New begining:I will always love U chapter5 pg8 upd

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jenny

@writerjenny

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

no no no

how can u leave it here dear

i will die coz of this suspence and curiosity...

who got shot yaar ,arrey ab bata bhi do yaar

i think uday,but this time i want manyata to get shot plz..

ok its upto u dear,i know tum jo bhi karogi accha hi hoga

but ur last line scared me huh..

they can be seperated more of their imagination

plz dont be like old cvs

yeah yeah ab naye cvs toh accha hi kar rahe hai

but plz kisi ko bhi maarna mat..

waise i cant wait yaar abhi update kar de yaar plz plz plz...

arrey yaar ab toh raat mein neend bhi nahi aayegi aur kuch bhi kaam nahi kar paaongi

bas jaldi update kar de yaar

itna best update hai ye

just best and their conversation was so emotional

keep it up

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Mehwish

@CharmingAngel7

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

awesome really liked it... nice updates... loved it... manveer patch up again...
I think Manyata will b the one who got shot as she ran to save udhay & get injured while doing so... pm me too nxt time u update plz😊

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livvy_11

@livvy_11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Pratima nice update and I hav a gut feeling that manyatas shot but its up to u to decide who's shot but pleez update soon and pm me

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Ume Salma Kakal

@sunflower52

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Really good chapter and I am in anticipation what will happen next.

Do continue soon.

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Pratima17

@Pratima17

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: jazzthakur
no no no
how can u leave it here dear
i will die coz of this suspence and curiosity...
who got shot yaar ,arrey ab bata bhi do yaar
i think uday,but this time i want manyata to get shot plz..
ok its upto u dear,i know tum jo bhi karogi accha hi hoga
but ur last line scared me huh..
they can be seperated more of their imagination
plz dont be like old cvs
yeah yeah ab naye cvs toh accha hi kar rahe hai
but plz kisi ko bhi maarna mat..
waise i cant wait yaar abhi update kar de yaar plz plz plz...
arrey yaar ab toh raat mein neend bhi nahi aayegi aur kuch bhi kaam nahi kar paaongi
bas jaldi update kar de yaar
itna best update hai ye
just best and their conversation was so emotional
keep it up

thanks i am writing chapter 5 now i will update it after i finish it !!!!!

dont worry no one is dying marna hi hota toh main us Rajkumari Jay ghamandini aur uski dosto ko mardey ti bomb blast main par kya karu dont wana waste my time writing about them any ways be patient and i will update very soon!!

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Pratima17

@Pratima17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Chapter 5

The news of terror attack and gun shots at Hotel Uday Niwas has speard all over the country.(thanks to the desperate media). Both of the Devgadh and Jaigadh Royal family is very worried about Uday and Manyata. Maharaj Giriraj and Brijraj makes a call to the event manager and tries to find out if Manyata and Uday are fine. Maharani komal and Unnati are both worried and crying whereas Vijay bhai is consoling them saying nothing will happen to his Manyata bhai and Uday banna.

At hotel people are running here and there for their life where one of the Royal has been shot... this was a terrible view for everyone present there. Uday was shocked standing still and couldn't move, he was trying hard to accept the fact what happened just now. Manyata was shaking covered Uday's body like she was hugging him tightly for one last time.

Yess it was Manyata who got shot. Uday then came to his senses while the special police force arrested the terrorists but missed the guy who shot Yuvrani Manyata. Uday immediately took Manyata on his lap seeking for help and Ambulance. It was the first time The Yuvraj Uday Veer Singh felt really helpless and couldnt control his emotions. Meanwhile his body guards came with ambulance and took Manyata's body outside the hotel. The media was rushing to know and flim the person who got shot at the party but Manyata's body was hidden behind the huge group of guards who where making their way to ambulance. One of the reporter spotted Manyata and immediately flashed the breaking news " Yuvrani Manyata of Manyata got shot at Uday niwas hotel". The devgadh family and jaigarh family was watching the news and gets really worried, komal is crying more and demand to leave palace now to meet Manyata right where Uday calls Giriraj and tells him not to leave the Raj Mahal and stay inside and not let any of the Degadh and Jaigarh family to come outside because he thinks it might be dangerous for them as well.

At Ambulance Manyata seems like she is still breathing and wants to say some few words to Uday..

Manyata: (moving the oxygen mask) Uday!! Uday i dont want to die. i want to live a happy life with you

Uday: Bas Manyata hang on there we are nearly reaching hospital. i won't anything happen to you. You just dont lose hope my love for you is not that weak... not even death will make us apart.. we will live a happy life trust me..

