manveer SS:WIDOUT U NO LIFE:U ND ME:SOULMATE(PART-75th)PG-72 - Page 47

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Very Very Hot Update☺️

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Manveer ss:
Without u no life:u nd
me:Soulmate
Part-66

Uday'manyata chle..
Manyata dari hui h,uske kadam aage ni bdh rhe h.
Uday'manyata sit sit meri trf dekho,i m u r husbnd u trust me or nt?
Manyata'ya ofcourse...
Bt
Uday'bt wt kuch ni,tumhara trust kbi ni toduga..
Kuch ni hoga,mujhe pta h wha dubaara jaana mushkil h..
Pr tumhein darne ki jrurt ni h.
Manyata'hmm..
Chale..
Uday'ya..

Manyata look hm nd thout'uday shayed tum thik kh rhe ho,bt us akash k saamne rhna mere lye difficult.

Uday thout'manyata main tumhara dar mita k rhuga..
Smjhta hu tumhein,lekin tumhare 7th jo hua usme tumhari glti ni thi,to darne ki jrurt ni.'
He hold hr hand looked each other nd smile...

Jagat tall mr.choudhary on phone
'mr.choudhary maya k 7th ya jo aap kr rhe ho wo glt kr rhe h..
Mr.c evil laugh'btadiya maya ne chalo aacha h,jo krna h krlo,jha tum court me truth bolege,wha akansha ki jan khtre me..
Jagat angry'abi court jaane me bhoot tym h,tb tk
Mr.c'ni chuda paoge akansha ko qki wo kha h srf main janta hu.
Jagat'aap apni lawyer hone ka glt fayeda utha rhe ho...
Mr.c'mujhe mt sikhao lawyer keise bnte h..
Love nd war everything s al ryt.
Us ldki ko main choduga ni.
Jagat'jo krna h kro,lekin wo sb ab hoga jo phle ni hua.
Tere bete ko mar k bi gande words se nwaaza jayega.
Becoz he deserve it.
Manyata dubaara jai me jayegi,ye posible ni h.
Or jis kam ko tum namumkin khte h.
Wo kam ab mumkin hoga..
Mr.c'Just go 2 hell. .

Cal cut.
Jagat'mujhe uday se bat krni pdegi..

Idhr uday apne ghr phuchta h wid manyata.
Komal Unki aarti krti h..
Vijay bhai'welcum manyata bhai,i realy mis u.
Nd yes cngrats
Finaly ab hmein koi chacha(uncle)khega..
He huged hr nd kis 4head.
Manyata'thanku vijay bhai..
Komal'manyata mujhe maaf krdo,apne bete k pyar me thodi selfish ho gai thi..

Manyata'ni maa,aap kyn maafi maang ri ho,main smjhti hu aapne aisa kyn kiya?

Ds'such me beta,jb ehsaas hua ki tubi to use dorahe pe khadi h,maa bnne wali h,tb ehsaas hua ki ni hm itne bure to ni h.
Manyata'dadi plz don't cryng...
I understnd u r feelings..
Mujhe kisi se koi shikayat ni..

Unanti'sb bhul jao,bhai,ab kya h na papa bnene wale ho aise to chodege ni,party chahiye.

Uday'ni,abi koi party ni unanti,mera dhayan khin kisi or pe h..

Br aate h cal pe kisi se bat krte huye'i cal u later.
Cal cut.
'aakhir manyata success ho gai tum is ghr me wapas aane me.

Ds'br bs kro,dada bnne wala h tu.
Br'whi to soch rha hu,khush hou ya dukh.

Komal'ye khushi ki bat h gam ki ni.
Jay cum nd evil smile'uncle clean-2 boliye ye bacha uday ka hi h ya...

Jay uday k piche hi khadi hoti h,uday ko gussa aata h nd wo suddun bck turn hoke jay ko ek tightly slap krta h..

Sb dar jate h..

Jay gusse se shout'uday..

Uday jay ka hath pkdata h'tum is ghr ki member ni ho,tumhari kismat me main ni tha,manyata meri zindgi h ye bat kisi k khne se bdal ni jayegi.
Smjhi,or agar aacha ni bol skti to muh kholne ki jrurt ni.

