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updatte soon!!!!! manveer aag laga deti hai
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i loved how manveer met that was too gd and the romance in front of everyone was just awesome i was laughing at akash condition too gd and the precap omg to gd please update soon and thanks for the pm


hey hi dear...😃
awww... thnnnx alot for ur sweet comment dear...
i m glad tht u liked the update, manveer confession nd their romance...😳
agar jealous aakash achcha laga toh wait nd watch fr more,,,,,abhi agey agey dekho hota hai kya...😆
will post soon...dont worry... nd hnxxx once again

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updatte soon!!!!! manveer aaga laga deti hai


aww... really ??????
very true,,,manveer sach mei aag laga detey hain😆
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please update soon please


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sorry ...will update the next chaapter on page 71
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hello nia ji 🤗
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Hey friens🤗
thnxxx alot for ur comments nd pressing the like button.👏👏👏
here is the part 1 of chapter 11
plz do read it nd tell hows it,,,,you like it or not...

so here is the part 11.1.,,,,,,, ENJoy

nd yeah,,, sorry for gramaticcal nd spelling mistakes




CHAPTER -10.2


RECAP :

MANYTA == (syas softly),,, oye halkat , vede,,, kya kar rahe ho,,, mai sirf mazaak ar rahe the,,, dekho choro mujhe koi aa gaya toh,,,plz choro (says scaredly but although she was loving this moment alot,,t

UDAY == ab to aney he do princes,,,hume kisi se dar nahi lagta...

MANYTA == plzz uday...plz choro... (says requestingly)

UDAY == theek hai princess...lekin iski sazaa toh hun tumhe thori der baad denge... (he whispered in her ear nd says flirtingly),,,,, hamara intzaar karna princess... bas thori der mei hum apke samne hongey...(nd then he leaves her, winking )

nd then uday nd akash goes from their to their respective rooms nd mnyta locks the door.



PRESENT


The time was 1:00 AM. All were in their respective rooms nd were sleeping peacefully exept our yuvrani manyta. TE main lights of her room were off but night bulb was on coz of which there was dim light in her room..but She could not sleep in tht light also nd kept on rolling over on her bed,sometimes in left nd in right direction, holding her phn in her hand nd awaiting udays call.

She was looking outside through the window, at full moon, as it was (PURANMASHI TODAY I.E FULL MOON DAY),, It was totally dark outside, but the twinkling nd glowing moonlight had shunned away the darkness. The moon was twinkling nd shining wnderfully making the night look serene nd beautiful. she wondered:


MANYTA == (says in a bit of anger to herself),,,, yeh halkat, veda khasmanukhana, uday ka bachcha mujhe phn kyun nahi kar raha,,,kabse wait kar rahi hun aur ye hai ki,,,,,bada tashan mei keh kar gaya tha ki "princess, hamara intzaar karna" (says with a cute pout imitating him) ufff,,,, kahin ,,, kahin ,, ye so to nahi gaya ? (she decides to call him, hrself)

but then uday called on her mobile...nd she picked his call in just one ring...


UDAY == (romantically),, HMMN,,, PRINCESS , hamare he call ka wait kar rahi thi na ...

manyta == (pretending as if she was sleeping) nahi toh ??,, uday, soney do na,, bahut neend aa raha hai (says teasingly nd smilingly)

UDAY == ok princess,, so jao, hum kal baat karenge,,theek hai good night (says pretentiously)

SHE SAT ON HER BED IN A JERK WHN HE SAID THT


MANYTA == oye halkat vede, khasmanukhane,,, tu itne jaldi phn rakh dega,,, mujhse baat nahi karega,,, (uday smiles to himself hearing such swears from manyta for him),,, bahut jaldi hai na phn rakhne ki,,, toh theek hai rakh le, mujhe bhi tujhse baat nahi karni (says angrily, she was about to disconnect the call whn)

UDAY == ( says smilingly) ,,, arey princess ab humne kya kia,,, tumne he toh kaha tha ki tumhe neend aa rahi hai aur tumhe sona hai toh isliye...(cuts him in b/w)

MANYTA ==(says angrily) acha aur agar mai tujhe ye kahun ki uday mujhe khai mei dhaka de do, toh tum de doge na, ,(uday smiles,) hmmn..tumhe sona hai na toh theek hai shauk se so jao... GOOD NIGHT...

