Lights, Camera, Confession! - ManVeer OS - Page 4

Fia dear where were u until now??? U have written such a lovely OS...when I was reading this I can see each n every scene In front of my eyes!!! Loved it dear... But I have a request for u to write such os time to time...thanks for such a masterpiece and PM... 👏 👏 👏

awesum os yar👏 loved it

Awesome OS Fia... I loved it. Hugs... And I can Imagine UV with that Im sexy and I know it smirk...😍 I was actually imagining the moment... It was beautifully written...

Take a bow fia , it is simply amazing 😛

i loved it.
Grt job fia

pari

omg...hey fia tht was just awesum, amazing, beautiful, wonderful, terrific,mindblowing,fantastic, fantabulous, fabulous yaar...👏

Originally posted by: famin

awesome.. awesome.. awesome..well done dear👏👏👏

Thank youuu so much 😳

Originally posted by: ilvuday

awesome work..i loved ur os...it was so nicely written i cant w8 for suj an epi in dek...i vld love it...nyways gr8 update👏...keep it up😃

Thank you so much 😊 . Yea I would love to see something like that too 😉

Originally posted by: mandygill

OMG! so amazingly beautiful! i really wish that it actually happens in the show, since they both r dating in real life why can't they show bit intimacy onscreen keeping the decency intact!

Thanks a lot Mandy 😊
I wish so too. It's high time now. There should be a romantic scene shot between them! Dying to see one.

Originally posted by: DEKfan2012

Wow fia, it's lovely. Loved reading it! Do write more, would love to keep reading...

Jay

Thanks Jay 😊
Will try to.

Originally posted by: Niha2012

wow amazing post fia well done keep it up👏

Thanks Niha 😊

Originally posted by: alissa345

AWWW...omggg Fifu baby I love you 🤗
It was so so so damn beautiful
Couldn't help but smile like an idiot while reading it 😳
Omggg simply amazing...every single detail was just superb 👏
I loved the self conflict within her...it was just amazing 😃
And uday ignoring her was the best, she wanted him bad 😆
And how can I forget to mention the kiss...Lol superb, out if the world 👏
I could actually imagine them doing all that 😆
Awww so finally so listened to us and wrote an os, love you so damn much for that
Thank you so much Sis and keep coming up with more stuff 😉 As I love reading it 😛
Lol my comment is getting a bit too long 😳 But it's you so who cares I can even write essay on her 😆 super dooper awesome job baby...absolutely stunning...love ya 😃

Alissaaa baby I am so glad you liked it. Love you moreee 🤗
The inner conflict is something I have been wanting to see badly in the show so I thought of writing it down myself 😆
Hahaha you know how much I like Uday ignoring her right? 😉
Oh yea baby. She wanted him REAL bad 🤣 . But I kept my OS on a PG-13 level 😆
Yaaayy I am so happy you liked the kiss. I am honestly not good with writing romantic stuff and this was like my first time and I was so worried if it came out well. But you liked it so that's all that matters 😃
Lol eeep. Yea I'll try writing more.
Thanks one again sis for the beautiful words. Love you 😊

Originally posted by: -JEHAN-

WOWWW...😍

m speech less...lost in manveer land!!

that was beautiful amazing and funny at times!!amazing work FIA..👏

i hope show main kuch aisa ho...☺️

starting from the title i loved it...and then manayta and her self-talk was sooo funny...i wish hum M ki aisi self-talk show main bhi dekh saken really we should tell this to SA manayta should say something like that for uday...😉

and then how u wrote all party sequence from M pov...woww...👏all detalis...amazing..well written...

i think we should thank all those who threaten u to right it..soumya,gabbu,anny and all other...THANK U GUYZ...🤗

and FIA (in uv's style)dil cho liya tum ny humara...😆

aisa confession hona chaiye show main bhi...😉

fia u should write more...plz...

love u for this wonderful and beautiful OS...🤗

Thank you Jehan 😳
Lol. I hope so too yaar 😍
I;m so glad you liked the title. It just came to me suddenly like completely out of the blue and got stuck in my head so I was like oh hell I'll just use this as the title 😆
I am dying to see such self talk of Manyata in the show so I thought k main khud he likh loon 😛 . Hahaha. Glad you liked the party scene 😃
Hahahaha yea they are really happy that their threats finally worked their magic. Lol.
Hayeee Uday kay style main ☺️ . Lol.
Yea I'll try to write more.
Thanks once again for the lovely words Jehan. Love you too 🤗

Originally posted by: smiley12

omg fia ye tu ne kia kia mein tu teri fan ban gayi amazing os dear👏👏🤗i want to hug u lovely post 👍🏼i hope what u write comes true😍😍

Hahahahaha that rhymed 😆
Thank you so much 🤗
Yea I hope so too. Fingers crossed.

Originally posted by: Swini01

Wow awesome yaar Fia.loved it 2 the core.:-))n manveer confession n beach scene waz so cute n romantic.i m speachless yaar.

Thank you Swini 😊 . Glad you liked the beach scene. I have always wanted to watch a scene in the show where they'd go back to the beach where they first met 😍

Originally posted by: Inkpen4877

Fia! this was lovel! I hope you continue to write more!

Thank you Kat 😊 . Will definitely try to write more.

Originally posted by: livvy

LuvEd it

Thanks.

Originally posted by: Archi02

Wow...it was just amezing. Asweme writing. I just hope, it will happen in the show. Thanks for such a beautiful story.

Thank you so much for the lovely words Archi.