Or khinch k use bahar faik deta h...

Uday pura aagbabula hoke khada h.
'or dad,mujhe ni pta infct mujhe aapke soch se koi mtlb ni,muh kholne se phle soch
Liya kro kya bolna h..
Wrna manyata k baare me koi kuch glt bolega,to main ni dekhuga mere saamne kaun khada h.

Br'uday tumhare ander to itni nfrat ni thi.

Manyata looked hm nd cryng.
Uday look br ful angry face'nfrat ni h dad,pagalpan h kisi ko justice dilane ka or kisi ko sja dilane ka'
He lookd hr.
Or ha agar kisi ne ek word bi bola manyata ko to mujhse bura koi ni.
Thats it.
Wo bolke chala jata h...

Komal'manyata beta aapka rum aapka wait kr rha h.
Jao.
Manyata smile'thak u maa.
Ds'unanti juice leke aa ri h..
Tum jao.

Vijay jaane lgta h.
Tbi,manyata said'vijay bhai,i m sry...
Vijay'q manyata bhai?
Manyata'qki uday ne jo jay k 7th kiya isliye
Vijay'manyata uday ne jo kiya wo thik kiya,bolna thik h,had se jyada bolna galt h.
Jay smjh jayegi,bs use thoda or tym chahiye..
Manyata'jay k 7th ho rha h uske lye mujhse bura lg rha h.
Vijay'or jo wo tumhare 7th krti h mujhe wo bura lgta h...
Sb thik ho jayega.
Bye.

Manyata'bye..

Manyata enter in rum
Uday stand anear window.
He s sad.

Manyata'of oh,kha us ghr me main apne saamne hmesha hste huye uday ko dekhti thi.'

Uday 9 react.
Manyata naugtynes me uske pas jati h'mere se mt kro bat pr ye chotu choti jo bi h ye kh rha h ''papa to bhoot gusa krte h mumy,aap keise rh leti ho inke 7th.''

Uday fake sad'boldo main aisa hi hu,mere 7th rhna h to dar k rhna pdega'

Manyata'hawww..
Sun liya mere bacho,lekin chinta mt kro main bilkul gusa ni krugi..

Uday hide a hm smile'chotu hua to main use apne jeisa bnauga,choti hui to use bilkul ni daatuga.
Ab sochlo
Tumhein kya chahiye..

Manyata make a child face'chotu kh rha h main papa jeisa bnuga lekin gusa ni kruga,choti bi yhi kh ri h ki mujhe bi papa ki trh bnna h..

Uday look hr'aacha...
Manyata smile'ha.
Uday'meri manyata jeisa koi ho bi ni skta,cum hug me...

Manyata'mere pas 2-2 uday ho jayenge.
Haww.
I m lucky..
Uday hold hr hand nd use apni trf khinchta h'9 darlng i m lucky..
Both huged'i love u...
He kised hr 4head nd she kised hm chest...

Akash angry'i hate hr...
Alot alot.
Manyata tumne glti krdi is ghr me aake.
Apne din count krna start krdo...
I hate hr..

Jay cryng'akash uday ne sbke saamne mujhe slap kiya,or sb dekh rhe the..
'ni akash tum jo plan bnaoge i wid u,mujhe us ldki ki zindgi brbaad chahiye.'

Akash'main uska jeena mushkil krdunga...
I will kill hr..


Menka'uday tumhein bhaiya apne rum me bula rhe h,bat krne k lye...
Uday'main kuch kam kr rha hu bua g,main bad me bat kr luga..

Menka'kbi tumhare lye kam jruri h,kbi manyata,kbi kuch kbi kuch.
Uday'bua g,main bad me bat krlunga.
Meneka'ek bar.
Manyata'bua g,uday abi jayega..
Papa g se milne..

Uday lookd hr,'wo khada hota h or chala jata h...

Meneka'kmal h,kuch kha bi ni or wo
Manyata'smjh bi gya..
Bua g,jo kuch bolna h boliye bs is rishte pe kuch mt bolna...

