h'tumhein lgta
tha,mujhe pta tha..lekin manyata
ne sb..
Vijay'oye manyata ko kuch mt
boliyo,smjha..pta ni uske 7th kya
kiya tha,wo jb se delhi aai thi tb
se kamre me roti thi,sad thi...jb
puchte the tb koi ans.ni...
Jagat'tumlogo se bat krna hi
bekaar h...'lekin dur rhna.
Jay'lekin kuch to bta.
Jagat'teri ehsaanframosh bhan
ne ni btaya to main kyn btau.?
Wo bolke chala jata h...
Vijay'kuch to hua tha,pta lgana
pdega...
Jay'ye ullu bdal gya h...
In liabrary
Uday buk dhundh rha h,or
manyata bi msti me gaana gaate
aati h buk pdhte pdhte,uday bi
buk read krte-2 chl rha h...
Manyata'anarkali,
Ekdum se unki tkker hoti
h,manyata apna sir pakad k buk
uthane jati h,uday ko bi bhoot tej
chot lgi hoti h,to wo sir pkad k
Khada h..
Manyata irritate hoke'ruk mujhe
buk uthane de tb btati h,ha
ab...chup...
Uday bi irritate hoke'ha bol na
chup kyn...
Both in eye cntct...
Thodi deir bad
Manyata embresed feel krte
huye'keise ho?
Uday apni buk uthata h'jeisa
tha,weisa hi hu..
Manyata'hmm..or
Phr sudden vijay bhagta-2 aata h..
'manyata bhai,hmein bchalo ye
gunde mujhe mar rhe h.'
Vijay manyata k piche chup jata
h,or wo ldke'wo sharm ni aati,ldka
hoke ldki ka shara le rha h,darpok.
Manyata'ha tu h na blwan chal
nikal yha se...ja..
1ldka aditya'oye,bdi sherni bn ri
h,hm 9h,tu akeli..
Akhil'apne aashiq ko chod or tu
panga na le,ja tu.
Uday unki baatein sunke gusa ho
rha h.
Vijay'ni manyata mt jana.
Aniket'weise,tu njuk si,tikhi mirchi
jeisi aise darpok ki grlfrnd aachi ni
lgti.
Wo sb kuch library me ho rha h.
Sir'ye kya shor-sharaba lga rkha
h,jo krna h baahr kro..
Jao,ye liebrary h..
Aditya,'vijay tujhe to main
choduga ni,smjha,wo manyata ko
dhakka deta h,or vijay ka hath
pkad k le jata h...
Aniket'apne senior se keisa
behave krte h main btauga.'
Jay'di vijay..wo
Manyata'jay jaldi chal wrna vijay
bhai pit jayenge...
Manyata bhagti h.
Jay'uday tum bi chalo.
Uday rudely'main kya naukr lga
hu,wo bolke chala jata h.
Jay sad hoke chali jati h.
Abi aniket rod se vijay k uper hit
krne wala hota h tbi manyata or
jay milke uska hath pkad leti h.
Sb clge k hste h,ki do ldkiyo ne
pkada h..
Manyata'kisi mahapurush ne kha
h apna dum kamjor pe mt dikhao..
Uday jagat unanti bi khade hote
as a oudience.
Jagat'aaj to ho gya beda grg..
Uday 'jhon cena bnegi...
Unanti'dis s 2 much,aap dono kb
se aise ho gye..
Uday'hmari koi glti ni,abi hlp ki sir
pe chedhgi,or phr muh pe ek
tammcha jd k chali jayegi..
Jagat'inse to dur hi rho...
Rahul'wo manyata ka hath pkad
leta h,thik h ispe dum na dikha k
tere 7th ldte h tu to kamjor ni h
na.
Sb hste h..
Vijay'oye chod ise ye meri
Aditya'malum h mehbuba h,teri
kismat bdi changi h.
