ss-PKHTNIK, LAST CHAP (All parts ) UPDATED pg-153 - Page 105

Created

Last reply

Replies

1.2k

Views

153k

Users

77

Likes

1.9k

Frequent Posters

patakaguddi thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AndreaBaid

OMG OMG OMG that was soo good nira plus hadda haddi wala joke was too hilarious. One thing i love about you is that your updates are super duper long and i always enjoy reading them and also you manveer scenes are over the top romantic the terrace secene was beautifully written it was like i am living the moment as it was really displaying in my mind the scenery. Plus Vijay bhai what a plan lights off light on totally very well written and manvver kisses were too cute and when komal took manyata's phone and uday speaks to her LOL and then manyata in udays room at late night wow
now my mind in swimming in gutter and hate you for ending it at that point such a hand-cliff hanger.
Please promo ya precap de do jaldi se and that aakash 😡😡😡 i hate him agar usne phir kuch kara na to murder kardungi uska mein anyways you are BRILLIANT AWESOME AMAZING MINDBLOWING and i love ya my nira baby Tum To meri ROCKSTAR HO


hey hi dear...andy...😃
i think you have commented on the update fr the first time rite??????
well m really glad to see new reader to this ss...
just wanted to ask u, have u read the story frm the beginning or frm the last 2 or 3 chapters?????
newys
thnxxx yaar thnxxx alot fr such sweet nd lovely comment of urs,,,,, i am really glad tht u liked the update specially all the manveer sewwt nd romantic scenes tht i highlighted in black part

thnxxx once again andy baby, fr such generous, praiseworthy words of urs... i m relly happy tht u liked this update...
nd thnku fr making me ur rockstar...😆🤣

patakaguddi thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Vasishtha

RESERVED.😊

EDITED.😉
Yes, yes today finally I read both parts 16 n 17.😛
Claps, claps, claps for you Nira.👏 You presented the Royal Engagement of Manveer so so beautifully, I was feeling amazed great, great job Nira.👏 👏 👏
K, let's start with first scene of update when Manyata picked up UV's photo frame n wished UV good morning n kissed on UV's pic oo so sweet.
VB never leave any chance to tease his loving sisi.UV was waiting for Manyata's phone call n their convo was very nice.😳
Brijraj-Manyata's bonding was beautifully showed.😊
OMG UV was sounding so hot.😆 I want to see him.☺️
When all lights of hall switched off I was thinking OMG😲 Kahin majnu toh nahi aaa gaya.😆 but thank God I was wrong you know na Indian shows effect lights jane ke baad koi gadbad ho hi jati hai.🤣 But thank God you're a great FF writer yaar.😆
UV-Manyata both lost into each others eyes.😳 n not giving attention to people around them.😉 I can imagine this scene.
Thank God You make Tara's character good one, She's not desperate n selfish.Great she realised that UV n she not made for each other.😊
n for a second J was also thinking the same but we all know her but I really want to see J's redemption n as a caring n loving sisi.😊
UUU Vijay n Unnati both trying to tease Manveer.😉
Song was nice Nira thanks for the video.😛
Yippeee finally Manveer officially engaged. 🥳
Terrace scene of Manveer was the best scene of this update. Wow UV is such a sweetheart. He decorated terrace with fregnance candles, Teddies OMG so romantic. I loved it.🤗
Showering of Rose petals n fireworks scene was so romantic. UV gave his Princess beautiful surprises.
n finally Kissing scene but once again Unnu n Vijay bhai.😆 disturbed them.😉
MAJNU such a shameless person watching UV n Manyaya's romance without shame.😡
when UV said, "Hum tum se badla le kar rahenge Princess n from other side Komal replied,"Hum Princess nahi Princess ki Mummy bol rahe hain."😆 Loved it yaar.😛
but finally UV caught his Princess but in end of the update.😒
I want to read more.😒 Pls update next part ASAP.😳
Thanks for the beautiful n mindblowing update Nira n thanks for the PM also.😊
Do update ASAP.😊 Waiting for the next one.😊
Great job.👍🏼
I hope when you read my comment than you'll not getting bored.😆
HUGS.🤗 🤗 🤗



hey sona,,,,,hi dear🤗 🤗 🤗
arey waah,,,,,kya baat hai ma'am,,,is bar to tumne update itni jaldi pad liya aur upar se inna sohna teh inna pyaar comment bi kar ditta...kya baat hai yaar...
itni lambi update padkar vaise tum bore toh nahi hui thi na?????😆

newys thnku thnku thnku thnku thnku,,,,,,,,,thnxxx alot sona swwtie, for such awsum amazing, beautiful nd lovely comment of urs...
tumhara commentpadkar sach mei dil bageecha bageecha ho gaya...😆
ur comment surely brought a sweeet smile across my face...so thnxxx fr tht👏


once again i just loved reading ur comment,,, i mean the way u have done the mini analysis of the entire chpater,,,its amazing yaar😳

