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Posted: 13 years ago
Manveer ss:
Without u no life:u nd
me:Soulmate
Part-68

Mr.chodhary apne ghr ki trf jata h,
Or uday famhouse ki trf..

Uday famhouse phuchta h.
Jagat uday nter in famhouse,nd wo all rums check krte h..
Phr ek rum me akansha behosh pdi h,wha ek gunda khada h...

Jagat pistol nikalta h,nd wo gunde ko dikhata h.
'handjup'hilna mt ldki k pas se dur hato,or uday uske hato me hathkadi locked krdeta h.
'chal bhai,court me gwahi diyo...
Jagat'akansha ko hosphtal lejao main ise jail le jata hu,chal..

Uday akansha ko hospital lejata h..
Wo dono jane se phle mr.choudhary ko cal krte h.
'hello,mr.choudhary.
Mr.c'ye kya bttmeezi h,yha koi saboot nh h.

Uday smile'saboot aapko ni mujhe chahiye tha.
Mr.c'kaun ho tum?
Uday'whi ur welwisher mr.uday singh..
Mr.choudhary shocked'wht.
Uday'yes,aapke ghr mujhe proof mila,or famhouse se akansha.
Ab agr duniya ko btana h ki uday jagat ne aisa kiya h,to shaan se bta skte h..

Mr.c'ye aacha ni kiya tumne?
Uday shout'kya aap ne akansha ko kidnap krke aacha kiya?
Mr.c'tumne bi to apna kam
Uday shout'mere kam me akansha mera 7th de ri thi,kidnap ni kiya tha maine.
Mr.c'main.
Uday'main main krna bnd kriye,ye jo apne gunhegar,mare huye bete k lye jitne bhaagdaur
Kr rhe ho utni bhaagdaur apni ptni ko thik krne me lgte to shayed wo aaj khush hoti.
Or aapke bete ki aatma ko bi..

Mr.choudhary silent.
Uday'mera iraada apko hurt krne ka ni,lekin karm aapke bete ne kiya sja apnki ptni ko bi mili.
Aaj k bad dimag ldane se phle mere baare me na shi apni ptni ko dekh lena..
Gud bye...
Cal cut..

Mr.choudhary apne ghr me jata h.
Apne rum me.
Mr.choudhary's wife kidish face bnake'wo aaya tha,maine apna beta maanga use hmara,wo lene gya h...
Mr.choudhry cryng huged hr'wo kbi ni aa skta sudha.'

Jagat 2 maya
'maya,u r daughter is save...
Maya'o thanku jagat,or wo paper.

Jagat'wo bi mil gya h,uday k pas h.
Maya'thaku so much.
Pta ni zindgi ne aise logo se phle milaya hota,to shayed aaj itna ldna ni pdhta..
Manyata begunaah saabit hoti.

Jagat'phle mila dete to shayed manyata aisi na hoti or kuch bhagwan ne soch k hi milaya h..
Maya'kitna ajeeb h,hm sochte h in bekaar logo se picha chut gya,ab kbi zindgi me ni milege,pr bhul jate h hm jo glti hmne ki h,uski bi to sja hogi.

Jagat smile'maya,itna perfct is earth pe ab tk to koi ni h...
Glti ki h to sja compulsory h...

Maya'hmmm.
Wo chala jata h...


Unanti'bhabhi juice pee lo jruri h.
Manyata'ni unanti,ni pina mujhe ye ganda h smell aa ri h.
Ds'are ye ldki zidi kb se ho gai,manyata plz pilo,ab tum akeli ni ho..
Manyata make childish face'ni dadi,mujhe man ni kr rha h.
Komal'ye ldki srf uday k bs ki h,main use phone krti hu..

Vijay'manyata bhai tum to jhansi ki rani ho km km se apne baby k baare me socho...