UDAY ==(says flirtingly) hey, i m sorry princess, hum sirf mazaak kar rahe the baba, tumhe tang kar rahe the, aur tumhe kya lagta hai tumse baat kiye bagair hum reh sakte hai kya , hmmn(a sweet smile crept on her face on its own , hearing tht),,, aur vaise bhi hume pta hai tum kya kar rahi thi,,, tumko tumse zyaada achchi tarha se jantey hai hum...

MANYTA == Achcha ??? toh batao kya kar rahi thi mai ,,,hmmn ??? (asks him sweetly)

UDAY == tum is waqqt zaroor chand ko dekh rahi ho aur usmei hamei dhoondne ki koshish kar rahi ho,,, haina?? but tumhe nahi lagta princess ye thor filmy aur cheesy sound hota hai...vaise sahi kaha na humne,, toh batao lag rahe hai na hum usmei bhi mmmn,, vo kya kehti ho tum haan,,raapchik rapchandus haindsum .



SHE stood up in jerk from her bed with wide eyes nd started looking nd searching fr him in her room.


MANYTA == udya tum ,,,tum yahi kahi ho na, hamare room mei, isliye to tumhe sab pta hai ki mai kya kar rahe hu,,,haina,,, batao kahan chupe ho tum (she says while looking nd searching him in her room behind the curtains, under the table, behind her bed)

UDAY smiles nd nods his head smilingly to himself


UDAY == Arey princess tum bhi na,,, bhala hamari itni himmat ki hum tumhare room mei chipe ho,,, hmmn,,,

MANYTA == toh fir batao, tumhe kaise pta chala ki mai kya kar rahi thi ( says curiously)

UDAY == arey baba,,, yad hai aj puranmashi hai,,,tumne hame bataya tha ki kaise tumhe aj ki raat chand ko niharna kitna achcha lagta hai,,,kyunki aaj he ke din vo apni full size nd shape mei hota hai aur aaj ki raat ko apne roshni mei kitna sundar aur pyaara bana deta hai

MANYTA == (says saddly, thinking uday is not there in her room) , arey haan,,, maine tumhe bataya tha... (she goes towards her window nd stands there)

UDAY == ( says flirtingly nd huskily),,, hmmn princess kahin aisa toh nahi ki tum sachmei chahti thi ki hum tumhare room mei aa jayein... mmn ????

MANYTA == (says smilingly but sadly),, nahi ,,aisa bilkul bhi nahi hai samjhe, (but deep down her heart, she wanted him to be there wid her, taking a pause she says ),,,, u.d,a,y, sach aaj ki raat kitni pyari aur khubsurat hai na,,, ???


she says, closing her eyes nd resting her head on windows door,,,just then she felt a gush of wind caressed her cheeks nd her lips...her eyes were still closed


UDAY == (syas huskily nd passionately),, ,par tumse zyaada khoobsurat nahi hai princess (nd thn he gave a peck on her forehead,,,)

she softly nd smilingly opens her eyes nd sees uday in front of herself... she gave a very very sweet nd loving smile to him nd says


MANYTA == (says smilingly nd lovingly) U,,D,,A,,Y

Few seconds later, her eyes grew wider in shock nd amazement, realising tht uday is indeed standing in front of her. Rubbing her eyes, she stands straight nd instantly takes a step back looking totally startled nd says in bewilderment:


MANYTA == TUM ??? YAHAN??? UDAY , tum pagal toh nahi ho gaye na,,, oye halkat vede ye kya kar rahe ho...agar kisi ne dekh liya toh,,, aur tum fir khidki se aye ho,,, agar tumhe lag jati toh,,, tum na pure kaankhajure ke kaan khajurey he raho ge...(says in acute nervouness in one go not letting him say nethin)