Pr manyata ki kismat futti h,tera
pyar to kisi se tere liye ld bi ni
skta...
Aniket,manyata k hair khol deta
h,'teri khubsurti hr style me
dekhenge...
Manyata use ek slap krne janti
h,aditya uska hath pakad leta
h,or wo itni tightly pkda h ki
manyata ki hath ki chudi uske
hath me chubh jati h,means hath
me cut lg jata h,blooding hone lgti
h..
Manyata ko drd hota h or uski
aankho me tears bi aajate h..
Uday bi dekhta h,use bi feel hota
h...
Jagat uday ko dekhta h use gusa
aa rha h...
Rahul,hath bhoot chalati h,ab to
hath pkad liya,ab chala,wo uski
zulf tightly pkdta h...
'hm is clge k senior h,smjhi wo
kya khte h dada h hm yha k..
Wo manyata chin pkdta h,or usk
kareeb jata h..
Manyata chila ri h,vijay jay ko
pkad rkha h.
Wo jeise hi manyata ki trf jata
h,weise hi uday apna hath us
rahul k muh pe rkhta h...
Jagat'ye bhai bi na,dimag.
Unanti'chup rh,main hoti to uski
jgh.tb to ghode pe swaar hoke
aata..
Jagat chup'bol to tubi shi ri h.
Uday angry'dadag hath hta ldki k
face pe se or iska hath chod...
Usne uska face tightly pkada h
rahul ka chahra lal pd gya...
Aniket'rahul chod de.
Rahul uska face hath chod deta h.
Manyata feel relief...
Uday uska coller pkdta h,sun main
tujhe ek bat btata hu,mard h to
mardo wale kam kiya kr wrna
chudiya phn le..
All boys feel shameness...
Wo use chod deta h,or
automaticly manyata ka hath
pkdta h,or lejata h use.
Manyata bi shocked h ye kha le ja
rha h..
Jagat,unanti,vijay nd jay all
shock, wo bi piche bhaagte h,...
Uday medical rum me jata h,or
manyata k hath pe cotton se
blood clean krne lgta h.
Manyata use innocently dekh ri
h,wo guse me apna kam kr rha h.
Uday stop cleaning,'manyata sad
ki ye ruk kyn gya..
Uday chod deta h,'wo manyata ko
dekhta h,both again uday ki trf se
angry eyecntct,nd manyata soft
eyecntct..
Or wo 4ro drwaaze pe khade h,sb
dekh rhe h...
Uday-manyata ka hath chod deta
h,'or chala jata h..
Jagat'bhai,ruk,pura bndage ab
khud kr..ha ni to
Wo or unanti bhaagte h uday k
piche...
Vijay'manyata aakhir hua kya h?
Manyata sad'chalo ghr chalo..
Jay'bndage to kr,khun nikal rha h.
Manyata'mujhe ni krna,wo bolke
chali jati h...
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Pari
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Pari, Superb update.👏 👏 👏
But UV ko please jaldi se sach pata chal jaye.😍
I love J-UV Bonding.😉
Fight scene was good. UV - the real hero.😎
Thanks for the beautiful update.😳
Great job.👍🏼
LOVE YOU.🤗 🤗
Edited by sonam2801 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
gr8 update pari
it was simply awesome :)
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Manveer ss.
Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-27