Manyata'ni
Akash nafrat se'pilo,beithebithaye itni care respct mil gai ri h,sb free ka ha'

Ds'akash.
Akash'sry dadi,bt aankho me koi chubhta h.
Wo bolke chala jata h...

Manyata phr silently wo juice uthake pine lgti h,use phr vomit aati h,wo washrum me...

Uday'akansha r u ok?
A:ya.thanku 4 save me...

Uday'u r welcum,tumhare 7th Tara h,jb tk manyata ka case bnd ni ho jata tb tk tum tara k 7th rhogi.
Akansha'ni,mujhe america jana h,yha to mera koi ni h,wha main hmesha se ri hu to wha mere frnds h.
Uday'ya ryt tumhari bat bi shi h,pr jb tk ye case khtm ni hota tb tk tum ni ja skti.
Tara'akansha,jha itne din ruki ho thodi or deir shi..
Akansha agree..

Uday k pas cal aati h
'bhai,bhabhi ko vomitng ho gai h,or wo faint bi ho gai h to dr.aaye h aap bi.
Uday'what?keise?
O god,i m cuming.

Jagat cum'kya hua uday?
Uday'nthng,wo manyata behose.
Ok tum khayal rkho akansha ka i m going home.
Tara'of oh,nt serious matter bhai,aaram se jana... Uday chla jata h...

Dr.checkd manyata nabs.
'evrythng s all ryt,bs phle se jyada khyal rkhna pdega.'

Uday aata h bhaag k
'o god manyata kya hua,aise leiti kyn ho?
Wo manyata k chick ko pkd k puchta h.

Manyata smile'ab wo kya h na uday,check up kud kud k to hota ni h...

All laugh..
Komal'juice pee liya or ye ho gya.
Uday woried'tumne jucie piya kyn?jb ni pina tha to.
Ds'isi ne to demand ki thi juice ki.

Uday'ye kya bat hui manyata,phle khud magaya or phpq mood change.

Manyata'main kya kru?
Mera mood hi aisa h.
Ha ni to

Uday 'ha ni to kya?
Mtlb,ye kya hua,aise krti ri to.
Ds'lekin beta..

Uday'dadi ab manyata ki side mt lelene lgta...
Manyata'ha sb inhi ki side lo lawyer h..

All laugh.

Dr.smile'oh mr.uday don't worry ye sb common h..
Manyata ek min me demand kregi dusre pal me change...

Lekin unhe ye sb hoga 9mnth tk..
Aapko inka khayal rkhna pdega.
Ye kitna bi mna kre lekin inko khana to
Khilana h..
Jo inko pasnd ho wo bi khilaye..

Uday ye sb dhayan se sun rha h.. Tbi komal'kuch smjh bi aa rha h ya aise hgi sun rha h...

Ds'arey pagele ye sb natural h...

Uday lookd manyata
'abse main tumhein khana dinner,lunch jo bi h sb main dekhuga.'

Manyata smile.
Dr'ok ye kuch med.
H aap manyata ko dete rhiyega...

Uday'ok dr.
Thanku..

Precap-akash ko pta chla ki uday ko sb pta h uske baare me.nd party preparation..
Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey pari ๐Ÿค—, ooosome update, loved this caring uday ๐Ÿ˜Š, continue soon
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Sorry Pari for not commented on the last two chapters.๐Ÿ˜ณ But I read all pending updates together.๐Ÿ˜Š Loved the last chapters also.๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
This chapter was Fantastic.๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ UV was so caring for Manyata & his baby.๐Ÿ˜Š
Loved the episode.๐Ÿ˜›
Precap was fabulous, Party OMG for UV-M.๐Ÿฅณ
I'm dying to read the next chapter right now. I want a long update.๐Ÿ˜‰
Thanks for the regular updates.๐Ÿ˜Š
Good job.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
LOVE YOU.๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing Updates Pari
Hate Akash hopefully next Part he will be out the ff forever UV will throw him out the house and Manveer cane be happy problem free... i hate Akash๐Ÿคฌ
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Pari,

Thanx for such regular updates

Uday ne Akansha ko bacha hi liya aakhir

Jagat Maya scene kaafi acha tha

Chaudhary ka redemption karwane ka iraada hai kya?

