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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it dear...sorry for late reply...but please update next part soon...as u know love to read mor and more of your story...so can't wait anymore...thanks for this update...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -JEHAN-

cham...where r u??

why u r not updating??😭
waiting for the next part...
and when are u going to update PLAYERS,CHECKMATE 2??
plz update soon na...plzzz...


I AM HERE JEHAN!!
Sorry dear, I won't update RTL today as I updated the meeting, and about player and checkmate 2,
I'll update them soon I promise, but please understand na, one girl many stories is kind of hard to be updated every day,😃😃
Edited by Cham42195 - 13 years ago
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👏👏👏thanks.awesome.brillaint...👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Brilliant wrk Cham!! This update was beautifully written ..pls PM me & continue soon (RTL/CHECKMATE 2/PLAYERS) 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
take ur time

Originally posted by: Cham42195


I AM HERE JEHAN!!
Sorry dear, I won't update RTL today as I updated the meeting, and about player and checkmate 2,
I'll update them soon I promise, but please understand na, one girl many stories is kind of hard to be updated every day,😃😃


i understand...😳take ur time..luv ya!!tc...
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Posted: 13 years ago
HI!!!😃😃
*Hidding* are you guys going to kill me for keeping you hanging??
A few quick words before I start updating, allseasonrain dear you motivated me to update🤗 and tejuangel buddy thanks for passing the message, yes guys I was trapped in band baja bharat not mine my sister's😆 It's not over yet but will update today as it's been ages since I've updated anything...
Oh those golden days on the forum I still miss them, now enough talking lets get on to work this is going to be the fifth chapter of RTL, read and enjoy!! It'll be updated in a few moments...hours actually😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Wud love to read 5 chptr i th0ught u ave forgot u r part of IF:(
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Originally posted by: MsLuscious


Wud love to read 5 chptr i th0ught u ave forgot u r part of IF:(


I had almost forgotten my self if the truth to be told, with my family and my school both keeping a tight grip on me,
The 5th chapter's coming still got a few lines to finish😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
ohh so i see sumbody finlly remembers us...chalo its ok i hope u had a gr8 ym in ur sis's marriage buh dat doesnt mean ur off da hook u hv to gives us a really long update😉.just kidding...nycto have u bak...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 5 - the sweet dream (Actually a part of the 4th chapter😛)

Something fell on the ground and shattered but Manyata didn't stop or turn back to see what it was. She was running the fastest she could away from her moment of fear. Entering the room in which she was making Mini's hair earlier she shut the door behind her and leaned against the closed door.

For some reason her heart was beating wildly and she could still feel herself in his warm embrace, feel the heat seeping through her skin, feel the smell of his breath on her face. Never in her life had she let someone come so close, to make her so vulnerable to make her heart so helpless. Yet this, was Uday and he was the exception for all.

He was her friend when she had no friends, he was the one who understood her when nobody else even bothered to. He was the one who wrote almost ten years to her when nobody else did care about her presence.

Smacking her forehead she closed her eyes. She should top thinking about him because this would lead into nothing but pain. There was a soft knock on her door, but it shook her curly.

"Manyata?" It was Jay.

"Di?? Are you inside?"

Taking a deep breath she opened the door. Jay entered looking at her questioningly. Manyata blinked and looked away lowering her gaze to the floor. Unintentionally blood crept into her cheeks.

"It's alright" Jay said raising her eyebrows. "Uday's here no more"

With those words she sat on the bed and looked keenly at her.

"Did he kiss you?" She asked casually. Manyata gasped at her.

"NO!"

"What were you two doing on the terrace then?"

"We..we were just dancing"

"Really?"

***

"Really really choti" Uday snapped at Unnati who had treated him with the same questions once he reached home. "I mean I felt bad for her, she was all by herself that's…"

"Yuvraj Udayveer felt bad for someone?"

Unnati asked swallowing a few giggles.

"Yes! And that's it!"

"Dada" Unnati said seriously. "Look at me" He couldn't do anything more than obey her command.

"Yeah that's it Dada you're blushing"

He shook his head. This girl was impossible.
"Now tell me" Unnati continued briskly. "Does something feels like stuck in your throat when you look at her?" Uday said nothing and Unnati started circling him. "Do you feel like the moon is brighter tonight, or the winds have started to blow?"

"Unnati" Uday said patiently. "We're not remaking three idiots here and certainly I don't feel anything of the sort"

Unnati smirked at him,

"Don't worry dada, you will soon"

With those words hanging in the air above him she left the room shutting the door behind her.

He was still driving trying to figure out his own thoughts as something strange caught his eyes. Stopping the car on that random road which was framed by the wild trees and shrubs on it's both sides he got out focusing on the white figure he saw a moment ago.

***

Manyata couldn't find peace in Vijay's house that night, she was so disturbed and Jay had only made things worse making strange suggestions. Thinking over everything again she remembered the only place where she could find peace and some old memory knocked her heart.

"What is this place papa?"

She asked Brijraj holding into his hand tightly as they climbed the uneven ground. He had recently requested her to call him papa and she did so. They were visiting Menaka whom papa had introduced as her aunt and then suddenly he was taking her on this strange walk to show her something fascinating.

"There"

Brijraj said as they reached the top, it was a night time and the silvery moon light gleamed in the waters. She had seen this stream before but not like this or not in this place. It was a place where two little streams joined in to a bigger wilder one, and the place was carpeted by soft velvety grass and smelled strongly of wild flowers.

"Is this heaven?" Manyata whispered softly.