Menka make a jealous face nd wo chali jati h...

Manyata'uday ab koi kuch ni bolega..
Hmare rishte pe...

Uday 'dad aapne bulaya.
Br'ha uday,phle to i m sry..
Uday'kyn?
Br'jo manyata k 7th behave kiya uske lye..
Uday surprisd'dad,aap sry bol rhe ho,i m shockd,aage bhut Sry bolna h aapko,aadat dal lijiye.
Br in irritate'uday mante h aapko manyata se apko apni zindgi se bi jyada pyar h,pr kya ek ldki k lye apne pariwar k 7th aisa behave krna shi h.

Uday'ni dad,main kuch ni krta,aaplog mjbur krte h ki main aisa behave kru.

Br'aakhir h kya us ldki me,na koi izzat duniya bhar me ye bat fail cukhi h singh pariwar ki bhu ka rape hua h.
Hmein najre jhukha k chalni pdhti h.

Uday cntinuous br ko dekhta h'or is ldki ki halat ka zimedar kaun h dad?
Br looked hm 'khna kya chahte ho?
Uday doudtng'khna to bhoot kuch chahta hu dad,ek din khuga..
Br'phliya mt bhujhayo uday,dum h to saaf-2 bolo...

Uday angry shout'akash coma me keisa phucha?

Br shockd nd nervous'ye keisa swal h?
Sbko pta h.

Uday'sbko jo pta h wo rhne dijiye,jo aapko pta h wo btaiye dad...

Br'ye kya pagalpan
Mujhe bi yhi pta h uday..
Uday'jhuth,jhuth..
Akash ka accident ni hua tha,accident aapne bnaya tha..

Br s nervous'aisa kuch ni h.
Tumko us ldki ne pagal bna diya h,maa papa apna pariwar bhul gye ho tum.
Manners bhul gye ho tum.

Uday'aapko jitna chupana h chupaiye,sbko dhoke me rkhna aapke lye aasan h,lekin mujhe dhokhe me rkhna mushkil h dad...

Both in angry eyecntct..
Br'uday tum had se jyada us ldki.
Uday'us ldki ni nam h uska manyata..
Dad,aapko abi manyata k ghr me rhne se bahar chalne me sharm aati h,bt i promise ek din aapko apne aap pe sharm aayegi..
I promise..

Wo bolke chala jata h...

Uday gusse me rum me jata h..
Manyata said'uday papa ne
Uday angry luk me bckturn hota h nd tightly pick hr Shouldr nd loudly say'kyn?koi tumhein ni smjhta..
Koi itna bedardi keise ho skta h,sbko apni fikr h,tumhari ni'

Manyata feard,'uday..
Mera hath chodo dard ho rha h...

Uday realize ki ye kya kr rha hu...
Wo uska hath chod deta h...
'sry manyata...
Wo guse me bahar chala jata h...

Manyata cnfusd..
Abi to thik tha,ekdum se kya ho gya?

Wo bi usko piche jati h...


Akash nter in home
'bhai,aap finaly bhabhi ko le hi aaye.
'kmal h na bhai,pyar bi hmese kya-2 krwata h..'
Manyata aai aapki zindgi,use ek buri bekar halat me dekha aapne.
Or jay se shadi krne ki wjaye us beizzat ldki se shadi krli, or phr uske lye apne pariwar se ldne lge.

Aap ghr me sbse jyada pyar mujhse krte the,mere lye sb se ldjana.
Or aaj ye halt h ki aap mujhpe khud hath utha dete h...
Mere dost mera meri family ka mjak bnate h...

Uday painful voice'manyata aai o shayed meri zindgi khushnuma ho gai..
Pariwar ko manyata ne ni family ne khud dur kiya h mujhe,lekin tujhe kyn sharm aati h akash,manyata ko to main leke aaya hu sharm to mujhe aani chahiye na..
Pyar to abi bi h akash,lekin jo pyar ab tk diya h uska anjaam to maine dekh lya,ab dar lgta h..
Lekin akash aaj dad se ek promise kiya h or tumse bi krta hu tumhara sharm aana bahar niklte hu,logo se njre milane me wo sb ek din mere pyar ki taarif krege.
Or khin aisa na ho tumhein bahar jane se bi dar lgne lge..