Now comin to my favourite part:

Manyatha nakhre dikhane lagi gud gud

Uday or Manyatha ka pyaar bhara nok-jhok was too good

Pre cap mein thoda dara diya hope ki Akash Uday ya Manyatha ko nuksaan na pahunchaye!
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Awesome Update PaRi
loved UV and Jagat and how de got de papers and rescued Akansha
team UV-J rocks

Caring side of UV was soo cute
Loved It

beautifully written
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Sorry for late comment pari. Keya karu ye college mujhe jinda nahi chorega. I loved all the parts. Asweme update. I just hope Akash gets the punishment soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Manveer ss:
Without u no life:u nd
me:Soulmate
Part-69
In nxt mrng...
Manyata feel tired.
Uday wakeup wo uski gaod me
apna sir rkh leta h..
Uday'how my wifey nd choti??
Manyata make a childish face'pta ni
keisa ajeeb ka man ho rha h.
Uday'kya?tum thik to ho..
Kya hua?
Manyata'arey hua kuch ni bs aise
hi...
Uday'weise jo bi hoga chotu ya
choti uske uper se tumhein ek or
baacha sambhalna pdega..
Manyata'kyn?kaun?
Uday'mujhe.
Manyata'arey ha,uday wo din kitna
aacha hoga na jb hm 2 se 3 honge...
Uday'ha manyata,pr usse bda din
mere lye jis din tumhein puri trh
begunaah saabit krdunga tb..
Manyata'wo to tum krhi doge..
Uday tumhein mere pe gusa ni aaya
tha jb maine akash ka nam liya tha..
Uday sad'aaya tha manyata bhoot
gusa aaya tha,lekin meri problem ye
h manyata ki main chah k bi tumse
nafrat gusa ni kr skta..
Phr bad me socha ki tumhari kya glti
h,tumne to whi bola h jo tumhare
7th hua h...
Manyata'i m sry,zindgi aise mod pe
lake khada krdegi mujhe iska
andaaza ni tha.
Ek hi ghr me..
Uday'don't cry manyata,ab tumhein
koi dukh ya tkleef ni hoga.
Afsos is bat ka h ki mere ghr me hi
muzrim beitha h.
Or uper se ye kanoon,agar ye law
tumne jagat ne roka hota to ab tk to
wo darinda is duniya me ni hota..
Manyata tightly huged hm'thanku
uday...
Uday smile...
Unanti cum'bhabhi,ups sry.
Wo main
Uday'arey unanti aaja..
Kya hua?
Unanti'wo bhabhi aapka breakfast..
Manyata'unanti ye milk lejao,mujhe
ni pina...
Uday'unanti jo leke aai ho rkh k
jao,ye sb khayegi..
Unanti smile'bhai ne kha h,to wo sb
sambhal Lenge.
Uday'ya ryt.thanku unanti.
Unanti'ok,main chalti hu,tc bhabhi...
Manyata'uday milk ni,mujhe
vometing ho jayegi..
Uday'ho jane do,lekin strong bnna
jruri h...
Manyata'ni
Uday'tumhein pta h tum ek kid ki trh
react kr ri ho...
Manyata'ha to,mera bacha chahta h
main bi kid bn jau.
Uday'weise kid 4 information mera
ni hmara bacha.
Chalo milk piyo...
Manyata make a funy face nd wo
milk pi leti h.
Uday'gud,wo kya h?tum zidi ho or
meri aadat h apni bat manwane ki.
Ha ni to.
Thats lyk a gud grl..
Komal'manyata keisi ho?
Manyata'i m fyn maa.
Komal'ye aise ajeeb sa muh kyn
bnaya h...
