~ Tell Me You love Me ~ FF *updted ch 5 pg 12* - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
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i will for sure today thanks for liking my FF love yahh alot😛😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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guyss FIRST OF ALL really sorry for not updating but don't worry ch 4 comin up in bout 1 or 2 hours and before that i need to tell you who MR ??? is i know you must be thinking its aakash 😡 well no its not aaksh so SAY NO TO PAAKSH 😆😆😆 and nope it ain'y jagat too he is really cute and really hawt and very down-to-earth person and he was in percy jacksons remember anyone well if you don't than don't worry i'll tell you he is none other damn *drumrolls*
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LOGAN LERMAN 😍😍😍😍😍😍
AHHH i am trolling right now you seee i have a crush on him he's so cute but not more than ASHISH kk but anyways leaving my feeling let come to his feeling in the story
Mr Logan Lerman : a very nice,sweet,cute,compassionate and hot guys who loves manyata a lot but she never liked him in that way as u know she loved uday and 5 years ago he left to NYC and now he returned to london to confess his love and let me tell you he will not turn negative at all and nope he won't quit the FF either lets just say his entry is a BOMB BLAST so next chappy are gona be real fun 😆😆😆
P.S : if u have any questions in your mind related logan or anything in the story free to ask i'll answer you as one question came up so i wanted to ask that if u have any query ask ME 😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wohooo...thank god he is not akash...he is soo cute!!hmmm...
wiating for next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
awesome lived the guy so cute handsome charming😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 love to see him with manyata only flirting but uday is the best and please make him play the perfect cupid for manveer please please😃 and let him stay till the very end
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank god it was not that crap paakash
he is really cute but u r right not more than our beloved uday😍
waitin 4 ur update dear😃😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey u said u will update in 1 or 2 hours it has being 3 hours already please update i am dying to read the next part please
Posted: 13 years ago
#67
well lipika i have a question when will u update teri meri suhaagraat os dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i have a question and it is WHY WILL U UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER please update i am dying to read i know this is annoying every time i am asking u to update my mind i screaming stop stop but what can i do my heart is jumping up and down to read your update k this is my last post on asking u to update because i can understand that u might be busy but once u r free please do update
thank u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Uday : guyss i need to go and yess that was so lame okk better tell a good joke next time

Andrew : whateva dude when u'll see you'll know that it wasn't a joke manyata is really HAWT :*

Uday : God not again well anyways i don't want to waste my time arguing with you so bye

Uday's Pov

are these guys really mean all of it is manyata really hot well Mr uday how the hell on this earth will u know huh you never looked her with those Hot eyes right well if these boys are saying the truth than it would be FUN SEEING HER ALL THAT HAWT

END OF POV

Meanwhile with logan and manyata

Manyata : OHH logan you are so funny *laughing*

logan : ohh yeah baby i really am *laugh too*

Manyata : god i missed you logan i missed you alot when i needed to u You went away not fair huh

logan : why fear when LOGAN is here *says in a way which'll make evryone laugh*

manyata : Logan u just know how to make to smile god i luv yah *hugs him tightly*

logan : damn that manyata you are squeezing me man i am NOT FAT OKK so will you stop squeezing me

manyata : *breaks the hug* LOGAN I HAtE you jao main tumse baat nahi katre

Logan : hey manyata I was kiddin yaar mere joke ki itni badi sazza mat do

*puppy dog face*

Manyata : relax logu I was kiddin too tujhe kya laga joke sirf tujhe karna aata hai haan nahi toh

Logan : God I missed your Haan nahi toh a lot in these 5 years

Manyata : really k eek aur baar sunle Haan nahi toh haan nahi toh haan nahi toh *her voice gets louder each time she says haan nahi to*

Logan : arre yaar I missed your haan nahi toh but u don't have to fulfill my wish by making my ears a piece of sh*t

Manyata : huh *hits him playfully* logu u r too much huh *checks her watch* ohh my my I need to go meet uday I'll catch u later buddy bye *gives him a quick hug and runs*

Logan : this girll *smiles to himself*

Meanwhile with uday


Uday : arre yaar manyata where are you after hearing all this I am dying to see you god where is sh *can't complete his sentence as he turns around and see's manyata and he's starsrtuck*

Manyata : hii uday look I am really sorry for coming late are u angry with me ??

Uday wasn't even able to speak she was that stunned

Manyata snapped her fingers across his face and says : uday are u here buddy

Uday : *comes to reality* yeah manyata you look so Hawt !!! *Pov : what am I saying dude*

Manyata : is that a compliment ???

Uday : god I can't take this anymore manyata YOU R LOOKING SO SHEMXI MAN YOU LOOK SO STUNNING YOU LOOK FLAWLESS GIRL WHERE WAS THIS MANYATA MAN YOU LOOK SOO SOO SOO HOTT AND GORGEOUS EVEN MORE THAN THESE CHICKS OUT THERE EVEN MORE THAN CHEERLEADRES I AM AMAZED

Manyata : Wow uday u like me like this I am glad but that was too much huh uday I ain't more hotter than these cheerleaders out there

Uday : god u are babes you really are

Manyata : uday I think u aren't in ur senses cos u know what u r sayin DUDE THEY ARE f**KIN CHEERLEADERS

