~ Tell Me You love Me ~ FF *updted ch 5 pg 12*

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: pinkywinky
awesum yar👏 plzzz update sooon plzzz can't wait u know i just love ur ff ❤️

thanks for lovin my FF it really means a lot and i 'll update no worries

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Posted: 13 years ago

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lipika dear I m so excited to see uday jealous

love to read that more

u r outstanding dear .do update soon

I m jumping on my chair with excitement

cant wait now dear

u r so good

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Guyss really sorry for like not updating but trust me i'll update as soon as possible sorry for keeping u wait that long next chappy will be updated very soon and this time i really mean it as no one's here to interrupt me 😆😆😆😆 anyways keep loving my FF its incomplete widout your support and also tell me you fav colours too cause i get confused that which colour should i write it so evryone who reading this just tell me ur fav colour and help me :):):)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: jazzthakur
lipika dear I m so excited to see uday jealous
love to read that more

u r outstanding dear .do update soon

I m jumping on my chair with excitement

cant wait now dear

u r so good

jealousy game begins now

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please update soon i will be waiting as i want to be the first to comment

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Uday's Pov

Jesus what did i just urgghh how could i dump manyata for Jay well well well uday you need to visit the doc ur mentally damaged for ditching manyata man what was i thinking why i didn't heard the whole convo and that logan guy urghh i hate him hota kaun hai woh manyata ko date par puchne wala such a douche he is mujhe to woh Tedha lagta hai i mean he such a girl itna hi shock hai date par puchne ka toh ladhko ko jake puche na haan nahi toh ohh holy crap manyata is taking over i just saud HAAN NAHI TOH well us logan ke liye toh haan nahi toh hi sahi hai bloddy G** i tell you
ab toh kuch karna padega i need to spoil my date with Jay asap

END OF POV

MEANWHILE WITH LOGAN AND SELENA AND UNNATI AT HOME

Logan " woahh nice home manyata i love it its so cool
Manyata : i know logu that why i am alive here u know i love cool
unnati ; ha ha as if u r the only "COOl" person alive on this earth
Manyata : *shocked* ohh my god unnati hoe the HELL DID U KNOW

ALL THREE LAUGHING

Unnati : ahh guyss i gotta go and fetch some ice-creams for dessert and vaise bhi butler is on leave so guess we'll be cookin food
Logan : hey unnati sould i drop you
unnati : no i'll drive and trust me i am not a bad DRIVER
Logan : evry girl says This *laughs*
manyata and unnati : WHATEVER
unnati : okk guys you do maths homework till than i get ice-cream and some food
Manyata : i LIKE
Logan : pizza'a so plss bring her pizzas thats the thing she eats evry freakin DAY
unnati ; ur right and u
Logan : i like pizza's too
Unnati ; so its up pizza's and coke + hot choco fudge in desert
Logan and manyata : unnati leave now and stop making our Mouth WATER

unnati leaves and logan and manyata are in manyata's room doing home work

Logan : woahh manyata nice room and hey you love music right i mean guitar and piano
Manyata : yeahh i love music but now i think we should do our homework and u came to help me right
Logan : yeah yeah so lets do maths homework

They start doing maths question

Logan : god i hate maths it s**kss
manyata : even me dude but homwork means homework and u should help me but instead i'm helping you and thats not right huh
Logan : woahh actually i just wanted to spend some quality time with you
manyata : Logan anyways let skeep goin its the last question
Logan : *pulls his hairs* God i can't solve this problem it damn difficult
Mnayata : no it ain't Logan see it like this

Manyata is explaining the sum to logan and he's just staring at her hairs her angelic face her
her lips her big brown eyes and manyata finishes the sum

Manyata : so here it is see it was easy logan *logan still lost in her beauty* Logan LOGAN !!!! are u listenning
Logan : yeah i am it was easy
Manyata : ohh realyy *crosses her hand* What did i say
Logan : uhh 1+1= 2 *have a Maybe this is the answer kind of expression on his face*
manyata : yeah really i really said 1+1 is 2 i mean common we are in high schools right and this problem's solution is 1+1=2 right *have a serious expression*
Logan : ahh i am sorry i was daydreaming are u angry at me
Manyata : *laughs* just kidding buddy man u were so serious
Logan : ohh whateva manyata
Manyata : hey u like guitar
Logan : i am an expert in it now watch this

HE TAKES THE GUITAR AND HE AND MANYATA STARTS SINGING

MEANWHILE WITH UDAY and JAY

Jay : ohh my god uday this is so beautiful
Uday : yeah i know
Jay : uday wassup u look sad
uday : yeah i am instead *thinkin of manyata and logan*
Jay : WHAT
uday : huh stop shouting jay i feel sick lets go home okk
Jay : but
Uday : no if no but so will u pleasee
Jay : ohh baby anything for u lets go home

BOTH LEAVES FOR HOME aND WITH LOGAN AND MANYATA

Logan : now watch this *he starts playing guitar*
manyata : nice tune logan i love it u should already join better than 1D well why aren't u one o 1D boys u play awesome
Logan thank you

Mnayata can actually relate to the tune and she starts singing her heart out

{ P.S : here the link of the song = http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RvzHyvAikmI&feature=related }

You Said You'll Be Everything You're Not To Me
Said You'd Make Me Feel Alive,
But You're Killing Me Inside!
And I Bet That You Knew All The Time
You Were Gonna Hurt Me Down The Line
Don't Try To Tell Me That's All Boys Do
If That's The Case, Then I'm Through With All!

{ manyata with whole passion and feeling sings this ofc thinkin bout uday }

If You're Telling Me That Love Writes,
Love Sings, Love Don't Make No Sense!
Tell Me What Love Like,
Makes Me Wanna Cry
Love's Supposed To Be My Friend!
I've Never Been In Love Before
But I Know It's Not Supposed To Feel Like This
I've Never Been In Love Before
But I Know It's Not Supposed To Feel Like This Ah, Ah, Ah

song end

Logan : wow you sing soo good manyata
Manyata : thankii logu and u play the guitar soo well
Logan : well well well thank u my lady
manyata : lady ke baache i look like lady to u ??
Logan ; yeah yup
manyata : hu ruk to abhi

she takes a pillow and starts hitting him and he too takes a pillow and starts hitting and and bam pillow fight they are fightinh here and there uday arrived home with jay

Jay : where are all
Uday : where is manyata
Jay : and unnati too
Uday : yeah yeah

uday and jay hears voices from manyata's room

Uday : whats up with manyata why is she shouting *goes to her room*
Jay : uday hum bhi chalte hhai

and there manyata and logan are still fighting and manyata gets dis balanced and falls and she's holding logan's shirt and he to falls on top of her on her bed and they both starts laughing
uady enter her room and see's this too and ohh boy boy he's in real anger seeing them laughing and on eachother and jay too eneters and sees uday's face

Jay : ud- *can't complete as she see's logan and manyata* ohh my my *shocked*

Manyata and logan looks at them and are confused and then manyata pushes logan softly and both gets up from her bed

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lol end of chappy guys 😆 hope u liked it and

IMPORTANT NEWS : well i was thinking for logan to be Jay's Bf later on but i cancelled the idea and this idea just struck my mind and let logan's role be like JACOB *twilight;s hottiepie wolfie* but he human here it just that i don't know why but i like manyata and logan's couple too but not as much as priyash and manveer god they rock together but manyata and logan are also good tho not that like manveer is but still they r kinda cute so be ready for some manyata and logan secens too and she'll fall in love with him to just like bella edward and jacob story its same here too a little bit

Precap : manyata confession's to uday