ss-PKHTNIK, LAST CHAP (All parts ) UPDATED pg-153

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puggyy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1251

😭Emotional update 😭😭

Superb 👏👏

All endings can't be happy I know

I cried seeing uday's pain after his princess left him ...😭 😭 😭

U made me cry like hell😭😭😭

Wonderfull ff 👏 👏

Outstanding effort !!!!! 👏 👏 👏

Thanks for such a fabulous Ff 👏 👍🏼

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anushruthi

@anushruthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1252

WOW

this update was worth de wait

but i didnt expect Manyata 2 die

i was hoping tat sumhow she vud survive

and thn UV goin in2 Coma was shocking

but thn u killed UV 2 😭

but their love is unconditional

even after death dey stayed United

very emotional update

very very touching

u gave as all such sweet romance that

such an ending came Unexpected

but then all is fair in love and war

i m glad tat Akash was beat black and blue and killed

Do write another manveer ff soon

1ly thn i l 4give u 4 murdering manveer

they m8 hav died but u illustrated very well

that their love is eternal , everlasting and outside the confines of death

Shocking and Mindblowing update

Edited by anushruthi - 12 years ago

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@-The_Tomboy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1253

Kyun kyun kyun?? why did you do this??

I loved everything you wrote but why?

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757315

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1254

k i have no words

i read at ending part before i read the whole updtae sorry i am a bad reader

i just read uday dies and i was so shocked

then when i went to read the whole update was like so shocked that manveer died

i thought it will be a happy ending

i was crying so much literally wiping

actually i stil am crying there are tear drops on my laptop

u are a beautiful writter

how could u write so well

the manyata dying scene

i am never reading that again i felt liek it was real

awesome job when it comes to writing

there was more feel because it was hindi

u write dialogues liek they were in the real dekha ek khwab

i mean u rock

hats off

i dont know i am still crying this is the only story one this forum and any novel i have read that has made me cry so much

great update nira

oh my god i am still crying i can imagine manyata's death scene

udays emtions

the dialogues

the feel

the setting

the ending where uday dies where manyata dies

uday talking to himself and manyata's picture

oh god nira i realy cant explain how good this was

i think i have lost a lot of water till now due to crying

at the end this story showed us true love

the love that is unconditional

the love which even death bows down too

this story shows us the meaning of love

it tells us that love is not having sex but it is too keep a promise to made to your loved one in the most difficult of situation

it is a commitment that does not end with death

but death is just the beginning to the beautiful journey up there

it told us that

Love is the condition in which the happiness of another person is essential to your own

this was a beautiful manveer SS with everything inside

please write more i will looking forwards to see more of your work

start a a new story please

Edited by vampire12345678 - 12 years ago

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princess369

@princess369

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1255

plzzz update new story about manveer😊

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Hannia

@hans1998

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1256

jiji superb piece of ur skill, i could feel all the emotions of uday and mnayat and i was crying while reading the last part... ... manveer love is unconditional...:( :( that was an amazing update!!!!! brilliant job

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1257

Edited my comment in pg 163
do read it
thank u

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zainab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1258

comment edited on page 154 do see it i have written it with true feelings!

also reply me! will wait

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Pooja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1259

OH MY GOD!!!!!! I dont know what to say & how to say?????I am totally speechless...The whole FF was FANTASTIC WONDERFUL AMAZING But your last chapter was ''STUPENDOUS''...

I have remember all the journey of ManVeer...How Manyata gave herself not only body but also her soul to a man whom she love most on her engagement day with Akash...How next day Manyata denied to accept her love for him & hurt him as well as herself...How she tried hard not to love him back...How she misunderstood him in club...How she confessed her love for him in Devgarh...All those moments which they spend together were simply SUPERB...

But last chapter was most emotional & heart-touching one...it showed ManVeer depth of the love...their love was pure as their soul...Manyata took bullent on herself to protect her love & Uday happily took his last breath with smile and name of Princess on his lips...It was PERFECT end of PERFECT love story of ManVeer...

Honestly i too felt bad & become emotional while reading it But its true that True love never end so are ManVeer not died they are alive and Together like ''ANGELS'' in Heaven...

PS:-I am so SORRY for not commenting before on your FF as i am too lazy to comment so please forgive me and you are BRILLIANT writter so come back with another Heartwarming story of ManVeer...<3<3<3

Edited by Pooja_0910 - 12 years ago