Akash cnfused...

Manyata listng cnvo.
Btwn akash nd uday..

Nd she s cryng'oh god,mujhe kis doraahe pe lake khada kiya h.
Ek trf mera pati jo mujge diwano ki trh pyar kr
Or dusri trf akash jo mujhe noch khana chahta h...
Jeise kutte k saamne haddi pdi ho..

Precap-uday-jagat protect akansha mr.chotdhary k kaid se...

Pari
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awesome pari...just loved the way of conversation between akash n Uday...bina kahe hi sab kuch keh diya Uday ne...Keep it up👏...n precap seems gr8😊
Edited by snowdream - 13 years ago
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WOW PARI...that was awesome. I loved it ESP; Uday slapping Jai & then throwing her out of the house.
Now when can we see a repeat performance: this time with Akash in J's place.
Waiting for next part...(NICE PRECAP; btw)
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aooosme update pari, well Br aur aksh toh gaye, please logo se jute khilwaon un dono ko😡. And Uday slapped J wah dil ko thad pad gayi.😆

Akash ko slap nahi pura dhobi pachad hona chahiye 😡.
Excied about precap😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
Uday ne jo Jay ko chammat mara na acha laga..

Uday Manyatha ka pyaar yunhi kayam rahe

Us Akash or Brij or Chaudhary ko apne karmon ki sazza milni chahiye jaldi..

Luv'd ur precap dear..
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Manveer ss:
Without u no life:u nd
me:Soulmate
Part-67

Uday sittng garden nd he s vry sad irritate,rude etc..

Manyata near stand hm'or koi meri fikr kre ya na kre,mere ek pati h mr.uday wo meri fikr bhoot krte h..'

Uday realize ki manyata k 7th jo kiya wo glt kiya..

Manyata'or aap jo bi h sbke baare me sb khne ka ryt h lekin mere husbnd k baare me kuch bi khna allowd ni h aapko..
Smjhe.

Uday stnd nd sir jhuka k'ok,i m sry.

Manyata seriousnes'uday,she pick hm chick ye kya kr rhe ho?

Uday'sry,maine guse me bola jo bola..
Manyata'i 9 mujhe pta h,tum plz royoge ni,ye tumhari aankho me tears h use bhaane ki jrurt ni h,kimti h..
Ha ni to..

Uday smile'kimti to tumhare tears bi h,jo hmesha meri wjh se bh jate h.'


Manyata'qki inhe bhane ka hq srf tumhein h..

Uday huged hr'i m sry i love u..
Manyata'uday apne guse pe kaabu rkha kro,dar lgta h kuch aacha krne me kuch glt na ho jaye...
Uday'hmmm...
Mere ghr me muzrim beitha h or main kuch ni kr paa rha hu..
Jagat asked me'hm saboot colect krege..
Manyata'my natkhat husbnd'he s ryt..
Proof colect kro,or tb use punishment dege..

Manyata'tumhein sambhalna its vry difficult..
Uday'o cum on hugd me wo dificult srf tum handle kr skti ho.
Manyata'awww...
Wo to h..
Uday thout'manyata tumpe kya bitti h main smjh skta hu,or meri aankho me hr wo insan chubhta h jisne tumhein drd dukh diya..
Choduga ni kisi ko bi ni...

Ds'komal manyata k ghr aane ki khushi me or teri dadi or meri prdadi bnne ki khushi me ek party rkhe...

Komal'ha maa main bi yhi soch ri thi..
Manyata ka man uday ka mood bi aacha ho jayega...

Br'koi jrurt ni party krane ki.
Ds'q brij.
Akash'dad s ryt..
Party ko ye log party kha rhne dete h.
Komal'akash tum chacha bnne wale ho,aap dada bnne wale ho ise bdi bi koi khushi ho skti h...

Manyata door k pas khadi h.
Ds'arey manyata beta ander aao.
Manyata'ni dadi main bad me aati hu...
Komal'ni beta aapse kuch ni chupa,tum is ghr ki bhu ho aao..

