Lights, Camera, Confession! - ManVeer OS - Page 3

Wow...it was just amezing. Asweme writing. I just hope, it will happen in the show. Thanks for such a beautiful story.

Fia my girl Thq for da PM...
It dnt seem to b ur first OS yuh write so well...👍🏼
ya serial mein na sahi kam se kum yahan tumhare OS mein manveer land mei puri tarah se lost hogai...
Ek badi wali tyt si hug swthrt...🤗

Awesome!! I loved the confession!! I really wish this would actually happen in the show!! N u r such an amazing writer!! U really should write more often cuz u did and AMAZING JOB with this one!! I'll really be looking forward to more OS'/FF's/SS' from u 😉

loved it fab sweeety n ty fr mentioning me 😃 loved it wish sth like dis happens 😍

Omg fifa it was awesome amazing superb. U r the best. It was jst like tht i was dying to read. Totely soulfull romance. Whole os was amazing nd specialy on dialouge u nailed it. Manveer kiss was great nd idea of prupossing on beach was superp. Hope to see this in show. It remind me tht once pg said tht she wants ak prupose her at beach. Most amazing manveer ditched party bechari j ke sare sapne tut gaye. Beware fifi nw i want more work from u like this

WOW WOW WOW WOW,someone please plz plz plz give me some special words to praise u, i was already in love with ur writng skills but now i m falling more and more, awww the kiss was damm hawwwttt, OMG OMG OMG wat an OS, u wrote it so well dat it was like i was watching all dose scenes in front of my eyes. FIA u know na dat i was waiting for ur OS since ages,now u finally wrt it n itz like dream come true, BEAUTIFUL CONFESSION ,hope show mein kuch aisa hota, i dont know wat i m writing but i m super duper happy with ur OS...now i m waiting for ur next OS or Ff or SS...thanx for giving such a brillant OS.

Wow Fia that was awsome. Love it. Pls write more.

Fifi...my chupe rustam🤗...itne dino se apn talent ke baare mein hume bataya kyun nahi😳...its was SUper Fantabulous Awesome Brilliant...etc 👏...man I just loved it😳...TAKE A BOW FROM ME...Manyata's confession was so very good...haayyyeee...kaash show mein aisa kuch ho jaaye😍... Now start writin FF or SS...it will be the best seller...I tell u😉...and btw thats an ORDER

fia lovely one you have good writing skills do write more.when i was reading your OS i was feeling that i m watching the serial actually it happened to me always whenever i read any novel.i think it happened to everyone not only me.
manyata's possessiveness n other characters emotions are perfectly portrayed n i think cvz needs to stop writing anything our forum members are best for it.thanks for sharing.