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Awww superb update,uday n love at first sight,eagerly waitng for next part ,update fast

woah...gowri...awesome job dear...do update soon adn thanxxx a lot for the pm

Loved the update!! Do continue soon n plzzz pm me when u update!!:)

Loved the update huni. Fight was really hilarious! Pls post the next update soon. Really want to know how UV reacts.

awesome ff gowri...

Hey lovely chapter...I loved ManVeer whole scene...the dailouges of Manyata was fabulous...u have very good command over d hindi language...waiting for more...

CHAPTER THREE: SESSION OF IRRITATION IN DETENTION

She went away walking in anger and dragging and scolding jay on her way back.

"Abey jk kyu gayi thi waha, chup chap ek jagah kaadh ke wait nahi kar sakti thi kya, kya jaroorat thi uss halkat vede se madad mangne ki kya jaroorat thi! Bata? Aur ass pass koi nahi tha kya!! Sirf woh hi dikha tujhe!! Aur upaar se woh tujhse chiknichupdi baathe kya karne laga tu toh puri flat hogayi!hass rahithi use sunkar ! Jara mujhe bhi bata kya joke maara usne jara mein bhi hass lu!"Siad she in a sarcastic tone.

"Offo jiji, pls taane maarna baandh karo, keh do na ki us jaise hot aur sexy ladke ko mujhe chunta dekh aapko jalan waise bhi aap dono ko koi ladka date pe kabhi nahi le jayegan especially jab aap ladke ki tarah dikhte hai" said jay in a sarcastic tone.

" Jalegi meri jhoothi, aur jaha tak date ki baath hai aur bf ki toh hum na kisi ko torture nahi karna chathem hain na ashi?" Said manya hifing with ashi

. They had already reached home. And manya stormed up to her room and throwing the bag in her room went on the terrace to her plants and started digging in anger remembering all uday said.

"Samajtha kya hain apne aapko!! Tohp samajtha hain kya!! Ek baar haath ayega na toh chodungi nahi! Halkat veda, khasmanu khana, tharak ka peepa, kuthe ki dum!! Saale ko nah maar dalungi!!!" Mumbled manya.

Ashi came running and stopping manya frm damaging her plants out of pure anger. " Khodo, khodo aur khodo pot ko bhi phod do ,chatt mein bhi ched kar de!!" Said ashi crossing her hands across her chest. "Kya karoon ashi, jab us uday ke bacche ke bare mein sochti huun toh khoon kholta hain mera! Saala kya samjhtha hain apne aapko dekh uski neende kaise udathi huun! Haan nahi toh!" Said she smiling evily.
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Uday enters his house with a smile on his face. His sister unnati who was sitting in the living room watching tv notices it as uday sits on the sofa throwing his bag on the other side.

"So kaisi tha aapka dada?aapka school kaisa hain? Middle school se toh bohut bada hi hoga na?" Asked his sister with curiosity.

But uday was totally lost in his thoughts and was smiling thinking about what had happened today! How could that girl just make him loose control! Who was she? Why did he just feel mesmerized by her beauty? She wasn't the most beautiful girl he saw, but then there was a spark in her which was pulling him towards her. The way she talked to him no one ever dared to speak like that to him! But he didn't get angry by that instead he felt very happy!! He hadn't even asked her name!! But whoever she was, she was special!!
But trail of uday's thought broke when unnati jerked him and asked him ,"dada kya hua batayi naa!! Kahan khoye ho aap!! Apni choti se baat nahi karoge kya!! Aur aap hass kyu rahe ho? Kuch hua hain kya aapko?".

" Arre choti ab bhala aap hum se baat kare aur hum javab na de aisa kabhi hua hain kya? Haan choti aaj ka din bohut accha tha! Aur humara school bohut bada hain!! Kuch nahi choti woh bas aaj kuch hua tha us ke baare mein soch kar hassi aa rahi thi! Aur kuch nahi!!" Said he smiling at her.

"Toh dada aap aaram kijiye, aap thakh gaye honge na!" Said his sister.