i m really glad sona darling, ki u liked manveers royal engagement scne😳

u know what, u r the first persoo who has mentioned about the scene whn manyta woke up holding udays photoframe in the morning,,,,rest of all mentoned about their engagemnt nd terrace scene but only u have metioned about this scene,,,,so thnxxx to you yyaar,,,i m glad u liked this scene as it was my personal fav too😳

so u also loed brij-manyta scene,,,hmmn,,,well u knw i always wanted to see this bond b/w thm in the show,,,but never gt to see so i put such scene in my ss.😆

isiliye toh maine vo light wala suspense rakha tha ur promo bhi vaise he diya tha ki sabko lagey ki majnu aa gaya,,,but last mei sab kuch sahi sahi kar diya manyta ko uv ke paas bhejkar😆

i told you , tht tara is not gonna be a negative character...😃
thnks fr liking the song,,,i added it very late whn i was just about to update this part,,,,,,glad u liked it😃

well i m very happy tht u liked uv-m terrace scene nd the way he has given surprise to her nd uv-komal scene...now it seem tht my efforts dint turn futile as almost everyone loved this scene..😳

thnxxx to u yaaar,,,fr giving such an awesum nd lovely comment...
dont u dare say this thing again tht

I hope when you read my comment than you'll not getting bored.

i just loved reading it...ur comments always manage to bring a smile onto my face,,,so thnxx o you fr tht sona dear🤗 🤗 🤗


aur haan
usse yaad aaya
maam , aap apni story kab update kar rahi hai?????
plz update soon yaar,,,really waiting fr ur next chapter eagerly
patakaguddi thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: swetsurati

Awsomeee...mind blowing...asalways...dil garden garden ho gaya...
Finally manveer are engeged...
Haila J was right woh pagal hi ho gay hogi...tabh uday aur manyata ko perfact copule man rahi thi...lekin ush kamini ne bhi akhir maan hi liya k manveer is best...
Brijraj and manyata scene was sooo...cute ye ek chiz show me missing thik...
Awww...poor tara...i feel bad for her...but leave it...ush ka setting kisi aur ke sath kara dena...song seqence and
Hayeee...love terece scene...especially rose petal and cracker scene...was super romentic...and yes hadda haddi scene was superb...
Urghhh...kamina...i wonderd ab ye J kya karegi...update soon...and thanx for PM.


hey hi shweta...🤗
thnxxx yaaar thnxxx alot,,, i m really glad to know tht u liked this chapter...😃

yeah manveer r finally engaged aur han shayad jay ek second ke liye pagal ho gayi thi jo manveer ko ek perfect couple maan rahi thi😆

thnxxx i m happy u liked brij-manyta emotional scene😃 nd manveer romance on the tarrace.😳
will try to update next part soon dear😃
patakaguddi thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: andy.a

Superb update loved all manveer moments. Waiting for the next update


hey thnxxx dear...😃
patakaguddi thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mimi.maik

wooow nira that chap was super fantastic 👏 👏 👏 finally manveer got engaged...please update the next part sooon i will eagerly waiting 4 the next,...keep it up...❤️



hey hi dear...😃
thnxxx i m really glad to know tht u liked this chapter...😃 yeah manveer r finally engaged 😳
will try to update soon

patakaguddi thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hey Nira, That was an utterly romantic update, ...too beautiful for words. You are a very gifted writer!!! Thanx 4 the PM...

BUT...
...I read the chapter before the PM arrived😆
Continue soon...



hey hi navina...🤗
thnxxx yaaar thnxxx alot,,,fr such sweet, lovely nd praiseworthy words of urs...😃
i m really glad tht u liked this chapter...😃
next time i will try to pm u early😆

will try to update next part soon😃
patakaguddi thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pwincess_sumi

Awesum update I luved it liked how u made the engagement happen n the suprise after that was also sooo awesum hope u the wedding happenz soon I cnt wait anymro



hey hi dear.😃
thnxxx yaaar , i m really glad tht u liked this chapter...😃specially manveer engagement scene...nd manveer romance on the tarrace.😳

patakaguddi thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zinayrules

Yar apki kia bat hai...i justt love yr ff and the way u write its just perfect...
each and every feeling is expressed so beautifully...very well done it shows how much hard work u do...love manveer scenes they r soo cute...
thanks alot for pm...i am glad to read such an amazing ff...




hey hi dear😃
awww,,,,thnku yaar fr such sweet, lovely nd praiseworthy words of urs...😛
i m really glad to know tht u liked this chapter..😃 specially manveer scenes😳

awww,,, i m glad to find such sweet nd lovable reader like you,,,yaar😃🤗
patakaguddi thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Fantasyangel

fab update..do cont nxt part soon plsss...nd ye j nd pakash to doggi ki punch hain kbhi nhi sidhe honge..


hey hi dear,,,,,😃
thnxxx yaar, i m glad u liked it😃
kojagoryfan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
as usual very very romantic.fantastic work.loved this. thanx 4 pm

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".