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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awwwieee... interesting story...Nicee...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing update dear,
pictures of house and rooms are wonderful. i love manyata's room.
update soon, can't wait.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AT LA WITH UDAY

uday woke up by the chirping of birds sunlight was fallin on his verry handsome and smart face
he smiled and woke up and was very happy today but he don't no why but he was very delighted and was feeling very god and suddenly unnati enters

U : bro you are awakened well thats good
Uday : good morin my little sis
U : bro u r in a good mood ain't you
Uday : yup i am
U : thats good now bro lets get ready we need to go to our university
Uday : ok i'll be comin soon to the breakfast table you leave
U : ok bro *by this she leaves and she is wearing this wakeup too *check out this link guys plss "http://www.polyvore.com/school_babe/set?id=49720692" as i can't post links yet *

Uday went to the batroom for a bath and got readi in 15 min

At breakfast table

Maya : Uday Unnati have breakfast and leave fast

Both :Ok mOm *boths have breakfast and leaves for university*

MEANWHILE AT MAY AND JAY's House

J : so may sis wat should i wear today
M : i guess you should try this "http://www.polyvore.com/sexy_babe/set?id=49720396" *plss check this out too *
*jay wore this and same make up too*
J : wow i look beautiful
M : u r beautiful Jay
J : aww ty ty by the way not more than you sis so what are u wearin
M : i'm wearing this * "http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=49722089" may wore this with same makeup check it out too as i said i can't post links yet (sad)*
J : ok lets go dad must be waiting
M : Okkk lets go sisi
J : sisi well i like it

*both goes to table and have their breakfast in breakfast they have omlet , orange juice, bread and chocolate in dessert*

M : dad now i think we should leave we are gettin late
J : yup dad but how will we go
SHAne : thats a surprise
Both : really whats that
Shane : takes out a car key from the pocket and say your new car
M & J : shouts ahhh dad luv ya luv ya luv ya sho shooo much


M : wow dad its so stunning
J : i agree but how will we reach forshades
M : i know where it is i have been researching about it since many years u see it was my dream
S : i know thats why i made you both join forshades now don't waste time go
M: hugs him and says bye dad
J : hugs him 2 byeee
S : may drive safely okkk
M : ok Dad Now Bye

AT FORSHADES UNIVERSITY THIS IS WHAT IT LOOKS LIKE



M : wow its beautiful J you leave i'll park and come
J : ok my highness as u wish *gets off the car and leaves*
manyata goes to parking lot and there is onle place she founds and she was parking it there than suddenly a BMW came and parked there manyata was very angry*
M : gets out of the car and says excuse me
Uday come out of the car and looks at manyata and says : what
M : oh don't act as if u don't know anything
Uday : what did i do
M : oh really u parked your car at my place
Uday : really *looks below his car at ground * but your name ain't written here miss ___
M : manyata but people call me may
Uday : so may next time better be fast
M : ohh really next time u should be slow
Uday : you no what you girls are like over the top ek tu car chalani aati nahi hai aur phir ladko ko blame kare to yaar utter bullshit
May : EXCUSE ME !!! no one NO ONE dares to talk to me like that
Uday : why would they tum ho hi Jugle billi
MAy : billi ka to pata nahi magar SHERNI zarror ho aur tujhe sherni ki tarah ka bhi sakti hhu
Uday : laughing ya ya whateva vaise its time for my class i'll leave aur vaise bhi agar hum yaha rahe to dar ke mare mar hi jaege *sacrasm*
uday leaves for his bio class
M : huh dek lugi tujhe by the way iska naam kya hai *looks at her watch* Ohhh !!! BULLSHIT its my bio class i gotta go

*in bio class unnati , jay uday, zayn , karan are there and manyata arrive*
M : may i come in
Ms Morson : ya come in so who are you
M : i'm manyata but call me may btw i'm new here
Ms morson : ok class so here's our new student may . so may you can take ur seat
M : looks around and only one chair is empty and that is beside Uday she sits there *have no choice*
Uday : so jungli sherni tum yaha bhi wow
M : dekh zada ch chapad mat kar samjha *and realizes* ohh my myy ur indian too
Uday : koi shuk vasie humne tumse parking lot me bhi hindi me bat kare thi
M : jo bhi aur vaise bhi I HATE YOU
U : as if i don't
J : behind May and says sis how are you why are u soo late
M : i'll tell ya later sis
Ms morson ; shh silence class

*bell rings*

Ms morson : okk class listen important announcement your partners for this year are on this list on notice board so check it out okk
Class : ok

So Heres the list

Jay with karan
Unnati with zayn
May with uday
and other class

----------------------------- THE END---------------------
PRECAP ; may finds his partner uday becoz she don't no that the person she met in parkin lot was uday and her and karan becomes friend unnati and jay becomes friend jay starts liking karan *love at first sight* and zayn and unnati lovey dovey moments GOSH SOO MUCH IN NEXT CHAPTER HOPE YOU LIKE IT EVRY SUGGESTION IS TALKIN SO FEEL FREE TO SUGGEST AND TAKE OUT MY FLAWS AND SORRY I'M REALLY SORRY I KNOW THIS CHAPTER SUCKS BUT I WILL FIR SURE IMPROVE NEXT TIME AND SORRY FOR SPELLING ERORRS TOO


Edited by -Lipika- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Very nice update Lipika!! Lookin forward to the next part as the precap is quite interesting!! Continue soon!!:)
Edited by AKlover101 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AKlover101

Very nice update Lipika!! Lookin forward to the next part as the precap is quite interesting!! Continue soon!!:)



thank you *sigh* i thought it sucked but glad you like it and yes next ch is a bombblast love triangle and manymore drama comin up anyways i'll update that in middle of this comin week
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
awesome , update very very soon,
eagerly waiting for next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Likd it lipika bt here vampires can sleep:p
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
wow amazing.
it was quite fast tho, had a lot to go through 😆
keep up the brilliant work
do PM me when you next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was really coold dear..keep up the good work!...very entertaining..liked the english style of Manveer with a desi mixture..!!😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG...i just love their houses 😆...ok coming to the update...loved it...as always...finally M and UV met...and they r partners...yay...can't wait to see what happens nxt!! 😲...update soon!!! 😊

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