ss-PKHTNIK, LAST CHAP (All parts ) UPDATED pg-153

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Sonam

@-RK_Ki_Biwi-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#1061

Originally posted by: coolsaloni.nira

next update mei thora time hai dear...next update mei bomb phootney wala hai chota sa😆

OMG😲 Ye chota bomb kahin M ke preggy hone ka toh nahi hai.😆

Haaye rabba hum toh kab se wait kar rahe hain khushkhabri ka.🤣 Bas tumne hi rok rakha hai Nira.😆

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roze Chaudhry

@Roze12

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1062

woww awesum update Nira baby👏 👏 👏 kia mast update great

update 👍🏼 i just loved it😉hmm tou manyata nay uday ko bohut

miss kia issliay us ka photo frame hi apnay pass rakha hoa tha us

nay socha jab taak asli uday milta frame say hi kaam chala lo🤣lol

frame ko hi huggie or kissy kr dey 😆or vijay bhai ki kia baat ha

hamesha uday or manyata kay beecha may a jate han kahiin uday pr

nazar tou nhn ha vijay bhai ki🤣hayyee manveer aik dosray say

baat krnay ko taras rahay thay hayyee sacha pyaar lakin

meray liay jealousy wala pyaar🤣uday meray ilawa kisi or kay

fone ka wait kr rha tha😆vijay bhai ki apni life tou kisi kay saath

sat nhn hoti ha or manveer ki life may kabab may haddi ban jatay

han🤣mera uday itna qatilana lag raha tha kya royal entry thi

Nira baby👏jis tarah tum nay sab likha woww 👏uday ki entry

hayyee sab ko jealous kr diya uday ko dekh kr tou sab taraf

jalnay ki smell ho gaye ho ge🤣tara jai or may teeno jaal gaye

manyata say🤪or jai nay manyata ki tareef kr de o tere kabhi

kabhi kaminon kay mou say bi achi baat nikal jate ha 😆manyata

or uday look look game khel rahay thay mujay tou laga tha kay

ab shayad yeh look look game nhn over ho ga lakin vijay bhai nay

kr dea🤣manyata or uday aik dosray ko aisay ghoor rahay thay

jaisay billi milk ko ghoorti ha🤣manveer terrace scene hayye

kitna romantic scene tha maza a gaya☺️may tou sach may lagta

tha kay manvveer meray samnay yeh sab kr rahay han ☺️🤣

uday nay kia decorate karwaya ha terrace ko candles fragnance

etc👍🏼manveer kiss scene hayyee☺️manyata ko to pata hi nhn

ha prince ko kasay khush krtay han muj say pocho manyata🤣

uday nay jabardasti blackmail kr kay teen teen kissys lay le☺️or

hud sari kasar nikaal di aik hi kiss kr kay☺️or mr and mrs kabab

huhh har jaga phonch jatay han bina entruy kay kiss ka theek

tarah say maza bi nhn lena dia abhi touch honay hi walay thay lips

or boomb🤪 meray uncle unhain hamesh manveer ki hi romantic

movie milty ha dekhnay ko🤣woh bi bina break kay🤣uday

or anty komal ka scene 🤣bechara uday apni sassu maa ko hi manyata

kay baray may ulta seedha bol raha ha uday soch kay bola kro😳

Nira jab uday ka bath scene tha mujay laga manyata aye ge or khuch

ahem ahem scene ho ga🤪lakin nhn hoa🥺 or ab manayata nay

uday ko dhoondhaor uday nay manyata ko apna kamray may

push kia☺️hayyee agay kia honay wala ha maza anay wala ha

🤣

tara sudhar gaye achi bachi ha uday ki jaan chor de us nay😉Nira

baby bohut mazay ka update tha ab next update bi jaldi cahiay mujay

cont soon NIRA baby🤗double PM kay liay thnxxx🤗love u

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#1063

Now this is what i call a amazaing manveer FF.. serioudly nira how can you write so good i was always in love with your ff but now this ff ix getting awesome with each update i wonder from where you bring such freat ideas.
the update was super long and super amazing i loved mannveer terrace scene it was really fantastic. vijay bhai is awesome love his tactics... I swear if i could i wud hve killed this freak he is really annoying!

AND hatts off to you for this dialogue i literally fall off my bed its hillarious.🤣🤣🤣

🤣🤣🤣

MANYTA == (asks very lovingly),,,,,Uday ye sab tumne mere liye kiya hai...??..(says wrapping her hands tightly on his hands, tht were already placed on her waist)

UDAY == (says cutely in a teasing manner),,,,Arey nahi princess, ye sab humne UNCLE BRIJ, AUNTY KOMAL, SEEMAJI aur hamare guard SHIVSINGH ji ke liye kiya hai,,,,

please update asap n sorry for reading n commenting late was busy in studies😊

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Rubaa Rana

@adorable_rana

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1064

Originally posted by: coolsaloni.nira

hey hi ranaa...🤗
thnxxx yaar thnxxx alot sweetie,,,im glad u liked the update specially the manveer scnes nd manytas entry scene😳

the red highlighted part-----just wanted to ask u ,y r u feeling tht way dear...😉😈
ok must say, tht the next part is surely going to sweep the floor beneath u,,,,trust me.😉
will try to update soon,,,😳

LOL Nira sweety...thats because kahani main twist na ho toh maza nahi ata...and you like twist😆...hai na😉 so I know dhamaka to honay wala hai...but what well this is your work to tell na...ab sab kaam main hi karo gi to tum kaya karo gi😆...so update na

But must say you really create magical romantic moments that girls dream about in real life...and they are so dreamy na...you are an expert in writing sparky romantic scenes👏

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sloppy-hope

@sloppy-hope

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#1065

read all the chapters in one go! mind blowing man...

from start till chappy 17 it was awesom... completely alla!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

well done! how cum i never read this story bfr?

continue soonnn and plz pm me

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1066

Originally posted by: puggyy
amazing update !!

hey thnxx dear😃

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1067

Originally posted by: hans1998
awww jiji awesome awesome update... manveer moments were just ______... a big BIG teddy thnx for the pm.

awww...thanku sweetie, i m glad u liked it😃

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1068

Originally posted by: a.anu
as usual very very romantic.fantastic work.loved this. thanx 4 pm

hey thanxxx dear,,, i m glad u liked it😃

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1069

Originally posted by: Vasishtha
OMG😲 Ye chota bomb kahin M ke preggy hone ka toh nahi hai.😆
Haaye rabba hum toh kab se wait kar rahe hain khushkhabri ka.🤣 Bas tumne hi rok rakha hai Nira.😆

hahahahah...😆i cracked up reading the bold highlighted red part.

ye chota sa time bomb apko zaroor next update mei pta chal jayega sona dear...

abhi tak tumne yeexpect ia hai ki manyta pgegnant hai,,,not bad...😆

chalo thn,,,lets see what happens next😳

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1070

Originally posted by: adorable_rana

LOL Nira sweety...thats because kahani main twist na ho toh maza nahi ata...and you like twist😆...hai na😉 so I know dhamaka to honay wala hai...but what well this is your work to tell na...ab sab kaam main hi karo gi to tum kaya karo gi😆...so update na
But must say you really create magical romantic moments that girls dream about in real life...and they are so dreamy na...you are an expert in writing sparky romantic scenes👏

yeah,,,,i toh love twist...

so if u think tht dhamaka honey wala hai in next update thn lets wait nd watck ki kya hota hai...ok

😆

thnxxx dear for such generous words tht u think i create magical romantic moments nd u think i m s good writer.😳

will try to post next part soon😃