I killed Uday- OS! PART 3 on PAGE 12 Updated.

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ilvuday

@ilvuday

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#91

👏mann adden u were awesome.hell m so glad u continued u r panning 2 write moh rnt u coz if ur nt l slice u .buh dis was so magical n pure n i lovd evry part of it thanx fr suj a fantabulous upd8🤗

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chitra_rao

@chitra_rao

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

omg adden THIS WAS SPLENDID!👏 👏. Loved the whole J realising her mistake and going on a guilt trip. I so so wish this happens in the show, but alas! but then u know what , the things we dont see in the serial is what we expect to read in this OS.

OK now is J opening her mouth and herself reveling her bitch crafts or is this great work to be done by manveer, would enjoy seeing her getting smacked right left for all that she did.

And yes the last hot manveer part was 😳😍, loved it 😛! Well about going to heaven, adden dont worry u have made a lot of people happy by writting that so ur place is already reserved in heaven😉

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udaymanyata07

@udaymanyata07

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#93

👏thanks..awesome...loved it...👏👏

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kojagoryfan

@kojagoryfan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#94

wow adden it just beautiful. amazing.lov jays realization n manytas innocence.cont soon plz plz.

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Shazzie

@Shazzie

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Awesome Adden. It was superbly written. Loved it.

Jay's realization and uday-manyata fun and naughty interaction in penthouse. Pls continue further. Would love to read what happens next between uday and manyata. yeah yeah I know.. I m evil. 😃

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-JEHAN-

@-JEHAN-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

adden that was awesome...the way u wrote about J's feelings her realization was wonderful awesome loved it...really u touched my herat it was just so so so amazing...and yeah the last part was awesome too...manveer scene...☺️ ahem ahem ramadan hain bachon sudhar jao...lolll...really agree...we can't control na!!lolll its not our fault manveer did this to us!!!😉i still remember ur post manveer u did this to us...oh adden m gonna miss ur posts aloottt!!!!