UDAY == SSH... arey dheerey bolo princess,,, sabko uthane ka iraada hai kya..(says putting his finger on his lips).. aur jaldi se apna hath do, isse pehle ki hum neeche gir jayein aur apni hadiyaon ka choorma bana dein 😆


MANYTA looks at him in terror, shock, nervousness nd tension. 😲 she immediately spreads her hand out to him, he holds her hands nd then she pulls him inside the room . She had pulled him inside the room with so much force, tht she stumbled a bit while pulling him in. consequently, loosing their balance, nd taking a twirl they both fall very hard on the bed, with uday pinned over her nd she stuck under him.


She could feel the entire body weight of uday on her.. His hands were stuck under her nd were placed on her waist nd her hands were snaked around his neck tightly .. BOTH were breathing so heavily tht each other breaths were caressing their faces, Their chests were glued together with each other..,there was not even small amt of distance from where air could pass between thm,,,,looking nd staring into each other eyes, their heartbeats were increasing with each passing second which both of thm could feel . both were staring nd looking at each each other intensely, tenderly yet passionately....

REALISING the situation tht she is getting lost in his passinate nd intense eyes, manyta delibrately says


MANYTA == uday,,, nahi .. halkat , vede, khasmanukhane tum kabhi nahi sudhroge na,,,, tum firse khidki se aye ho... agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh, agar tumhara pair slip ho jata toh,,,zyaada shauk hai kya romeo ban ne ka ??? hmmn (says in a cute anger making a pout),,, kuch hua toh nahi tumhe, lagi to nahi na tumhe., tum theek toh ho na (uday was looking at her amusingly nd lovingly, the way she was behaving nd blabbering non stop),... pta hai mujhe kitni tension ho gayi thi,,, dekho, khabardar,,, khabardar agar tum dobara kabhi khiki se aye toh,, mujse bura koi nahi hoga samjhe... (he cutely nods her in yes) ... ab utho toh sahi, mere upar he soney ka iraada hai kya,,,,, (she bits her tongue realising wht she just blabbered out,,, udays eyes grew wider in amazement nd lips formed a smile on its own)


UDAY == princess... neki aur puch puch... (says winking at her,)

MANYTA == (amusingly nd smilingly),,,, BESHARAM (she gently pats his face lovingly)

Just then , they both heard some voice from outside... as if someone had waken up... manyta looks in tension nd tells him nervously tht someone is awake nd wht if tht person comes in her room or goes to his room...in tension:-


MANYTA == (says in tension) uday,, tum plz jao yaha se,, mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai,, agar koi aa gaya na toh kasam se hum dono ka band baj jayega... tum plz jao ,,, plz jaldi se jao...

UDAY == (says pacifying her)... manyta,, relax koi nahi ayega...hum hai na...

MANYTA == nahi,, uday tum plz jao,,, hum kal miltey hai theek hai... plz (nd thn she softly start pushing him out of the room, )


Uday was trying to pacify her nd make her understand tht everythings gonna be fine but she wasnt listening to him nd kept on pushing him so tht he could go out of the room

Atlast he lost his patience. Looking intensly at her, he instantly pulled manyta close to himself, so close in his arms ,tht she literally struck hard on his chests nd their chests collided with each other.

They were standing closely to each other tht there wasnt a minute space left between them... her heavy breathing was making her chest move backwards nd forward. he could feel her heartbeat nd she could feel his... he was looking deep in her eyes intensly nd passionately,,, she felt as if she was getting numb in his tight yet passionate grip. she could not say anything further to him as she was left sppechless nd tonguetied. . she was just intensly looking in his eyes without blinking her own... WRAPPING his one arm around her waist nd shutting her mouth with his other hand,,, he says:

UDAY == (huskily says, looking deep into her eyes with lots of intensity n love) SSSH... princess... ssh,,, bahut bol diya tumne ab hamari suno,,, hum tumse milna chahte the isliye aye the tumhare paas , lekin agar tum nahi chahti ki hum yaha aur rukein toh theek hai hum chale jaatey hain... hum kal subha baat karenge ,,,ok,,


Saying tht, he softly leaves her from his grip. he had just taken a step backward to move whn MANYTA instantly holds his arm tightly in her hands... looking nd staring deeply in his eyes she gently nods his head in no requesting him to not leave her nd says:-

MANYTA == (says lovingly) uday, plz mat jao,,plz...mai bas thora sa dar gayi thi but iska matlab yeh nahi ki mai chahti thi ki tum chale jao... plz mat jao... .(uday lovingly smiles at her which she also reciprocates


Then after some seconds, manyta sits on the ground,as if she is proposing him fr something, nd spreads out her hand to him... he looks at her in confusion nd dilemma nd thn

MANYTA == yuvraj udayveer singh,,, kya aap yuvrani manyta ke sath dance karna chahenge ??

UDAY == (he says smilingly) ,,,princess, tumhare price charming hum hai, toh ye hamra farz banta hai ki aise dance ke liye hum tumse puche naki tum hamse...😆😉

MANYTA == (in a child like anger),,, ooh ho,,, oye halkat vede, tum bhi na purey dhakkan he ho, mere sare romance ki aisi ki taisi kar di tumne...😆 accha ab batao, mere sath dance karoge,,, hmmn (he softly nd smilingly nods her head in yes nd make her stand on her feet,,, but manyta looks at him confusingly nd says) ,,,, but music toh hai he nahi ????

UDAY == princess, just feel it, hmmn...(lovingly).


THEY BOTH were standing by the side of window. MOONLIGHT was peeping inside manytas room nd was falling on both of them... soft soft breeze/ wind was also blowing which altogether made a chilling atmosphere in her room.UDAY spreads out his hand to her for dance nd she softly puts her hand in his. HE gently pulls her close to himself but their bodies werent touching each other tht moment. He softly yet tightly holds her frm her waist sending shivers down her spine. She wrapps her arms around her neck gently.😳


LOOKING very lovingly, intensly nd passionately in each other eyes, they both start doing close dance with each other. Completely lost nd engrossed in each other eyes ,Both were Looking at each other with longing eyes. A soft gush of cool, breezy wind caressed manytas face nd hair, resulting in few strands of hair coming across her face making her look smoking beautiful nd hot with those sexy strands of hair across her face. He leans in towards her face nd softly blows air on her cheek nd those strands of hair. she closes her eyes whn she felt his warm breath on her neck nd cheek.😳😳😳


Unlocking his one hand from her waist, he softily tucks her hair behind her ear nd thn gently moves his finger sensually nd traces the area starting from her ear ,reaching her neckline,shoulder her back nd then he finally reaches his destination tht was her waist. Her eyes were still closed tightly. she had got lost in tht beautiful moment... she felt amazing pleasure, whn he caressed his finger on her body like tht .She felt goosebumps all over her body as his touch was divine, beautiful nd pleasurable indeed.☺️


This was the moment, whn they both started to look each other with desired nd longing eyes. Uday dint want any distance tht was left b/w their bodies, so he pulls her more nd more close to himself wrapping nd encircling his arms around her waist tightly. Both were glued to each other like magnets, not even air could paass b/w them. She snakes her arms around his neck tightly, maintaining eye contact.