Br'ha aao,jaldi is ghr ki malkin bn jaogi,jo jo tumhari kismat me ni tha wo wo tumne paa.

Akash'ryt dad,tumne socha bi ni hoga ki tumhari zindgi itni haseen aiso-aaram me gujregi..

Manyata chup h.
Ds'akash ye kya bttmeezi h.
Akash fake smile'bttmeezi bttmeezo se hi ki jati h dadi.
Komal'akash,apni jwan ko lgaana.

Br'shutup komal,hmse aaplog ki trh dikhawa ni kr skte..
Hr roj is ldki ki wjh se ldai..

Akash'kismat bi keise.
Manyata took akash'kismat bi keise-2 mod pe lake khada kr deti h,h na akash..
Akash evil look hr..
Manyata'papa aap ye kh rhe ho maine uday k bholepan hone ka fayeda uthaya h,kya aapne meri mjburi ka fayeda ni uthaya...

Br feel guilt...
Ds'jwab do brij.
Manyata'uday meri kismat me likha tha to wo meri zindgi me aaya,mujhe aiso aram se koi mtlb ni h..
Akash'ha ab to bologi hi,jb sb mil gya h to.
Manyata solid eyecntct akash'pta h akash,is duniya me jitne log h na sb ka kuch na kuch cnnection hota h ek chain bnti h,kisi ko deir se jante h,to kisi ko janne me tym bi ni lgta..
Fark ye hota ki
Kisi ka chahra aankho me bs jata h,or kisi ka chahra aankho me chubhta(pinch) h...

Akash
Look hr with angry eye manyata also..

'saare krmo ka fal(fruit) yhi chukana h sbko akash...

Akash feel guilt nd wo eyecntct break krta h..

Manyata'papa mujhe aapki is ghr ki izazt ka khyal,lekin kya uday k saamne bar-2 mere baare me glt bolna shi h ye jante huye bi ki wo gusa ho jata h...

Br again silent
Ds smile'brij jb jwab ho tb bat krlena manyata se..

Akash phr whi cigrete nikalta h or pine lgta h,then smokng smell manyata ko aati h.
She s feel vomet..
Nd uska face radish ho jata h,nd wo muh pe hath rkh ke washrum side bhagti h..

Komal'akash cigrate pina bnd kro.
Stop smoking.

Ds'manyata k saamne aisi chize mt use kiya kro.

Akash'wht d hell?
Why?
Br'becoz she s preganant akash.
Don't be stupit talk..

Akash'bt dad.
Br'akash,wo aisi situation me h jha use 9mnth tk to pura khyal rkhna pdega.
Stop smoking.
Aksh'i can't beleive dis,dad aapka nature bi ek ek min. Pe change hota h..
Ok.
Wo cigrate leke bahar chala jata h...

Ds'brij,party hogi,jisko party me aana h aye ni aana h mt aye.
Br'maa,aapka jeisa man ho...
Wo bi bolke chala jate h...


Jay 2 vijay
'btao vijay bhai mere 7th jo hua kya wo shi h...
Jo aap us manyata ka 7th de rhe h...
Vijay'or jo manyata k 7th hua wo shi tha..,
Jay silent.
Vijay'aisa ni h ki tumhare 7th jo hua wo aacha hua,lekin tumbi to manyata k 7th whi krna chahti ho...
Jay cryng'main uday se pyar krti thi,lekin usne ni smjha mujhe.
Vijay'ni jay jo tum krti ho wo pyar ni tha,mujhe hmesha se lgta tha tum dono ko jb 7th dekhta tha tb lgta tha ni its nt a perfct kuch kmi h.
Or wo pyar ki kmi thi.
Uday tumse pyar ka dikhawa isliye krta tha qki tum khush rho uska pariwar khush rhe.
Jay'or manyata jeisi ldki me use kya dikha.?
Vijay'manyata k 7th jo hua wo htake bhul k ye btao usme kya burai kya kmi h?

