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Uday: I must say princess I never knew u were so romantic in the morning because if I knew that then I wouldn't mind coming here every morning if u were this romantic. Manyata was embarrassed but she tried to cover it up and turned around.

Manyata: ur wrong uday I was just going to wake u up but then u woke up urself.

Uday: u were gone wake me up by putting ur hands on my cheeks lovingly'. Before manyata could say anything the door opened. Manveer turned their attention towards the door and saw j, unnati , vijay and jagat standing at the door'. They soon entered in the room

Vijay: so what was it like staying in one room last night he said raising his eyebrows or let me say m bhai how was it to spend a night in one room with the dashing, hot smart, intelligent yuvraj udayveer singh?... manyata felt a shudder as vijay asked her that question reminding of wt happened she could also feel udays gaze on her which she didn't dare to look at but she composed herself and spoke.

Manyata: vijay bhai if u r that desperate to know then y don't u spend a night with him in one room as u think he is dashing, hot, smart and intelligent? Im sure you would love it since u r'. she stopped leaving her questions in midair while the others were laughing at her reply

Vijay: oh come on m bhai I am not gay so plz don't try to say that. He said annoyingly hearing some more giggling coming from behind

Manyata: but vijay bhai I was going to say u would love it since ur not interested in spending time with girls I mean that doesn't mean that im trying to say ur gay? Or does it actually mean that she said with a naughty smile'. Vijay glared at her.

Vijay: m bhai im so gone get u for dis he said starting to run towards her but he couldnt get her as she ran out of the room'... He was still chasing her and she was still running this chase went all the way to the garden manyata was running and stopped because of a lot of running but once she saw vijay coming she started to run again' vijay saw manyata running again but then he saw the Gardner watering the plants' he took the horse pipe from the Gardner remembering the last incident where manyata was running behind him with a glass of water to splash on him.

Vijay: m bhai that time u were chasing me to spill water on me but this time I will get you drenched he said with an evil smile...luckily the hose pipe was long enough and manyata was not that far... manyata turned around and saw vijay walking towards her with an evil smile his hands were behind holding the hose pipe covering the whole with his finger to stop the water'. She was confused thinking what happened to vijay bhai' j jagat, uday and unnati were standing on the terrace watching all this happening' finally vijay bought the hose pipe in front of manyata who was looking at it with wide eyes

Manyata: come on vijay bhai u cant do this.

Vijay: really m bhai but I remember that once someone was also running behind me to splash water on me... before manyata could run vijay had already started to drench her while she was trying to get hold of the water pipe and when she did she quickly started to spray it on vijay bhai'. They could hear the others laughing but still they didn't give up as both manyata and vijay were holding the pipe in the middle and tying to aim it at one another. Finally getting tired they stopped and walked back inside laughing and talking to each other' everyone else went to change and so did manyata and vijay as they were completely drenched'. Manyata was walking towards her room but suddenly she got pulled so quickly that she didn't realise what happened, finally breathing back to normal she saw herself staring into udays eyes and also realised that she was blocked between him and the wall.

Uday: what happened princess got scared' he said tracing his fingers on her face tucking her wet strands behind her ears.

Manyata: y...y... wou...would I be scared she said not trying to stammer

Uday: really then y r u stammering and not looking at me'. He said now tracing her arms and could feel her shudder by his mere touch

Manyata: erm uday j and others will be waiting for us downstairs for breakfast she said moving away from him finally by pushing him but uday held her hand and pulled her back.

Uday: so? That doesn't answer my question princess he said holding her waist tightly.

Manyata: I don't think I need to answer ur question... now let me go I need to freshen up she said looking at him from sideways.

Uday: hmmm princess I don't think u need to change because u look hot in wet clothes he whispered in her ear' manyata heart skipped a bit and her face slightly turned red even though she was not facing uday she could still feel his gaze on her without turning back she tried to free his hands from her waist and ran away from there once reaching towards her room she closed the door and tried to control her heartbeat'...all were sitting at the dining table having breakfast.

Vijay: so finally all the elders r going to be back today uday, unnati it was really great spending time with u all' and jagat im really glad to meet u but y don't u come here often.

J: exactly jagat I guess u should she said winking at manyata who also winked back however this didn't go unnoticed by uday.

J: I will try to come here more often but hey thanks anyways for inviting me..