Uday'ek glass milk pi gai isliye..
Komal'maine hi bhijwaya tha...
Manyata'maa,mujhe iski jrurt ni
h,bdi gandi smell aa ri h.
Komal'beta aisa kuch mahino tk
lgega aisa,lekin phr sb thik ho
jayega...
'uday party k lye jis jis ko invite krna
h krdena.
Manyata'maa ye party rkhni jruri h
kya?
Uday lookd hr'koi problem h?
Manyata'ni problem to ni h,pr..
Uday'main hu na tumhare 7th...
Komal'hm sb h tumhare 7th...
Manyata'g maa...
Uday thout'tumhara dar smjh rha
hu manyata..
Pr ye jruri h...
Akash'jay tum yha,mujhe lga yha to
tum kbi aaogi ni.
Jay smile'jruri tha,kisi se bat krni thi..
Akash'pkki besharm ho,wrna bhai
ne thapad maara sbke saamne ghr
se bahr nikal diya,phr bi aa gai..
Jay'chinta mt kro akash main wapis
australia ja ri hu.
Akash'wht?pr kyn?
Manyata se har k.
Jay'jeetne ki bi to koshish ki lekin jeet
ni pai..
Akash'itni jaldi jay har maan jaye ye
bat mind me ni beith ri h.
Jay'beithalo akash qki yhi such ...
Uday ye baatein sunta'jay aache
khayal tumhari mind me hmesha
late kyn aate h?'
Jay'uday mujhe manyata se milna h
permision h?
Uday'achanak kyn?
Jay'bs aise hi milne ka man kiya
aagai sry bolne.
Akash'ni usse koi ni mil skta,bhai ne
rok lga di h.
Uday'jay tum mil skti ho,ye paabndi
akash tumhare liye h.
Lekin jay kuch glt ya use hurt kiya to
bhoot bura hoga.
Jay'don't wory uday kisi ko hurt
krne ni aai..
Bat krne aai hu.
Thanx 4 permision...
Wo manyata k rum me jati h.
Manyata see d album...
Jay looked hr..
'manyata hi..
Manyata looked jay
'arey jay,bahar kyn khadi ho,aao
na..
Kuch kam tha.
Jay'ni manyata,main austurlia ja ri
hu,socha tumse mil ke jau..
Manyata'austurlia kyn?
Jay smile'yha rhne ka koi mtlb ni
manyata,sayed smjh aagya mujhe
pyar ko cheena ni ja skta..
Manyata surprize'jay tum kya kh ri
ho?
Jay'ha manyata bhoot koshish ki
uday ko tumse dur krne ki,itna
sunaya tumhein itna kuch glt bola
tumse pr.
Manyata hold hr hand'jay tumne jo
kiya shayed wo koi bi krta..
Jay'kya krti main bi,'uday ko austrlia
se chahti thi,srf usi k lye india aai,
Lekin ye bi such h manyata apne
aap ko main uday pe zbrdsti haq
dalti thi..
Manyata smile'zbrdsti,zid,nafrat to
pyar me hota ni h na jay..
Jb achanak uday ne bina kuch soche
smjhe mujhse shadi ki to main uday
se nfrat krti thi,ye sochti thi uday ko
mere pe dya aagai..
Wo nafrat pyar me kb bdala pta ni
chala..
Jay'uday ko bi kha pta chala ki wo
tumse pyar krta h,dil ko ehsaas ho
jata h,pr ye jwaan bolne me tym
lgaata h..
Manyata'jay mujhe maaf krdo,main
us din shadi me aai thi mujhe ni pta
tha,ki ye sb..
Jay fake smile'ni manyata ek trh se
aacha hua,wrna uday mujhe apni ek
responsibility smjhta..
Bs ek saaman ki trh care krta..
Bs or kuch ni..
Tum to uski zindgi ho..
'pta h wo tumhari care ek.
Manyata'ek baby ki trh krta h..
Jay'ha..
He so caring..
Manyata'jay main ye to ni khungi ki