"No dear, your mother used to call it her heart"

"Really?"

"It was the place where I saw her first, she used to come here whenever she felt lonely or upset, she told me that this place touches her soul, heals every wound in it"

"Why are you telling me all this?"

"Because" He said bending down to cup her face in his hands, the little girl looked up at him with eyes of interest.

"You're going to need it in future"

Well he was right she did need it now. Reaching the top she looked down at the city that felt to lay on her feet at the moment. Every dot of light was a home, a happy sweet home. She sat on the grass letting the thick smell of flowers disturb her thoughts and the stream to whisper her.

The cold moonlight make everything silvery even though it was almost midnight she felt no worries as she was in her place of peace. Laying on the soft grass she stared at the stars above and the soft wind played with her hair.

"Manyata?" A voice called her. "Is that you?"

She snapped out of her thoughts and turned around sharp to look who it was. The charm of her sweet secret was broken and the culprit stood before her looking like he couldn't decide whether to enter or not.

"No it's someone else" She replied rather crossed.

"Can I join you?"

"Only if you don't ask questions, I'm already totally confused"

"So am I" Uday said sitting beside her. "It was Unnati who confused me? Who was your culprit?"

"Jay" Manyata said slowly.

"Why can't they just understand that we were" She continued.

"Just dancing!" Both said at the same time. Their eyes met and they laughed together.

"We've got two fools in the name of sisters" Uday said shaking his head. "They just don't grip the idea of friendship"

Manyata turned to look at him and said after a pause.

"Are we still friends Uday?"

His smile vanished as he looked at her.

"Only if you've forgiven me for what I did in the morning"

"Yeah I think I did forgive you"

"Then I suppose we're friends"

"Thank god!" Manyata sighed.

"Why are you thanking god exactly?"

"For nothing special, just for clearing things"

"Ah" Uday said laying on the grass. "Do you love someone doll?"

***

"The engagement went quite nice maa sahib" Giriraj said as the elders sat up for a late night discussion after the engagement, as they were all still there, in Vija's house, where many more rituals of the wedding will soon take place.

"I was thinking of Mini and Uday" Mirnalini devi said to a concerned Giriraj.

"I was thinking about the same maa sahib"

"I mean we've got them engaged and everything in such a young age don't you think it'll be right time for us to…"

"Yes maa sahib I do in fact think the same way"

"It'll be good for the both states once this clears up"

"But the throne of devgar still has a problem doesn't it?"

"The problem will be soon cleared as I'm meeting Mr. Rai Choudry soon"

"So Manyata's going to get married?"

"That's right" Mirnalini devi smiled and Mini who was passing by only caught the last few words of this discussion.

She ran upstairs to tell Manyata everything only to find her room cold and empty.

***

"Yeah" Manyata said slowly laying beside him. "Loads of people, nani sahib, Mini, Jay, Vijay"

"No no no, not like that" Uday said turning to look at her, "I mean love, love…romance type love?"

"Oh that?" Manyata frowned at him. "No I don't, do you?" She turned the question.

"No" He shook his head, "Never found someone who'll make me fell over her"

"You are too much Uday!"

"Speak of yourself you didn't found anyone either did you?"

"No I didn't cause nobody notices me at all"

"Now that's a lie!"

"It wasn't, and you'll be the first I'll let know if I ever fell for someone"

"Really?"

"Yeah, you're my best friend aren't you?"

"And then I'll tell you when I find my dream girl"

"Sure, I'll pray for her bad luck" Manyata laughed.

"What is this place doll?"

"Hmm, what do you think?"

"A paradise of poets?" Uday suggested. "Or a destination of dreams?"

"It is a dream, a sweet dream" Manyata replied.

"You mean we're dreaming?" Uday raised his eyebrows.

"Hm, hm" Manyata made a sound of agreeing.

Uday stood up and held out his hand for Manyata,

"If this is a dream" he said. "Let's make it the best of dreams"

Manyata laughed softly as he helped her to get up.

"What is it that's on your mind yuvraj Udayveer?"

"Something very very sweet" He winked at her.

***

"Manyata!" Mini said in the top of her voice as she opened the door.

"Who's dead?" Jay asked sleepily.

"Manyata's not home!" Mini said anxiously. "Wonder where she went after the party?"

"What do you mean she's not home?" Jay asked glancing at the clock.

"It's 12.30!"

"Exactly!" Mini said shaking her head and leaving the room for Jay to smirk.

"Hey Unnati" Jay said as Unnati picked up the call. "Let me make a prediction your dada's not at home right?"

"How did you know?"

"Well" Jay smirked again.

"I think some innocent lovers need our help to realize that they are in love!"

"Oh I see" Unnati said in a evil voice. "What's in your mind?"

"Well not something polite and sweet after all" Jay giggled. "But all is far…"

"In love and war" Unnati completed her sentence and both laughed heartlessly. "Poor dada, "

"Poor didi" Jay said.

"Both are going to suffer from eternal infection called love" The said together. "And we'll make sure of it"

***

Now I know it wasn't much for a late update😕😕,

But tell me what it was like😊😊,

Sorry dears there wasn't so interesting Manveer in this chapter as this was one needed piece for the future story, And let me tell you the next chapter will be just manveer as the Jay-Unnati plan will come to action in it😳😳😉.

The next chapter is called: The burning rain😳 (I think you could grab the idea😳😳)

Waiting or your response😊😊

Sorry if I wasted your time after so many days😭😭

Thanks for reading😃😃😃

Cham (Hope you remember me😊)

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