New begining:I will always love U chapter5 pg8 upd

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys this is my first ff,ss , os or watever u guys call it. ok so after watching recent episodes My heart completely melted for poor manyata!!! i mean i used to hate herr but then i thought abt it again from her point of view and i realised that it isnt all manyata's fault.. wat she did to uday was wrong but still she is a bechari now..

ok my first FF, OS or SS ( can anyone tell me wat does the ff os or ss stands for) starts after last thursday 5th july's episode where manayta is all alone by herself hated neglected and ignored by her beloved family and her soulmate uday


Chapter 1

Manyata is left all alone in the DS's office and she is crying her heart out with all of those flash backs of uday and her. komal was watching her from behind, she wanted to wipe her daughter's tears but she couldn't after the stunt her daughter pulled during the marriage. Manyata spent the whole night thinking about her family, Uday and DS. then she ran towards DS's room and she confessed the whole marriage fiasco and apologized for being irresponsible and failiing to fulfil the duty of Yuvrani. then manyata headed back to her room she toook a long showerrr in her bathroom crying and washing all the pain. then she came out she went to uday's room who was drinking so badly. manyata couldnt see Uday in this state so she ran to him and begged him for his forgiveness and told him to stop drinking. right then Unnati sees manyata in uday's room and gets soo pissed of that she grabs manyata's hand and pulls her out of uday's room locking room and leaving her without a word. Manyata comes back to her room starts thinking about the whole day. the very first right decission in her life by ditching Akash toook every thing away from her.

manyata talking to her self infront of mirror
Today the most rightful and good decision in my life was leaving Akash and accepting Uday but doing this I lost My parents, vijay bhai and my dearest frien Uday whom i love. they say "you never treasure something or someone untill you lose it" yes i treasure my family and my uday after losing them. the only thing that i have wit me is my Riyasat 'yes' my riyasat my devgadh estate. i dont want to lose this either. starting from tomorrow there willl be a new begining a new manyata who will live for her riyasat and her people.

At morning In dinning table
Everyone is having their breakfast quitely right then manyata enters and takes her chair next to Uday. Uday immediately leaves the dinning table leaving his breakfast pushing the chair harshly, then maharaj brij raj gives cold glares to manayta and leaves the table wen she says khani ghamma to everyone. Jay is giving evil smile to manyata and manyata tries to make a conversation with komal ignoring jay. before manyata utter a word, komal leaves the immediately followed by Vijay bhai. then Jay starts teasing manyata and blames her for her current situation and she enjoys her breakfast. manyata feels very upset and lonely and she heads off to DS's office and starts doing some Yuvrani works ignoring her pain. Dr Sahib pity manyata and tries to help her and teaches her about the rajneeti and royal stuff and leaves her alone to handle rest of works. Manyata spends her whole day working and handling devgardh estate without eating anything. Days passed and manyata is concentrating on her Yuvrani's duty. Uday and Unnati leaves devgadh palace and heads back to their hotel.


preview for next chapter
Manyata is now super serious about her duty and responsibility. she is a responsible Yuvrani who only cares for her people more than herself. but still somewhere in her heart she still misses Uday every singke second. Manyata and Uday moved on wit their own life...

i hope u guys like it forgive me for my poor grammar and leave comments if you want to read next chapter because i will unite manyata and uday sooon... stay tuned and thanks for reading



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Posted: 13 years ago
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i really want something like this in the show as well...loved it..update soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -JEHAN-

i really want something like this in the show as well...loved it..update soon!!


thanks i just finished writing chapter 2 i will put it right away
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 2

Since Manyata is busy handling the Devgadh estate, Uday is also busy in expanding his chain of hotels in Europe. Manyata has distant herself from her family, she hardly speaks to anyone in the family and she also eats her food either in her room or DS's office. She acts tough and cold towards her servants and secretary but the fact is that she is very much hurt. She is so hurt that her family chose to trust Jay over her when the family members knew exactly what kind of person is Jay. She is more hurt that her family completely ignored her and her presence and didn't valued her as the heir of the family.

Meanwhile Uday sets off for London for his new hotel business in Knightsbridge(expensive place in London). Uday is extremely busy expanding his hotel business overseas whereas Manyata is planning to head off for Devgadh without meeting her family and leaves a letter for them saying that she really loved her family, respected Devgadh estate and dadisahib but she blames herself for losing her family. After reading the letter all of her family members starts to feel guilty towards her and decides to head off for Devgadh but at the end of letter she wrote her family not to come Devgadh until DS wakes up because DS needs full medical care which is quite difficult in Devgadh.

Before leaving Devgadh Manyata cuts off all the credit card of Jay and empties her bank account as a final punishment and tells her that she better earn the money herself if she wants to fill up her wardrobe with her short dresses. Because Jay won't be getting single money from Devgadh estate and if she tries to take money from her parents or try to use Jagat. Manyata threatens jay that is she take money from anyone then she will expose Jay and complain in police that Jay tried to kill her during Rajyaabhisekh

After 6months Manyata is a very successful entrepreneur and a great Yuvrani. Devgadh estate has been profited millions and millions of dollars and Devgadh is now one of the most powerful and rich royal families in the whole world. Manyata's family is very proud of her and they try to call manyata but she ignores the call because she is still hurt and cannot get over the situation that happened 6 months ago when she ditched Akash for her family. Devgadh Estate has opened so many factories for women handicrafts, children's hospitals, colleges for higher education. All this things is contributed by Yuvrani Manyata who rarely speaks or makes statement in media. Yuvrani Manyata who was known for her stupidity, craziness and so many controversies is now Her Highness Yuvrani Manyata kumari who is very sophisticated, elegant, understands her duty well and is very busy. The whole country is praising Yuvrani Manyata for her greatness and her contributions but Manyata still seems sad.

In Devgadh Rajmahal

Manyata has hung a big childhood picture of her and Uday which she watches for hours before going to bed. She really misses Uday every second of her life. She still wears the ring which was given by Uday on their engagement day. During a year so many things changed in her life. She got her dreams come true found a perfect family, a royal name, and most important her prince charming to whom she neglected but now she lost everyone of them. Its like she has everything a royal name, devgadh estate and huge money but still she feels she has nothing.

She stands in her balcony palying wit the engagement ring and missing Uday...then she heads back to her bed and goes for a good sleep

Preview

Uday's entry



Edited by Pratima17 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww...dat was such a amazing update ...i reali felt sad for manyata beautifully written👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ilvuday

<font size="4">aww...dat was such a amazing update ...i reali felt sad for manyata beautifully written👏</font>


thank you
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is great I'm really waiting for the next chapter
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it yarrr...it's amazingly written...I could feel each scenes in front of my eyes...great job dear...but please update next part soon...and please PM me...thanks for this update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome please update son it was awesome please please update asap i want to know how they will meet and patch up and i really like this sophisticated manyata and please pm me please
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey dear it was really very nice👏👏
i liked it so much😃😃😃
i really want this to happen in the show
do cont plz
i m looking forward
keep it up👍🏼

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