tumne jo kiya wo pyar ni h,wbi
pyar ka ek rup h..
Lekin uday ne mujhe phr se jeena
sikhaya,ha to ab kh skti hu zindgi
rukti ni h jeene ka khush rhne ka
nam h.
Or sbki life me koi na koi to aata h
na...
Jay'i think ur ryt.
manyata 4give me,vijay bhai ne shi
kha tha,ek dost bnke bat krke dekho
manyata se aacha lgega.
Manyata'or mujhe hmesha tumse
bat krke aacha lga h,becoz tumse kbi
shiyat ni hui.
Jay'thanku manyata..
Ok main ab aus.
Manyata'ek req. H jay.
Jay'ha bolo,phli req.
H main puri krugi.
Manyata'tum uday ka bacha apni
god me ni lena chahugi.'
Jay smile'mayata itne din tk.
Manyata'plz jay..
Acha jo party ho ri h is nanhe
munhe k lye us party k lye to ruk
jao..
Jay'hmmm.
Ok..
Or agar mood bdal gya to pure
9mnth bi ruk jaougi.
Manyata'jrur.
Ha ni to..
Both smile.
Jay'ok main chalti hu manyata,bs aaj
pta chala ki itni aachi dost bnane me
tym lga diya...
Manyata smile.
Thanku...
Jay'main chalti hu,party k lye
tumhare lye ek cute sa gft lena h...
Bye manyata..
Manyata'bye.
Wo jb bahar jati h to uday khada
hota h..
Jay lookd hm'uday ye mt sochna ki
main koi natak kr ri hu,ya manayata
ko bhka ri hu.
Such bola h jo bi tumne suna h..
Uday'thanku jay,
Nd i m sry 4 my behave..
Jay'ni uday..
Jb tk tum mere 7th the tb tk dil ni
dhadkta tha tumhara,jb tum
manyata k 7th aaye tb tumhare pyar
krne ka dhang pta chala..
Main tumhe pyar kha krti thi,main to
bs tumhein paana chahti thi..
Or paane k chakker me itna gir gai ki
pta hi ni chala..
I m sry.
Manyata ka hmesha khayal rkhna.
Lekin i hope mujhe ek dost ki trh
yad rkhoge..
Bye.
Uday'ofcourse.
Tc.
Thanx...
Akash 2 brijraj
'dad,aap sb jante h.
Br'ha,main sb janta hu..
Akash'phr aapne aisa kyn kiya?
Br'or kya krta akash main,jaane deta
tumhein jail me,coma me se kbi na
kbi to tum bahar aate,or phr jail me
jate..
Akash emotional'dad,aap akele
hi,aapne mujhe btaya bi ni.
Br'tumne bi to ni btaya,kya jrurt thi
itna ginoina kam krne ki...
Akash fake actng'dad,pta ni keise?
Wo ldki hi gandi thi dad,pta ni kitno
k 7th.
Or dad jb hmne dekha use kisi or k
7th to wo dar gai or wo hmein
drane lgi agar bahar kisi ko btaya to
tumlogo ko bdanam krdungi...
Phr dad usne wine pilai hmein or kb
ye sb hua pta ni..
Br'kya such me ye hua tha?
Akash njre churake'yes dad yhi hua
tha.
Lekin meri bat pe koi vishwas bi to
ni krega..
Br'ni kisi se kuch khne ki jrurt ni h,jo
chal rha chalne do..
Wo pta ni kaun h wo besharm ldki.
Maine to use aajtk dekha ni...
Akash shockd'wht?
Aap many..
Ah mtlb us ldki ko aap ni jante..
Br'ni,us ldki se chid h nafrat thi,pta ni
zinda bi h ya mar gai...
Akash hide a evil smile nd
thout'mere lye to aacha h dad,aap
meri side h..
Ah thank u dad.
Weise agar aap khege to main jail
me jane k lye taiyar hu.
Br'ni,ek to to uday ne manyata jeisi
ldki lake bdnam kr rkha h,or dusra
tumhara such.
Ni,tum mere bete ho.
