~Waltz of hearts~ FF part 3 Updated page 21

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RuthlessQueen

@RuthlessQueen

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Yay! Finally updated! 😆 Awesome work again! The J/Akash idea is awesome! Those two suit each other. Only thing is they are a trying to ruin ManVeer love 😲 I hope Uday confronts Manyatha about what he overheard, so there would be no misunderstanding between them.

Can't wait for the next update! 😊
Much Love,
xxx

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fia21

@fia21

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Woah that was awesome baby 👏 . Great job. It was really hot ☺️ . Uday's reactions and Manyata's reactions are totally opposite. Usually Manyata would have been the reserved one and Uday would have been wanting to jump on her. I am loving this variation in characters. Jay and Akash doing it was hilarious 🤣 . Wonder what's cooking in their cheap brains. Aww Uday is going to misunderstand Manyata now. Poor girl, will have to wait some more to get what she wants 😉 . Hahaha. Once again great update sis. Love you loads. Mwah 🤗

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Mehwish

@CharmingAngel7

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

U finally updated hve been waitin for it & it was worth waitin... awesome update really loved it... totally hot☺️ Ughh that J not leaving manveer even after marriage😡 ohh akash & J ek dum made for each other😆 they n their never ending evil plans.. hope manveer r able to talk it thru & uday's misunderstanding clears up soon...Ooo u ended it there now cant wait for nxt part plz plz update soon😊 plz pm me when u do update
take care

Edited by CharmingAngel7 - 13 years ago

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kojagoryfan

@kojagoryfan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

u always amused me.when i read dat akash-jay scene i was like🤣🤣🤣.i lov hw u represent akash in ur ff😆.nice update.

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-JEHAN-

@-JEHAN-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

🤣🤣🤣JKASH...🤣🤣🤣

for this gabbu a big tight hug haan...🤗

seriously J ko itan evil hony ki or kya saza mil sakti hai...😉

AKASH🤢 har buri sy buri saza sy barh kar hai!!!

oaky coming back to the rest of update...

WOHOOO...that was hottt...☺️

usually M is kinda shy and reserved and uday ahem what to say about him but here totally different i should say opposite...our M is going out of control...😆but i like it!!!

and the way u wrote there emotions was beautiful...

i hope they will sort out their misunderstanding soon...waiting for the next chapter...

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Havii

@Havii

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#116

Aalu superb. Manveer's inner guilt, desire, love nd hate u describ so very well nd nw lots of missunderstanding. Manyata want him nd his guilt dnt let him allow to close her. J nd akash evil great rab ne bana di jodi. Bt pls manyata ko kapde pahna do us ka pata nahi bt muje sharm aati hai. Nd atlast manyata again in wild mode poor uday hw he will resist her. Love ya. Update soon

Edited by Havvii - 13 years ago

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ChannaMereya

@ChannaMereya

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

haila alisa u really suprise me baby

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Pooja

@Pooja_0910

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Hi Alissa...
THANKS for d PM & SORRY for late comment...
I loved d chapter...it was hot n superb...Manyata trying to impress Uday but Jay create misunderstanding between ManVeer now me looking forward to see what Uday will do?
Do PM me...