He went to his room and fell on the bed, but all he could see was her face!! Oh man!! This gal is driving me nuts totally man!! Thinking this he went inside the bathroom to freshen up!
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The next morning everyone gets ready soon and Ashi and Manyata leave on their bicycles to the school as they would be late today as it was thr first day of detention. They had already informed that they would be late as they got punishment and didn't know when they would return.
On the other hand uday's father was out of town and so only uday and unnati were left in their house. Uday had told unnati that he would be late today and told her not to wait for him to cum and pick her but just cum home straight,but didn't mention the reason as he didn't want to give a shock to his sister by telling that he had got detention!!
Uday too left on his bicycle because he wasn't sure when he would return and what might suddenly turn up.
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At school everything went on as usual, and to the girls happiness they actually got selected in their school teams, Manyata for basketball and Ashi for soccer.
Uday on the other hand was chosen in school basketball team after his very good performance. At lunch, Uday tried to meet the girls but Manyata ignored him most of the tym! Much to her dismay Ashi was had turned out to become good friends with him which Manyata hated.

But Ashi couldn't tolerate the silence b/w uday and manyata and opened up" arre yaar! Itna silent rahoge na toh phir is silence se hi mera sar dard karne lagega!! Pehle hi yeh sadaa hua khana!! Na namak aur na mirch, aur yeh sookhe pathe!! Abhi abhi ke ulti karne ka mann kar raha hain aur upar se tum dono!! Bass bhi toh karo na yaar!!"

But they just didn't open their mouths. After school they had gone to their concerned teacher for the detention. Much to their dismay they were the only ones in detention!! But Manyata had come fully prepared to irritate Uday and wanted to put her plan in action! The teacher had told them to switch off or keep their mobiles on silent so Manyata made a foolproof plan to irritate uday! She texted her sis to go on the bluetooth of Uday's phone and connect it to her device. But uday would never let go of his phone.

So Ashi went to him and said" arre yaar uday meri behen ki taraf se mein maafi maangthi hoon yaar! Pls maaf karde usse!"

" Arre nahi Ashi maafi ki jaroorat nahi akhir uski koi galti nahi hain! Waise uska naam kya hain?" Said uday.

" Oh thanks yaar! Uska naam manyata hain! Aur ek baat mujhe tera number chahiye tha", saying this she exchanged her phone with him and did what she actually wanted to! She also saved Manyata's number in his phone! And then she returned it back to him, smiled and went back to her seat and winked at her sister. Manya there smiled evily.
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15 minutes passed. There was pin drop silence. Meanwhile Ashi and Manyata were attacking each other with paper balls! Smiling evily Manyata made a catapult out of rubber band and her fingers and aimed Uday for a target. The paper ball went into his shirt but he wasn't reacting so manya hit the rubberband itself on uday's neck!! To this uday reacted "ouch!!!"and turned back to see everything was normal he thought maybe was a mosquito.

But manya got her victory in her step!!Slowly she started her actual plan she hacked uday's device!! She switched his phone off which shocked uday!! Hacking his device she switched it on offnon off!!

This went on for 5minutes and a frustrated uday shouted"oh stop ittt!!!" And banging his phone on the table.

Then manyata played a death metal song but first played it from a very low volume and then slowly made it very high making the teacher panic and uday frustrated and angry!!! He just couldn't make out frm where the music was actually playing but then he heard sumone giggling and to see Manyata grinning at him and giving a I-told-u- not- to- mess- with-me look!!

He understood everything and the teacher had already reached to the peak of anger and manyata's giggling just added fuel to the fire!!!

"U two(pointing at uday and manyata) come here right now!! Inform ur family that u will be late even more because u both are going to clean the dance studio which has not been cleaned from the past two days!! And u both will not leave until u clean it spotless!!! Understand!!!!" Yelled the teacher.

"But maam that place smells like hell, the smell is even worse than dirty socks maam and the mirrors they are so dirty maam we just can't do it!!!!" Said Manyata.

"For all ur pranks and tricxks this is ur punishment!! U had to think abt the consequences before u actually did all this now suffer!!!" Yelled the teacher.