Unnati: so today me and dada will be going back.

Manyata: we had so much fun yesterday hain na guys but now I am excited to join sanjeevani

Unnati: exactly manyata I cant wait to meet the other senior doctors this is going to be so fun. ' it had been two hours since jagat had left and the rest had decided to look at their childhood photo albums' they all were having so much masti when the elders had arrived' they all looked tired and little disturbed everyone took blessing from the elders and let them relax for a while' manyata, uday, j, vijay and unnati gave each other confusing look because the elders was behaving so odd as they usually question them about what they have done and how their day went but all they got was silent.

Uday: what happened y r u all quite

Manyata: is there any problem? Ds looked at manyata when she spoke and walked towards her

DS: beta I want to tell u something

Manyata: haan ds go ahead.

DS: manyata beta i know we allowed u to do medical and u even got a degree and even became a doctor... working in a big hospital like sanjeevani was urs and unnati dream but sorry to say that only unnati will be working not u coz...

Manyata: coz wt DS she said trying to speak normally

DS took a deep breath and den said: beta u know that u will become the yuvrani of devgarh and soon mahrani of jaighar and just by dis much u will get so many responsibility where u will ave to think about ur ppl more than urself... she stopped as manyata spoke

Manyata: but dats wt ll be doing DS i will be thinking about others as a yuvrani and also will be taking care of dem as a doctor too she said with some hopes

DS: manyata its not dat easy being a doctor and a ruler of two places wnt be easy sorry but u will ave to forget dis dream of urs u should focus on ur crowning ceremony first as u will become a yuvrani soon.. and hope u will obey us...

Manyata tried to stop her tears she was really shattered and looked at everyone... J, vijay and unnati were standing by her side supporting her as they were not agreeing with DS but her eyes mainly focused on uday she wanted his support...

Komal: manyata I know how important this is and it will be really hard for u to decide but..

Manyata: then y did u put me in this spot she said breaking her gaze from him and looking at komal

Brij: it was really hard for us beta plx try to understand..

Uday: uncle brij, dadi saab can I please take manyata from here I need to talk to her.

Ds nodded he walked towards her and held her hands talking her away from the others however she didn't stop him as she didn't feel like saying anything..

J: how can u all even do this' u all r being unfair jiji has right to fully her dream u cant make her forget it she was nearly to her destination' u know at the breakfast table she was so excited about joining the hospital but u all ruined it by ur so called duty lecture' she walked towards ds and continued speaking' ds u know m jijii capable to do anything she could even handle two riyasaat and also work as a doctor then y shatter her dream

Vijay: j is absolutely right' m bhai is getting shocking news after one another first it was about her rokha and now it is where she has to forget her dream of working as a doctor' its not fair where we all can fully our dream and that poor girl has to sacrifice her dreams' that person on the phone was right manyata would be getting a shocking news and she actually did'all looked at him shocked.

Precap: uday speaking to manyata

K guys this is end of part 28 hope u all like it.. im really sorry for not updating for a while' don't forget to press the like button and do leave a comment it actually inspires me..sorry for any spelling or grammar mistakes and sorry if i got to pm anyone

Ps: if u want pm the plz do mention about it in ur comment and I will add u' also if u want me to remove u from the pm list then plz let me know somehow so that it doesn't waste ur time or my time thanks

Edited by preya_radev - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsomee...mind blowig...i hope uday will support her...updates soon...and add me in ur pM liat.
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Posted: 12 years ago
gr8 preya😊..bt it was short pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
again an awesome update!!!!! m and vijaybhai r such sweet siblings!!!!!! uday was soo rmnticcc,whever uday cums clse to m,i also feel goosebumps!!!!!! oh my god,bechari manyata,uski drms shatterd ho gaye!!! pata nehi kya hoga!!!!!!! thanks for the pm,and ofcrse pm me agn :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice update Preya👍🏼

UV-M relationship is very beautiful...Poor M has to let go of her dreams but responsibilities comes first i guess😉

Thanx for the pm dear and update soon it was very short🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow, it was an awesome update
Love da relation manveer share
Hope uday is able to console manyata and they share few romantic moments in which manyata makes the frst move
Overall the update was fabulous, really love da bond manveer and da gang share
Plz update soon eagerly waiting for da nxt part
Btw sorry for commenting late
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Posted: 12 years ago
this was a nice short update ... feel bad for manyata .. i hope she will be able to overcome this difficulty ...

