The Player Manveer SS part7 updated pg 22 - Page 13

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chitra_rao thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Walah! Palyer and checkmate update together, I dont rememebre Kiska chera dekhe utti aaj mein.My lucky day 😳Loved the chappy girl 👏

And update teh next chappter before I breath my last 😉. And yes Needn't say the poem u wrote was beautiful, I have copied it in my personal Digital dairy with your 100 years poem, worth noting for eternity.

And thankd for the PM doll🤗. I know I sound like a snob asking u to keep on updating, but take ur time, concentrate on ur studies, but take some time out to update as well. Hum jaise tarasti atma ko shanti milegi
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Posted: 13 years ago
Read all the chapters together... fine work, I must say... I liked the concept and the first 2 chapters were the best. Plzz update the next chapter soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
woww.mann u r talented😃.bt w luvd d poem creative.👏...buh please dontt dissapear again plzz...i wanna read moh of dis😊...nyways thanx fr pm.n continue soon👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome!!!

LovIng this SS frm ur side
Wat happens wen love n pain out burst ;)
Loving UV

Cont soon
add me to PM list :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow finally u updated hve been waiting for this so mch & it was worth all the wait... the update was superb totally loved it was jst awesome fab fantastic...
the poem was jst superb loved it... u wrote it urself?
if yes thn awesome piece of writing 👏 whole update was superbly written really loved it...
ohh u left it at sch a point i wonder where's he takin her & why she'll regret it... Ooo i jst cant wait to read further plz cham update soon this time plz plz... thnx for awesome update & pm🤗
take care😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
I read ur whole ff so far and I'm lovin it and 2 requests the 1st request is can u make the nxt part romantic and hot AHEM AHEM u not Wat I mean 😉 and the other request is that can u pm me da next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
cham how do u manage to create so much suspense in ur stories.. just read all the 5 chapters... n i seriously cant wait for u to update... i mean other updates n ff or evn dek u can guess wats gona happen whether its gona be right or wrong guess is a diff issue...
i mean in dek whenever i guess something i hav always been prooved wrong by the CVs..
but ur story i cant even guess wats gona happen... u r seriously an amazing writer... our forum has so many talented writers 😊

why did uday hate manyata... how did he fall in love with monia.. he calls her an improved version...
now he hates her bcoz she ditched uv which was actually him... dats quite understandable..
but he says what she did to three of us... who are the three?? uday, his mom n unnati?? wat cud have manyata possibly done to unnati.. or who is the 3rd person he is talking abt... he is also saying manyata played his game against him so wat was the game he played in the first place.. errr am so confused... hmph..

so now am wondering wat uday is going to do with manyata and waiting for ur update.. pls pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunshinegirll

cham how do u manage to create so much suspense in ur stories.. just read all the 5 chapters... n i seriously cant wait for u to update... i mean other updates n ff or evn dek u can guess wats gona happen whether its gona be right or wrong guess is a diff issue...
i mean in dek whenever i guess something i hav always been prooved wrong by the CVs..
but ur story i cant even guess wats gona happen... u r seriously an amazing writer... our forum has so many talented writers 😊

why did uday hate manyata... how did he fall in love with monia.. he calls her an improved version...
now he hates her bcoz she ditched uv which was actually him... dats quite understandable..
but he says what she did to three of us... who are the three?? uday, his mom n unnati?? wat cud have manyata possibly done to unnati.. or who is the 3rd person he is talking abt... he is also saying manyata played his game against him so wat was the game he played in the first place.. errr am so confused... hmph..

so now am wondering wat uday is going to do with manyata and waiting for ur update.. pls pm..


AWW that must be the longest comment I've ever received🤗 thanks dear,
well let's try answering now,😉
Uday hates M for 2 reasons first as we can see is that she ditched him in London, the 2nd is something that happened in their past because of which Uday already hates the person Rajkumari M😡,
The three of them doesn't include Uday's mom😉 and that's all I can tell you about that till now,
The game thing is simple, he thinks that he was the one playing with peoples' emotions and all that OLD UV 😎stuff now M had done the same thing with him, that's the thing he was talking about😕,
WHAT he's going to do with her😉, OR what they're GOING to DO TOGETHER😉 is out of the question until the next chapter,
I think I gave you a good answer/s.😊😊 Thanks for reading, 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome cham
I such a huge fan of all your ff's
please please update soon
can't wait, it's too exciting
and when will you update RTL???
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fatima4a

awesome cham

I such a huge fan of all your ff's
please please update soon
can't wait, it's too exciting
and when will you update RTL???


Not today dear🥱
But I will soon😃😃

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