Lights, Camera, Confession! - ManVeer OS - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome work..i loved ur os...it was so nicely written i cant w8 for suj an epi in dek...i vld love it...nyways gr8 update👏...keep it up😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG! so amazingly beautiful! i really wish that it actually happens in the show, since they both r dating in real life why can't they show bit intimacy onscreen keeping the decency intact!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOWWW...😍
m speech less...lost in manveer land!!
that was beautiful amazing and funny at times!!amazing work FIA..👏
i hope show main kuch aisa ho...☺️
starting from the title i loved it...and then manayta and her self-talk was sooo funny...i wish hum M ki aisi self-talk show main bhi dekh saken really we should tell this to SA manayta should say something like that for uday...😉
and then how u wrote all party sequence from M pov...woww...👏all detalis...amazing..well written...
i think we should thank all those who threaten u to right it..soumya,gabbu,anny and all other...THANK U GUYZ...🤗

and FIA (in uv's style)dil cho liya tum ny humara...😆
aisa confession hona chaiye show main bhi...😉
fia u should write more...plz...
love u for this wonderful and beautiful OS...🤗
Edited by -JEHAN- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow fia, it's lovely. Loved reading it! Do write more, would love to keep reading...
Jay
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg fia ye tu ne kia kia mein tu teri fan ban gayi amazing os dear👏👏🤗i want to hug u lovely post 👍🏼i hope what u write comes true😍😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow amazing post fia well done keep it up👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow awesome yaar Fia.loved it 2 the core.:-))n manveer confession n beach scene waz so cute n romantic.i m speachless yaar.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😲
Fia!🤗
THIS.IS.AMAZING.👏👏👏
Every sentence in this OS seems so gracefully written. I have such a BIG smile on my face after reading this OS.
LOVED IT.❤️

I hope this happens in the show too!😍
OMG,I might just die if it did.😆

Please do write more because your writing is marvelous!Thanks for writing this one.
AND...thanks for the PM!😊
Love,
Piggies😳
Edited by Piggies - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG!!! FARAH! yea im using ur real name for the first time!
somebody pinch me! Am i dreaming?? 😲
OMG YOU ACTUALLY DID IT!!! FINALLY!!!!!!!! sorry please give me a minute to get over the shock!
okay im good now
Fia that was brilliant! But even before i start on that, let me just say, I TOLD YOU SO! I told you that you were a talented girl wasting away her skills..its me u know, i juts knew from day 1 😛
and now im reading the comments and im just thinking seee...Oh man im so happy you finally wrote this..actually right wen i saw ur pm saying surprise i just knew, but was still praying that it will turn out an OS..and it DID! 😃
Okay well moving on to teh actual thing...frikken OMG I dont even know how to descibe it...i think the perfect word is uhh...involving? well wat i really mean to say is that i honestly felt like i was WATCHING an episode of DEK and literally i was smiling from ear to ear and some of ur one-liners literally made me cover my mouth with my hand.. is was just like 😲...BRILLIANT
i loved EVERYTHING about it..especially Manyata's thought process, the VB and her scene was really cute and i hope we see something like that the upcoming week
Manyata's flashbacks were so cute..especially at teh kiss part .. 😲 .. gosh only FIA could put so much EMPHASIS on that thing 😆
then the actual party was such a masterpiece..like the whole drunk Manayta thing was such a brilliant idea caz quite honestly i was wondering hmmm how is she goign to get UV - girls + Manayata ..and then i loved how Manayta got so bold after one drink 😆 ..oh please CVs learn something!
then after that what happened 😲..awww Manyata cried..but a good thing she did caz thats how UV came!! Oh please something like this happen in the show!! pleasee...LOL i sound so despo ..hehe
They kissed!! 😍 Gosh the whole ending scene was so beautiful
Favourite line: Manyata was the first to break the kiss as she was running out of breath and Uday didn't seem to like that she just cut short their beautiful moment

🤣 🤣 🤣

OH Fia!

All I have to say is that I loved ur OS, it was amazingly written but more than that I love YOU for finally writing this and showcasing ur talent because girl u are sooo talented!! And puh-leez, dont like go sit bak on ur chair and be like okay done. You got many more to write! 😛 ..and no im never gonna stop threatnening u about it 😈 caz u pagal larki would just sit and waste away her talent otherwise...to be honest im not worried..once ur started, watch, u'll get addicted to writing 😛
hmm let's see..is my post the size of ur OS yet? Almost there HAHA
Okay c ya FIFI...actually NO - WIFEY caz ye made me proud 😉

And OMG I forgot to add one thing
BEACH!!!! 😍 again ... please this happen in the show! 😆


Edited by xxDaydreameRxx - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
Fia! this was lovel! I hope you continue to write more!

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