He leans in closer to her nd places his soft yet hard lips on her forehead. her eyes got shut on its own. Snuggling through her forehead, he reaches her eyes nd kisses on her left eye nd finally kisses her right eye... Cuddling nd caressing her cheeks nd jaw line he finally reaches her lips. 😳

THEIR lips were just inches apart... she could feel his warm breath caressin her lips which was making her lips to qviver with immense desires...she was waiting for tht lovely nd beautiful moment whn her soft petal like lips would be pressed by his. Minimising the fistance, He starts coming more nd more close to her such tht their lips were gently touching nd brushing each other . ☺️

A blushing smile crept on her lips on its own nd at the very right moment ,She turns her face away blushingly , unlocking her grip on him. she had just taken some few steps forward whn he instantly holds her arm nd pulls her close to himself one more time, such tht now, her back gets collided with his chest. Brushing his figers softly on her waist, he hugs her, from behind nd holds her waist very,,,very,,,very tightly by intertwining his fingers. Resting his chin on her shoulder, he says:☺️☺️ ☺️☺️


UDAY == (says hukily nd passionately ) ,, ahun , princess,,,, aj hum apko aisa nahi jane denge,,, aaj hum apko tun hamein tadpaney nahi dengey...


Saying tht,, he covers nd buries himself in her beautiful hair. Aftr a short while, he softly keeps her hair aside nd thn leans in further to press his soft yet hard lips on her ears... he gently bites on her earlobe. she gasped in a bit of pain. she tightly held udays intertwined hands in hers tht were already placed on her waist. he leaves soft soft kisses nd pecks from her earlobe reaching down her neckline.nd shoulder,,,. her eyes were still tightly closed.. she was enjoying the moment fully. He was leaving soft trail of kisses on her shoulder passionately,☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

whn he notices tht scar on his upper back. Looking at the scar, he says seductively:


UDAY == (says huskily, seductively) ,,, princess tum janti hona ye nishan humne tumhe diya the bachpan mei... jis din hamara roka hua tha... us waqt hum bahut roye the... lekin ab sochte hai ki acha he hua ki humne tumhe ye nishan ditya...(her ears were alrmed confusingly)... dekho na jab dobara hum tumse 16 years baad club mei miley tab yahi chot ka nishan dekhakar hume yakeen hua ki ho na ho tum he mari princess ho... socho agar ye chot ka nishan nahi hota toh hum tumse dobara kabhi mil he nahi patey... ...(she smiled)


Saying tht, he softly traces his lips on her scar, pulling herself more close to him. Her heart had started to beat very very fast.. She couldnt control herself any more, wanted to have him. to hug him, to embrace him in her arms nd make him as her nd only hers. She quickly turns towards uday nd hugs him passionately nd very tightly, moving her hands nd poking her nails all over his back, tightly pulling him more nd more towards herself.☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

she was completely lost nd engrossed in hugging him . Uday;s encircles his arms around her waist very tightly pulling each other towards themselves, such tht they were glued to each other. Both were holding each other so tightly tht they were going out of their breath but still wernt letting each other to go away from themselves even for a micro inch.''they remained in that position for god knows how long'. She felt they have come this close to each other after ages☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Manyta moves her hand, from his back to his hair nd clutches his hair tightly in her hands. Tilting her head sideways, she looks at him with longing eyes. Realising her desires he starts coming closer to her...manyats heartbeat was incresing as he was coming closer. .she was brething heavily tht he could hear her breathing also...atlast there was minimal distance between their lips'. her lips parted on its own...,both closes their eyes and within seconds their lips were merged into one. ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

They KISSED each other passionately for long'. They were going out of their breath but still neither of them was willing to give up. But ultimately had to break the kiss whn both realized that now they wont survive further if they dont get to breathe..😉. finally both broke their kiss together...breathing heavily. ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

.He looks at her intensly nd lovingly but manyata dint have more courage to look in his eyes once again'..she was shying and blushing so much tht her fair cheeks had turned red'. Her gaze automatically shifted frm his eyes to the floor'. she was looking on the floor blushingly, he puts his hand on her chin so tht she could look at him'but still she kept her gaze lower...


UDAY == (lovigly) ,,,, i love you princess...(says looking in her eyes, her gaze was on the floor but she somehow looks at him nd says)

MANYTA == (lovingly nd blushingly) ,,, i love you too uday...

UDAY == (smilingly) ,,, halkat vede khasmanukhane tharak ke ppepe??????