Vijay'manyata bhai aapke hath me se khun nikal rha h,ek min.ruko to.
Manyata'vijay bhai meri ek clas h,tb tk aap hmara wait kro,phr ghr chlege.jay chal.
Vijay'wo manyata ka hath pkdta h or apna hanky bandh deta h...ab jao.
Manyata jaane lgti h,jay'yar kuch to btao...
M:chup chap chal.

In clas...
Uday shant beitha h,he thout hr...

Ek ldka'arey uday shant kyn beitha h?
Uday'to kya halla mchau.
Jagat'ha..clas hota kisliye..
Uday'weise is clge me sbse khas pta h kya h grls bhoot stylish piece h..
Tanya'haayee,or wo sb stylish piece tumpe fida h.
Uday'jhuth mt bol kal to jyada ldkiya jagat pe bi lyn mar ri thi..
Simriti'lekin mrng me jo tumne bhng ki rahul gang ki jo dhulai ki wo aacha tha,wo style dekh to main or flat..
Tanvi:kuch lgti h kya wo?
Sudden manyata nter in rum
Uday bolte-2 usko dekhta h..
Jagat'bol na,
Uday'ni tanvi aisa kuch ni h,us ki jgh koi hota main uski hlp krta...
Jagat'ha ni to...

Teacher cum
'hello frnds keise h aap sb?
Uday nd jagat'me rapchick.mam.
Uday'aap btao
Mam:whts u r name?
Uday'uday mam.
Mam:oh,u r vry cute..
Manyata thout'ye kamini pdhane aai h ya lyn marne..
Uday'mam.u r 2 beautiful...
Mam:oh thanku.
Jagat'mam.kuch mere lye.
Mam:sry,bt ek suggestion dungi,uday jeisi fitnes bna lo thoda,abi tum haddi lgte ho.
Firstly laugh manyata...nd jay.
Jay'di ye to tumhara nam diya h..
Manyata'ha to whi to h.
Jagat'bhai wo hs ri h dono.
Uday'chil na,mam,aap bi koi balloon ni ho..
Mam 'balon kyn?
Jagat'njuk chizo ko komal chizo k 7th compare krna pdhta h.
Mam.-chalo aaj hm pdhege.
Jagat'o god mam.aap pdhane aye ho.
Mam:mtlb
Uday'arey my bholi mam.first day plz 4give me.
Mam'ok chalo baatein krte h.
All studnt happy...
'chalo sb apna nam btao..uday jagat ko chod ke...
Sb btate h.
Jay ki baari aati h.
'mam.jaynandini.
1studant'Rohan'aresing style se hot,or nam se matarani.
Jagat nd uday laugh.
Mam:shutup guys,aap btao.
Manyata khadi ho hoti h...
All boys'bhan g.
Manyata unhe fake smile se dekhti h.
Ankit'tumhara nam i think maynandini,jaynandini ki bhn ho na isliye .
All studnt laugh.
Uday nd jagat also..
Manyata'aap ek bar idhr aaoge...
Ankit uth ke uske pas aata h.

Uday'pita saala.

Manyata tightly ankit ko pkdti h,bahr chal mere gunde khade h...tera huliya bigaad denge.
Ankit dar jata h'main to mjak kr rha tha.
Jay'ha koi bat ni or mjak kr,wo bi mjak me pitege.
Ankit'nam kya h tumhara.
Jay'manyata nam h iska...
Ankit suddn'mam.inka nam manyata h..most beautiful name..
Phr dhire se wo bolta h'bol diya,plz 4gve me...

Manyata'chal ja,agar dubaara mere se jan ldaya to..
Uday'to ankit tod degi ya uthake faik degi..ja beith ja...

Ankit'sry yar..frnds.
Manyata use handsshake krti h,uday dekh k jealous hota h.
'ye ldke saale kamine hote h,mauqa mil ni,hath mila lete h.
Jagat!kya hua chod na...

Mam:manyata tumhein ye chot keise lgi.
Manyata 'mam wo
Uday'chudiya phne se fursat ho tb to dekhe...
Mam:khun bi bh rha h.
Manyata'mam.ab wo kya h na,hm importand person to h ni ki khun ki jagh paani nikale...

All studnt again laugh.uday Jagat bi dhire-2 hste h..
Uday'mam.jwan lda ri h.
Manyata use dekhti h,'to main apni mam se lda ri hu tujhe kya?
Uday'apni mam.se kya mtlb,paida kiya h kya?sbki mam h ye.
Manyata'sbki mam se kya?sbne paida kiya h kya?
Jagat uday ka hath pkdta h beitha ja bhai...
Sb bdalenga lekin ye ni bdlega...
Jay'di beithna kya kr ri h.?

Mam:stopit both of u,bacho ki trh ld rhe ho,mujhe kisi ne paida ni kiya?
Jagat-uday,manyata-jay shockng shout'kya?
Mam'mtlb,tumlogo me kisi ne paida ni kiya,mujhe meri maa ne paida kiya h.
Manyata'kamal h,sbki maa hi paida krti h..
Uday jagat se'jhuth bol ri h,mere se isne ek bar kha tha ki ise bhagwan ne paida kiya h.

Mam:ok,now sitdown...ek bat btao sb,boyfrnd kis kis ki h..
Uday'hmein ni pta,hm boys me intersted ni h...
Jagat'hmari trf mt dekhiye.
Mam:o god,both jagat nd uday u r 2 naugty.boyfrnd pucha h ofcourse grls k liye h.chalo ab btao g/f or b/f kis kis k h...
Jagat'meri to bnte bnte rh gai...
Ankit'meri to 2-2 h.
Tanvi:yes mam.h.
Simriti'mam.ek raj nam ka h,lekin agar uday ha krde to..
Uday smile..
Mam:jay tum btao.
Jay'mam.ek tha jo aacha lgne lga tha,lekin aaj kal uska behave dekh k man krta h muh tod du uska..
Jagat use dekhta h,or jay bi use dekh k beith jati h...

Mam:uday,sb tumhara wait kr rhey h,grlfrnd kbi love.
Uday'mam.main bhoot special hu,mujhe kisi se pyar ni hota,sb mujhse pyar krte h...
All grls manyata jay ko chodke.
'he s ryt mam...
Manyata thout'gadha,iska sbkuch jyaga lekin attitude ni..
Jagat thout'thank god,mujhe lga bol dega.