waiting 4ur upcoming update ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm really sorry for the late comment.😳
Superb update Preya👏, great,great update.👍🏼
Morning scene of Manveer sho sho cute n romantic.☺️ ☺️
Manyata-VB scene was so funny.😆 but now this time Vijay bhai won.😆
Poor Manyata,😭 now it's very difficult for her to choose anyone option between her dream her career n her reponsibilities towards both states as a Yuvrani n future queen.😳
Precap was interesting.😛 UV-M Convo, I know UV'll find out correct solution of this problem.😊
Fantastic update Preya, Well done.👏 👏 👏
Thanks for the beautiful update n PM.😊
Do continue ASAP.😊
🤗 🤗 🤗
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J: how can u all even do this to her. u all r being unfair jiji has right to fully her dream u can't make her forget it she was nearly to her destination''u know at the breakfast table she was so excited about joining the hospital but u all ruined it by ur so called duty lecture' she walked towards ds and continued speaking' ds u know m jijii is capable to do anything she could even handle two riyasaat and also work as a doctor then y shatter her dream

Vijay: j is absolutely right' m bhai is getting shocking news after one another first it was about her rokha and now it is where she has to forget her dream of working as a doctor' it's not fair where we all can fully our dream and that poor girl has to sacrifice her dreams' that person on the phone was right manyata would be getting a shocking news and she actually did 'all looked at him shocked.

Meanwhile uday made manyata sit in the car who was in her own world with tears flowing down her eyes and he sat in the driver seat speeding the car off' he kept glancing at manyata every five minutes and saw her sitting in the same position and not moving at all except the tears falling from her eyes making something prick in his heart.

Back to the mansion.

DS: what person called and when, how comes u didn't tell us,

Vijay: there is no point of telling u all anything dadisaab vijay said in his anger

Mainka: vijayendra how dare u speak to maa saab like that apologize right now..

Vijay: im sorry Daadi Saab if I spoke to u rudely but I'm not sorry for whatever I said because instead of consoling manyata bhai u all were telling her to forget about her dream and think about her responsibility.

J: vijay bhai is actually right and I don't think any of u should go near jiji until she feels better because if u all do then u might tell her to think about her duty of a soon to be yuvrani and mahrani or even if u do go to her then don't talk about this at all im sure u can do this much right. Unnati put a hand on j shoulder to calm her down.

Komal: j it doesn't mean we r silent so u can blame us for anything and speak whatever way u want.

J: think whatever u want If u think we r being rude then fine we r extremely sorry but I can't tolerate if someone hurts jiji even if that is my family member. She said getting a bit emotional and walking away from there with vijay. Unnati was standing there lost in thoughts.

vasundra : maa saab whatever j and vijay was saying was showing their love for manyata. They care for her so much that they can fight with even their family member but some solution has to be figured out.

DS: u r right vasundra but we have to wait till manyata comes back.

Uday had stopped the car and looked out of the window to see only few people were at the beach but far away. He got out of the car and went to manyata side and took her out of the car by holding her hand. They walked a bit further down. manyata came back to the world when she heard the waves of the sea and felt the cool breeze but she still remained silent.

Uday: princess? manyata looked at him and he can see the rush of emotions across her face

Manyata: why? Why? WHY? WHY DID THIS HAVE TO HAPPEN TO ME she said shouting and then breaking down her body just falling on to the ground and hands were trying to clutch the sand but like her dream it kept slipping of from her hand. Uday wanted to go near her but he wanted to wait until she vents everything out and she actually did continue speaking' I dreamed about one thing uday and that was to join sanjeevani as a doctor' after a lot convincing, ds allowed me to go abroad to do my internship so that I can become a doctor and work at sanjeevani but she gave me a condition that along with joining the hospital I will also have to take care of my responsibility when I become a yuvrani and probably a maharani. And I didn't object because I would take care of my responsibility but also fully my dream which actually is gone be incomplete. Uday all think that I can easily forget my dream but how can I when I have been dreaming about it since I was young how can I forget it so easily. But ds and everyone told me to forget it don't they know how hard it is'. Uday went near her and made her stand up by holding her shoulders

Uday: princess if I support u then all the elders will not like me going against their decision and if I don't support u then I know u will somehow be hurt and think that nobody cares about u and ur dream' Manyata if u think about it then I know it won't be easy for u to forget ur first dream but it doesn't mean life stops here u can still do more in life think about other things that u may be capable of doing if ur first dream just stays as a dream it doesn't mean u should stop dreaming u should continue to dream and try to do something new it could be ur successful that time.

