New begining:I will always love U chapter5 pg8 upd - Page 4

Originally posted by: Amibaiju

Wow dear...I think this is grand entry and u r sayin u couldn't making grant!!! U have been manged to make them face to face after 1 year of long distance and cherry on top u made a dupatta scene I think nothing's going to grand enough instead of this scene!!! So chill yaar... loved it...please update next part soon and thanks for PM...

Originally posted by: ilvuday

nw i cant wait for d next chapter...plz update soon mayb tomorrow...plz plz plz...btw i loved it it was fantasticaly written👏

Wow...loved it...really feel bad for manveer...and akash ka end tu meri ankho main a so ly aya...haaa...give me some tissue paper...abviously khushi ky ansoo...lolll..what a end for majnu akhir bombastic laila mil GA I..lolll...CHIKASH...how sweet...loved it...update soon and thanks for the Pm plz do Pm me next time too

Very nice pratima. I m glad to see a more formal n sophisticated manyata. Looking forward to the next update. So many parties coming up.. Here in story and in show. Lol

Originally posted by: jazzthakur

<font color="#0000ff" size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">dear r u kiddin?<font color="#000000">
</font>u want to say that uday's entry that u wrote was not grand</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">actually i agree</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#ff0099">his grand entry</font> this is very short term to appreciate</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">u made it just out of the world<font color="#000000">
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<font color="#0000ff" size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">i read it trice ,seriously u were amazing</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">i dont hav words to say,<font color="#000000">
</font>i hav short of words to praise this</font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">it was just wow!! awesome<font color="#000000">
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<font color="#0000ff" size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">hats of to u<font color="#000000">
</font></font>

<font color="#0000ff" size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">keep it up<font color="#000000"> </font></font>

thanks for your kind wordss!! i am working on chapter 4 and i will update very soon

Originally posted by: jazzthakur

<font color="#0000ff" size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">dear r u kiddin?<font color="#000000">[URL=http://emoticoner.com][IMG]http://emoticoner.com/files/emoticons/crazy-monkey/crazy-monkey-emoticon-014.gif[/IMG][/URL]
</font>u want to say that uday's entry that u wrote was not grand</font>[DIV]<font color="#0000ff" size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">actually i agree</font>[/DIV][DIV]<font color="#0000ff" size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#ff0099">his grand entry</font> this is very short term to appreciate</font>[/DIV][DIV]<font color="#0000ff" size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">u made it just out of the world<font color="#000000"> [URL=http://emoticoner.com][IMG]http://emoticoner.com/files/emoticons/crazy-monkey/crazy-monkey-emoticon-108.gif[/IMG][/URL]
</font></font>[/DIV][DIV]<font color="#0000ff" size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">i read it trice ,seriously u were amazing</font>[/DIV][DIV]<font color="#0000ff" size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">i dont hav words to say,<font color="#000000">[URL=http://emoticoner.com][IMG]http://emoticoner.com/files/emoticons/crazy-monkey/crazy-monkey-emoticon-144.gif[/IMG][/URL]
</font>i hav short of words to praise this</font>[/DIV][DIV]<font color="#0000ff" size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">it was just wow!! awesome<font color="#000000">[URL=http://emoticoner.com][IMG]http://emoticoner.com/files/emoticons/crazy-monkey/crazy-monkey-emoticon-077.gif[/IMG][/URL]
</font></font>[/DIV][DIV]<font color="#0000ff" size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">hats of to u<font color="#000000"> [URL=http://emoticoner.com][IMG]http://emoticoner.com/files/emoticons/crazy-monkey/crazy-monkey-emoticon-116.gif[/IMG][/URL]
</font></font>[/DIV][DIV]<font color="#0000ff" size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">keep it up<font color="#000000"> [URL=http://emoticoner.com][IMG]http://emoticoner.com/files/emoticons/crazy-monkey/crazy-monkey-emoticon-022.gif[/IMG][/URL]</font></font>[/DIV]

thanks for your kind wordss!! i am working on chapter 4 and i will update very soon

After meeting Dadi sahib, Manyata has a short meeting with the highly qualified doctor about Dadi Sahib's progress. Manyata then makes her way out of Raj Mahal and before that she meets all her family at the living room and asks permission to leave. Her family is a bit hesitated to plead this new Manyata to stay home but they respect her issues regarding the Raj Mahal so they just happily greet her and tells her to take good care of herself.

Manyata is staying at a hotel next to Uday niwas so that it is easy to get in the party. Her assistant has booked her presidential suite at that hotel where her party dress is waiting for her. Manyata takes a quick shower and wears a hot red saree (which her assistant organised for her from designer) with a small diamond earring, Uday's engagement ring along with Devgadh's Royal necklace. She is looking so stunning that even her secretary slips the folder on the floor when Manyata steps out from her makeup room.

At the party
Again those annoying papparazi's are desperate to take one shot of the Royals especially Yuvrani Manyata & Yuvraj Uday. Uday has also been requested to attend the party which he kindly accepts because somewhere in his heart he knew that he will get an excuse to see his lost princess. Yuvraj Udayveer enters the party wearing black Armani suit followed by group of guards. There is lot of crowd of rich people and royals in the party right where Manyata makes her slow entry. Every man's eye in the party watches her like a hawk including the king of hawk Yuvraj Udayveer. He gets jealous because of that. Manyata walks straight to the minister who invited her ignoring Uday because he also ignored her at airport.