Jay again serious silent...
Vijay understnd hr'jay jealousy alg rkh k ek bar ye socho uday ne achanak aisa kyn kiya?
Weise to man ni krega lekin phr bi ek bar manyata se pyar se bat krna ek dost ki trh aacha lgega...

Wo bolke chala jata h...

Jagat calng uday
'hello uday tum kha ho?
Uday'ghr pr kyn?
Jagat'problem ho gai h wo mr.chodhary ne maya k signature lye h glt gwaahi pe use bolna h court me uday jagat ne toucher krke jhuthi gwahi dene ko kha tha.
Uday shocked'wht d hell?or usne sign kr diya.
Jagat'wo kya krti akansha ko kidnappd kr lya,problem bi to yhi h.
Uday pick hm head'o god,jagat phle akansha ko bchana jruri h,pr keise?
Jagat'or wo paper.
Uday'arey phle akansha important h,paper to bad me bi mil jayega..

Jagat'uday jo krna h hmein hi krna h,pr kya?
Uday'jagat hm rat ko milte h...
Kuch to krna pdega..

Jagat'ya okay..
Cal cut...


Uday again woried.
'kya kru?
Mr.chodhary itni easily jeet mujhse mushkil h.

In nyt.
Jagat fake nu. Se mr.chodhary ko cal krta h
Or uday sound change krke bat krta h
'hello,aap mr.chodhary bol rhe h..
Mr.c'hang aap kaun?
Uday'main aapka welwisher hu,apke bete ka nam aaryan chodhary h,aapki wife mrs.sudha choudhary.
Jo ek mantal person h..
Aaryan ki death ho gai h.
Mr.choudhary shocked'who r u?
Or ye sb mujhe kyn bta rhe ho?

Uday jagat Looked each other.
Uday'main to bhoot kuch janta hu,shayed wo bi jo aap duniya k saamne ni lana chahte,ab tumhein ye bi btau ki tumhara beta keise mra,main tumhein tumhare bete ko begunah k aise saboot bi de skta hu jise us ldki ko sja ho skti h..'

Mr.chodhary'kya chahte ho??
Tum jo chahte ho main kruga
un sabooto k lye,kitne amount chahiye btao?...

Uday'aamir to hm bhoot h,hmein jo chahiye wo btadunga phle miliye to sir thik h jo tumhara famhouse wha aao,or aake milo...
Jaldi.

Mr.choudhary'ok..
Tum saboot taiyar rkho..
Uday'ok.
Cal cut...

Jagat'uday tum ghr pe jao,main uska picha krta hu famhouse tk..

Uday'ya hurry jaldi kro jo krna h.
Jagat'tc uday.
Uday'u 2.

Uday jagat chodhary k ghr k bahr khade hote h,chodhary ghr se bahar niklta h.
Tbi uday nter krta h ghr me nd jagat chaudhary ka picha krta h...

Ramu-chaudhry's servant
'ye shahb bi rat virat uth k bahar jate h,wo door bnd krta h or jake so jata h.
Uday dhire-2 ghr me carefuly rums check krta h..

Finaly wo chodhary k rum me phuchta h.
Wha wo dekhta h ek mently disturb lady h jo soi h..
Uday lookd hr...
'ye mrs.chodhary h.

Wo unke rum me dekhta h, rum me aaryan ki pics h with father mother.
Aryan ki pic uthake wo dekhta h guse me aajata h..

Wo lady jaag jati h,ek ajeeb tarike se bolti h
'kya dekh rhe ho?
Aacha h na mera beta,pta ni mujhse naraj hoke kha chala gya h?

Uday dar jata h..

Lady'tum bhagwan ho na use leke aao na,main akeli ho gai hu uske bina..

Uday's in eyes little tear'main bhagwan ni hu,main aapke bete ko wapas ni la skta,Infact koi wapas ni la skta use.
Lady mantaly talk'kyn?
Uday shout'qki wo mar gya h,aapke bete ko uske gunaaho ki sja mili h,or aapke pati uske na hote huye bi use insaaf dilana chahte h,galti aapke bete ne ki sja meri manyata ko mil ri h..