Manyata: uday its not that easy to forget ur first dream it takes time to.

Uday: but if u try then anything is possible he could see the tears welling up in her eyes and took her in his embrace. Manyata was surprised but then she didn't say anything and for the first time surprised uday by hugging him back and burying her face onto his chest. Uday could feel his shirt getting a bit wet but he didn't stop her from crying. They stayed like that for few minutes and uday thought its best to go. But before he could say anything he felt manyatas hand loosening around his waist and dropping to the side. He pulled her away to see her face was slightly pale, he was shaking her slightly and calling her name and slightly touched her cheeks when he felt a little bit of fever. Without wasting time uday took a unconscious manyata in his arm and walked quickly to his car and seated her on her seat'. After what seemed like ages they finally reached the mahal and uday was walking with her in his arms he was still trying to call out to her' all the elders were sitting in the main hall but were shocked and worried to see a unconscious manyata in udays arm. J and vijay bhai were just coming down as they saw uday rushing in with manyata

DS: uday beta what happened to manyata.

Uday: Daadi Saab she has turned all pale and has got fever we need to call Dr uncle

Brij: ill just call him'and he walked off to call doctor saab.

Vijay: unnati u can check manyata right after all u r a doctor and ur dream has not been snatched away. The elders ignored vijay taunt.

Komal: uday beta it will better to take manyata to her room. Uday nodded and all rushed behind him, once reaching manyata room he made her lay down on the bed and sat right near her and was rubbing her hand

J: uday juju sa what happened to jiji

Uday: j i don't know what happened to her she was really upset and then fainted. He didn't want to tell about the convo he and manyata had and that's y he took her away from everyone so she can vent everything out.. .after a while brij and giri came in with DR saab and DR saab requested all that they should go out as he needs to do manyata check up. Everyone started to leave and even uday was about to get up when he realised that unknowingly manyata had clutched his hands in a unconscious state. vasundra turned around and saw uday staring at manyata she walked towards him.

vasundra: wt happened beta.

Uday: nothing mom. Dr uncle can I please stay here with manyata while u do the check up please. Dr saab turned to look at ds who was standing at the door and nodded allowing him to give the permission.

Dr saab: yes uday beta u can stay here. Once DR Uncle gave permission seema left the room and stood outside with the other. Dr saab went to close the door and started to do test on manyata. After a while he finished some test and gave manyata the required medical she needed. After finishing giving her injunction uday asked

Uday: Dr uncle what happened to manyata why did she faint all of a sudden.

Dr: beta when mahraj brijraj called me he told me what happened about manyata having to forget about her dream so I understand that. But when u took her out how did she faint, now uday didn't want to tell about manyata fainting after hugging him so he tried to make his answer realistic.

Uday: Dr uncle I took manyata out so she can pour everything out of her heart we were about to leave when I noticed that manyata has turned pale and she had a fever when she fainted

Dr saab: hmm uday manyata fainted because of stress and weakness because it seems like she didn't eat properly and the stress came from everything that happened

Uday: yes dr uncle she didn't eat properly the whole day I member her saying that she doesn't feel Hungary.

Dr saab: Anyways u don't she will be fine as u r with her but do give here these medicines on time I'll go and inform the others. And he opened the door and let the others in.

J: dr uncle wt happened to jiji

Dr saab: she is fine j don't worry just because of stress and fever she fainted but she does need a complete bed rest as we all know when manyata is not well she feels weak so someone need to be with her. For now I have given her injunction but for few days please make sure she stays in bed and ill keep cheeking her till then.

DS: thank u dr saab we will make sure she takes complete rest.

Komal: ill stay with manyata tonight

J: no mom ill stay with jiji tonight.

Uday: daadi saab is it ight if I stay with manyata only if u allow me to. DS looked at brij and Komal, and they nodded their head. While vasundra and giri smiled at each other.