Mam:ok,guys,aaj ka din Bhoot aacha gya..thanx all of u..
hm kal pdhai start krege,aaj k liye bye..

Uday'mam kal bi buk leke mt aana,kal aapki feelings janani h...
Mam smile'ofcourse bye...guys.
All studnt
Bye mam..

Sb jaane lgte h...
And last uday manyat rum se jate h..jagat jay phle hi bahr nikal gye h.

Manyata bi jaldi jati h,uski chunni desk me fhas k fhat jati h,manyata stop.
Uday also stop ki kuch kapde fhatne ki awaaz aai h...
Manyata ki chuni desk me fhansi k to uski chuni uski body pe se remove ho ri h,wo thodi si chuni pkad k khadi h,or frusted ho ri h uski hath me buks bi h to buks sambhal ri h,or chuni bi..
Or bol bi ri'nai chuni thi puri fhat gai,desk local cmpany k h.pagal clge wale,
To uday aata h dhire-2 uski trf,uske pas aake khada ho jata h..
Manyata'jra jay wo meri chun...stop ki ye jay ni uday h...

Both r in eyecntct..
Uday aage-2 hota rhta h manyata piche-2 ho ri h..

Manyata k hath se buks gir jati h,both r vry close..
Manyata touchd d dest nd uday us dekh rha h.
Uday dhire-2 uske face ki trf bdhta h,manyata ko lga ye mujhe kis kr rha h.
Manyata ne apni aankhe bnd kr li,nd uday uski face se apni njr hta k side se desk me se uski fhansi chunni hta di...
Manyata ki eyes abi close thi,uday use dekhta h nd wo bckstep leleta h..
'chunni nikal di h,isme aankhe bnd krne ki jrurt ni thi...'
Manyata open d eyes nd feel embrased..
'wo thank.
Uday wha se chup chap chala jata h...

Manyata buks uthati h,or chali jati h...

Jay'di aapki chunni fhat gai h.
Manyata'bta ri h ya puch ri h...chal ghr.
Vijay bhai Aap gaadi nikalo..hm aate h..
Wo 3no bi aate h
Jgt'bhai,gadi main chlauga,mrng me to hitler chalne ni deta h...
Uday'ha chla liyo,mere bhai..
Unanti'bs ghr phucha dena..ha ni to.
Vijay'aa jao,manyata jay bhai..
Wo 3no bi whi hote h,or wo 3no bi...
Sb ekdusre ko dekh rhe h,bt avoid kr rhey h..
Vijay thout'aakhir aisa kya ho gya h,sbki chodo uday manyata itne aache dost the wo bi aise...
Aaj puchuga.
Sb happy sad hoke chale jate h.

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woww pari i loved d chapters sry comment nahin kiya lekin bahut acha hain plzz upd8 soon👏
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Fabulous update Pari.😛
It's my second favourite SS first one ls also your's.😉
Thanks for the beautiful update.😊
Please clear all misunderstandings between M & UV.😍
Great Job.👏 👏 👏
LOVE YOUR WORK,👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
sonam hlp krogi.
Yar main soulmate ka nxt part apne fb page pe update dene ki koshish kr ri hu,pr wo ho ni rha h...
Kh rha h link blocked ho gai h..
Or sb kuch post ho rha bs soulmate part ni ho rha h.
Bta skti ho kya kru?

Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maneet..

sonam hlp krogi.
Yar main soulmate ka nxt part apne fb page pe update dene ki koshish kr ri hu,pr wo ho ni rha h...
Kh rha h link blocked ho gai h..
Or sb kuch post ho rha bs soulmate part ni ho rha h.
Bta skti ho kya kru?

Pari

Pari tum link post karne ki bajaye wahan pe apna episode hi copy-paste kar do na link open karne ki jagah direct episode hi dikhega. Pahle tum mujhe apna FB Page ke bare mein toh batao.I love your both SS. Aur main humesha hi unka wait karti hoon.
LOVE YOU.🤗 🤗
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swty sonam main daily episod hi update krti hu,link ni deti.phr bi ni ho rha h.
Nd tum ho fb pe.?
My fb acc.parimishti nam se h.
Nd my page name uday aka ashish kapoor
2.ashish kapoor ak.
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hey pari dear sweetheart😃😃
so sorry dear😭😭
sweety i was too busy🤢,even i was unable too read ur ss😭
but now i read all the parts of the week in one go😉
they were awesome sweety👏👏👏👏👏
itni misunderstanding between our beloved manveer😕
but uday and jagat ki masti was awesome and hilarious😆😆
plz forgive me and this parts were g8⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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