Uday : soo what you are beautiful

Manyata:*blushes* u think I am beautiful

Uday : yes u are I don't even need to think NOW

Manyata : huh now uday ke baache ruk ja tu

She chases him and there he just rans off and finnaly manyata catches him thru hand

Manyata : uday ke baache ruk ja tu tujhe to ma *gets cut off as she falls on uday *

Uday is lost in her eyes and she already is turning red like a tomato

And they come closer and closer and closer and closer and now their lips are only a cm apart and than damn uday's phone rings and they both come to their senses and manyata gets off him and uday also stands on his feets and picks his phone it jay calling

THEIR CONVO

Jay : hey baby whatcha doin I miss you

Uday : I miss you too jay

Jay : I love you babe

Uday : even I do

Jay : then say na you love me

Uday : yeah jay I LOVE YOU BABES now bye *POV : yuck buahh this sucks man*

END OF CONVO

Manyata heard this and she is really hurt and she just wanted to run away and infact she did the same but uday holded her hand

Uday : manyata where are you going

Manyata : I am going uday leave me I have a class

Uday : ohh common manyata stop lying its break

Manyata : yeah but I need to complete the assignment I'll catch you late buddy *she turns and starts walking than uday speaks*

Uday : manyata will you mind goin to dinner with me this cool restaurant just opened and I wanna go there

Manyata : *POV : OMG OMG OMG no manyata don't faint no no no* yeah yeah uday ofcourse I will but now I need to go bye *hugs him and ran away*

Uday : god this girl is really crazy *smiles*

WITH MANYATA UNNATI AND LOGAN

UNNATI AND LOGAN ARE TALKIN AND MANYATA JOIN THEM

Unnati : wassup manyata where have u been huh we are meeting like 3 hours after the morin

Manyata : I know unnati was busy and when I was comin to meet u this *points to logan* dude came up and he made me laugh my a** off and I actually forgot bout the time

Logan : OHh thank you thank you *thank u type bow ;)*

Unnati and manyata laughing

Unnati : well I agree this guy got great sense of humor

Logan : thanks unnati

Manyata : bas bas unnati isko itna bi mat sar par chadha

Logan ; kyuu nahi nahi batao nah kyu nah chadha sar par haan nahi toh

Manyata : arre yaar she won't be able to carry u on her head dude

All 3 laughs

Unnati : okk manyata I have a class see you late bye uday bye logan

Manyata : so logan whats the plan huh goin anywhere today as u love hanging out

Logan : u know me so well actually will you mind join me for a dinner

Manyata : OHH logan I would love to but I can't today u are a little late uday asked me before

Logan ohh no props I'll take you tomorrow and no excuses than ok

Manyata : okk bye

Meanwhile with uday and jay

Uday : Jay will you come for a dinner with me tonight

Jay : ohh I'd love too

Manyata : hey jay hiii uday *smiles*

Jay : hii sis u know what uday is takin me on a dinner tonight

Manyata : what *looks at uday confused*

Uday : yeah manyata me and jay are goin on a date so have dinner before we come okk oops I forgot u r goin with logan tonight right so unnati have to eat dinner all alone

Manyata : *confused and hurt* u know what uday u r wrong I am not goin with loagn as sum1 asked me before I refused his plan but now I will go with him instead

Uday :aww common stop lying I heard you sayin "I"D LOVE TO GO WITH YOU"

Manyata : well that was not the full convo you should have heard the full convo uday anyways bye uday and bye jay I have a class

Uday : *POV: shit man what did u do u spoiled ur night and why the hell on earth u asked jay god jhelna padhega is dayan ko uff*

MENWHILE WITH MANYATA

Manyata : I never thought u'll do this to me uday I THE YOU FOR THIS

Logan : heyy manyata u look sad whats up

Manyata : ohh nothing logan you see I got a lot of MATHS homework today and I am pissed a lot

Logan : no props I am good at maths I'll help you

Manyata : aww thanks for asking logan that so sweet of you well not a bad idea you come to my home this evening and sfter completing homework we'll have dinner U ME AND UNNATi

Logan : wait a second 2 confusions first u were goin out with uday tonight and second U Me and UNNATI is unnati living with you

Manyata : Logan unnati me jay and uday live in a same house unnati is uday's sister and they both are our family friend and jay is my sis

Logan : Jay I meet her *he trys to remember * oh yess that bitch *bites his tongue and thinks what he just said* ii am sorry manyata

Manyata :no props actually she is a bitch but I love her yaar she is my sis

Logan : and answer for the first one

Manyata : well in ur language HE DITCHED ME FOR A BITCH

Logan : what a guy who will DITCH U FOR A BITCH woahh man that rhymes I should write songs already

BOTH LAUGHS AND SCHOOL TOO ENDS AND WITH THIS CHAPPY 4 ALSO END

P.S : sorry guys for updating late actually I was busy I wrote in moring but my bro took away my lappy and than I had tuitions and I decided to update it in evening and than damn my mom took it for booking something and now I finally wrote this in peace and updated so so tell me how was it and here's the precap

PRECAP : uday Jay dinner date spoiled and logan unnati and manyata having a blast especially manyata and loagn and uday and jay comes home before and uday gets jealous seeing logan and manyata

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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was freaking awesome thank u so much for the update please update the next part as soon as possible i love your thank you so much once again u rock and the update was mind blowing i think i really irritated u with my requests but i am glad u listened to them thank u sooo much please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update as soon as possible

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