Wo tightly us lady ko pkdta h'ni main apni manyata ko kuch ni hone dunga..

She no react wo hs ri h,becoz uday use kya bol rha h use smjh ni aa rha h...

Uday'main aapse kuch kh bi ni skta qki aapka pagal hona shayed sadme ki wjh se h,pr mr.c kyn ye glt kam kr rhe h.
Phr whi tble pe rkhi ek file pe uday ki njr jati h,he opend d file usme maya k sign kiye huye paper mil jate h nd wo use apne pas rkh leta h...


Mr.c jb famhouse pe phuchte h wha ruk ek cal krte h'suno main famhouse me aa rha hu,us ldki ko behosh krdo taki wo shor na kr paye..
Cal cut..

Jagat calng uday.

Uday jane lgata h wha se tbi lady bolti h.
'ha manyata aacha nam h na,mere bete ki ek dost ka nam tha,she make a child face nd cryng
Pr usne use maar diya..

Uday stop nd bckturn'aapke bete ne kam hi aisa kiya tha,agar manyata na krti to aap krdeti...

Wo bahar aajata h nd said'i m sry.
Nd jagat ki cal aati h.
'ha jagat bolo.
Jagat'akansha famhouse pe h.
Jaldi aao,main famhouse me hu.
Uday'yup ok.
Uday again calng mr.chodhary
'hello,main phuch gya hu,tum kha ho?
Uday'cheetng,inspctor ko 7th leke aaye ho...
Mr.c look al side'ni main kisi ko leke ni aaya.
Uday'lekin maine to dekha,khair jo bi ho wha ni aaunga ab main sboot tumhare ghr k aage rkh diye h,lelena or jo mujhe chahiye wo maine tumhare ghr se Bi le liya h..
Jao le lo.
Cal cut.
Mr.c'ye bda ajeeb aadmi h.
Kheir mujhe kya?
Mujhe to saboot chahiye...
Wo apne ghr ki trf chala jata h..

Continueos
Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey pari🤗, seriously mere Uday jaisa dimag kisi ke paas nahi. the way he got eh fake letter and also found akansha was amazing. And wow Manyata answering BR and akash was ooosome. Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Uday is so intelligent..😊

Uske plan ke aage Chaudhary ka chand haar gaya😈

Hamesha aise hi hoga...

Good will defeat bad

Ab jaldi se Akash ko bhi uski kiya sazza milni chahiye..

Meine Unwanted ki post mein likha tha ki Arjun ko impotent bana dena chahiye i believe Iss story mein Akash ke saath bhi yehi hona chahiye infact saare rapists ke saath aise hona chahiyr taaki woh fir kisi ko rape na karen😡

Luvd the scene btw Uday n Mrs Chaudhary ...luvd it wen he told her this..

Uday shout'qki wo mar gya h,aapke bete ko uske gunaaho ki sja mili h,or aapke pati uske na hote huye bi use insaaf dilana chahte h,galti aapke bete ne ki sja meri manyata ko mil ri h..

Wo tightly us lady ko pkdta h'ni main apni manyata ko kuch ni hone dunga..

She no react wo hs ri h,becoz uday use kya bol rha h use smjh ni aa rha h...

Uday'main aapse kuch kh bi ni skta qki aapka pagal hona shayed sadme ki wjh se h,pr mr.c kyn ye glt kam kr rhe h.
Phr whi tble pe rkhi ek file pe uday ki njr jati h,he opend d file usme maya k sign kiye huye paper mil jate h nd wo use apne pas rkh leta h...

yeh bhi acha tha Uday jantha hai ki she's nt well uss baath ka khayal rakha lekin sachayi bhi bataayi jo mujhe acha laga..

Uday stop nd bckturn'aapke bete ne kam hi aisa kiya tha,agar manyata na krti to aap krdeti...

Keep up the gud work dear n thanx for the PM

Edited by afreshbegin - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
VERY GOOD PARI...nicely done! 👏👏 👏 Are u planning on reforming Jai? Even Brij seems to have changed sides... Poor Mrs Choudary...I felt so bad for her. I'll be waiting for the next part 😊.

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