(Manyata is not a previous desperate character running for her love infront of public witout caring about her responsibilities or image. so here both Uday and Manyata has developed an ego issues by which none of them are ready to make first move even though the love is still there)

The party host announces minister to come on stage to present the women's achiever award to Yuvrani Manyata. Manyata takes the award from Minister who requests her to speak few words about her success.

Manyata smiles gracefully and makes a speech and Uday is keen to catch every word from her mouth
" Good evening ladies and gentle man and khani ghamma to all the Rajasthan Royals present here. I would like to thank minister sahib for this honour. One year ago I Yuvrani Manyata was only known for her scandals, running away from palace, insulting and embarassing royals and the list is endless. (Everyone laughs) But now here you see the same Yuvrani Manyata but she is widely known for her great contribution and social service. The credit of my success goes to the person ( her eye hooks on Uday ) who always taught me to win a lost battle, encouraged me and made me believe that I can be a princess & Yuvrani of Devgadh..So this award is only dedicated to that person thanks..!!" (everyone claps hard and praises for Manyata)

Uday feels a bit guilty about how he treated her when Manyata came to beg him for forgiveness. Uday was fighting with his innerself about unlocking his heart again for this beautiful Yuvrani Manyata who now knows the value of a Yuvraj's true love. But Uday's battle with his brain wins the game and Uday takes his eyes off from Manyata and gets involved with random conversation with the guest.

Manyata is keeping her eye on Uday and she is hoping at least a casual 'hi' from him but seems like he ain't gonna forgive her for wat she had done. Manyata then takes a drink and sit on table where suddenly a group of masked man wit fully armed guns enters the party terrorising the guests. After this terrific view all of the guests starts running with their guards but Manyata' guards is not seen nowhere because she gave them a day off. When manyata tries to run towards exit her engagement rings falls on the feet of the mask man. But all she sees is the ring not the mask man wit gun. Uday is trying hard to get on Manyata but due to the crowd it's is becoming difficult to reach towards Manyata. His guards advices him to leave the hotel right now with them but Uday orders them to leave witout him and he sets off to get Manyata.

The maskman catches Manyata's soft hand very hardly that it bruising red now. Uday looks horrified seeing Manyata in their hand. Uday then punches a big punch to the mask man and grabs Manyata's hand and starts running where Manyata is not ready to leave witout the ring but Uday forces her and drags her out of the
hall and takes her to underground storage room where no one in the hotel knows about. Uday niwas was designed by Uday himself so he knows the map of hotel in back of his mind and this was the secret room of Uday which had a very long password combination hidden behind the large painting.

Uday carefully puts manyata inside the dark store room and he rushes inside closing the door with the painting. The room was very dark then a small light glowed from every corner of the room. manyata is very amazed to see the room because the room is filled with the pictures of Uday's mother pictures with his and manyata's childhood pictures and all the toys of Uday and jewels of his mother. The room looked like it was Uday's heart and sweet memories of his life.

Conversation of Uday and Manyata

Uday: (taking Manyata's bruised hand carefuly on his hand) Manyata app thik toh hain

Manyata: (still looking shocked and is unable to speak words but then she finally utters a word in a Royal way) Why Yuvraj Udayveer Singh ji Why did you dragged me here?. Why do you care whether I am okay or not?

Uday: ( looking surprised to see such a formal and sophisticated behaviour of Manyata) Manyata I dont know anything why I dragged you here but all i know is when that mask man tried to hurt you I couldn't stop myself so i brought you here because there is still humanity in me.

Manyata: Oh wow Yuvraj Udayveer singh ki insaniyat ke liye hum sukraguzar hain par app ko inti taklif uthaney ki zarrorat nahin thi.

Uday:( Uday is very much surprised to see the change in Manyata's language. She is talking like Rajmata and calling him 'Aap' instead of 'TU') Ye sab chodiye Manyata itni bhi kya kimti khazana gir gaya tha oose gundo ke pair(leg) main ki app ko apni jaan ki chinta tak nahi hui aap ko

Manyata: Ye bata na hum aap ko zaroori nahin samajtey lekin hum aap ko bata deytey hai ki woh chiz humey hamari jaan se bhi pyari hai.

Uday: (couldn't control his feelings and stopped thinking from his brain when he feared losing Manyata in those evil's hand) Manyata aap ye mat bhuliye ki Aap ki jaaan bhaut kimti hai aap ka riyasat aur aap ka pariwar sab ko appki zaroorat hai.

Manyata: Aur app ko Yuvraj Udayveer Singh ji aap ko hamari jaan ki kitni parvaa kyun hai? kyun lekar aya humko yaha ? Mana ki humney app ke sath bahot galat kiya hai aur iska sajha bhi hum aajtak nibharahey hai phir bhi aap kis hak se hamara hath thamkey lekar aye hai yaha.