Main tumhare 7th hu..
Lekin akash uday ko sayed pta chal
cuka h.
Akash'wht?
Ni dad.
Br'wo jis trh mujhse puch rha tha
usse to yhi lg rha tha.
Akash'dad,aap mere 7th h to sb thik
hoga..
Br'halaki,akash manyata ko dekh k
ab gusa km aata h,sochta hu us
bechari ki kya glti..
Mujhe to bs ye pta h ki manyata ka
rape hua h,bs or kuch ni..
Kheir jo bi ho main sb sambhal
lunga..
Akash'dad main abi aata hu..
Manyata apne rum me usne phone
recorder on kiya h.
'hm chotu ya choti main boar ho ri
hu,main tumhare lye kuch bolti hu
phr aapke papa ko sunaugi.
Ha ni to.
Wo phone recorder start krti h
'jis din tum meri or apne papa ki
zindgi me aaoge wo din bhoot
khubsurat hoga..
Or mere lye wo pal khubsurat hoga
jb uday tumhe apni godi me lenga...
Suddn ek awaaj aati
'aajkal bhoot khush ho tum..
Manyata shocked nd door ki trf
dekhta h wha akash h.
Akash'or wo pal bi aacha hoga jb is
bache ko mar du ya iske papa ko
mardu.
Manyata dar jati h nd uske hath se
phone gir jata h...
'tum,uday kha h?
Akash'bhai to bahar gye h,isliye
mauqa paake aagya,tum khush rho
mujhse brdaast ni ho rha h..
Bhai ko aisi kya patti pdhai h jo mere
7th aise behave kr rhe h..
Manyata'tum jao yha se,maine uday
se kuch ni kha.
Akash tightly pick hr chick'mujhse
jhuth mt bolo,wrna abi tumhari
zindgi khtm krdunga.
Manyata push hm'jao yha se,plz
jao,uday aagya to tumhari jan khtre
me hogi...
Akash guse me phr use tightly pkdta
h'demo dikhana hi pdega Tumhe'wo
ek hath se manyata ka gla pkda h nd
2nd hand se uske stomch ko internal
4ce kr rha h.
Manyata cryng use pain ho rha h.
Akash'ek trf tumhein mar deta hu
dusri trf tumhare 2re uday ko.
Manyata crnyng nd said'akash plz
leave me,chodo mujhe,wo phr use
tightly dhaka deti h.
Nd shout'kya sunna chahte ho?
Ha uday ko pta h ki tumne meri
zindgi kharab ki,ha use pta h wo 3rd
person or koi ni tum ho jisne mera
rape kiya..
Akash irritate
Guse me use dekh rha h.
Manyata'jb tk uday chup h use chup
rhne do,or apni ulti ginti ginna shuru
krdo...
Maine use sb bta diya h..
Akash guse me'bhoot bdi bhul ki h
tumne..
Agar main jail me gya to tujhe mar
k jauga.
Yad rkhiyo.
Continue.
Pari
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Fantastic update Pari, too good.๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘'
J- M both now friends & J's redemption that scene was mindblowing.๐Ÿ‘
Akash B*****d I hate him bl***y rapist.๐Ÿคข I hate Akash in this SS.๐Ÿ˜ก
UV-M Scene was very nice.๐Ÿ˜‰
Akash k*****e๐Ÿ˜ก dur raho M se.๐Ÿ˜Ž
Great update yaar.๐Ÿ‘๐ŸผI'm waiting for the next update.๐Ÿ˜Š
Thanks for the regular update.๐Ÿ˜›
HUGS.๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—
Edited by sonam2801 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ok @sonam
i watng.
U r most welcum.
Love u.
Pari

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