MANYTA == HAAN NAHIN TOH ...(smilingly)


They both smile each other nd thn manyta hugs him softly. uday closes his eyes. HE lifts her up in his arms nd put her down on her bed nd says...

UDAY == hmmn toh, miss haan nahi toh... ab so jao ,,,,, raat bahut ho chuki hai... hmmn,...

MANYTA == (smilingly)... mmmn...par tum yahi rehna mere paas,,, kahin jana nahin hmmn.. good night uday... love u...😳

UDAY == (lovingly) hum yahi hai tumhare kareeb, tum so jao...nd yeah love u too princess..😳 (ND THEN he patting her head make her sleep.)


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NEXT DAY (MORNING)

All were assembled at the dining table for breakfast, except manyta nd udayveer. Komal asks one of the helper to call them. Just then, Uday coming outta his room,dashingly made his entry in the main hall, standing upstairs. Everyone looks at tht direction, tara, jay,kay, ell, jagat,vijay, unnati, komal nd finally akash. He descends down the staircase looking ultra sexy, hot nd amazingly handsum wearing his trademark Black designer shirt nd dark blue jeans. he was looking so haidsum tht tara nd all the other girls, exept unnati😆 couldnot take his eyes off him... TARA WAS looking at him in awe.


He had just taken few steps forward, whn manyta also comes out of her room. she was extremely happy today,nd her happiness, was clearly apparent in her eyes. Her eyes were twinkling, nd face was glowing . ALL including UDAY looked upwards where she was standing .All were left dumbstruck seeing how beautiful nd gorgeous she was looking wearing her "RED" anarkali suit. with light and subtle makeup nd her beautiful hair left opened... Inshort, she was wearing UDAY'S fav colour dress,tht is "RED" 'and was dressed up in the way he liked her that is her hair left open not in a bunch'..."


Their gaze met each other. AS soon as they looked in each other eyes, both get lost in each other eyes thinking about their intense, passioante kiss tht happened just few hours earlier. Thinkinh about it, manyta blushed nd a sweet nd loving smile came across udays face. Few seconds later, realisng where they are nd everyone looking at them, manyta wished goodmorning to everyone nd then finally descends down the stairs.. Finally reaching there where uday was, she says lovingly nd blushingly

MANYTA == GOOD MORNING uday (blushingly) ☺️

UDAY == A VERY GOOD MORNING princess... (says smilingly)😳


They both then proceed forward towards dining table. Uday goes nd sit besides unnati nd manyta sit besides vijay. Both of them, sat opposite /across each other. VIJAY nd UNATI smiled at each other...😃.seeing thm blushing like tht.. Akash wished manyta nd she happily wished him back..All once again compliment her tht she was looking really very pretty nd beautiful. All were busy in eating, but uday nd manyta were busy stealing glances at each other...


VIJAY == (whispers in her ear),,,Manyta bhai,,, kya baat hai,,, aaj toh "RED RIDING HOOD" bani ho,,,hmmn ...ye red colour ka dress pehanne ki koi khaas wajha ??? (her eyes grew wider whn he asks tht),,,, kahin tumne ye red suit HAMARE yuvraj udayveer ke liye toh nahi pehna na??? hmmn ... (says pulling her legs)


A beautiful smile appeared on her face hearing tht nd she started blushing to such an extent tht her cheeks had turned "RED" automaticaly...


VIJAY == Manyta bhai,, ek toh tumne vaise he ye red suit pehna hai aur upar se itna blush kar rahi ho ki tumhare gaal tamatar ki tarha laal ho gaye hain,,,(she looks at him nervously) .. upar se lekar neechey tk tum red ho gayi ho,,, aisa lag raha hai jaise tum RED ketchup bottle ho... ( Manyta blushes even more nd he smiles,,)

Few seconds later, manyta looks at uday only to find his gaze on her. She in order to do some masti nd romance with him takes her footwears off nd pus her foot on udays nd starts caressing nd cuddling his foot with hers...looking smilingly at him...


