ss-PKHTNIK, LAST CHAP (All parts ) UPDATED pg-153

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roze Chaudhry

@Roze12

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1271

hawww kia manveer ko mar dala 😲 ab mekko update nhn prna😭

Nira baby kia kya 😭

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Rubaa Rana

@adorable_rana

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1272

hey nira deary...need time to read such long update...sorry😳

but thanx alot for the pm and such super long update...hugggss🤗🤗🤗

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#1273

res 4 now.

Saira has just told me how the story ends. I need to gather some courage be4 I can read it 😭😭😭.

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816401

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#1274

shuru ke parts merit age ke nahi the.but whole update was emotional.manveer is like do jism ek jaan.I was crying when I was reading uday's pain.come up with a new story soon

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#1275

😭 meinn bohut hi ro rahi hu!!!!!! pehle to iss akash ko pahar se niche fek dena chahie tha pehle,hai hee iss such a creeeppp,how cna he stooppp so low!!!!!!!!! manyata and uday maar gaaye, am soo feeling baddd,happy ending nehi dyaa😭😭😭

okkay now the good parts i love dthe mehndi,haldi all the rasams!!!!!!! btt ye kya ho gaya,wo dono maar gaye aur hum dukkhi ho gaaye!!!!!! will be waitng now for ur nxt ss or ff,where tehre will be happy ending!!!!!!!!! andd u r an awesome wrterr,i loved lall ur updatess,thaank uu for dis ss!!!!!!!!

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sloppy-hope

@sloppy-hope

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#1276

😭u had written the scenes beautifully!!!!

believe me i am crying my heart out here!!!

uday and manyata dead>>>💔

that rreally broke my heart!!!!!!

i had read the last chappy's 2 days ago but the ending was so depressing for me!!!!

anyhow,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,the whole ff was smashing!!!

do write a new ff soon!!!!!! (plz with a happy ending)

👏 u really roked!

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1277

I DONT BELIEVE THIS...
FOR THE FIRST TIME I CRIED...
AFTER READING SOMETHING...
OH GOD M STILL CRYING...
THAT EPI..
LIKE I HAVE NO WORDS...
YOU ARE THE BEST...
WROTE SUCH AN WONDERFUL END...
SORRY BUT RIGHT NOW I'VE GOT SO EMOTIONAL THAT CANNOT EVEN CUMMENT PROPERLY...😭

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nimra malik

@mimi.maik

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#1278

oh GOD u did a tragic end... 😭 i was crying like hell while reading...i got helll emotional... i didnt want to read it but some how i got the courage and read the whole in one go... this story was sooo much beautiful and adoring but the end kills me... i didnt cried that much in my whole life when i cried during reading... like its happening in real life... over all nicely written but it deserve a happiest ending... but no problem their love will be alive 4 the eternity...good job...😭 😭 😭 the all scenes of manyata and uday was deeply heart touching... 💔...have no words how much ur story get space in my heart...i loved it from begining and always love PKHTNIK... stay blessed...

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chitra_rao

@chitra_rao

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#1279

I damn cried reading that update Nira, I mean after so much of happiness u give us this shocker 😭😭, Why did u have to do that. No wonder it was so beautifully written that I lived every moment of manveer's togetherness, 👏👏, all the applause to you for that, but the ending is so not deserved by Manveer, comon after so much they did deserve to live happily ever after😭.

But Nira thanks fro giving us such a wonderful Manveer story, though i don't approve of this ending, but still it has been a journey which along with you even I have lived as a reader 😛. Thankyou, and hope to read more from you 😊