Ds: sure beta u can but also make sure u take care of urself. All walked out except unnati' she walked over to uday

Uday: chotti u need anything.

Unnati: no dada all I want to say is take care of manyata she will need it.

Uday: don't worry I will but u take care of urself. He said cupping her face and giving her a side hug after breaking the hug unnati left after giving one last glance at manyata. Uday went and sat next to manyata and caressed her hair... after few minutes uday called one of the servants and asked him to get his laptop and some folders and done some of his business work in manyata room but also kept an eye on her. He kept on checking her forehead as well to see if she had fever and she actually did but slightly had reduced. and he didn't realise when he fell asleep (uday is actually sitting next to manyata on the bed).

Downstairs in the hall

Giriraj: maasaab its time for us to leave now,

Ds: giriraj y don't u stay over here.

Giriraj: we would love to but some other time for now at least u have uday but we will come in the morning at breakfast time.

Ds: teek hain we will be waiting for u. they all greeted each other and left

Brijraj: maa saab I really can't believe all this happening I just hope manyata doesn't think we r forcing her because right now j and vijay r really angry.

Komal: mahraj is right and I am wondering how r we going to tell sia about this because she want manyata and unnati to be in charge when its time for her delivery and giving her this type of news in this condition that only unnati will be able to fully the wish. Im just really worried.

DS: yes its true that j and vijay r angry but im sure if manyata thinks that we r forcing her then only sia can help us in this but I don't think we will have to do that manyata is a sensible girl but this time the decision is between her dream and responsibility. And all looked at each other

The sun was out and was falling on udays face he realised that he slept in a sitting position, rubbing his eyes out of tiredness he turned to manyata side to find her missing' he got up and knocked on the washroom door couple of times but there was no answer he turned the door knob and opened it to see no sign of manyata

Uday: maybe she has gone downstairs. I will change first and then go. So then he went to his room and had a quick shower luckily he did have spare clothes left over and rushed downstairs once coming down he saw everyone seated for breakfast even his parents except manyata. Everyone greeted him and e greeted everyone back. But he was still looking around

Komal: uday beta wt happened and has manyata woken up.

Uday: I thought she was here that y I came downstairs

Ds: but wasn't she in the room.

Uday: she was daadi saab but when I woke up in the morning she was not there.

J: where could jiji go.

Vijay: uday banna did u try to call m bhai on her mobile

Uday: I did but she is not answering.

Giriraj: beta try again. Uday nodded.

Brjraj: where can manyata go she is not feeling well and top of that her carelessness of going out without telling anyone.

J: dad plz don't call jiji careless this wouldn't have happened if' but she got interrupted but ds

DS: j please this is not the time to talk about this.

J: great so now we cant even say what we want to.

Unnati: j calm down.

J: no I wont I cant calm down if something goes wrong and even if m jiji agrees to forget her dream I still wont be able to forget what happened' ds called the watchman inside.

Watchman: morning rajmata ji.

Ds: morning ram sing. I just wanted to ask u did u see rajkumari manyata going out this morning.

Watchman: yes I did rajmata I tried to stop her as she was stumbling to walk but she said she is fine and needs fresh air and not to disturb anyone about going out as that is her order. Uday looked angry as manyata was ill but she still decided to go out.

Ds: thank u ram singh u may go now.

Komal: maa saab I just hope manyata come back soon she is not well at all and if the media people find her in that condition then they will make a big issue out of it.

An hour had passed and finally manyata walked back slowly into the mahal who was wearing a casual top and jeans holding her head as it was paining. all were happy to see her back.

Komal: manyata y did u go without telling us and what was the need to go out when ur not feeling well she said touching her face to feel the fever is still there.

Manyata: ma im fine I was feeling a bit suffocated so I thought I should go out myself and not disturb you all she said in a weak tone.

Uday: manyata go into ur room. Finally she looked at him and she could see that he was angry and she knew it was because she went out without telling. Manyata didn't say anything and walked to go to her room but she was about to drop near the stairs when uday caught her from her waist. And helped her walk to her room. But on his way he told the maid to bring her breakfast while others loved how uday was taking care of manyata. Once reaching the room he made manyata sit on the bed and when the food arrived. He closed the door and sat next to her.

Manyata: uday im not Hungary. She said in a weak tone.