Manyata tries to smile and her eyes are nearly closed saying I love you Uday even after i die now .. "I will always love you"

Uday: (Uday is horrifed!! he never imagined that he would see Manyata in this situation at least not after their patch up) Manyata!!! Manyata!! Open your eye!!! Open your eye damn it!! Princesss Princesss Princesss!! I wont let any thing happen to you I promise just please dont lose your hope.

The ambulance arrives at the City Hospital ( one of the top most hospital in mumbai) where the group of highly qualified doctors and nurses are already been arranged and waiting forManyata. They take her to the operation theatre. Uday is really worried and gets the flash back of all the bad things he said and did to Manyata. He is feeling really guilty for not forigiving her even though he wanted to forgive her. He blames hinself for Manyata's condition. The operation is getting long and the team of doctors are trying their best to save Manyata.

Uday makes his way to mandir ( small mandir inside hospital). this is his first time he has visited mandir by himself and he never prayed nor believed in god after his mother's death.

Uday in his prayer: O God 23 years ago you gave me a most caring and wonderful mother but you snatched her away from me 18 years ago... You must remember me on the day my mother was fighting her life in hospital I was standing right here begging you not to take my mom's life but you didnt answered my prayer and took my mom from me which took my trust and belief in you. But today here I am again begging to you for the love of my life who is everything to me. You can take my life but spare Manyata's life. You took my loving mom 18 years ago, then my best friend and fiancee Manyata 16 years ago. But please I dont want to lose the love of my life I have already lost her two times first 16 years ago and second after my break up but luckily i found my Manyata again so pleasee dont let her die..please god

Uday's prayer is distracted by his secretary who informs him that Manyata's operation has been successful and she is out of danger. Luckily the bullet didnt touched any delicate organ of body but she will regain her consciousnesss after 12 hours.

Uday's mood enlightens and lights the diya thanking god. Uday is relief now and can't wait to see Manyata and tell her how much he loves her and he cannot live without her. Before entering Manyata's room Uday calls in Raj Mahal and tells everone that Manyata is out of danger & they can come to visit her tomorrow morning.

Uday enters Manyata's room and sits on the chair next to her bed. He kisses her forehead and lifts her hand and starts talking to her.

Uday: Manyata You are out of danger see i told you that i won't let anything happen to you because my love for you is not that weak. Please wake up soon i cannot see you like this anymore. It really hurts to see like this seriously. When you were kidnapped 16 years ago i really felt so alone and missed you badly and cried all day but my mom convenced me that I will meet you one day and you will be mine forever. but after 3 years my mom also left me and that time I had no one to share my feeling which is why i locked my heart untill I find you again. you are the only one after my mom who understand my feeling and can love me unconditionaly so much that you were ready to give up your life to save me. But not any more once you wake up I will take a very good care of you. I will protect you from every harm. I cant take any risks now.

He again kisses her forehead again and moves her blanket to cover her chest. Uday makes his way out of her room for a call. He is in aggressive mood now, he calls the Commisner and tells him to find the mask guy who shot Manyata by hook or by crook with the ring. The commsioner orders all of the police force to search for the mask guy. Uday's secretary hands him new clothes and tells him to change and get fresh at the VIP room of the hospital.

Uday thanks his secretary and tells him to go home after calling all of his guards to stay outside Manyata's room and not letting anyone except doctor and nurses to enter the room without his permission.

After having shower and wearing fresh clothes Uday feels more relaxed because Manyata is out of danger and she will wake up soon. So he wanted to do something special for her before she wakes up. Uday immediately calls one of the top florists to decorate Manyata's room with her favourite flower violet orchids so that when she wakes up she might feel good and happy looking at her favourite flowers!!!

chapter 6 preview
Manyata opens her eye and sees her whole family including Maharaj Giriraj, Unnati and Uday is eagerly waiting for Her to wake up!!! Uday is now staying at hospital untill Manyata is discharged...

i hope you guys like this chapter.Its all about Uday and his feelings.. i dont know how to follow up the story now but i will try and this time it might take quite long than usual to update chapter 6 since i update everyday a new chapter.

Edited by Pratima17 - 13 years ago

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-JEHAN-

@-JEHAN-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

loved it...awesome...

to be honest...thank god..it was manyata...lolll😉raelly can't imagine UV like that...😭thank u for this...😆

but awesome update...amazing!!

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Swinipriya

@Hawa.Hawai

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Like it nope i loved it Pratima.n yeppi it waz Manayata.anyways cont soon n thanks for the pm.

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Sonam

@-RK_Ki_Biwi-

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Amazing update. Love this update.😳

Thanks for the lovely update & PM.

Great work.👏

Do continue soon.😊

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ilvuday

@ilvuday

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

w-o-w-w...ur update brought tears to ma eyes...i cant imagine uday's condition i cld literally feel his emotions...u wrote it so well...thanku for d update...😃

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