She said Ashi to leave and informed the chief janitor not leave those two until they finished their job!! Sighing they both went inside the studio which smelled worse than garbage as the sweat of the several dancers was circulating around!!! After the janitor left Manyata kept mumbling sumthing under her breath!! Uday couldn't take it anymore, he just pinned her to the wall with Manyata whining in pain and trying to free herself of uday's hold,but each tym she tried to free herself his hold got tighter.

"Abey uday ke bacche chod, mujhse pehle hi yeh smell bardaash nahi ho raha aur upar se tu mujhe kaam karne nahi dera!! Chod mujhe, I just want to get out of here as soon as possible!!upar tere saath rehna mujshe bardaash nahi ho raha hai!!LET ME GO!!"Said manyata.

"Oh really tab nahi socha jab mujhe phassa rahi thi, mera phone hack kar ke.actually dekha jaye toh tumhari chaal kamyab hogayi par ulti bhi pad gayi na!!"Said uday questioningly.

Manyata understood that he knew what ever happen today was done by her"dekh udayveer, mere dimaag ka dahi math bana, tu kya keh raha hain mere palle nahi pad raha aur tujh jaise halkat veda, khasmanu khana meine aaj tak nahi dekh..."Said trying to change the topic, but was interrupted by uday

"Shhh...(Placing his index finger on her rosy lips)chup ek dam chup darlingg! Aaj tak kisi ne mujh se aise baat nahi ki.. Ek aur shabd bola toh( all this while caressing her hair and now cheeks and then slowly caressing her lips with his finger )tohh tumhare is sundar muuh baandh karna mujhe acchi tarah aata hain aur accha bhi lagta!!" He said smirking.

"Hooo!!! Chi kitna ganda hai tu!! Waise ek baat kahu mujhe bhi tum jaise ladko ke muuh acchi tarah aate hain pata hain kar ke bataun?", asks manya. Uday nods in agreement. She then stomps her foot on his leg and continues her work.

Uday whines in pain and thinks" abhi toh bass shuruwat hain princess aage aage dekho hota hain kya!!"He shakes his head thinking abt her antiques and continues working.
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During the whole cleaning not even once did Manyata look at Uday nor did he at her. She was guilty for wat she did but would not accept it as it would hurt her ego! Manyata wound up all the work as soon as she could, gave a spray of room freshener to the whole room grabbed her bag and went to the door to open it but stopped midway as Uday called her.

"oh princess! Suno toh kaise jaogi tum ghar bohut late hogaya hain kisi ko call kar lo!" Said Uday.

"Oh halkat mein koi bacchi nahi hoon I am 16 years old understand mein ghar ja sakti hoon akele aur mera ghar koi dooor nahi hain. Waise mein ye sab tujhe kyu bata rahi hoon? Who the hell are u to ask!!" Yelled manyata.

Uday shook his head on her nadani which was wat he called her antiques. There manyata tried to open the door but it wouldn't she pulled it pushed it but nothing worked!!

"Hayyyeee rabba ye darwaza kyu nahi khul raha hain, isse bhi abhi phas na tha kya!!" Shouted she.

Uday came near the door and said "achha mujhe dekhne do" and he tried to open it but it wouldn't open!!!

"Ahhh!! Why is it not opening man!!!!" Yelled manyata.

They yelled for help but nothing worked!! Then they realised that it was locked by the janitors who thought that no one was there, when they were actually arguing and he couldn't see them. They tried to call but there was no network coverage!! They banged and banged the door, but when they were tired they sat by the wall resting their head on the wall. They both sighed out of anger.

THANK U FOR READING!! U HAVE REACHED THE END OF THE CHAPTER!!!SORRY IF I WASTED UR TYM!! PLS DO TELL ME UR VIEWS ON THIS CHAPTER!! DO LIKE AND COMMENT AND SORRY FOR LEAVING IT HALF WAY!! IF I WOULD COMPLETE IT NOW WHAT WOULD BE THE THRILL OF THE SUSPENSE!!! SO I LEFT IT LIKE THAT!! HOPE U ENJOY READING!!

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GOWRI...

the door locked by janitor...pkyek yaad aa gaya...nice update...thanku for pm

Tooo good Gowri!! I loved the update!! Now I cant wait to read the next part!! The next part will be a great pleasure to read like this one and all the other ones!! So plzzz do continue soon😉