Right to love Manveer SS Note pg 43

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Sarah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#171

Wow it was so heart t0uching

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Shazzie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

Cham... There are some moments when one is sooo overwhelmed by feelings that cannot express or say anything and this is how I m feeling after reading this update. What a heart-wrenching letter by manyata. She had never openly acknowledged her feelings for uday and now she has literally opened her heart out and confessed the depth of her feelings for uday. So uday got everything and lost everything at the same moment... Love hurts..

You are superb writer cham. Love your SS. I know I say that everytime. I hope you dnt get tired of reading same thing again and again.

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@wendy25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#173

m this is literally one of the best piece of writing! I was blown off by this update.
So much pain and love is hidden behind those words.Really its magnificient. You leave me speechless. I had already read it so many times.I am not emotional person but still while reading it i had a lump in my throat.
So did manyata slept with UV na? is this story is going on the lines of BR-maya?

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Sakura24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: wendy25
m this is literally one of the best piece of writing! I was blown off by this update.
So much pain and love is hidden behind those words.Really its magnificient. You leave me speechless. I had already read it so many times.I am not emotional person but still while reading it i had a lump in my throat.
So did manyata slept with UV na? is this story is going on the lines of BR-maya?

The story won't go in the lines of BR-maya, I promise you, but as the introduction had already said the history is repeating itself, I'm not very emotional either, but will you believe me if I said I cried while I wrote this and my mama was really worried about me, god, she didn't see what I was writing or obviously she might have thought that I'm really writing this to someone, now I come to think of it.
Anyways thanks for reading, and for those lovely words, it inspires me you know😃

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Sakura24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: mahi0809
MY GOD!... I was left totally speechless. It was out of this world. I felt as if those really were the words of a lover, I'm totally spellbound right now.

Plzz continue this fast because... waiting is out of the question. This is terrific.

But Cham you really need to make an index on the 1st page for every chapter with its page number that you update, it gets very hectic to search every page... plz

And I didn't quite get, what did Manyata gave Uday in the special update??.. Did she sleep with him?😕😕

I'll work on the index tomorrow, as I've got a free day, you're right dear it's hard to find some chapters.
The special update is actually a glance at the future, the events that she talks about hasn't yet taken place and will in due cause, when that chapter comes you'll get the answers. and straight after that chapter the story will have a twist a pure one.
Thanks for reading, I'll update soon😃

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Sakura24

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Shals9
Cham... There are some moments when one is sooo overwhelmed by feelings that cannot express or say anything and this is how I m feeling after reading this update. What a heart-wrenching letter by manyata. She had never openly acknowledged her feelings for uday and now she has literally opened her heart out and confessed the depth of her feelings for uday. So uday got everything and lost everything at the same moment... Love hurts..

You are superb writer cham. Love your SS. I know I say that everytime. I hope you dnt get tired of reading same thing again and again.

When that letter was written she had already confessed her love once, this was when she was going away,
you know the story starts with Uday comeing to take Manyata home from somewhere? The events she describes had happened after that, that means in the coming chapters. and now she had left again and this time he won't be able to find her,
No dear I don't get tired of anything, if I did I would've already dead bored with my English classes, as the teacher makes me write the same answer again and again, but reading you comment is different, each time I do so my heart skips a beat (I sound like manyata, or maybe she sounds like me) so it's new every time😃😃
You're right love hurts, specially when you have no right for that love,😊
thanks for reading😊

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@wendy25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: Cham42195

The story won't go in the lines of BR-maya, I promise you, but as the introduction had already said the history is repeating itself, I'm not very emotional either, but will you believe me if I said I cried while I wrote this and my mama was really worried about me, god, she didn't see what I was writing or obviously she might have thought that I'm really writing this to someone, now I come to think of it.
Anyways thanks for reading, and for those lovely words, it inspires me you know😃

OK, i thought you will give tragic ending to it! But if even give it i won't mind because its so beautiful!
Please try to update today!

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Sakura24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: wendy25

OK, i thought you will give tragic ending to it! But if even give it i won't mind because its so beautiful!
Please try to update today!

I was planing a tragic ending too,
but I won't do that now, as someone correctly told me they both doesn't deserve so much pain, and after all I can't see them in pain

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@-SilverAngel-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: Cham42195

I was planing a tragic ending too,
but I won't do that now, as someone correctly told me they both doesn't deserve so much pain, and after all I can't see them in pain

Plzz update this emotional roller coaster of a masterpiece soon. I'm most hooked on this one from all of your works. It is truly a work filled with emotion,

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Sakura24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: mahi0809

Plzz update this emotional roller coaster of a masterpiece soon. I'm most hooked on this one from all of your works. It is truly a work filled with emotion,

at your service will update in the evening that is to say after 5.00 pm,
I'm totally super duper happy that you like it this much!!