Uday: I know u aint but u need to eat so you can get some energy back now don't argue with me and eat quietly he said feeding her.

Manyata: uday' but couldn't continue as he put a piece of apple in her mouth.

Uday: manyata just eat and he was about to put another piece in her mouth when she stopped him

Manyata: y r u angry at me? She knew the answer but still asked him.

Uday: what do u think I will be happy that u went out in this condition when u r meant to rest completely.

Manyata: well now I can rest all my life right?

Uday: princess y u saying that. u can do other things.

Manyata: really if I can do other things then y cant I work in sanjeevani that is like other things but anyways lets forget about this for now and plz im not Hungary.

Uday: at least drink this juice.

Manyata: no uday I really don't feel like plz.

Uday: for me plz drink this u need to take ur tablets that dr uncle gave me to give u'and after a lot request she finally drank the juice and uday also made her finish her breakfast after a lot of convincing. And gave manyata her medicine.

Manyata: uday'

Uday: hmm. He said putting the medicine on the side and looked at her face which was showing hesitation

Manyata: uday wo actually can I erm actually nothing.

Uday: manyata u don't need to hesitate u can ask me whatever u want.

Manyata: can I have a hug please. He was surprised

Uday: hayee princess seems like someone is falling for me. He said naughtily and also thought she will react back but she didn't' of course u can princess there is no need for asking u can hug me whenever u want because im all urs. Manyata didn't say anything and just hugged him she needed the same comfort that she got when she hugged him at the beach. But because of the heavy dose of the medicine it made manyata fall asleep quickly and when uday noticed that he made her lay on the bed and covered her with a blanket. Before leaving her kissed her forehead and closed her door. Manyata woke up in the evening she still had a fever and it wouldn't go that quickly as she knew whenever she had a fever then it would take time for her to recover. She was lost into her thoughts when she saw j and vijay walk in

Manyata: hey she said weakly she tried to smile but it didn't reach her eyes. J ran and hugged manyata,

J: I cant believe they r doing this to u jiji but u don't give up and fight for ur dreams.

Vijay: j bhai is absolutely right m bhai don't give up and achieve ur dream that will be best for u.

Manyata: u lot r not understanding its not that easy im stuck between my dream and responsibility.

J: forget the responsibility jiji and go for ur dream. I don't know y but when everyone knows you can handle everything so well then y cant they let u do both of the things

Manyata: j whatever will happen will have to happen im not planning to do anything so please can we not talk about this please. Both nodded

J: how u feeling now jiji

Manyata: bit better.

Vijay: oh come on j u know that whenever m bhai gets fever then it will take time for her to recover. I TELL U

J: ok jiji u take rest but if u need anything do call us k. and both left.

Precap:

brijraj: I cant believe this manyata has gone to the hospital which means that she finds her dream important than her responsibility.

Manyata walks in along with unnati. And brijraj walked to her in anger while everyone is watching.

Ds: brij calm down

Brij: no maa saab I wont' manyata how selfish can you get we thought u will think about ur responsibility and will forget about ur dream but no u proved us wrong by going to the hospital I didn't know u will find ur dream important than ur riyassat.

Manyata: paa plz try to' but she got interrupted.

Brij: seriously manyata I thought u were my best child who will think about her responsibility and family more but no I cant believe that u r the same manyata. Manyata looked at him with teary eye and felt guilty for not telling'.

Rosh (roshini101) this part is dedicated to u as u have to keep nagging me to update.

saira (vampire12345678) i know u said i have to give u a double update as my punishment lol but sorry i was only able to give one but promise to give the other one 2moz

Im sorry guys that I didn't update for a while but now im back I hope u like this part don't know if It has reached to ur expectation but I tried my best, thank u all for the previous comment really grateful. Sorry for any spelling and grammar mistake take care and love u all

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Wow wat and awesome update, truly luved it espacially the manveer scenes
Aww poor manyata, feel so bad for her she is going through so much bt it's Gud she has uday wid her
The precap is alittle heartbreaking cuz I dnt like how brijraj is behaving
Plz update da nxt part soon dnt take ages or else I will haunt u in ur dream
In the nxt update include sm hot and passionate manveer scenes
Thanks for the pm and Aww it was really sweet that u dedicated this part for mr
Do update soon and dnt evn thnk abt discontinuing this ff
Overall the update was mindblowing

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