VIJAY == manyta bhai,,,(says sweetly),,, jisko tum uday ka pair samaj kar itney pyaar se foot massage de rahi ho na vo darasal hamara pair hai,,,,,haha,,, toh plz apna pair hatao... mujhe bahut tezzz khujli (itching) ho rahi hai😆


SHE immediately removes his foot from vijays nd gulped down the food in one go resulting in coughing. "ahem,,,ahem.. Before komal could pass, uday immeditealy pass her the glass of water.. Uday looks at her at asks through his action, wht happened she tells him through his eyes nothing,,, she is fine...


VIJAY == (realising this he says indirectly... looking at uday ) ,,, FOOT MASAAGE (he smled @ manyta understanding wht vijay wanted to tell him)


Everyone shifts their attention to akash whn he asks tara tht y she is returning back to Mumbai so soon. THn uday nd even manyta asks her about the same. tara informs tht even she also doesnt want to go so soon but she had to go to complete some unfinished work relating to her college.. .She dint care whn others asked her to stay back but felt extremely very happy, elated n satisfied whn "UDAY " asked her fr the same... she felt very happy nd she dint even know y... Just thn aakash got a call nd thn he excuses himself to attend the call.

After few minutes, akash comes nd informs everyone tht he nd jagat need to leave for Gujarat now itself as they hav to attend the very important meeting of thtproject in which he was busy during manytas accident also...He goes to his room to get ready, whn he further went to manytas room to meet her nd says


AAKASH == moniya,,,,,moniya,,,(she smiles a bit)...,man toh nahi kar raha aise tumhe akele chorkar janey ka but kya karun jaana to padega na meeting bhi to imp hai,but tum fikar mat karo tumhara akash shaam tak tumhare paas hoga,,,theek hai.. (with this, he tries to come close to her to hug her, whn she instantly backs offf)

Manyta == aakash nechey chalein,,,sab wait kar rahe honge (saying tht she goes out of her room with akash following her. angrily nd jealously thinking manyta is not at all letting him come close to her...


Finally after half an hour.. akash, jagat nd tara leave to reach their destination i.e AIRPORT.


It was 2:00 pm. UDAY was busy in his video conferencing with the client of their hotel project... After tht he got busy with devgarh nd jaigarh riyasat work. jay nd her chamchis had gone for sight seeing asthey were feeling bored sitting at home..😕 unnati was in her room talking to her long lost friend nd vijay bhai was busy talking to komal.

Feeling bored without him, manyta was sitting in living room nd got herself indulged in talking to her maids,seemaji nd smitaji. whn she heard both of thm talking about something... she asks them,getting excited.nd feeling elated ."is this true,,then even she will go there today only nehow"...her maids nods in yes...She quickly goes to meet her mom nd tells the entire story nd says tht even she wants to go there,,,although, her mom dint have ny problem but she was worried fr manytas health as manyta have not got well altogether,,,,komal informs manyta tht she wont send her alone there as its an unknown place...but then vijay tells her


IJAY ==V DONT wworry komal mamiji, hum hai na,,,hum , unnati chale ja,,,,, (,but before he could complete her sentence, manyta stomped on his foot very hard,,,he shouts in pain, AAAH komal looks at her in confusion) ... AAAH ...i mean hum kaise jayenge komal mamiji, hamare pair mai to lagi hai na...(he looks at her giving her an evil smile) 😆


Komal informs her tht now vijay also is not going iwth her so she wont send her alone but then manyta immediately says

MANYTA ==mai akele kahan ja rahi hun maa,,,mere sath uday toh hoga na,,,mai uday ke sath chali jaungi,,,, aur uday pe to aap mujse aur jay se bhi zaada bharosa karti haina, toh ab to mujhe janey dijiye,,,aur apko to pta hai ki uday mera aap sabse bahut achi tarha se khyal rakhega , kisi cheez ki kami mehsos nahi hney dega,,,toh ab mai jaun... (komal looks at her with wide eyes. as if she had grown an extra head)


Komal asks her tht has she asked him yet,, as he is really too busy in his work...

