OMG OMG OMG!!! FARAH! yea im using ur real name for the first time!somebody pinch me! Am i dreaming?? 😲
OMG YOU ACTUALLY DID IT!!! FINALLY!!!!!!!! sorry please give me a minute to get over the shock!
okay im good now
Fia that was brilliant! But even before i start on that, let me just say, I TOLD YOU SO! I told you that you were a talented girl wasting away her skills..its me u know, i juts knew from day 1 😛
and now im reading the comments and im just thinking seee...Oh man im so happy you finally wrote this..actually right wen i saw ur pm saying surprise i just knew, but was still praying that it will turn out an OS..and it DID! 😃
Okay well moving on to teh actual thing...frikken OMG I dont even know how to descibe it...i think the perfect word is uhh...involving? well wat i really mean to say is that i honestly felt like i was WATCHING an episode of DEK and literally i was smiling from ear to ear and some of ur one-liners literally made me cover my mouth with my hand.. is was just like 😲...BRILLIANT
i loved EVERYTHING about it..especially Manyata's thought process, the VB and her scene was really cute and i hope we see something like that the upcoming week
Manyata's flashbacks were so cute..especially at teh kiss part .. 😲 .. gosh only FIA could put so much EMPHASIS on that thing 😆
then the actual party was such a masterpiece..like the whole drunk Manayta thing was such a brilliant idea caz quite honestly i was wondering hmmm how is she goign to get UV - girls + Manayata ..and then i loved how Manayta got so bold after one drink 😆 ..oh please CVs learn something!
then after that what happened 😲..awww Manyata cried..but a good thing she did caz thats how UV came!! Oh please something like this happen in the show!! pleasee...LOL i sound so despo ..hehe
They kissed!! 😍 Gosh the whole ending scene was so beautiful
Favourite line: Manyata was the first to break the kiss as she was running out of breath and Uday didn't seem to like that she just cut short their beautiful moment
🤣 🤣 🤣
OH Fia!
All I have to say is that I loved ur OS, it was amazingly written but more than that I love YOU for finally writing this and showcasing ur talent because girl u are sooo talented!! And puh-leez, dont like go sit bak on ur chair and be like okay done. You got many more to write! 😛 ..and no im never gonna stop threatnening u about it 😈 caz u pagal larki would just sit and waste away her talent otherwise...to be honest im not worried..once ur started, watch, u'll get addicted to writing 😛
hmm let's see..is my post the size of ur OS yet? Almost there HAHA
Okay c ya FIFI...actually NO - WIFEY caz ye made me proud 😉
And OMG I forgot to add one thing
BEACH!!!! 😍 again ... please this happen in the show! 😆
Edited by xxDaydreameRxx - 13 years ago