Uday: (Couldn't control his emotions hearing those words from Manyata so he finally confessed) kyun ki hum aaj bhi aap se bey inteha pyaar kartey hai. Itna pyar ki aap soch bhi nahi saktey, itna pyar ki hum aap ke liye jaan bhi dey saktey hai, itna pyar ki saloo aap se door rehney ke baad bhi aaj bhi koi aap ko dukh pahochaey ye hum se dekha nahin jata.

Manyata: tears rolling from her eyes she was dying to hear these words from Uday's mouth and staring at Uday

Uday:( putting his hand on her shoulder and looking into manyata's eye) hann Manyata aap ki jaan aur aap ki salamati hamarey liye hamarey ego aur hamari dukh se kai jyada mayiney lagta hai. Manyata jab humey aap ko airport pe dekha toh aap nahin janti ki kaise humney aapney aap ko aap ke karib aaney ne aap ko galey laganey se roka hai.

Manyata: still crying and taking Uday's hand saying "Par Uday i thought you hated me"

Uday: Manyata humney aap se pehle bhi kaha hai aur aaj bhi keh rahey hai ki hum aap se gussaa ho saktey hai aap se door bhi muskil se reh saktey hai lekin aap ko nafrat kabhi nahin kar saktey hain. hum aap se bahot bahot pyar kartey hai Manyata. Aur ab hum aur aapney dil ko nahin rok saktey humney bahot kosish ki, ki hum aap ko bhul jaey lekin nahin ek bhi aisa din nahi ki humney aap ko yaad nahin kiya hoga. Aap nahin jantey ke aap hamarey liye kya ho Manyata.

Manyata: Lekin itna sab honey ke baad purey ek sal bad aisey iss halat mein aap ye sab kaisey keh saktey hai

Uday: Hah Manyata iss puri ek sal hum ne kaisey jiya hai ye humey pata hai. lekin ab bass bahot ho gaya ab hum aap se ab aur door nahin ho saktey aaj aap ko khoney ka daar ne humey ye eshaas dila diya ki hum aap se kis had tak pyar kartey hai and i need you so badly in my life please forgive me and come back to me my princess

Manyata : wiping her tears and she is completely melted and forgot all her issues and complains and hugs Uday without a word.

They had a long and tight hug which is departed by Manyata's word

Manyata : says Uday aap ne mujhe maff kardiya? (manyata is stopped by Uday's hand that closed her mouth and he hugged her again)

Uday: Bas Manyata bas ab bahot ho gaya ab aur mafi mang kar humey sharminda mat kijiye humney bhi aap ke sath bahot bura kiya tha iss mein aap ki puri galti nahin thi lekin phir bhi humney aap ko ek bhi mauka nahin diya maafi le liye aur hamarey uss gussey ki baja se humney aap ko apney se door rakha. han humey dukh zaroor huwa tha lekin humey hamarey zakham bharney ke liye kuch waqt chahiye tha lekin ab bas ho gaya i can't bear single second witout you Manyata 'I love you '

Manyata: (smiles) I love you too more than you do

They spent hours in each other's arm clearing their misunderstandings and sharing all the things that they did over a year after their break up. Uday kisses her forehead saying "now i will never let you go because today seeing you in danger I realise how much i need you, how much i love you and i can't afford to stay more far away from you."

Manyata: Uday!! Thank you so much for forgiving me and accepting me again in ur life. I feel the most luckiest girl today in the whole world because now I have you and you forgive me and more important thing after all that happened you still loved me.

Manyata and Uday comes out of the room thinking that the problem outside must have been solved by now because the store room is in underground where no one knows and there is no mobile network to contact outside. Uday carefully opens the door and painting and lifts Manyata outisde and starts walking to the exit.

Uday tells Manyata to stay behind him and catch his hand tightly. when they reach first floor they realise that the masked terrorists has hijacked the hotel and the police force is still unable to take them out of the hotel. They look disappointed that they couldn't get more hostage to get money from the rich and royals. Right there they see Manyata the same girl whose ring fell on his feet.

the mask guy comes forward and tells Manyata that she was stupid enough to risk her life for the ring ( he shows the ring) Uday stares at the ring and stares back to manyata where the guy grabs Manyata's hand when Uday tries to take him away from Manyata but his other partners comes and takes Uday from Manyata. Uday threatens them not to touch Manyata which make them annoyed and the mask guy with ring targets Uday with a guy and tries to shoot him right when Manyata pushes him and runs to save Uday

a loud gunshot is heard from the hotel and special police force makes an entry!!! (police and rescue team are always late) they arrest every mask guy but they fail to arrest the one who tried to shot Uday)

The special force is horrified to see a Royal getting shot like this...
Guess who got shot!! Uday or Manyata.. Will they get each other's love again .. Will their fate bring them closer or this time may be farther then they imagined...

Chapter 5 preview
Ambulance arrives ,every news reporters are dying to know who got shot and they are desperate to cover this whole mess. Manyata's and Uday's family watches this on news while they were having sweet deserts in living room after dinner which turns into bitter when they hears the news of the terror attack at Uday niwas..!!..

Beautifully written & interesting story.