MANYTA == uski chinta aap mat kijiye maa,,,vo mujhe kabhi mna nahi karega...(vijay looks at her smilingly),,,, ,thnxxx maa ap jo hame janey de rahi hai,,,thnku very much,,,mai uday ko abhi bta ke ati hun...(saying tht she goes to meet uday,,, komal kept looking at her in confusion nd now in a bit of suspicion with wider eyes)



Uday was talking to some maha sabha member relating to some riyasat work whn mayta barges in the room,,uday nd the other person look @ her in confusion...


manyta == uday mujhe tumse abhi ek imp baat karni hai

UDAY === MANYTA abhi hum thora busy hai,,baad mei tumse baat kartey hai,,ok

MANYTA == nahi mujhe abhi baat karni hai...(nd then she comes nd excuses themselves nd takes uday alongwith her to her room)

UDAY == mmn toh bolo princess aisi kya imp baat karni thi tumse jo ek min bhi ruka nahi ja raha tha...(says huggging frm her behind nd resting his chin on her shoulder)😳😳

MANYTA == uday mujhe tumhare sath abhi isi waqt kahin jana hai,,,,bolo tum chaloge na mere sath...

UDAY == fcourse princess,,,,, ur wish is my command ma'am...aapka hukum sar ankhon par...but jana kaha hai miss haan nahi toh??????o

MANYTA == (says smilingly),,,, vo tumhare liye surprise hai...😳


Manyta informs komal, unnati nd vijay tht uday is going with her... komal looks at thm in amazmen nd confusion, she finally tells uday to take care of her nd try to return as early as possible as they are going to a place which is 200 km away...uday looks at manyta in confusion.

After meeting everyone they both reach the car they were going in...udays black merc... MANYTA asks uday to give his phn to her, he gives in . Thn manyta calls seemaji nd hands over her both phones nd tells her tht if any1 calls on it thn say tht they have forgotten to carry their mobile,,,seemaji nods

MANYTA tells uday tht she doesnt want to get disturbed by phone calls whn they are out...uday gives her the loving smile...😳



AAKASH IN MEANTIME CALLS ON MANYTAS NUMBER TO TELL HER THT HE HAS GOT FREE, ND NOW HE IS COMING BACK,,,,BUT WHN HE CALLS HER SEEMA JI PICKS UP THE CALL ND INFORMS HIM THT MANYTA HAS GONE OUT WITH YURAJ UDAYVEER SINGH ND BOTH HAVE FORGOTTEN TO CARRY THEIR PHONE,,,, AAKASH CUTS THE PHONE IN EXTREME ANGER GNASHING HIS TEETH ND IMMEDIATELY CALLS SOMEWHERE...😕😲


the credit for the pics go to pic uploader,nt me... ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,


THATS IT ...FOR THIS UPDATE... friens...so hows it plz do tell...😃

i hope u all have liked this chapter...i did my best to give u all romantic nd hot update,, but dont know whether was it hot enough though...?????😕

sorry i cant give u precap in this update as it will surely ruin the further story plot...

will post next part very soon...like i posted this part...😉


Edited by imkool - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fantastic update Nira.

I liked that UV-M Scene in Manyata's room😉, that scene was so romantic n hot too.☺️ ☺️ ☺️
& When VB was teasing Manyata & that Foot massage😆 Poori ketch up ki bottle.🤣
Akash was feeling Jealous that's a good thing.😆
In last scene Manyata showed her intelligence & gave both mobiles to Seemaji. 😆So Seemaji You've a chance to date Majnu.😆 If you've dare to date.🤣
Thanks for the wonderful n romantic update.😊
I loved it Nira. 😛
Do continue ASAP.😉
Love your work.🤗 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
imkool i really dont have words to describe how wonderful this chapter was please update soon u are one of the best writers this forum has and you update gets better and better each time i loved this part and u ended it in suspense please update soon please and longer part because i can never have enough of your updates and manveer together 😳😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome update! waiting to see what happens next! please update soon!

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